Comments received on poems by SLR
Love- A happy heart definition.
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is wonderful and the strongest of all emotions.
June 29th, 2018 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Love is wonderful and the strongest of all emotions.
June 29th, 2018 00:09
Love- A happy heart definition.
Heartwriter said:
Such a pleasure to read! Really great.
June 28th, 2018 18:23
Heartwriter said:
Such a pleasure to read! Really great.
June 28th, 2018 18:23
Awakening
orchidee said:
A fine write SLR. Betert oheara rose bloom, than to hear me sing. I am the cat\'s dawn chorus. Two cats fighting at dawn, that is! - meoowwoo! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 02:24
orchidee said:
A fine write SLR. Betert oheara rose bloom, than to hear me sing. I am the cat\'s dawn chorus. Two cats fighting at dawn, that is! - meoowwoo! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 02:24
Awakening
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the senses can bring all emotions into us.
June 28th, 2018 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the senses can bring all emotions into us.
June 28th, 2018 00:53
Rain on the window
E-Poems said:
The title drew me in alone and then the poetry delivered such a relatable feeling. - E
June 27th, 2018 16:53
E-Poems said:
The title drew me in alone and then the poetry delivered such a relatable feeling. - E
June 27th, 2018 16:53
Awakening
dusk arising said:
Every time i hear a newborn baby cry, or touch a leaf, or see the sky - then i know why, i believe.
Those are the words of a song on the radio when i was a kid, sung by the bachelors. Your words reminded me of this.
Up to you what you believe in, there\'s a spiritual sense within your words.
June 27th, 2018 16:04
dusk arising said:
Every time i hear a newborn baby cry, or touch a leaf, or see the sky - then i know why, i believe.
Those are the words of a song on the radio when i was a kid, sung by the bachelors. Your words reminded me of this.
Up to you what you believe in, there\'s a spiritual sense within your words.
June 27th, 2018 16:04
Our song
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write. Music can be so powerful in relationships.
June 23rd, 2018 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful loving write. Music can be so powerful in relationships.
June 23rd, 2018 00:11
Teardrop
A.H. Browning said:
I meant to comment on this when I first read it. Thank you for the poem and especially your comments.
June 22nd, 2018 18:39
A.H. Browning said:
I meant to comment on this when I first read it. Thank you for the poem and especially your comments.
June 22nd, 2018 18:39
Rain on the window
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s all in the moment S
Don\'t change a thing you captured it perfectly
Andrew
June 22nd, 2018 09:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
It\'s all in the moment S
Don\'t change a thing you captured it perfectly
Andrew
June 22nd, 2018 09:27
Rain on the window
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
A real poem directly from the heart, needs nothing more, says it all.
Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2018 20:33
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
A real poem directly from the heart, needs nothing more, says it all.
Thanks for sharing.
June 21st, 2018 20:33
Voices
Goldfinch60 said:
That hand of life has dealt you the wisdom to guide your son towards the right path, the path that he will eventually chose. Good write.
June 21st, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
That hand of life has dealt you the wisdom to guide your son towards the right path, the path that he will eventually chose. Good write.
June 21st, 2018 01:40
Voices
DeletedAccount said:
I can tell this is really from the bottom of your heart, and I think I understand the message in the story. I really loved it, great job!
June 20th, 2018 16:12
DeletedAccount said:
I can tell this is really from the bottom of your heart, and I think I understand the message in the story. I really loved it, great job!
June 20th, 2018 16:12
Teardrop
SLR said:
I\'m far from grateful for all my issues but i will say they\'ve made me stronger than what I probably would have been otherwise.
June 20th, 2018 14:28
SLR said:
I\'m far from grateful for all my issues but i will say they\'ve made me stronger than what I probably would have been otherwise.
June 20th, 2018 14:28
Both of Us
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Special things are worth fighting for S
and I love happy ending
Tender powerful write from the heart
Thank you
Andrew
June 20th, 2018 02:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Special things are worth fighting for S
and I love happy ending
Tender powerful write from the heart
Thank you
Andrew
June 20th, 2018 02:15
Teardrop
Frogspoetry said:
Very good,very true.I also have seen this,I am actually a product of this.I am struggling with depression,anxiety and PTSD.I am so thankful that I have God to lay my troubles upon and help me heal.not alot of people have this.and it makes me so sad to realize this,so I am doing my best that Nelly doesn\'t experience this.thank you SLR,great job.
June 19th, 2018 23:30
Frogspoetry said:
Very good,very true.I also have seen this,I am actually a product of this.I am struggling with depression,anxiety and PTSD.I am so thankful that I have God to lay my troubles upon and help me heal.not alot of people have this.and it makes me so sad to realize this,so I am doing my best that Nelly doesn\'t experience this.thank you SLR,great job.
June 19th, 2018 23:30
Teardrop
Noah Malice said:
Short, simple, but effective nonetheless. I love it.
June 19th, 2018 22:07
Noah Malice said:
Short, simple, but effective nonetheless. I love it.
June 19th, 2018 22:07
The other woman
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
Honourable, unselfish, considerate and a true lover and so is your poem as well. May your light never dim.
Thanks for sharing....
June 17th, 2018 19:16
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
Honourable, unselfish, considerate and a true lover and so is your poem as well. May your light never dim.
Thanks for sharing....
June 17th, 2018 19:16
The other woman
Jane Frye said:
Sounds like you did what you felt was right for the children and their family life, even though it cost you some heartache. Hope you have found your forever love in the marriage you are in. Your poem was very heartfelt and touching.
June 17th, 2018 19:08
Jane Frye said:
Sounds like you did what you felt was right for the children and their family life, even though it cost you some heartache. Hope you have found your forever love in the marriage you are in. Your poem was very heartfelt and touching.
June 17th, 2018 19:08
Calling on angels
Frogspoetry said:
very good,it conveys the pain we feel when someone we love walk away from us.
June 17th, 2018 11:14
Frogspoetry said:
very good,it conveys the pain we feel when someone we love walk away from us.
June 17th, 2018 11:14
My child
Appletree said:
Some great imagery about the love for our children. Inspred me to try and explain it myself. Jealous of your walks by \'the lakes\'.
June 16th, 2018 08:01
Appletree said:
Some great imagery about the love for our children. Inspred me to try and explain it myself. Jealous of your walks by \'the lakes\'.
June 16th, 2018 08:01
My child
Frogspoetry said:
I CAN DEFINITLY RELATE TO THIS.IT BROUGHT ME BCK TO WHEN I HAD A MISCARRIAGE.SAD BUT MEMORABLE.THANK YOU.
June 14th, 2018 11:30
Frogspoetry said:
I CAN DEFINITLY RELATE TO THIS.IT BROUGHT ME BCK TO WHEN I HAD A MISCARRIAGE.SAD BUT MEMORABLE.THANK YOU.
June 14th, 2018 11:30
Grace (x2!)
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, our youngest child is forty three next month but I do have four Granddaughters and two Grandsons, every one of them is so special.
June 12th, 2018 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good loving write, our youngest child is forty three next month but I do have four Granddaughters and two Grandsons, every one of them is so special.
June 12th, 2018 00:23
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