Comments received on poems by chana
Late night therapy
L. B. Mek said:
raw introspection in the \'tiger\'s hour\' exemplified without filter..
a relatable read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
raw introspection in the \'tiger\'s hour\' exemplified without filter..
a relatable read, thanks for sharing dear poet
March 4th, 2021 05:09
Beloved friend , gone too soon
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be with you, good write.
December 17th, 2019 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
He will always be with you, good write.
December 17th, 2019 01:51
One question
dusk arising said:
Not true... I know, I am living proof. Without imagination and hopefulness how could an old git like me be a poet?
Strength comes in many guises.
August 8th, 2019 00:14
dusk arising said:
Not true... I know, I am living proof. Without imagination and hopefulness how could an old git like me be a poet?
Strength comes in many guises.
August 8th, 2019 00:14
Hello Old Friend
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a tense read, and the pain shows.
Best regards.
March 19th, 2019 14:54
Nicholas Browning said:
This is a tense read, and the pain shows.
Best regards.
March 19th, 2019 14:54
poetry to me
Yorelzinala said:
This is but a chapter of the book of you. I look forward to the infinite chapters of you. Brilliant!
August 4th, 2018 22:41
Yorelzinala said:
This is but a chapter of the book of you. I look forward to the infinite chapters of you. Brilliant!
August 4th, 2018 22:41
“Stepping up “
Poetic Dan said:
Sadly beautiful, I hope something happens to ease this time in your life.
July 24th, 2018 02:01
Poetic Dan said:
Sadly beautiful, I hope something happens to ease this time in your life.
July 24th, 2018 02:01
Guilty conscience
Reyas said:
So much raw emotion. Beautifully constructed. Great job.
July 18th, 2018 00:56
Reyas said:
So much raw emotion. Beautifully constructed. Great job.
July 18th, 2018 00:56
Writers block
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I hate the shock
Of Writers Block
I need a POME
But my MUSE won\'t knock
Great pome CHANA ~ Your MUSE moved
But not the way you wanted it to !
Every Blessing Brian ~ Thanks ....
Please check my POEM \"FUSION\"
July 17th, 2018 05:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I hate the shock
Of Writers Block
I need a POME
But my MUSE won\'t knock
Great pome CHANA ~ Your MUSE moved
But not the way you wanted it to !
Every Blessing Brian ~ Thanks ....
Please check my POEM \"FUSION\"
July 17th, 2018 05:23
Writers block
orchidee said:
You standing on your head writing these poems? (your pic). heehee. No wonder you got writer\'s block!
July 17th, 2018 01:48
orchidee said:
You standing on your head writing these poems? (your pic). heehee. No wonder you got writer\'s block!
July 17th, 2018 01:48
no faith
Poetic Dan said:
Plus if you now have no faith that ment you once had it, what\'s been lost can be found.
I think that may of been for me to hear ;)
July 16th, 2018 17:26
Poetic Dan said:
Plus if you now have no faith that ment you once had it, what\'s been lost can be found.
I think that may of been for me to hear ;)
July 16th, 2018 17:26
no faith
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly expressed, I feel you are going to find everything you need. Just keeping on being the who that you perfectly are, we will change this world properly with only words as our weapon.
July 16th, 2018 17:22
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliantly expressed, I feel you are going to find everything you need. Just keeping on being the who that you perfectly are, we will change this world properly with only words as our weapon.
July 16th, 2018 17:22
no faith
onepauly said:
we are all born in faith
that\'s the reason we are here.
July 14th, 2018 22:20
onepauly said:
we are all born in faith
that\'s the reason we are here.
July 14th, 2018 22:20
no faith
dusk arising said:
Yep, sinners who praise but never repent. i.e. going thru the motions of adhering to a faith but only on the \'outside\'. Shouting out the name of the lord, writing a \'religious\' poem every day, as if that were the most important aspect of their faith.
Bleating \'persistence\' in the belief such surface adherence will convince somebody they\'re devout.
All seems so false. Why can\'t they just shut up and get on with it.
July 14th, 2018 15:44
dusk arising said:
Yep, sinners who praise but never repent. i.e. going thru the motions of adhering to a faith but only on the \'outside\'. Shouting out the name of the lord, writing a \'religious\' poem every day, as if that were the most important aspect of their faith.
Bleating \'persistence\' in the belief such surface adherence will convince somebody they\'re devout.
All seems so false. Why can\'t they just shut up and get on with it.
July 14th, 2018 15:44
no faith
orchidee said:
…....And yet I believe (and have faith) still. Hopefully we praise because we have repented, and been forgiven, at least to some extent.
Yet I know some churches squabble between each other; even among themselves, while they may \'smile sweetly\' at one another. We are like naughty children at times, I suppose, but not all the time.
July 14th, 2018 14:21
orchidee said:
…....And yet I believe (and have faith) still. Hopefully we praise because we have repented, and been forgiven, at least to some extent.
Yet I know some churches squabble between each other; even among themselves, while they may \'smile sweetly\' at one another. We are like naughty children at times, I suppose, but not all the time.
July 14th, 2018 14:21
I can do better”
dusk arising said:
Amazing from the heart outpouring from a strong standpoint (not the usual victim standpoint seen so often on MPS).
I would find writing like this very difficult if not impossible to do. You\'re voicing dissatisfaction but not yelling \'i\'m leaving\'.
Really good stuff.
July 14th, 2018 09:15
dusk arising said:
Amazing from the heart outpouring from a strong standpoint (not the usual victim standpoint seen so often on MPS).
I would find writing like this very difficult if not impossible to do. You\'re voicing dissatisfaction but not yelling \'i\'m leaving\'.
Really good stuff.
July 14th, 2018 09:15
My parents
Sofie said:
I love how emotional this was, and how it captured so much in just a few lines. Great work.
July 10th, 2018 17:47
Sofie said:
I love how emotional this was, and how it captured so much in just a few lines. Great work.
July 10th, 2018 17:47
My parents
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CURLS ! Thanks for another great Poem. You have encapsulated you PARENTS into a great metaphorical Poem which says it all in just nine concise & precise lines. A very elegant Poem indeed !
Thank GOD that Your MOM cares for you and makes you the Lovely Talented Young Lady that you are ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 10th, 2018 09:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW CURLS ! Thanks for another great Poem. You have encapsulated you PARENTS into a great metaphorical Poem which says it all in just nine concise & precise lines. A very elegant Poem indeed !
Thank GOD that Your MOM cares for you and makes you the Lovely Talented Young Lady that you are ~ AMEN. Thanks for sharing more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 10th, 2018 09:16
Nineteen
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CURLS (Great name !) Thanks for your first POEM ~ excellent in Structure & Subject. Full of Rhyme & Rhythm ~ nice to read ~ nicer to recite (I am a Performance Poet) Nineteen ~ Ideal age for a Lady ~ Old enough to understand (about Life & Love) ~ Young enough to be Free to Enjoy ~ AMEN ! \"What\'s a GIRL without a little fun ? Simply Boring ~ YES ! Dissolve ~ Indulge ~ Kiss ~ this is the essence of still being a TEEN ! Relish while it lasts because the next phase MEN ~ MOTHERHOOD ~ MELANCHOLY makes you wish you could stay NINETEEN forever ! The GHETTO has its compensations ~ count you Blessings the USA is still the Land of Opportunity ~ reach for the Stars ~ You show lots of Self-respect & Self-confidence ~ thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK) MPS works bu mutual reading and commenting ~ OK ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
July 10th, 2018 08:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CURLS (Great name !) Thanks for your first POEM ~ excellent in Structure & Subject. Full of Rhyme & Rhythm ~ nice to read ~ nicer to recite (I am a Performance Poet) Nineteen ~ Ideal age for a Lady ~ Old enough to understand (about Life & Love) ~ Young enough to be Free to Enjoy ~ AMEN ! \"What\'s a GIRL without a little fun ? Simply Boring ~ YES ! Dissolve ~ Indulge ~ Kiss ~ this is the essence of still being a TEEN ! Relish while it lasts because the next phase MEN ~ MOTHERHOOD ~ MELANCHOLY makes you wish you could stay NINETEEN forever ! The GHETTO has its compensations ~ count you Blessings the USA is still the Land of Opportunity ~ reach for the Stars ~ You show lots of Self-respect & Self-confidence ~ thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK) MPS works bu mutual reading and commenting ~ OK ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
July 10th, 2018 08:55
