Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
What, then?
arqios said:
Oh for swift retribution. But yes, I get it and not quite sure either. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 1st, 2025 01:49
arqios said:
Oh for swift retribution. But yes, I get it and not quite sure either. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 1st, 2025 01:49
Wandering Man
Doggerel Dave said:
The cause \"inspired by adult fairy tales accepted by fools\". Wish I could believe in your final stanza - enjoyed though. Thanks.
May 31st, 2025 07:57
Doggerel Dave said:
The cause \"inspired by adult fairy tales accepted by fools\". Wish I could believe in your final stanza - enjoyed though. Thanks.
May 31st, 2025 07:57
What, then?
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I’ll have my reprisal (obligatory) with a splash of vengeance; satisfied, only then consider forgetting, although the ’best served cold’ principle can still pertain in certain circumstances.
That’s for me, but I hope it helps…..lol.
May 31st, 2025 07:41
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I’ll have my reprisal (obligatory) with a splash of vengeance; satisfied, only then consider forgetting, although the ’best served cold’ principle can still pertain in certain circumstances.
That’s for me, but I hope it helps…..lol.
May 31st, 2025 07:41
What, then?
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphoric approach of this poem allegory is always a most useful poetic tool. Like a map that constantly changes with new voyages and expanded knowledge this poem proposes a chart to guide. Nicely done.
May 31st, 2025 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I like the metaphoric approach of this poem allegory is always a most useful poetic tool. Like a map that constantly changes with new voyages and expanded knowledge this poem proposes a chart to guide. Nicely done.
May 31st, 2025 03:58
Goodbye My Brother
Tom Dylan said:
Fine words. A moving tribute. Sorry for your loss.
May 16th, 2025 02:46
Tom Dylan said:
Fine words. A moving tribute. Sorry for your loss.
May 16th, 2025 02:46
Goodbye My Brother
arqios said:
The world turns, but some bonds do not break— even when measured in loss. Sorry to learn about this. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 06:48
arqios said:
The world turns, but some bonds do not break— even when measured in loss. Sorry to learn about this. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 06:48
Goodbye My Brother
sorenbarrett said:
Such a series of great metaphors in this poem one following the other. The loss is poignant and is felt in this piece. Nicely done
May 15th, 2025 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
Such a series of great metaphors in this poem one following the other. The loss is poignant and is felt in this piece. Nicely done
May 15th, 2025 04:09
Goodbye My Brother
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and poignant write around the loss and pain of losing loved ones and friends, remembering fondly the journey they had together, beautifully written,
May 15th, 2025 01:27
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and poignant write around the loss and pain of losing loved ones and friends, remembering fondly the journey they had together, beautifully written,
May 15th, 2025 01:27
Wandering Man
sorenbarrett said:
So many great metaphors within one piece. Line after line they keep coming. A most entertaining as well as motivational poem.
May 10th, 2025 03:41
sorenbarrett said:
So many great metaphors within one piece. Line after line they keep coming. A most entertaining as well as motivational poem.
May 10th, 2025 03:41
Wandering Man
Poetic Licence said:
The wrath is clearly felt is wonderful write, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:37
Poetic Licence said:
The wrath is clearly felt is wonderful write, nicely expressed and written, enjoyed the read
May 10th, 2025 02:37
Wandering Man
arqios said:
Once…. and yet again… I hear you brother; loud and clear🙏🏻🕊️
May 10th, 2025 02:25
arqios said:
Once…. and yet again… I hear you brother; loud and clear🙏🏻🕊️
May 10th, 2025 02:25
Sad Quintain
Neilton said:
Don\'t stay silent for too long the world is losing a literal pro! This is a masterpiece 👏
May 4th, 2025 07:39
Neilton said:
Don\'t stay silent for too long the world is losing a literal pro! This is a masterpiece 👏
May 4th, 2025 07:39
Sad Quintain
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme Dan this poem\'s wording reminds me of Bob Dylan in some of his songs. The interpretation of this and all its metaphors would be quite lengthy some rather obscure. There is a general feel of sad rebellion in it. Very nicely done Dan.
May 2nd, 2025 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting rhyme scheme Dan this poem\'s wording reminds me of Bob Dylan in some of his songs. The interpretation of this and all its metaphors would be quite lengthy some rather obscure. There is a general feel of sad rebellion in it. Very nicely done Dan.
May 2nd, 2025 03:51
Time\'s Canvass
sorenbarrett said:
Musings on the human condition are at times like handling a hot iron. Very nicely written.
April 27th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Musings on the human condition are at times like handling a hot iron. Very nicely written.
April 27th, 2025 04:22
Stumbling On
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a constant despairing wasteland, with little energy or hope to hang on, but we just carrying on wading water, enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 06:06
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a constant despairing wasteland, with little energy or hope to hang on, but we just carrying on wading water, enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 06:06
Stumbling On
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric wasteland is pictured here with little hope and full of despair it is a grim and dark picture. Well imaged and with good flow it runs toward its inevitable end.
April 4th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphoric wasteland is pictured here with little hope and full of despair it is a grim and dark picture. Well imaged and with good flow it runs toward its inevitable end.
April 4th, 2025 04:17
Stumbling On
arqios said:
Quite a vital message nestled in verse here. Good to see you around the site 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 03:01
arqios said:
Quite a vital message nestled in verse here. Good to see you around the site 🙏🏻🕊️
April 4th, 2025 03:01
Faded Glory
Neville said:
Yep, its a fact of life and so very well stated .. just wish I had got to it first .. 👍😎👍
February 10th, 2025 04:48
Neville said:
Yep, its a fact of life and so very well stated .. just wish I had got to it first .. 👍😎👍
February 10th, 2025 04:48
Faded Glory
Poetic Licence said:
A honest reflection that many of us have been through or will in the future, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:01
Poetic Licence said:
A honest reflection that many of us have been through or will in the future, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:01
Faded Glory
arqios said:
Reminds me of my Old Navy shirt for some reason… very personally resonant 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
Reminds me of my Old Navy shirt for some reason… very personally resonant 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:45
Faded Glory
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we see outselves and how that may or may not change over the years. Loved the last line that put a cap on the poem
February 8th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we see outselves and how that may or may not change over the years. Loved the last line that put a cap on the poem
February 8th, 2025 03:55
Grim Tidings part two
sorenbarrett said:
Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it calls out from the darkness.
February 3rd, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it calls out from the darkness.
February 3rd, 2025 04:07
Grim Tidings part two
arqios said:
The grim tandem shall flow into another… will it be lighter? brighter? I guess we shall have to wait and see 🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 01:23
arqios said:
The grim tandem shall flow into another… will it be lighter? brighter? I guess we shall have to wait and see 🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 01:23
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