Comments received on poems by CuriousSoul
Revved up and in love
L. B. Mek said:
yes, partly I\'m just excited to see poetry utilising driving imagery
and partly that mustang looks hella sexy
but mostly its just my kinda poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 9th, 2022 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
yes, partly I\'m just excited to see poetry utilising driving imagery
and partly that mustang looks hella sexy
but mostly its just my kinda poetry..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 9th, 2022 05:19
Stutter
L. B. Mek said:
really well thought-out, especially highlighted by that one stanza you specifically insured was off-beat and thus, insured we took note of those lines, smart and really well executed,
identifying those \'riff-raff\' in our lives is one step closer to keeping their unwanted influence - at a distance,
and a step nearer to unravelling that self we keep coiled and ready to claim that light of day: when we dare
to walk - proud, in our own fallible skin...
good write! thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 1st, 2021 06:14
L. B. Mek said:
really well thought-out, especially highlighted by that one stanza you specifically insured was off-beat and thus, insured we took note of those lines, smart and really well executed,
identifying those \'riff-raff\' in our lives is one step closer to keeping their unwanted influence - at a distance,
and a step nearer to unravelling that self we keep coiled and ready to claim that light of day: when we dare
to walk - proud, in our own fallible skin...
good write! thanks for sharing dear Poet
February 1st, 2021 06:14
Stutter
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong words Mikhail. Strangely my daughter and I were discussing stuttering yesterday, she stutters and has done for over 50 years but she is now part of an organisation that is helping people wiht the situation here in the UK.
What you need to believe is that your stuttering is part of you and that people must accept you for what you are and if they can\'t accept that, it is their problem not yours.
Andy
February 1st, 2021 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Good strong words Mikhail. Strangely my daughter and I were discussing stuttering yesterday, she stutters and has done for over 50 years but she is now part of an organisation that is helping people wiht the situation here in the UK.
What you need to believe is that your stuttering is part of you and that people must accept you for what you are and if they can\'t accept that, it is their problem not yours.
Andy
February 1st, 2021 01:54
Stutter
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great poem, Mikhail. And don\'t worry about the stuttering. As a teen I stuttered quite a bit, but with a lot of concentration, slow speaking and eventually not caring about it anymore it went away and never came back. Maybe I was lucky, I have no idea. Never went to see a doctor either. At that time \'one did not do that\'.
Concentrate on your writing and your sharp mind!!! Don\'t think about the delivery. I may be wrong, but with me, the more I thought about it the worse it got.
January 31st, 2021 20:28
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great poem, Mikhail. And don\'t worry about the stuttering. As a teen I stuttered quite a bit, but with a lot of concentration, slow speaking and eventually not caring about it anymore it went away and never came back. Maybe I was lucky, I have no idea. Never went to see a doctor either. At that time \'one did not do that\'.
Concentrate on your writing and your sharp mind!!! Don\'t think about the delivery. I may be wrong, but with me, the more I thought about it the worse it got.
January 31st, 2021 20:28
Stutter
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am not qualified to teach, treat or critique you. I enjoyed reading your poem. Although writing anxiety is difficult to cope with, solutions are possible.
January 31st, 2021 13:54
Jerry Reynolds said:
I am not qualified to teach, treat or critique you. I enjoyed reading your poem. Although writing anxiety is difficult to cope with, solutions are possible.
January 31st, 2021 13:54
Stutter
orchidee said:
I\'m no expert on poetic forms or professional poetry, etc.
This speaks (pun intended maybe!) to me of an example of triumph over, or through, adversity.
With stutters, they can be worse if we are too stressed or anxious - you will know, no doubt.
Yet your words, and those of stutterers, to whatever degree they may have the condition, are as valuable and useful as anyone else\'s. To \'close down\' and not speak, can be negative.
The longer we fear, are anxious, etc, to speak, the worse it becomes to actually do it?
January 31st, 2021 13:37
orchidee said:
I\'m no expert on poetic forms or professional poetry, etc.
This speaks (pun intended maybe!) to me of an example of triumph over, or through, adversity.
With stutters, they can be worse if we are too stressed or anxious - you will know, no doubt.
Yet your words, and those of stutterers, to whatever degree they may have the condition, are as valuable and useful as anyone else\'s. To \'close down\' and not speak, can be negative.
The longer we fear, are anxious, etc, to speak, the worse it becomes to actually do it?
January 31st, 2021 13:37
My Hero
Debsspot said:
So glad you have had someone in your life you love like that. Even though it hurts its so special. A beautifully written tribute.
November 13th, 2018 03:43
Debsspot said:
So glad you have had someone in your life you love like that. Even though it hurts its so special. A beautifully written tribute.
November 13th, 2018 03:43
Dark Void
Shayl said:
I\'m sorry I know how you feel though I went through the same thing.
October 4th, 2018 16:00
Shayl said:
I\'m sorry I know how you feel though I went through the same thing.
October 4th, 2018 16:00
Time
Poetic Dan said:
This was amazing, it truly sung to my heart, poetry runs deep in us all when we speak from the soul and yours shines beautifully my friend.
Keep writing raw and pure
Much peace and respect
August 10th, 2018 05:50
Poetic Dan said:
This was amazing, it truly sung to my heart, poetry runs deep in us all when we speak from the soul and yours shines beautifully my friend.
Keep writing raw and pure
Much peace and respect
August 10th, 2018 05:50
Two Pieces of a Puzzle
Frogspoetry said:
YOU HAVE A VERY DIFFICULT DILEMMA.PRAY ON IT AND THE ANSWER WILL MAKE ITSELF KNOWN,
I FEEL FOR YOU MIKAIL,I HAVE BEEN ON YOUR GIRLFRIENDS END OF THIS.I LOVED HIM TO NO END,I STILL DO,BUT HE LOVED HIS EX,WHO HAPPENED TO BE HIS BEST FRIEND.HE LED ME ON, WE WAS ENGAGED AND EVERYTHING,WEDDING 3 MONTHS AWAY.THEN BROKE MY HEART,AND NOT 2 MONTHS LATER,SHE LEFT HIM FOR HER EX,AND HE REGRETTED HIS DECISION EVER SINCE,I STILL HAVEN\'T SEEN HIM BUT WE KNOW THE SAME PEOPLE AND I HEAR THINGS,HE WAS HURT LIKE I WAS.
THINK IT THROUGH VERY CAREFULLY,AND PRAY ON IT. JUST BE CAREFUL,I DON\'T WANT YOU TO BE THE ONE HURT IN THE END. YOUR FRIEND MELISSA
June 30th, 2018 10:34
Frogspoetry said:
YOU HAVE A VERY DIFFICULT DILEMMA.PRAY ON IT AND THE ANSWER WILL MAKE ITSELF KNOWN,
I FEEL FOR YOU MIKAIL,I HAVE BEEN ON YOUR GIRLFRIENDS END OF THIS.I LOVED HIM TO NO END,I STILL DO,BUT HE LOVED HIS EX,WHO HAPPENED TO BE HIS BEST FRIEND.HE LED ME ON, WE WAS ENGAGED AND EVERYTHING,WEDDING 3 MONTHS AWAY.THEN BROKE MY HEART,AND NOT 2 MONTHS LATER,SHE LEFT HIM FOR HER EX,AND HE REGRETTED HIS DECISION EVER SINCE,I STILL HAVEN\'T SEEN HIM BUT WE KNOW THE SAME PEOPLE AND I HEAR THINGS,HE WAS HURT LIKE I WAS.
THINK IT THROUGH VERY CAREFULLY,AND PRAY ON IT. JUST BE CAREFUL,I DON\'T WANT YOU TO BE THE ONE HURT IN THE END. YOUR FRIEND MELISSA
June 30th, 2018 10:34
Illusionary Paradise
E-Poems said:
Your work is so deep and relatable to read. Though it my feel impossible, things get brighter. ~ E
June 28th, 2018 12:55
E-Poems said:
Your work is so deep and relatable to read. Though it my feel impossible, things get brighter. ~ E
June 28th, 2018 12:55
Numb
Frogspoetry said:
One of my favorite linkin park songs,also breaking the habit.good read Mikhail
June 26th, 2018 10:55
Frogspoetry said:
One of my favorite linkin park songs,also breaking the habit.good read Mikhail
June 26th, 2018 10:55
Illusionary Paradise
Frogspoetry said:
this is a great well written poem,you have such a good understanding of the world.Sometimes we need a reality check to show us that the world is in dire need of GOD and His SALVATION.
June 18th, 2018 15:12
Frogspoetry said:
this is a great well written poem,you have such a good understanding of the world.Sometimes we need a reality check to show us that the world is in dire need of GOD and His SALVATION.
June 18th, 2018 15:12
Played like a Violin(edited)
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
They say \" T\'is better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all\"
If you are real and your love was as well, then you are NOT the loser!
June 17th, 2018 04:53
Snowflake Incorrigable said:
They say \" T\'is better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all\"
If you are real and your love was as well, then you are NOT the loser!
June 17th, 2018 04:53
Played like a Violin(edited)
smallest_stars said:
I approve this lol.
It was a good poem to begin with. I especially like the first and last stanzas.
June 16th, 2018 22:44
smallest_stars said:
I approve this lol.
It was a good poem to begin with. I especially like the first and last stanzas.
June 16th, 2018 22:44
Played like a Violin
Heartwriter said:
The old saying goes. Let them go and if they do not return they were never yours. If they do, it was meant to be. Time dulls pain. New love takes it away. Good luck.
June 13th, 2018 02:20
Heartwriter said:
The old saying goes. Let them go and if they do not return they were never yours. If they do, it was meant to be. Time dulls pain. New love takes it away. Good luck.
June 13th, 2018 02:20
Played like a Violin
Frogspoetry said:
This is also really good.Things get better,really,they do.
June 13th, 2018 01:13
Frogspoetry said:
This is also really good.Things get better,really,they do.
June 13th, 2018 01:13
Nothing but a ruse
Frogspoetry said:
Keep at it curious soul.you are an amazing poet.A little young to be hurt that bad,but I know how you feel.There are plenty of others out there for you,someone who will not hurt you and will love you ,for YOU.
June 12th, 2018 22:52
Frogspoetry said:
Keep at it curious soul.you are an amazing poet.A little young to be hurt that bad,but I know how you feel.There are plenty of others out there for you,someone who will not hurt you and will love you ,for YOU.
June 12th, 2018 22:52
