Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
So Tired of It
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here “stun with bones of Now feudal hopes““” Now mock in skeletal silence “. Wonderful words in a melancholic stance. Well done.
July 20th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
Some great lines here “stun with bones of Now feudal hopes““” Now mock in skeletal silence “. Wonderful words in a melancholic stance. Well done.
July 20th, 2024 06:13
So Tired of It
Teddy.15 said:
This is quite magnificent in beauty, all to often we think of the ocean and the sand to be beauty, yet here there\'s a new spin and it\'s loneliness. Beautifully done. 🌹
July 20th, 2024 02:45
Teddy.15 said:
This is quite magnificent in beauty, all to often we think of the ocean and the sand to be beauty, yet here there\'s a new spin and it\'s loneliness. Beautifully done. 🌹
July 20th, 2024 02:45
Godspeed Came in Last
aDarkerMind said:
many true words spoken here Dan.
a very impressive write.
July 17th, 2024 14:31
aDarkerMind said:
many true words spoken here Dan.
a very impressive write.
July 17th, 2024 14:31
Godspeed Came in Last
Bella Shepard said:
I love the dizzying aspect of this poem, I\'m on my toes the whole time, keeping track of the contradictions that in the end blow my mind. The incredible cycle of life does seem to lead us back to the place where we started. How incredibly ingenious! I loved every line, but now I must rest my head and contemplate.
July 17th, 2024 11:12
Bella Shepard said:
I love the dizzying aspect of this poem, I\'m on my toes the whole time, keeping track of the contradictions that in the end blow my mind. The incredible cycle of life does seem to lead us back to the place where we started. How incredibly ingenious! I loved every line, but now I must rest my head and contemplate.
July 17th, 2024 11:12
Godspeed Came in Last
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the paradoxes of life. Yes memory can be a blessing and a curse. Loved the juxtaposition of concepts in this poem. Nicely done.
July 17th, 2024 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
Ah the paradoxes of life. Yes memory can be a blessing and a curse. Loved the juxtaposition of concepts in this poem. Nicely done.
July 17th, 2024 05:07
Train of Thought
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here the continues the reader\'s train of thought to the end. Great imagery as well.
July 16th, 2024 05:12
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor here the continues the reader\'s train of thought to the end. Great imagery as well.
July 16th, 2024 05:12
The Violin Man
Eileen Clark said:
Hello, so nice to read, rhyming is nicely done, a smooth read.
July 11th, 2024 09:04
Eileen Clark said:
Hello, so nice to read, rhyming is nicely done, a smooth read.
July 11th, 2024 09:04
The Remberer
sorenbarrett said:
This is the message of today\'s era and this generation. Sadly it is a time we need to get through and to what? Well expressed
July 11th, 2024 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
This is the message of today\'s era and this generation. Sadly it is a time we need to get through and to what? Well expressed
July 11th, 2024 07:05
Unrealistic Inclusion
sorenbarrett said:
Love the contradictory wording that gives a sense of comedy to the language and our culture in general. slightly extraordinary I say.
June 30th, 2024 12:54
sorenbarrett said:
Love the contradictory wording that gives a sense of comedy to the language and our culture in general. slightly extraordinary I say.
June 30th, 2024 12:54
Unrealistic Inclusion
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and powerful. Every line superb in my humble opinion. Robots, we will all be one day, in some ways we already are. . 🌹 thought provoking in every way.
June 30th, 2024 02:30
Teddy.15 said:
Beautiful and powerful. Every line superb in my humble opinion. Robots, we will all be one day, in some ways we already are. . 🌹 thought provoking in every way.
June 30th, 2024 02:30
Unrealistic Inclusion
2781 said:
That seeing they may see, and not perceive; and hearing they may hear, and not understand; lest at any time they should be converted, and their sins should be forgiven them.
June 30th, 2024 01:46
2781 said:
That seeing they may see, and not perceive; and hearing they may hear, and not understand; lest at any time they should be converted, and their sins should be forgiven them.
June 30th, 2024 01:46
