Comments received on poems by elmina
springtime
Nicholas Browning said:
The descriptions used are very well done.
Nice read.
March 19th, 2019 14:47
Nicholas Browning said:
The descriptions used are very well done.
Nice read.
March 19th, 2019 14:47
he loves me, he loves me not
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ELMINA : ANGELA HERE ! First let me thank you for the lovely dynamic Poem on SPRING : You added to our Fusion : BRIAN is my Fiancee in the UK : Im in New Zealand on a work exchange until OCTOBER 2019 : we are getting married in 2020 ! At the moment we are supporting & praying for CHRISTCHURCH after the massacare !
Thanks for this poem : Im 30 and I can empathise in relation to BOYS who loved me & loved me not ! When ladies are in LOVE we say so and want the World to know it. In my expereience most Men react differently ! The love you and crave your affection but (especially with their mates !) they act cool and pretend you\'re just GOOD FRIENDS etc : this leaves us uncertain & in limbo ! My MUM told me \"Men are scared of commitment\". Things are different with BRIAN (35) who had had his ups & downs in Love. We have a lot in common : have found true love and both sets of praents are very HAPPY : what more could an engaged couple want ?
I hope you find you SOUL MATE very soon !
BLESSINGS & JOY ANGELA 🧡
Please check our site : Thanks : A
March 17th, 2019 17:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ELMINA : ANGELA HERE ! First let me thank you for the lovely dynamic Poem on SPRING : You added to our Fusion : BRIAN is my Fiancee in the UK : Im in New Zealand on a work exchange until OCTOBER 2019 : we are getting married in 2020 ! At the moment we are supporting & praying for CHRISTCHURCH after the massacare !
Thanks for this poem : Im 30 and I can empathise in relation to BOYS who loved me & loved me not ! When ladies are in LOVE we say so and want the World to know it. In my expereience most Men react differently ! The love you and crave your affection but (especially with their mates !) they act cool and pretend you\'re just GOOD FRIENDS etc : this leaves us uncertain & in limbo ! My MUM told me \"Men are scared of commitment\". Things are different with BRIAN (35) who had had his ups & downs in Love. We have a lot in common : have found true love and both sets of praents are very HAPPY : what more could an engaged couple want ?
I hope you find you SOUL MATE very soon !
BLESSINGS & JOY ANGELA 🧡
Please check our site : Thanks : A
March 17th, 2019 17:41
my life is constantly drowning me
EliDagger said:
Excellent piece! Similar theme to my piece called The Waves of Withdrawal! Definitely a favourite!
March 11th, 2019 15:55
EliDagger said:
Excellent piece! Similar theme to my piece called The Waves of Withdrawal! Definitely a favourite!
March 11th, 2019 15:55
he loves me, he loves me not
JaydeVictoria said:
Really nice write..that I am sure alot of people can relate too. Thanks for sharing :)
March 11th, 2019 03:56
JaydeVictoria said:
Really nice write..that I am sure alot of people can relate too. Thanks for sharing :)
March 11th, 2019 03:56
hungry but at least i am good at math
Neville said:
You say it like I have known it to be oh\' so many, many times before
... I hope writing helps.. Neville
March 5th, 2019 07:34
Neville said:
You say it like I have known it to be oh\' so many, many times before
... I hope writing helps.. Neville
March 5th, 2019 07:34
tongue tied
trin said:
\"i need a script to even speak to another\", love that line. You express yourself very well through poetry, love this.
March 4th, 2019 17:45
trin said:
\"i need a script to even speak to another\", love that line. You express yourself very well through poetry, love this.
March 4th, 2019 17:45
school systems
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i agree 100% im a high school senior but depending what school you go to there are classes offered like career of exploration where you learn about careers and what to do in a job and learn about work environment and there are tqo courses of this the 2 half of this course (second year) is when you can have hands on learning also about bills and getting a job and learning how to do taxes and learning how to do loans, debit and credit cards there is a course called consumer math that teaches you real life things like this and is really helpful i highly RECOMMEND looking into this class if your school offers it good luck :) if you have any more questions about these kind of things just message me through here and ill be gladly to help girlie i just turned 18 and i wondered the same thing about this my 9th 10th grade year too ill be glad to help (im a girl by the way) :)
February 28th, 2019 11:20
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i agree 100% im a high school senior but depending what school you go to there are classes offered like career of exploration where you learn about careers and what to do in a job and learn about work environment and there are tqo courses of this the 2 half of this course (second year) is when you can have hands on learning also about bills and getting a job and learning how to do taxes and learning how to do loans, debit and credit cards there is a course called consumer math that teaches you real life things like this and is really helpful i highly RECOMMEND looking into this class if your school offers it good luck :) if you have any more questions about these kind of things just message me through here and ill be gladly to help girlie i just turned 18 and i wondered the same thing about this my 9th 10th grade year too ill be glad to help (im a girl by the way) :)
February 28th, 2019 11:20
demons in my head
dusk arising said:
Simple you say but its very good.
I like the thoughts it brought to me of your dark eyes seeing through the night.
The menace of a moonlit lynching.
Crazy? We\'ll see.
February 24th, 2019 12:32
dusk arising said:
Simple you say but its very good.
I like the thoughts it brought to me of your dark eyes seeing through the night.
The menace of a moonlit lynching.
Crazy? We\'ll see.
February 24th, 2019 12:32
name
Netashi said:
Welcome to MPS i hope you enjoy your stay. A great first piece keep up the great work.
- t
February 19th, 2019 11:25
Netashi said:
Welcome to MPS i hope you enjoy your stay. A great first piece keep up the great work.
- t
February 19th, 2019 11:25
name
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome LILSUNFLOWER (Beautiful Name !) : Thanks for your First Poem : Elegantly penned and a great Subject : NAMES ! BRIAN & I are engaged to be married (Easter 2020) & His Name always thrills my Heart & My Name his. Some Members call us A & B which also sounds LOVELY. Brians MUM chose BRIAN because it means NOBLE and My MUM ANGELA because (In Spanish) it means ANGEL.
Ones NAME is very precious because that is how People know us as individuals and always ask our name when introduced for the first time. BRIAN & I love our Names and their significance. BRIAN is very NOBLE and I try to lift up to my lovely NAME : Angela de la Luz : ANGEL of LIGHT !
BRIANS name gives me sweet sleep and joy when I awake : especially as currently we are 11,500 miles apart (UK to New Zealand) Im on a Work Exchange in NZ (Physiotherapist). As your Poem suggests there are NAMES whose memory brings horror to our hearts !
Thanks for sharing : please check our Poems :
Love & Blessings through Poetry : ANGELA
MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ A & B !
February 19th, 2019 04:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome LILSUNFLOWER (Beautiful Name !) : Thanks for your First Poem : Elegantly penned and a great Subject : NAMES ! BRIAN & I are engaged to be married (Easter 2020) & His Name always thrills my Heart & My Name his. Some Members call us A & B which also sounds LOVELY. Brians MUM chose BRIAN because it means NOBLE and My MUM ANGELA because (In Spanish) it means ANGEL.
Ones NAME is very precious because that is how People know us as individuals and always ask our name when introduced for the first time. BRIAN & I love our Names and their significance. BRIAN is very NOBLE and I try to lift up to my lovely NAME : Angela de la Luz : ANGEL of LIGHT !
BRIANS name gives me sweet sleep and joy when I awake : especially as currently we are 11,500 miles apart (UK to New Zealand) Im on a Work Exchange in NZ (Physiotherapist). As your Poem suggests there are NAMES whose memory brings horror to our hearts !
Thanks for sharing : please check our Poems :
Love & Blessings through Poetry : ANGELA
MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK ~ A & B !
February 19th, 2019 04:11
