Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
The Former U.S.A.
Goldfinch60 said:
Not only in the USA, in the UK as well.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
August 30th, 2024 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Not only in the USA, in the UK as well.
\"How do you know when a politician is lying?\"
\"Their lips move!\"
Andy
August 30th, 2024 01:14
Aging Captain\'s Lament
Dan Williams said:
Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
August 29th, 2024 17:49
Dan Williams said:
Thank you very much. Your approval carries weight with me.
August 29th, 2024 17:49
Aging Captain\'s Lament
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and the details fill in. Beautiful images and this does become a short story in itself. I love that you left it with a question.
August 29th, 2024 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor is a good one and the details fill in. Beautiful images and this does become a short story in itself. I love that you left it with a question.
August 29th, 2024 05:17
Uncertainty
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like some of the poems I have written and read. An apt description and leaving me with a sense of hopelessness and despair. Very well worded Dan
August 28th, 2024 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Sounds like some of the poems I have written and read. An apt description and leaving me with a sense of hopelessness and despair. Very well worded Dan
August 28th, 2024 05:38
Ends of My Arms
MendedFences27 said:
Strange dreams, where do they come from? Probably an unanswerable question, but that don\'t mean they can\'t drive us to good poetry. It seems the stranger the better. Maybe you\'re just trying to get a \"handle\" on something? Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2024 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
Strange dreams, where do they come from? Probably an unanswerable question, but that don\'t mean they can\'t drive us to good poetry. It seems the stranger the better. Maybe you\'re just trying to get a \"handle\" on something? Enjoyed your poem. - Phil A.
August 27th, 2024 18:18
Ends of My Arms
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme Dan that pulls this poem along on waves. Nicely done
August 27th, 2024 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme Dan that pulls this poem along on waves. Nicely done
August 27th, 2024 05:42
Ends of My Arms
Teddy.15 said:
Dreams usually tell us something, maybe you should look it up on Google, you may be surprised. A wonderful powerful poem rich in imagery end emotion. 🌹
August 27th, 2024 01:24
Teddy.15 said:
Dreams usually tell us something, maybe you should look it up on Google, you may be surprised. A wonderful powerful poem rich in imagery end emotion. 🌹
August 27th, 2024 01:24
Until it Wasn\'t
Bella Shepard said:
WOW!! You\'ve told it like it is my friend, good for you!! And you\'ve done it in a well thought out, incredibally versed poem. A great big fav!
August 26th, 2024 14:55
Bella Shepard said:
WOW!! You\'ve told it like it is my friend, good for you!! And you\'ve done it in a well thought out, incredibally versed poem. A great big fav!
August 26th, 2024 14:55
Until it Wasn\'t
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😲
Powerful penning
my friend! 👍
Skillfully expressed,
intriguing beginning to end!👋
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 26th, 2024 10:32
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😲
Powerful penning
my friend! 👍
Skillfully expressed,
intriguing beginning to end!👋
Best regards ✌️ Thad
August 26th, 2024 10:32
Until it Wasn\'t
Teddy.15 said:
Marvelous poetry, you say you wish you could write more positively I say just be yourself, this is wonderful. 🌹
August 26th, 2024 06:55
Teddy.15 said:
Marvelous poetry, you say you wish you could write more positively I say just be yourself, this is wonderful. 🌹
August 26th, 2024 06:55
Until it Wasn\'t
sorenbarrett said:
\"Corruption as tactile as stucco on cement\" A great line that I can feel. And I thought I was anti government. Powerful and strongly stated. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
\"Corruption as tactile as stucco on cement\" A great line that I can feel. And I thought I was anti government. Powerful and strongly stated. Nicely done
August 26th, 2024 05:06
The Lines, part two
Bella Shepard said:
Can we ever reach the heights of what we aspire to be, or can we be content with what we are simply able to reach. The line drawn, you speak to the desire that propels us forward, and beautifully so.
August 25th, 2024 10:24
Bella Shepard said:
Can we ever reach the heights of what we aspire to be, or can we be content with what we are simply able to reach. The line drawn, you speak to the desire that propels us forward, and beautifully so.
August 25th, 2024 10:24
The Lines, part two
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Dan.
worthy of much applause.
August 25th, 2024 05:45
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Dan.
worthy of much applause.
August 25th, 2024 05:45
The Lines, part two
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful critique of poets and poetry. The line forms an arrow pointing directly at us the poets. Very well written Dan
August 25th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful critique of poets and poetry. The line forms an arrow pointing directly at us the poets. Very well written Dan
August 25th, 2024 05:19
The Lines, part one.
sorenbarrett said:
How do we read between the lines? Assumptions made sometimes right sometimes wrong. Some are better at than others. A most thought provoking write.
August 24th, 2024 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
How do we read between the lines? Assumptions made sometimes right sometimes wrong. Some are better at than others. A most thought provoking write.
August 24th, 2024 08:57
Gunslinger
Dan Williams said:
To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo button. This was a deeply disturbing series of events for me, better off forgotten. But hey, thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Dan Williams said:
To tell the truth I was sorry to submit this as soon as I did, but no undo button. This was a deeply disturbing series of events for me, better off forgotten. But hey, thank you.
August 23rd, 2024 21:17
Gunslinger
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the feel of old black and white western movies. Here there is this appeal but also a bit deeper message I fear. Nicely done Dan
August 23rd, 2024 05:37
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the feel of old black and white western movies. Here there is this appeal but also a bit deeper message I fear. Nicely done Dan
August 23rd, 2024 05:37
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity
Dan Williams said:
Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
Dan Williams said:
Well, Intake that, and thanks.
August 22nd, 2024 18:29
Wrung Dry of Pointless Vanity
Teddy.15 said:
I know people who would do anything to keep their public image, such a good call out dear Dan, love your title 🌹
August 22nd, 2024 01:39
Teddy.15 said:
I know people who would do anything to keep their public image, such a good call out dear Dan, love your title 🌹
August 22nd, 2024 01:39
To Pamela
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A message that many would like to send but either don\'t have the courage or the words to send. Nicely said.
August 21st, 2024 03:56
Slow Road Dance
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes we are our own worst enemy when we don\'t take our own advice and try things that may make us happy, hey get yourself one horse it\'s a magical experience even if it\'s frightening at first, as for your last lines well, you are already there. 🌹
August 21st, 2024 00:38
Cry of The Hermit
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
NafisaSB said:
it is always the losses that teach us the best lessons - may everything improve from now on though
August 20th, 2024 23:34
Slow Road Dance
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
Bella Shepard said:
A beautifully crafted story, it catches and holds the imagination with the wonderful icharacters of the troubadour and the ballerina. Light and airy, it is full of smiles.
August 20th, 2024 14:03
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