Comments received on poems by Hesther
Oublier
orchidee said:
A fine write H. I\'ve seen an \'oublier\' (a \'forgetter\') in a former Jail, that is now a Chapel. It\'s a basement area under a board in one corner of the building, where they used to throw prisoners down, and maybe then, for the most part, forget them.
November 11th, 2018 13:06
orchidee said:
A fine write H. I\'ve seen an \'oublier\' (a \'forgetter\') in a former Jail, that is now a Chapel. It\'s a basement area under a board in one corner of the building, where they used to throw prisoners down, and maybe then, for the most part, forget them.
November 11th, 2018 13:06
Kings Lynn
Michael Edwards said:
Hesther I have only just found your work on this site and am amazed it has elicited so few comments. You are a true poet and I look forward to reading more - please keep posting.
November 10th, 2018 20:34
Michael Edwards said:
Hesther I have only just found your work on this site and am amazed it has elicited so few comments. You are a true poet and I look forward to reading more - please keep posting.
November 10th, 2018 20:34
Schizophrenia
A.H. Browning said:
Wow. I appreciate your writing here.
Best Wishes and Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
July 18th, 2018 20:54
A.H. Browning said:
Wow. I appreciate your writing here.
Best Wishes and Kindest Regards,
A.H. Browning
July 18th, 2018 20:54
The Spectrum of Solitude
dusk arising said:
Wow i say at the wonderful pictures you encourage my mind to paint upon your canvas of words here. Yes i felt the solitude, heard the tumbleweed of the years passing and saw the final sunrise.
Exquisite!
July 8th, 2018 19:32
dusk arising said:
Wow i say at the wonderful pictures you encourage my mind to paint upon your canvas of words here. Yes i felt the solitude, heard the tumbleweed of the years passing and saw the final sunrise.
Exquisite!
July 8th, 2018 19:32
Again
Anasyil said:
Beautiful work. My condolences for your loss. Loss is never easy to deal with. I hope all will be well soon.
July 2nd, 2018 20:54
Anasyil said:
Beautiful work. My condolences for your loss. Loss is never easy to deal with. I hope all will be well soon.
July 2nd, 2018 20:54
The Oncoming Silence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HESTER ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which I found intriguing ? It starts off well enough (Vs 1 & 2) with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ~ THEN ~ Everything Stops (V 3. Line 2.) WHY ? Knowledge of BLOODSHED ! (Lines 5 & 6) V 4. Remembering those who FELL ~ are FALLING and will FALL ~ Journying to the Silent Land ~ V 5. More SILENCE is coming ~ Life is Abnormal ! Some say SILENCE is GOLDEN ~ but personally I find it eerie ~ The SPOOKY calm ~ before the DESTRUCTIVE storm. Your Poem speaks of a Spooky & Destructive SILENCE ~ Thanks for sharing ~ I am still intrigued. When I visited AUSCHWITZ in POLAND ~ that too was silent and NO BIRDS SANG ! Yours BRIAN ~ The way MPS works is we read and comment on each others Poetry ~ OK ~ You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ Please visit my Site ~ Thanks B !
June 22nd, 2018 13:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME HESTER ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which I found intriguing ? It starts off well enough (Vs 1 & 2) with Rhyme ~ Rhythm & Reason ~ THEN ~ Everything Stops (V 3. Line 2.) WHY ? Knowledge of BLOODSHED ! (Lines 5 & 6) V 4. Remembering those who FELL ~ are FALLING and will FALL ~ Journying to the Silent Land ~ V 5. More SILENCE is coming ~ Life is Abnormal ! Some say SILENCE is GOLDEN ~ but personally I find it eerie ~ The SPOOKY calm ~ before the DESTRUCTIVE storm. Your Poem speaks of a Spooky & Destructive SILENCE ~ Thanks for sharing ~ I am still intrigued. When I visited AUSCHWITZ in POLAND ~ that too was silent and NO BIRDS SANG ! Yours BRIAN ~ The way MPS works is we read and comment on each others Poetry ~ OK ~ You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ Please visit my Site ~ Thanks B !
June 22nd, 2018 13:26
