Comments received on poems by SLR



Hollow Hypocrisy
Michael Edwards said:

Great work and so sad that there are many who fall into this category - thy do not serve their faith well

May 19th, 2018 00:00

Goodbye
dusk arising said:

Your writing really does convey the sadness of tragic loss.
Truly made me sad reading your words.

May 17th, 2018 20:10

Equality
Michael Edwards said:

As populations increase and the planet becomes ever more accessible sadly it will continue to get worse - this is a super write SLR

May 17th, 2018 01:00

Outside
nicolibellamont said:

I Completely understand. Very good

May 16th, 2018 07:27

Our Bond
Poetic Dan said:

I\'ve never really liked mothers day,
But these words and feelings are amazing.
The beauty of your soul shines in every one, thank you ever so much.

I wrote a piece called \"I know of so many\" that is one of a few that show my appreciation for what the females do for us.
Much love and respect

May 16th, 2018 02:53

Outside
Michael Edwards said:

Yes I have felt like this and do understand - a meaningful write.

May 15th, 2018 23:28

Closing the door
Michael Edwards said:

Great write SLR

May 14th, 2018 14:23

Closing the door
SLR said:

Thank you. I will definitely check out your poem. I agree that love comes in many forms but kindness, respect, gentleness, thoughtfulness and the will to do what\'s best for the other person should be present. If someone loves someone else there shouldn\'t be lies driving a wedge between them. Thank you for your comment.

May 14th, 2018 11:16

Closing the door
dusk arising said:

Great pain here in your writing and today i know only too well how you feel (please look at my poem today and you\'ll see why).
Love IS love and it comes in many forms but the more you learn to love yourself then the more you will feel the love (in all it\'s guises) around you.
Your poem stirred me.

May 14th, 2018 11:05

Our Bond
Michael Edwards said:

That\'s a coincidence - I also have ladies in my family :) :) Great sentiments expressed here - a lovely work.

May 14th, 2018 00:57

Our Bond
Laura said:

SLR,
Awesome poetry for Mother’s Day...or any day! The love expressed with your words is beautiful! I enjoyed this read very much!

~Laura~

May 13th, 2018 17:16

Our Bond
Maxine Smith said:

A beautiful read for a beautiful day. Nicely done.

May 13th, 2018 15:40

Spinning
SLR said:

Tepo, I want you thank you again for your comment. Where I live a belt can be three things. One to hold your pants up. A shot of strong liquor. Or a punch in the face! So I DEFINITELY has to look up it\'s meaning over there! :-) :-) :-) so thank you for your complement and thank you for having me a new phrase to use on people over here!! :-) :-) :-)




May 13th, 2018 12:01

Spinning
orchidee said:

A fine write SLR. I believe it\'s people that need changing, not society as a \'thing\' in itself. So were they \'good old days\' or \'bad old days\'? And are in we \'good times\' or \'bad times\' at present? I think it can be a mix.

May 13th, 2018 01:40

Spinning
Michael Edwards said:

A real thought provoker and a darn good write - great work SLR.

May 13th, 2018 00:09

Tears
Maxine Smith said:

Very powerful, we need the darkness to grow, the pain to become stronger and the bad to learn.


May 12th, 2018 15:46

Spinning
Maxine Smith said:

Oh very thought provoking, I love reads like this. Is it society? is it conformity or resilience? is it what’s deemed acceptable?how would we change it if we could or would we even try?!
I could talk about this stuff all day, fascinating.
Your should check my poem ‘What are we?’ May interest you by me reading yours.
Well done indeed. I love this.

May 12th, 2018 15:07

Tears
kitcat said:

That was so very sad you expressed it so well Life can be so cruel Written Superb

May 12th, 2018 13:44

Tears
Jonathan Dylan said:

Wow. So powerful!

May 11th, 2018 15:34

Tears
Turtle said:

tears bleed our mind of not just weakness but purge the soul of toxins

May 11th, 2018 14:33

Tears
SLR said:

Thank you both so much. It happened years ago. I think of her sometimes. Btw, she loved yellow roses so when I saw your name yellowrose of course I thought of her. She had a sweet personality and was always smiling. :-) I do think of the happy memories ms martina, you are right about that. :-) . Thank you both for your kind comments!

May 11th, 2018 06:41

Tears
yellowrose said:

very well expressed ! so very sad :-(

May 11th, 2018 02:38

Baby girl
SLR said:

Thank you SO MUCH! It\'s always been special to me.

May 9th, 2018 06:17

Baby girl
Michael Edwards said:

It even made my eyes water when I read it - a super write SLR

May 9th, 2018 00:21

Introduction
SLR said:

Thank you. I\'m new to posting online so I\'m not sure what exactly to expect. It didn\'t space the lines like I was trying to do so I\'m going to have to try to figure it out with a future poem. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I\'m definitely NOT tech savvy. I\'m more pen and paper kind of writer.

May 8th, 2018 07:30

Introduction
sylviasearcher said:

You have a nice style. The way the words flow in my mind reminds me of a poet I knew once.

May 8th, 2018 02:07

Introduction
Goldfinch60 said:

Welcome to MPS, I look forward to reading your words.

May 8th, 2018 00:27

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