Comments received on poems by Dan Williams
Hell
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Very visceral and powerful, Dan! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 08:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Very visceral and powerful, Dan! Well done!
January 16th, 2025 08:43
Hell
Cassie58 said:
Vivid and raw. No one wants to experience this hell. Some great lines in this composition Dan. Well penned.
January 16th, 2025 05:35
Cassie58 said:
Vivid and raw. No one wants to experience this hell. Some great lines in this composition Dan. Well penned.
January 16th, 2025 05:35
Hell
sorenbarrett said:
Open heart surgery of the emotional type. Great imagry in this poem
January 16th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Open heart surgery of the emotional type. Great imagry in this poem
January 16th, 2025 04:18
Hell
arqios said:
This is so masterfully evocative; a visceral and haunting portrayal of torment and self-confrontation. It offers a powerful exploration of the human experience of intense suffering and the existential reflections it can provoke. 👍🏻🕊
January 16th, 2025 02:41
arqios said:
This is so masterfully evocative; a visceral and haunting portrayal of torment and self-confrontation. It offers a powerful exploration of the human experience of intense suffering and the existential reflections it can provoke. 👍🏻🕊
January 16th, 2025 02:41
Hell
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, how extraordinary your imagery with an emotional attachment that can mean so many things, grief of some sort, no one can write like this unless they have experienced such. I truly hope you are well dear Dan. Kudos on this epic write. 🌹
January 16th, 2025 02:08
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my, how extraordinary your imagery with an emotional attachment that can mean so many things, grief of some sort, no one can write like this unless they have experienced such. I truly hope you are well dear Dan. Kudos on this epic write. 🌹
January 16th, 2025 02:08
Purgatory
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Paper mâché morals\" indeed. Very thought-provoking and powerful Dan. I can feel the 🔥 emanating from this one. Thank you for sharing, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 15th, 2025 16:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
\"Paper mâché morals\" indeed. Very thought-provoking and powerful Dan. I can feel the 🔥 emanating from this one. Thank you for sharing, my friend! ❤️🙏
January 15th, 2025 16:25
Purgatory
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking. \"only paper mâché morals.\" a great line. A most interesting poem Dan.
January 15th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Thought provoking. \"only paper mâché morals.\" a great line. A most interesting poem Dan.
January 15th, 2025 04:02
Endangered Candles
Bella Shepard said:
With the dawn of this New Year, I too feel the cold you describe so well, as if the earth has opened a huge fissure and swallowed everything that was hopeful and good. We may go backwards before we can once again go forwards, but \"the future waits for no one\", and we have proven that time and time again as we bounce back. A very thought provoking write my friend, and very well done.
January 11th, 2025 14:38
Bella Shepard said:
With the dawn of this New Year, I too feel the cold you describe so well, as if the earth has opened a huge fissure and swallowed everything that was hopeful and good. We may go backwards before we can once again go forwards, but \"the future waits for no one\", and we have proven that time and time again as we bounce back. A very thought provoking write my friend, and very well done.
January 11th, 2025 14:38
Endangered Candles
Cassie58 said:
A heavy write. Our world is a cold place. My country feels a cold place at the moment and our pensioners are cold as their energy allowance has been cut. Politics stinks in my opinion. Taking off the poorest people is a government choice.
January 11th, 2025 10:17
Cassie58 said:
A heavy write. Our world is a cold place. My country feels a cold place at the moment and our pensioners are cold as their energy allowance has been cut. Politics stinks in my opinion. Taking off the poorest people is a government choice.
January 11th, 2025 10:17
Endangered Candles
TobaniNataiella said:
A well written piece about how cold and callous our world has become, that greed above all else seems to matter and now we let the powerful control our minds as well, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 04:50
TobaniNataiella said:
A well written piece about how cold and callous our world has become, that greed above all else seems to matter and now we let the powerful control our minds as well, enjoyed the read
January 11th, 2025 04:50
Endangered Candles
sorenbarrett said:
Cold words for a cold society. We have a self destructive nature to ourselves as a species. Greed a major driving force. Powerful and with dark shadows this poem is forebodiing
January 11th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Cold words for a cold society. We have a self destructive nature to ourselves as a species. Greed a major driving force. Powerful and with dark shadows this poem is forebodiing
January 11th, 2025 04:29
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Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem with some lovely lines. A fine write.
January 9th, 2025 10:47
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful poem with some lovely lines. A fine write.
January 9th, 2025 10:47
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sorenbarrett said:
The question of all is whether one can find or be better and the possability of good to come. Loved it.
January 8th, 2025 09:51
sorenbarrett said:
The question of all is whether one can find or be better and the possability of good to come. Loved it.
January 8th, 2025 09:51
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TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem making us asks a lot of questions that maybe not all will be answered, an underlying message of believing and valuing yourself, really enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 07:40
TobaniNataiella said:
A beautiful poem making us asks a lot of questions that maybe not all will be answered, an underlying message of believing and valuing yourself, really enjoyed the read
January 8th, 2025 07:40
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every question is an answer undiscovered. I love this poem because it asks the questions. Most times, as I see it, the question is more important than the answer we seek, and often times those questions may lead us to answers we weren\'t anticipating. This, my friend, is a beautiful and well written poem. Well done. 👏
January 8th, 2025 07:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Every question is an answer undiscovered. I love this poem because it asks the questions. Most times, as I see it, the question is more important than the answer we seek, and often times those questions may lead us to answers we weren\'t anticipating. This, my friend, is a beautiful and well written poem. Well done. 👏
January 8th, 2025 07:26
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arqios said:
A poem poignantly explores the tension between hope and despair. The questions, \"Is there still light beneath the shadow, are there answers undiscovered?\" express a longing for reassurance and the possibility of a brighter future. It’s final lines, \"Until I grasp the ring I will likely never know,\" emphasize the need to seize opportunities and embrace the unknown. It captures the courage to continue striving for better days, despite the uncertainties. Hard not to be inspired by it! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 07:04
arqios said:
A poem poignantly explores the tension between hope and despair. The questions, \"Is there still light beneath the shadow, are there answers undiscovered?\" express a longing for reassurance and the possibility of a brighter future. It’s final lines, \"Until I grasp the ring I will likely never know,\" emphasize the need to seize opportunities and embrace the unknown. It captures the courage to continue striving for better days, despite the uncertainties. Hard not to be inspired by it! 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 8th, 2025 07:04
Mostly Bitter
arqios said:
Got myself into a couple of scrapes like this, in my time. And it’s not the best space to be in. Save one thing, you have been more articulate with it than I have ever been. Your poem speaks volumes. 🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 06:23
arqios said:
Got myself into a couple of scrapes like this, in my time. And it’s not the best space to be in. Save one thing, you have been more articulate with it than I have ever been. Your poem speaks volumes. 🙏🏻🕊
January 8th, 2025 06:23
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Teddy.15 said:
I believe it\'s always better to be alone than in the wrong company, love hurts it also brings us joy and companionship however if the friendship before love isn\'t mutual then it\'s one sided and a waste of your time. Moving on yes, onto better things with those who truly find everything in you that is there to be loved. 🌹 My favourite subject of course is love. 🌹 I have a poem on here called My Nevada probably on my last page, I wrote it many years after I left someone I loved with all my heart, he just wasn\'t a good man. In Italy we say prosciutto nel occhi (ham in your eyes) translated to blinded by love. A wonderful poem.
January 8th, 2025 04:23
Teddy.15 said:
I believe it\'s always better to be alone than in the wrong company, love hurts it also brings us joy and companionship however if the friendship before love isn\'t mutual then it\'s one sided and a waste of your time. Moving on yes, onto better things with those who truly find everything in you that is there to be loved. 🌹 My favourite subject of course is love. 🌹 I have a poem on here called My Nevada probably on my last page, I wrote it many years after I left someone I loved with all my heart, he just wasn\'t a good man. In Italy we say prosciutto nel occhi (ham in your eyes) translated to blinded by love. A wonderful poem.
January 8th, 2025 04:23
Mostly Bitter
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel showing determination from both sides now, not to quit, even thou it is was one did do originally, well written
January 8th, 2025 02:07
TobaniNataiella said:
I feel showing determination from both sides now, not to quit, even thou it is was one did do originally, well written
January 8th, 2025 02:07
Mostly Bitter
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult subject handled well. Nicely stated in most poetic form
January 7th, 2025 20:54
sorenbarrett said:
A difficult subject handled well. Nicely stated in most poetic form
January 7th, 2025 20:54
Edge of the Abyss
2781 said:
\"If thou seest the oppression of the poor, and violent perverting of judgement and justice in a province, marvel not at the matter: for he that is higher than the highest regardeth; and there be higher than they.\"
January 3rd, 2025 08:23
2781 said:
\"If thou seest the oppression of the poor, and violent perverting of judgement and justice in a province, marvel not at the matter: for he that is higher than the highest regardeth; and there be higher than they.\"
January 3rd, 2025 08:23
Edge of the Abyss
arqios said:
Not at all alarmist, a very realistic and powerfully capturing of the urgent and critical state of our world, highlighting the looming dangers of environmental destruction and human complacency. The imagery and metaphors you use evoke a sense of impending doom and the harsh reality we face. Heads up y’all!
January 3rd, 2025 07:49
arqios said:
Not at all alarmist, a very realistic and powerfully capturing of the urgent and critical state of our world, highlighting the looming dangers of environmental destruction and human complacency. The imagery and metaphors you use evoke a sense of impending doom and the harsh reality we face. Heads up y’all!
January 3rd, 2025 07:49
Edge of the Abyss
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem/rant on the human situation. Population increase, technology, greed and a few other issues lie at the center here. Nicely done
January 3rd, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem/rant on the human situation. Population increase, technology, greed and a few other issues lie at the center here. Nicely done
January 3rd, 2025 03:55
Edge of the Abyss
TobaniNataiella said:
A haunting reminder of how close man is to destroying everything in it`s path, nicely worded
January 3rd, 2025 03:25
TobaniNataiella said:
A haunting reminder of how close man is to destroying everything in it`s path, nicely worded
January 3rd, 2025 03:25
Edge of the Abyss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I see no lunatic here, rather a man with a sober view of things, my friend! Well done on this very thought-provoking wake-up call Dan! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 02:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I see no lunatic here, rather a man with a sober view of things, my friend! Well done on this very thought-provoking wake-up call Dan! 🌹👏
January 3rd, 2025 02:33
Easily Fooled Again
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wondeful poem Dan, haunting and poignant. Wonderful job and Happy New Year, my friend!
January 1st, 2025 08:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is a wondeful poem Dan, haunting and poignant. Wonderful job and Happy New Year, my friend!
January 1st, 2025 08:52
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