Comments received on poems by msa



About Him
Thomas W Case said:

Well, good morning. That is passion and desire you could bottle up and sell. Have you seen the movie, The Secretary? James Spader. You would like it.

November 2nd, 2023 03:09

About Him
Lorenz said:

don\'t write to the waves
impermanence
closed mouths and moons

October 30th, 2023 04:36

About Him
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Ooo! Great description

October 30th, 2023 02:22

Mourning Routine
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful. Clearly, you were blessed.

October 29th, 2023 01:00

Tempted
B.E.Poet said:

It\'s a great poem, i can definitely feel like this right now, good job

May 10th, 2023 11:34

Tempted
Bobby O said:

Like that great song by Phoebe Snow
NO REGRETS cuz love will linger and other things we will forget

May 10th, 2023 04:14

Miserable
2781 said:

I hope you have seen the sun since then?

May 9th, 2023 03:24

miscarried
MendedFences27 said:

It may be fiction, but it\'s great writing. Hope you\'ve managed to get past it. Phil A.

April 24th, 2023 17:10

Cut
jynxorcism said:

Fix my problem with the blade
Watch my eyes turn from blue to gray
And the worse thing happened to me today
But I guess I can\'t care anymore.......



April 21st, 2023 06:34

Roses
Bobby O said:

I liked this piece. It’s practical and it also fancifully segues to metaphor which lessens what could be a harsher message and makes one nod in recognition of those moments we see ourselves in the piece. Nice.

April 19th, 2023 09:16

i hope
Goldfinch60 said:

I have done all those things MSA in my long life and all have been wonderful.

Andy

January 8th, 2021 01:29

Who Else?
Goldfinch60 said:

May that waiting end soon.

Andy

December 31st, 2020 01:40

Who Else?
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read. Stay Safe and have a Happy New Year.

December 30th, 2020 17:08

Who Else?
FredPeyer said:

if this doesn\'t get his/her attention, nothing will! Well written!

December 30th, 2020 16:45

Love
Clara said:

Go into it cautiously. While it is better to have loved than lost, than to never have loved before. Love is incredibly powerful - perhaps the most dangerous weapon to wield... When done right, there is not a single thing better on this earth. If you\'ve not yet experienced this as your poem suggests, be prepared for your world to change as you know it. Lovely poem MSA.

December 19th, 2020 10:33

Love
FredPeyer said:

Well written msa, and there will come a time when you will spell the word, play that instrument, pass that exam, feel that touch, hear that song, know that feeling. And it will be GREAT!

December 18th, 2020 22:13

Patience
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write. MPS is a nice place to spend some time and read some good poetry. ;-)

December 15th, 2020 18:27

Patience
Goldfinch60 said:

Good loving write.

Welcome to MPS.

Andy

December 15th, 2020 01:51

Patience
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA & BRIAN here ~ Good Evening MSA ~ Welcome to MPS it is a proactive site ! Love your Poem ~ Patience ~ the essence of True Love ! Brian (37) & I (32) have been married 10 Months and we both waited patiently before we met three years ago and we both knew we had found the Person we had both waited for ~ AMEN ! Your elegant Poem struck a chord wih both of us ! Thanks for sharing. Please check our SITE we have recently posted a Poem on *TRUE LOVE* ~ Thanks A & B !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love A ngela Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !



December 14th, 2020 15:40

Patience
orchidee said:

Good write M/ Coooee, I\'m here! Wait no longer.
Oops, I thought you meant me. lol.

December 14th, 2020 08:08