Comments received on poems by Heather Harrisson



Queen
SorrowfullyHappy said:

you disserve more than a crown
beautiful write I look forward to reading more of your work and I wish I could tell you it gets better but I am still falling aswell

December 21st, 2018 18:31

Best friends
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Heather (and Sarah),

This is a beautiful, stunning write!
I sincerely hope you do stay close to one another ā€œuntil the very endā€!
Thank you for sharing!

~Laura~

December 15th, 2018 12:27

More than
Debsspot said:

Well there go a few cliches! Makes perfect sense when you think about it from different persective. Love this Heather.

December 14th, 2018 19:35

The strongest come in small packages
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good positive write. In life you must always try in spite of what others may think.

December 14th, 2018 01:32

The strongest come in small packages
Nicholas Browning said:

\"If you judge a fish on its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.\" - Albert Einstein
I enjoyed the read.

December 13th, 2018 15:27

Life
elimil02 said:

beautiful

December 12th, 2018 22:41

My age
dusk arising said:

The lyrics of an old song come to mind. \"Walk a mile in my shoes, before you abuse, criticise and accuse, walk a mile in my shoes\".



December 12th, 2018 11:41

My age
Neville said:

My word, the nib of your pen must be near molten.. you are of course quite write... age really becomes irrelevant when one is talking about experiences whether they be good or bad.. you have certainly crammed a lot of things into this single epic poem...and for that alone you should be congratulated... Neville

December 12th, 2018 07:50

Winter escape
Neville said:

as I scroll down the page to read each line in turn, these words seem to take on an animated feel, like flakes falling out of a brilliant white snow filled sky... now that probably sounds a little crazy but, that is how it seemed... now the big question is, should I get my eyes tested.... you gave me a very pleasant wander through a rustic winterscape... cheers, Neville

December 9th, 2018 09:24

Winter escape
Classicmister said:

A fine poem Heather - You capture the silent world of a snowscape very well. I particularly liked your third verse ...
I\'m all alone out here,
Nothing moves or stirs,
Even time is frozen,
Among the frosted firs.

Well done

December 9th, 2018 08:12

Winter escape
A.H. Browning said:

Wow. Thank you for your writing here. Very moving to me.

I recently started writing a new piece which I have potentially entitled, \"The Silence of Snow\". I see so many things in this poem that prompted and moved me to desire to try to write my new poem.
This is very well done. This really spoke to me. Thank you.

Kindest Regards

December 9th, 2018 01:58

You, me
George C. Biester said:

Beautifully written and expressed. I love the topic because it hits very close to home. I live to feel things, and this definitely made me feel.

December 7th, 2018 13:45

You, me
Neville said:

Life is filled with regrets, I imagine most of those who write, touch upon this subject now and again... feeling sad is one thing, but maybe you need to be less tough on yourself... however, if these fine words are nothing more than poetry, then you have done a very good job indeed.... N

December 7th, 2018 10:53

Inspiration
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah -Heather - this I can relate to and I love the metaphor which runs through this versing of the all too familiar struggle we poets endure in writing convincingly just what we feel.

December 6th, 2018 17:25

Inspiration
orchidee said:

Try writing with a quill-shaped brush, of the dustpan-and-brush variety! You\'ll have to keep your poems then. You\'ll have no brush to sweep them away. They\'ll be good enough. I rarely throw out any of my stuff! heehee.

December 6th, 2018 09:13

Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, yes words can have a tremendous affect on you and bring on all emotions.

\"Ever seen someone reading a book,
With a stupid big grin on their face?\"
Yes, that someone could be me

December 6th, 2018 01:06

The book with no smell
orchidee said:

Oh lol. I smell some books, and other things before reading them. Maybe checking if they are not dusty and musty, and less than 100 years old!
Do you know a Mr Bean episode? He listens to some strange food, as well as smelling it. It\'s nutty!

December 1st, 2018 07:50

The book with no smell
Debsspot said:

Loved this Heather. Your mind wanders just like mine. Your style kept me engaged.

November 30th, 2018 22:48

The book with no smell
Edthepoet said:

You got all that from taking 1 breath through your nostrils?! :O wow! That\'s pretty epic. I really enjoyed it. P.s have you ever heard of a kindle?... (I joke!)

November 30th, 2018 11:48

Best feelings
Goldfinch60 said:

Those feelings are always there for us throughout our lives.

November 30th, 2018 02:15

Best feelings
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

You express such wonderful feelings within the lines of this poem. A joy to read and a message everyone should adhere to. Nicely written. :-)

November 29th, 2018 17:31

Virginia
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Excellent write in poetic rhythmic form with an emphasis on the power words have on our emotions that is to either lift us up or to bring us down beyond the gutter.

Words matter and you\'ve expressed this beautifully in your poem.

When I first saw the title, I thought of \"Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus.\" Boy was I wrong.

Thanks for sharing. :-)



November 26th, 2018 19:21

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