Comments received on poems by Not



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Alan R said:

the first two lines....brilliant!

March 14th, 2024 06:56

Company
2781 said:

I heard something in my bedroom wall, I thought, their not bothering me at all.

February 3rd, 2024 16:06

Warming
Alan R said:

Precious

January 31st, 2024 00:39

Pets
Thomas W Case said:

Great work.

January 29th, 2024 21:11

Bluddy
Nafis Light said:

Interesting

April 4th, 2023 10:10

Reckless
L. B. Mek said:

wise words, thanks for sharing

June 10th, 2022 04:45

Courses
Rocky Lagou said:

Lovely poem! Definitely brings up the tastes your describing. Good use of imagery.✨

March 4th, 2022 13:40

Comforting
Crystal Hope said:

I understand this poem. Sometimes you just need that time to reflect on the situation. Excellent write.

January 17th, 2022 17:58

Moon
Paul Bell said:

Stormy moon last night as I battened down the hatches. I did dream of a paradise sun soaked island, mind you.

November 27th, 2021 06:47

Garden
L. B. Mek said:

like the way you kept that sarcastic poetic voice, all the way through the write
and unmasked its undertone of a defensive mechanism..
and I have to agree
after reading your author\'s comment, this definitely has the feel of a first person game character bio intro,
for a sassy character..
thanks for sharing, an intriguing read

November 2nd, 2021 04:45

Sight
sylviasearcher said:

I love the first verse... Months after the flames turned on me...

I like the second verse too. I\'m just still working out what I see in the cosmic skies ...

September 18th, 2018 01:27

Hush
MrNobody40 said:

Poetry doesn\'t always have to be complicated to say a lot. This is perfect. Thank you for sharing

July 26th, 2018 08:28

Hush
Heartwriter said:

Wow! Few words. Powerful!

July 26th, 2018 05:00