Comments received on poems by SLR
Outside
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I have felt like this and do understand - a meaningful write.
May 15th, 2018 23:28
Michael Edwards said:
Yes I have felt like this and do understand - a meaningful write.
May 15th, 2018 23:28
Closing the door
SLR said:
Thank you. I will definitely check out your poem. I agree that love comes in many forms but kindness, respect, gentleness, thoughtfulness and the will to do what\'s best for the other person should be present. If someone loves someone else there shouldn\'t be lies driving a wedge between them. Thank you for your comment.
May 14th, 2018 11:16
SLR said:
Thank you. I will definitely check out your poem. I agree that love comes in many forms but kindness, respect, gentleness, thoughtfulness and the will to do what\'s best for the other person should be present. If someone loves someone else there shouldn\'t be lies driving a wedge between them. Thank you for your comment.
May 14th, 2018 11:16
Closing the door
dusk arising said:
Great pain here in your writing and today i know only too well how you feel (please look at my poem today and you\'ll see why).
Love IS love and it comes in many forms but the more you learn to love yourself then the more you will feel the love (in all it\'s guises) around you.
Your poem stirred me.
May 14th, 2018 11:05
dusk arising said:
Great pain here in your writing and today i know only too well how you feel (please look at my poem today and you\'ll see why).
Love IS love and it comes in many forms but the more you learn to love yourself then the more you will feel the love (in all it\'s guises) around you.
Your poem stirred me.
May 14th, 2018 11:05
Our Bond
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a coincidence - I also have ladies in my family :) :) Great sentiments expressed here - a lovely work.
May 14th, 2018 00:57
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s a coincidence - I also have ladies in my family :) :) Great sentiments expressed here - a lovely work.
May 14th, 2018 00:57
Our Bond
Lauraš» said:
SLR,
Awesome poetry for Motherās Day...or any day! The love expressed with your words is beautiful! I enjoyed this read very much!
~Laura~
May 13th, 2018 17:16
Lauraš» said:
SLR,
Awesome poetry for Motherās Day...or any day! The love expressed with your words is beautiful! I enjoyed this read very much!
~Laura~
May 13th, 2018 17:16
Spinning
SLR said:
Tepo, I want you thank you again for your comment. Where I live a belt can be three things. One to hold your pants up. A shot of strong liquor. Or a punch in the face! So I DEFINITELY has to look up it\'s meaning over there! :-) :-) :-) so thank you for your complement and thank you for having me a new phrase to use on people over here!! :-) :-) :-)
May 13th, 2018 12:01
SLR said:
Tepo, I want you thank you again for your comment. Where I live a belt can be three things. One to hold your pants up. A shot of strong liquor. Or a punch in the face! So I DEFINITELY has to look up it\'s meaning over there! :-) :-) :-) so thank you for your complement and thank you for having me a new phrase to use on people over here!! :-) :-) :-)
May 13th, 2018 12:01
Spinning
orchidee said:
A fine write SLR. I believe it\'s people that need changing, not society as a \'thing\' in itself. So were they \'good old days\' or \'bad old days\'? And are in we \'good times\' or \'bad times\' at present? I think it can be a mix.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
orchidee said:
A fine write SLR. I believe it\'s people that need changing, not society as a \'thing\' in itself. So were they \'good old days\' or \'bad old days\'? And are in we \'good times\' or \'bad times\' at present? I think it can be a mix.
May 13th, 2018 01:40
Spinning
Michael Edwards said:
A real thought provoker and a darn good write - great work SLR.
May 13th, 2018 00:09
Michael Edwards said:
A real thought provoker and a darn good write - great work SLR.
May 13th, 2018 00:09
Tears
kitcat said:
That was so very sad you expressed it so well Life can be so cruel Written Superb
May 12th, 2018 13:44
kitcat said:
That was so very sad you expressed it so well Life can be so cruel Written Superb
May 12th, 2018 13:44
Tears
Turtle said:
tears bleed our mind of not just weakness but purge the soul of toxins
May 11th, 2018 14:33
Turtle said:
tears bleed our mind of not just weakness but purge the soul of toxins
May 11th, 2018 14:33
Tears
SLR said:
Thank you both so much. It happened years ago. I think of her sometimes. Btw, she loved yellow roses so when I saw your name yellowrose of course I thought of her. She had a sweet personality and was always smiling. :-) I do think of the happy memories ms martina, you are right about that. :-) . Thank you both for your kind comments!
May 11th, 2018 06:41
SLR said:
Thank you both so much. It happened years ago. I think of her sometimes. Btw, she loved yellow roses so when I saw your name yellowrose of course I thought of her. She had a sweet personality and was always smiling. :-) I do think of the happy memories ms martina, you are right about that. :-) . Thank you both for your kind comments!
May 11th, 2018 06:41
Tears
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very well expressed ! so very sad :-(
May 11th, 2018 02:38
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
very well expressed ! so very sad :-(
May 11th, 2018 02:38
Baby girl
Michael Edwards said:
It even made my eyes water when I read it - a super write SLR
May 9th, 2018 00:21
Michael Edwards said:
It even made my eyes water when I read it - a super write SLR
May 9th, 2018 00:21
Introduction
SLR said:
Thank you. I\'m new to posting online so I\'m not sure what exactly to expect. It didn\'t space the lines like I was trying to do so I\'m going to have to try to figure it out with a future poem. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I\'m definitely NOT tech savvy. I\'m more pen and paper kind of writer.
May 8th, 2018 07:30
SLR said:
Thank you. I\'m new to posting online so I\'m not sure what exactly to expect. It didn\'t space the lines like I was trying to do so I\'m going to have to try to figure it out with a future poem. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I\'m definitely NOT tech savvy. I\'m more pen and paper kind of writer.
May 8th, 2018 07:30
Introduction
sylviasearcher said:
You have a nice style. The way the words flow in my mind reminds me of a poet I knew once.
May 8th, 2018 02:07
sylviasearcher said:
You have a nice style. The way the words flow in my mind reminds me of a poet I knew once.
May 8th, 2018 02:07
Introduction
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to MPS, I look forward to reading your words.
May 8th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Welcome to MPS, I look forward to reading your words.
May 8th, 2018 00:27
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