Comments received on poems by Caroline Elizabeth
I am Alive
Goldfinch60 said:
Life certainly is everlasting our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 17th, 2018 08:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Life certainly is everlasting our Spirit goes on for eternity.
May 17th, 2018 08:08
Mountain’s Call
elizabethshadow said:
I love the amount of imagery and personification you put into this piece! It\'s carefully and thoughtfully written with wonderful usage of figurative language.
May 5th, 2018 17:38
elizabethshadow said:
I love the amount of imagery and personification you put into this piece! It\'s carefully and thoughtfully written with wonderful usage of figurative language.
May 5th, 2018 17:38
Passion, Clichés, and No Man\'s Land
onepauly said:
with time all things do change.
the only thing is
we cant change them.
go with the flow.
May 4th, 2018 10:10
onepauly said:
with time all things do change.
the only thing is
we cant change them.
go with the flow.
May 4th, 2018 10:10
Breath
onepauly said:
we all breath the same oxygen.
are we together with this?
its all around us.
May 3rd, 2018 13:53
onepauly said:
we all breath the same oxygen.
are we together with this?
its all around us.
May 3rd, 2018 13:53
What Makes You Feel Alive?
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines apply to me as I know that when my body dies My Spirit will go on for eternity.
April 25th, 2018 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines apply to me as I know that when my body dies My Spirit will go on for eternity.
April 25th, 2018 00:25
What Makes You Feel Alive?
Syd said:
Hi Caroline. Usually the things that make me feel alive are the things that kill me.
Great write. Thoroughly enjoyed
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 10:17
Syd said:
Hi Caroline. Usually the things that make me feel alive are the things that kill me.
Great write. Thoroughly enjoyed
- Syd
April 24th, 2018 10:17
Man in the Train Station
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Caroline. It is a sad thing in life nowadays that there are so many like \"The Man in the Train Station\".
April 21st, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Caroline. It is a sad thing in life nowadays that there are so many like \"The Man in the Train Station\".
April 21st, 2018 00:53
My Dark Side
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all have dark sides which sometimes show themselves.
April 19th, 2018 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we all have dark sides which sometimes show themselves.
April 19th, 2018 00:49
Rain
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write but you must always remember:
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning to dance in the rain.\"
April 18th, 2018 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write but you must always remember:
\"Life isn\'t about waiting for the storm to pass...It\'s about learning to dance in the rain.\"
April 18th, 2018 00:55
Rain
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Rain and pain combined creatively. Awesome rhyming talent that ought to cheer. Soulful ink dropping like rain aesthetically poetic. Thumbs up.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others. No pressure.
April 17th, 2018 12:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Rain and pain combined creatively. Awesome rhyming talent that ought to cheer. Soulful ink dropping like rain aesthetically poetic. Thumbs up.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others. No pressure.
April 17th, 2018 12:41
Forget-Me-Not Eyes
Lorna said:
Lovely boy described as a garden - sounds like a peach! Go get him!
April 17th, 2018 06:30
Lorna said:
Lovely boy described as a garden - sounds like a peach! Go get him!
April 17th, 2018 06:30
Speechless
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BACK CAROLINE ~ Thanks for your poem ~ why so sad ? Your Friends on MPS ~ Love you and are there for you ! Love BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems !
April 14th, 2018 10:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BACK CAROLINE ~ Thanks for your poem ~ why so sad ? Your Friends on MPS ~ Love you and are there for you ! Love BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems !
April 14th, 2018 10:02
