Comments received on poems by Jenn2009
Broken Pieces
Caleb.A said:
What a beautiful message: Treasure the broken, preserve them and work to make them whole again - great work!
February 7th, 2019 11:25
Caleb.A said:
What a beautiful message: Treasure the broken, preserve them and work to make them whole again - great work!
February 7th, 2019 11:25
MINE
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, your new found strength will take you forward in peace and harmony.
October 19th, 2018 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong write, your new found strength will take you forward in peace and harmony.
October 19th, 2018 01:21
Broken Pieces
fuche_bu said:
I learned something new today and it\'s still early morning. Nice poem.
September 23rd, 2018 08:07
fuche_bu said:
I learned something new today and it\'s still early morning. Nice poem.
September 23rd, 2018 08:07
The Purple Elephant
dusk arising said:
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 13:27
dusk arising said:
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 13:27
The Purple Elephant
dusk arising said:
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 10:55
dusk arising said:
He gonna explode one day!
Cute message.
August 1st, 2018 10:55
Admittance
dusk arising said:
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented people being auditioned for the part you want.... your very first audition..... NEXT!!! it\'s you....
See what your piece did to me? You put me right there. Making ones reader FEEL your intent is surely what successful writing is about (as well as self therapy).
Enjoyed reading this, thank you.
July 30th, 2018 07:22
dusk arising said:
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented people being auditioned for the part you want.... your very first audition..... NEXT!!! it\'s you....
See what your piece did to me? You put me right there. Making ones reader FEEL your intent is surely what successful writing is about (as well as self therapy).
Enjoyed reading this, thank you.
July 30th, 2018 07:22
Admittance
dusk arising said:
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented people being auditioned for the part you want.... your very first audition..... NEXT!!! it\'s you....
See what your piece did to me? You put me right there. Making ones reader FEEL your intent is surely what successful writing is about (as well as self therapy).
Enjoyed reading this, thank you.
July 30th, 2018 03:05
dusk arising said:
Ha! u want anticipation nerves? Try waiting in the wings watching talented people being auditioned for the part you want.... your very first audition..... NEXT!!! it\'s you....
See what your piece did to me? You put me right there. Making ones reader FEEL your intent is surely what successful writing is about (as well as self therapy).
Enjoyed reading this, thank you.
July 30th, 2018 03:05
Reflection
Poetic Dan said:
That was so raw and beautiful its never an easy place to be when the mind is unsettling.
Just keep up with the writing and thank you so much for sharing.
July 18th, 2018 10:42
Poetic Dan said:
That was so raw and beautiful its never an easy place to be when the mind is unsettling.
Just keep up with the writing and thank you so much for sharing.
July 18th, 2018 10:42
Please don\'t forget me
Poetic Dan said:
My tears thank you so much, so beautifully written.
I could her my grandmother through your words
July 17th, 2018 13:20
Poetic Dan said:
My tears thank you so much, so beautifully written.
I could her my grandmother through your words
July 17th, 2018 13:20
Please don\'t forget me
hilllow said:
what a poem and I can only think this is someone with a illness that is going to forget and become ill and you are telling them clearly now your love for them and say so many times remember me.
beautiful touching poetry here.
July 17th, 2018 08:55
hilllow said:
what a poem and I can only think this is someone with a illness that is going to forget and become ill and you are telling them clearly now your love for them and say so many times remember me.
beautiful touching poetry here.
July 17th, 2018 08:55
The Inner WAR
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing and it shall become true.
Something I can definitely relate too
July 15th, 2018 03:28
Poetic Dan said:
Keep writing and it shall become true.
Something I can definitely relate too
July 15th, 2018 03:28
The Inner WAR
Reyas said:
I actually feel like Iām dealing with that same thing at the moment. I gotta do so many things such as college and etc. but Iād much rather just play and nap haha. Wonderful job.
July 14th, 2018 10:38
Reyas said:
I actually feel like Iām dealing with that same thing at the moment. I gotta do so many things such as college and etc. but Iād much rather just play and nap haha. Wonderful job.
July 14th, 2018 10:38
INVADED!
dusk arising said:
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This reads like you want to be the victim of a disinterested and unworthy \'partner\' devoted to the memory of what might have been.
Well written because so many others express a similar circumstance happening to their lives.
It would be refreshing to see another piece showing you realise you are worth so much more than this departed person was capable of providing. That you have grown and moved on to a lifes view more fulfilling and positive.
Dont wallow, tomorrows the future.
July 11th, 2018 15:14
dusk arising said:
I
This reads like you want to be the victim of a disinterested and unworthy \'partner\' devoted to the memory of what might have been.
Well written because so many others express a similar circumstance happening to their lives.
It would be refreshing to see another piece showing you realise you are worth so much more than this departed person was capable of providing. That you have grown and moved on to a lifes view more fulfilling and positive.
Dont wallow, tomorrows the future.
July 11th, 2018 15:14
I Want A Love
Jenn2009 said:
Thanks Sophie. I wrote this poem a few months ago. After I broke up with someone.
And thought that I would share it.
July 10th, 2018 18:24
Jenn2009 said:
Thanks Sophie. I wrote this poem a few months ago. After I broke up with someone.
And thought that I would share it.
July 10th, 2018 18:24
I Want A Love
Sofie said:
This is beautiful. It has a really nice rhythm, that emphasises the emotion behind the words.
I\'m not usually a fan of repetition but it works so well in this poem.
July 10th, 2018 17:56
Sofie said:
This is beautiful. It has a really nice rhythm, that emphasises the emotion behind the words.
I\'m not usually a fan of repetition but it works so well in this poem.
July 10th, 2018 17:56
I Want A Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JENN ~ This is a very elegant poem ~ full of rhyme and rhythm and (for emphasis) the TITLE \"I WANT A LOVE\" repeated 6 times in 5 short verses. The subject is a lament ~ not so much about a Person (A Lover) but about the nature (quality) of LOVE you receive. You want (and have experienced) Love that is Kind ~ Patient ~ Just for You ~ you want to be LOVED nicely ! BUT the love you receive is ~ Controlling ~ Demanding ~ Rending ~ Maddening and Degrading ! Your cri de coeur is: \"What happened to the Man ~ I thought I once knew ~ I thought I loved ~ Was it a Cover ~ A Mask ~ A Ruse ??? I\'m the same age as you and many of us can emphasise with the AGONY & ECSTASY of Love ! Every blessing for the Future ~ Thinking of You ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poem \"Rose Garden for Angela\" Yours B !
July 10th, 2018 14:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JENN ~ This is a very elegant poem ~ full of rhyme and rhythm and (for emphasis) the TITLE \"I WANT A LOVE\" repeated 6 times in 5 short verses. The subject is a lament ~ not so much about a Person (A Lover) but about the nature (quality) of LOVE you receive. You want (and have experienced) Love that is Kind ~ Patient ~ Just for You ~ you want to be LOVED nicely ! BUT the love you receive is ~ Controlling ~ Demanding ~ Rending ~ Maddening and Degrading ! Your cri de coeur is: \"What happened to the Man ~ I thought I once knew ~ I thought I loved ~ Was it a Cover ~ A Mask ~ A Ruse ??? I\'m the same age as you and many of us can emphasise with the AGONY & ECSTASY of Love ! Every blessing for the Future ~ Thinking of You ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poem \"Rose Garden for Angela\" Yours B !
July 10th, 2018 14:41
The Wild Horse
Heartwriter said:
A great read. I enjoyed it so much! Keep em coming.
July 8th, 2018 13:34
Heartwriter said:
A great read. I enjoyed it so much! Keep em coming.
July 8th, 2018 13:34
The Wild Horse
Jenn2009 said:
Thank you. Yes horse are very beautiful and majestic animals. Thanks for sharing. Will check you out.
July 8th, 2018 13:15
Jenn2009 said:
Thank you. Yes horse are very beautiful and majestic animals. Thanks for sharing. Will check you out.
July 8th, 2018 13:15
The Wild Horse
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JENN ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegantly penned and with an infinite subject ~ HORSES ! I love CANADA ~ Have visited West and East ~ so so much Space & Freedom ! We love Space & Freedom ~ and so do Horses ~ Don\'t Fence Me in ! We do have \"Wild Horses\" in the UK and they are much happier than Tethered Horses. We treat our Horses better than we used to when they really were \"Beasts of Burden\" a fate worse than death for such a Powerful & Free spirited Animal. All HORSES long to be Free to roam the Plains but they do respond to TLC and can be trained for Riding ~ Eventing ~ Dressage ~ Racing and Working as Farm Horses and to pull Amish Buggies etc. There is fine line between \"give & take\" with a Horse and \"Locking it up\" in a Barn or Pen or making it perform Circus Tricks etc. is unnatural. You can BREAK a Horse or you can NURTURE & BEFRIEND it. The HORSE is one of God\'s greatest gifts to man from the ANIMAL KINGDOM ~ They are Majestic and should always be treated as ROYALTY ! I and my Fiancee both ride and Pony Trecking in the English Lake District (we do have Lakes) is one of Life\'s greatest Pleasures. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by mutual reading & commenting. Please check my site ~ Thanks B !
July 8th, 2018 11:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JENN ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ elegantly penned and with an infinite subject ~ HORSES ! I love CANADA ~ Have visited West and East ~ so so much Space & Freedom ! We love Space & Freedom ~ and so do Horses ~ Don\'t Fence Me in ! We do have \"Wild Horses\" in the UK and they are much happier than Tethered Horses. We treat our Horses better than we used to when they really were \"Beasts of Burden\" a fate worse than death for such a Powerful & Free spirited Animal. All HORSES long to be Free to roam the Plains but they do respond to TLC and can be trained for Riding ~ Eventing ~ Dressage ~ Racing and Working as Farm Horses and to pull Amish Buggies etc. There is fine line between \"give & take\" with a Horse and \"Locking it up\" in a Barn or Pen or making it perform Circus Tricks etc. is unnatural. You can BREAK a Horse or you can NURTURE & BEFRIEND it. The HORSE is one of God\'s greatest gifts to man from the ANIMAL KINGDOM ~ They are Majestic and should always be treated as ROYALTY ! I and my Fiancee both ride and Pony Trecking in the English Lake District (we do have Lakes) is one of Life\'s greatest Pleasures. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by mutual reading & commenting. Please check my site ~ Thanks B !
July 8th, 2018 11:53
