Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Faded Glory
Neville said:
Yep, its a fact of life and so very well stated .. just wish I had got to it first .. 👍😎👍
February 10th, 2025 04:48
Neville said:
Yep, its a fact of life and so very well stated .. just wish I had got to it first .. 👍😎👍
February 10th, 2025 04:48
Faded Glory
Poetic Licence said:
A honest reflection that many of us have been through or will in the future, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:01
Poetic Licence said:
A honest reflection that many of us have been through or will in the future, enjoyed the read
February 8th, 2025 08:01
Faded Glory
arqios said:
Reminds me of my Old Navy shirt for some reason… very personally resonant 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:45
arqios said:
Reminds me of my Old Navy shirt for some reason… very personally resonant 🙏🏻🕊
February 8th, 2025 05:45
Faded Glory
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we see outselves and how that may or may not change over the years. Loved the last line that put a cap on the poem
February 8th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Interesting how we see outselves and how that may or may not change over the years. Loved the last line that put a cap on the poem
February 8th, 2025 03:55
Grim Tidings part two
sorenbarrett said:
Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it calls out from the darkness.
February 3rd, 2025 04:07
sorenbarrett said:
Still dark this poem\'s shadow falls hard. Metaphor after metaphor it calls out from the darkness.
February 3rd, 2025 04:07
Grim Tidings part two
arqios said:
The grim tandem shall flow into another… will it be lighter? brighter? I guess we shall have to wait and see 🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 01:23
arqios said:
The grim tandem shall flow into another… will it be lighter? brighter? I guess we shall have to wait and see 🙏🏻🕊
February 3rd, 2025 01:23
Grim Tidings, part one.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wonderful poem and thankful for the explanation too. Sounds like a bit of a sucky \"Job\" moment in life (the Biblical character...not work...lol) I am hooked and waiting for part 2. 🌹👏
February 2nd, 2025 07:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Wonderful poem and thankful for the explanation too. Sounds like a bit of a sucky \"Job\" moment in life (the Biblical character...not work...lol) I am hooked and waiting for part 2. 🌹👏
February 2nd, 2025 07:08
Grim Tidings, part one.
sorenbarrett said:
This begins with a Dante epic type feel. The first stanza starts with a bang with its first two lines hitting right out of the box. I\'ll be waiting for part two.
February 2nd, 2025 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
This begins with a Dante epic type feel. The first stanza starts with a bang with its first two lines hitting right out of the box. I\'ll be waiting for part two.
February 2nd, 2025 05:07
Grim Tidings, part one.
arqios said:
Massive achievement here, Dan. For my part it was like two gargoyles animating and jabbing and roasting each other in the heights. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 03:34
arqios said:
Massive achievement here, Dan. For my part it was like two gargoyles animating and jabbing and roasting each other in the heights. 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 2nd, 2025 03:34
Dirty Shirt
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s random, yet cohesive. I love the metaphor, my friend. It is melancholic, trying to make sense of the ongoing struggle as I read it. Well done. 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It\'s random, yet cohesive. I love the metaphor, my friend. It is melancholic, trying to make sense of the ongoing struggle as I read it. Well done. 🌹👏
January 31st, 2025 08:13
Dirty Shirt
arqios said:
A truly engaging ode to individuals who have faced betrayal and hardship, carrying the metaphorical dirt of their experiences with them.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 07:10
arqios said:
A truly engaging ode to individuals who have faced betrayal and hardship, carrying the metaphorical dirt of their experiences with them.🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 07:10
Dirty Shirt
Neville said:
Random musings often make a whole heap of sense .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:11
Neville said:
Random musings often make a whole heap of sense .. Neville
January 31st, 2025 04:11
Dirty Shirt
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philisophical this poem poses several questions almost of a retorical nature. The wind to me seems to be the blowing of thoughts through one\'s mind. Many metaphors here several great lines. This poem keeps the mind going reading after reading and I have read it three times. Very well worded and constructed it grows from a breeze to a gale.
January 31st, 2025 04:11
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philisophical this poem poses several questions almost of a retorical nature. The wind to me seems to be the blowing of thoughts through one\'s mind. Many metaphors here several great lines. This poem keeps the mind going reading after reading and I have read it three times. Very well worded and constructed it grows from a breeze to a gale.
January 31st, 2025 04:11
Dirty Shirt
Poetic Licence said:
I found this an interesting piece, i feel asking more than one question, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 02:41
Poetic Licence said:
I found this an interesting piece, i feel asking more than one question, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 02:41
Iron Under Acid
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That sounds like hell in my book, friend! And, hell would be distressful l, I\'d wager! Well done in this expression! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That sounds like hell in my book, friend! And, hell would be distressful l, I\'d wager! Well done in this expression! 🌹👏
January 27th, 2025 08:27
Iron Under Acid
sorenbarrett said:
I get the image of an outclassed boxer to proud to give in being pummeled in a corner refusing to submit. Beaten broken humiliated but never surrendering. great images and an appropriate title as well. Slowly and gruesomely worn down. In life\'s fight we may all feel like this at times
January 27th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
I get the image of an outclassed boxer to proud to give in being pummeled in a corner refusing to submit. Beaten broken humiliated but never surrendering. great images and an appropriate title as well. Slowly and gruesomely worn down. In life\'s fight we may all feel like this at times
January 27th, 2025 04:43
Iron Under Acid
arqios said:
Your poem portrays a compelling narrative of struggle, perseverance, and eventual defeat. The language is rich and dense, creating an atmosphere of tension and impending doom. The inevitable toll of relentless pressure is quite haunting/daunting. Its rich language and vivid imagery create a haunting and memorable experience 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 03:38
arqios said:
Your poem portrays a compelling narrative of struggle, perseverance, and eventual defeat. The language is rich and dense, creating an atmosphere of tension and impending doom. The inevitable toll of relentless pressure is quite haunting/daunting. Its rich language and vivid imagery create a haunting and memorable experience 👍🕊️
January 27th, 2025 03:38
Iron Under Acid
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and quite haunting account of the feeling of being hell, and i got that feeling reading it. Great write
January 27th, 2025 03:23
Poetic Licence said:
A well written and quite haunting account of the feeling of being hell, and i got that feeling reading it. Great write
January 27th, 2025 03:23
Iron Under Acid
Neville said:
If it sounds like hell and it feels like hell .. then I\'m betting every last dollar that it is bloomin hell .. now what have we got to look forward to eh\' .. 🤞
January 27th, 2025 03:12
Neville said:
If it sounds like hell and it feels like hell .. then I\'m betting every last dollar that it is bloomin hell .. now what have we got to look forward to eh\' .. 🤞
January 27th, 2025 03:12
Foolish Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written, Dan. And I also echo Teddy\'s words. Well done, my friend! 🌹🙏
January 20th, 2025 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written, Dan. And I also echo Teddy\'s words. Well done, my friend! 🌹🙏
January 20th, 2025 09:38
Foolish Love
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets echo in this poem time can not be reset and life goes on. There are things that can not be made good. A sound of lament in this poem that carries a shadow and a haunting feeling for we all have our own shadows that are heavy to carry
January 20th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Regrets echo in this poem time can not be reset and life goes on. There are things that can not be made good. A sound of lament in this poem that carries a shadow and a haunting feeling for we all have our own shadows that are heavy to carry
January 20th, 2025 04:20
Foolish Love
Neville said:
it gets you like that doesn\'t it Dan .. I know I\'ve been there .. but then, who hasn\'t .. perfectly rendered my good man .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 03:51
Neville said:
it gets you like that doesn\'t it Dan .. I know I\'ve been there .. but then, who hasn\'t .. perfectly rendered my good man .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 03:51
Foolish Love
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful reflection and I can safely say, those who cheat are not your true love. 🌹
January 20th, 2025 02:09
Teddy.15 said:
This is wonderful reflection and I can safely say, those who cheat are not your true love. 🌹
January 20th, 2025 02:09
Hell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Very visceral and powerful, Dan! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Very visceral and powerful, Dan! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 08:43
Hell
Cassie58 said:
Vivid and raw. No one wants to experience this hell. Some great lines in this composition Dan. Well penned.
January 16th, 2025 05:35
Cassie58 said:
Vivid and raw. No one wants to experience this hell. Some great lines in this composition Dan. Well penned.
January 16th, 2025 05:35
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