Comments received on poems by Suresh
A ballet
Christina8 said:
I see beauty in this write. I am not familiar with your writing but I would like to read more! :-)
July 15th, 2019 22:35
Christina8 said:
I see beauty in this write. I am not familiar with your writing but I would like to read more! :-)
July 15th, 2019 22:35
A ballet
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SURESH : ANGELA HERE : Its 7am Tuesday in NZ : I love the DAWN ! I love this Ballet about the interplay of light throughout the DAY. I am a Spanish Flamenco Dancer and I love Ballet dancing which (like Flamenco) is very descriptive ! Your Poem decrbes the Dawn Ballet perfectly ! Pas de Deux @ Dawn : Solo @ Noon : None @ Dusk : very elegant ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 13:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI SURESH : ANGELA HERE : Its 7am Tuesday in NZ : I love the DAWN ! I love this Ballet about the interplay of light throughout the DAY. I am a Spanish Flamenco Dancer and I love Ballet dancing which (like Flamenco) is very descriptive ! Your Poem decrbes the Dawn Ballet perfectly ! Pas de Deux @ Dawn : Solo @ Noon : None @ Dusk : very elegant ! Thanks for sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 13:07
A ballet
Neville said:
and perfectly executed... do ballets do encores by any chance......................
Neville
July 15th, 2019 02:25
Neville said:
and perfectly executed... do ballets do encores by any chance......................
Neville
July 15th, 2019 02:25
A ballet
orchidee said:
A fine write Suresh. There is in some hymns the phrase \'the dance of life\'. It doesn\'t mean we dance continually. We could do if we wish, I suppose!
July 15th, 2019 02:06
orchidee said:
A fine write Suresh. There is in some hymns the phrase \'the dance of life\'. It doesn\'t mean we dance continually. We could do if we wish, I suppose!
July 15th, 2019 02:06
A ballet
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen dances with care in this beautiful picture of light\'s birth and death - -- a first class write Suresh.
July 15th, 2019 01:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Your pen dances with care in this beautiful picture of light\'s birth and death - -- a first class write Suresh.
July 15th, 2019 01:25
A ballet
Michael Edwards said:
Really drawn in by this. The elegance of the written word reflects the beauty of ballet - a darn good write.
July 15th, 2019 00:54
Michael Edwards said:
Really drawn in by this. The elegance of the written word reflects the beauty of ballet - a darn good write.
July 15th, 2019 00:54
Maybe if...
Michael Edwards said:
One of the first questions I was taught in training was to ask: What if? - the only way to explore all the possibilities before coming to a conclusion and giving advice. Great write.
July 14th, 2019 14:33
Michael Edwards said:
One of the first questions I was taught in training was to ask: What if? - the only way to explore all the possibilities before coming to a conclusion and giving advice. Great write.
July 14th, 2019 14:33
Maybe if...
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SURESH : ANGELA HERE : 7pm Monday Morning ! Just checking MPS before I go to work !
Even @ the tender age of 31 I have lots of IF ONLYS !
1. If only I*d studied Music I*d have been a World Famous Pianist !
2. If only I*d stayed in Spain I*d have been a MAMA by now !
3. If only I*d never gone to New Zealand : I would never have realised that there could be a Country even more Perfect than the UK or SPAIN !
4. If only I*d never met BRIAN I*d still be looking for MY TRUE LOVE !
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The fact of the matter is despite that quartette of *IF ONLYS* 1. I love my Job as a Physio 2. If Id stayed (with my Grandparents) & married in Spain I would never have met BRIAN ! 3. I dont regret a minute of the Year Ive spent in NZ (so far) and the Authorities have said they would welcome us as Imigrants should we care to apply ! 4. I did meet BRIAN and we have planned our Wedding for Easter 2020 : and we know we will live happily ever after ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 14th, 2019 12:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SURESH : ANGELA HERE : 7pm Monday Morning ! Just checking MPS before I go to work !
Even @ the tender age of 31 I have lots of IF ONLYS !
1. If only I*d studied Music I*d have been a World Famous Pianist !
2. If only I*d stayed in Spain I*d have been a MAMA by now !
3. If only I*d never gone to New Zealand : I would never have realised that there could be a Country even more Perfect than the UK or SPAIN !
4. If only I*d never met BRIAN I*d still be looking for MY TRUE LOVE !
in
The fact of the matter is despite that quartette of *IF ONLYS* 1. I love my Job as a Physio 2. If Id stayed (with my Grandparents) & married in Spain I would never have met BRIAN ! 3. I dont regret a minute of the Year Ive spent in NZ (so far) and the Authorities have said they would welcome us as Imigrants should we care to apply ! 4. I did meet BRIAN and we have planned our Wedding for Easter 2020 : and we know we will live happily ever after ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 14th, 2019 12:59
Maybe if...
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting appliance of the \"if\" word and the ultimate distance between actions. Good read Suresh
July 14th, 2019 07:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Interesting appliance of the \"if\" word and the ultimate distance between actions. Good read Suresh
July 14th, 2019 07:31
Maybe if...
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? the most profound question of all. If only?
July 14th, 2019 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
If only? the most profound question of all. If only?
July 14th, 2019 01:11
Maybe if...
Neville said:
clever use of diminishing words and much liked by me......
July 14th, 2019 01:10
Neville said:
clever use of diminishing words and much liked by me......
July 14th, 2019 01:10
Action
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Without ACTION
There is no REACTION
Without REACTION
We are DEAD !
Thanks for sharing SURESH
You have made us think ~ yet again
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Your Friends ANGELA and BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 17:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Without ACTION
There is no REACTION
Without REACTION
We are DEAD !
Thanks for sharing SURESH
You have made us think ~ yet again
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Your Friends ANGELA and BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 13th, 2019 17:11
Action
Laura🌻 said:
Suresh,
As I was reading
“Every breath I take”,
Sting’s song immediately popped in my head! It will keep playing for a while!
Words are powerful!
Spot on with the last line!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2019 00:20
Laura🌻 said:
Suresh,
As I was reading
“Every breath I take”,
Sting’s song immediately popped in my head! It will keep playing for a while!
Words are powerful!
Spot on with the last line!
~Laura~
July 13th, 2019 00:20
Servitude
Neville said:
I shall agree with ya.. just to be on the safe side & keep my options open..... N
July 12th, 2019 03:59
Neville said:
I shall agree with ya.. just to be on the safe side & keep my options open..... N
July 12th, 2019 03:59
Trying Hard
Neville said:
a universal truth if ever there was.... perfectly poemed too.... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:16
Neville said:
a universal truth if ever there was.... perfectly poemed too.... Neville
July 12th, 2019 02:16
Servitude
orchidee said:
Well yes, but they are not the same - one is good and one is evil, I say.
July 12th, 2019 01:35
orchidee said:
Well yes, but they are not the same - one is good and one is evil, I say.
July 12th, 2019 01:35
Trying Hard
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing SURESH : We all need to do our best and it helps if we have somebody to do it for & with ! Brian & I are setting up HOME in 2020 in Essex and BRIAN is investigating some NEW BUILDS !
Blessings & Peace ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Thanks A
July 11th, 2019 04:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing SURESH : We all need to do our best and it helps if we have somebody to do it for & with ! Brian & I are setting up HOME in 2020 in Essex and BRIAN is investigating some NEW BUILDS !
Blessings & Peace ~ ANGELA 🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Thanks A
July 11th, 2019 04:32
Exposed
sylviasearcher said:
And yet the exposure changes with every eye which reads the letters as they dance or march or hold a pose
Simple yet complex
But if you look carefully indeed it is true
July 11th, 2019 02:21
sylviasearcher said:
And yet the exposure changes with every eye which reads the letters as they dance or march or hold a pose
Simple yet complex
But if you look carefully indeed it is true
July 11th, 2019 02:21
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