Comments received on poems by Suresh



Not Knowing
Goldfinch60 said:

Those words of salvation must be brought to the fore for all people. All will be well.

July 18th, 2019 00:47

Not Knowing
Christina8 said:

Very good write, Suresh! I agree that \"not long, shall wrath erupt\". We live in very dangerous times.

July 17th, 2019 13:51

Untitled - II
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks SURESH ! Au contraire ~ The GOOD BOOK says *The LIGHT shines in the DARKNESS and the DARKNESS could never put it OUT !*
It also says MEN loved Darkness rather than Light because their deeds were evil
JESUS said *I am the LIGHT of the WORLD* He is also LIFE & LOVE !

Thanks for sharing
Blessings & Peace
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 16th, 2019 10:37

Untitled - II
orchidee said:

Well, here\'s my counter proposal if you like: ….\'only light is eternal\'. Otherwise darkness wins.

July 16th, 2019 01:27

Untitled - II
Neville said:

for a micro moment, I thought about trying to formulate a counter proposal, but ended up only a fraction away from arguing with myself....... N

July 16th, 2019 00:35

A ballet
Christina8 said:

I see beauty in this write. I am not familiar with your writing but I would like to read more! :-)

July 15th, 2019 22:35

A ballet
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI SURESH : ANGELA HERE : Its 7am Tuesday in NZ : I love the DAWN ! I love this Ballet about the interplay of light throughout the DAY. I am a Spanish Flamenco Dancer and I love Ballet dancing which (like Flamenco) is very descriptive ! Your Poem decrbes the Dawn Ballet perfectly ! Pas de Deux @ Dawn : Solo @ Noon : None @ Dusk : very elegant ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡

July 15th, 2019 13:07

A ballet
Suresh said:

Truly humbled

July 15th, 2019 09:01

A ballet
sylviasearcher said:

I’d never enjoyed ballet much until now

July 15th, 2019 03:23

A ballet
Neville said:

and perfectly executed... do ballets do encores by any chance......................

Neville

July 15th, 2019 02:25

A ballet
orchidee said:

A fine write Suresh. There is in some hymns the phrase \'the dance of life\'. It doesn\'t mean we dance continually. We could do if we wish, I suppose!

July 15th, 2019 02:06

A ballet
Fay Slimm. said:

Your pen dances with care in this beautiful picture of light\'s birth and death - -- a first class write Suresh.

July 15th, 2019 01:25

A ballet
Michael Edwards said:

Really drawn in by this. The elegance of the written word reflects the beauty of ballet - a darn good write.

July 15th, 2019 00:54

A ballet
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful balletic write Suresh.

July 15th, 2019 00:27

Maybe if...
Michael Edwards said:

One of the first questions I was taught in training was to ask: What if? - the only way to explore all the possibilities before coming to a conclusion and giving advice. Great write.

July 14th, 2019 14:33

Maybe if...
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks SURESH : ANGELA HERE : 7pm Monday Morning ! Just checking MPS before I go to work !
Even @ the tender age of 31 I have lots of IF ONLYS !

1. If only I*d studied Music I*d have been a World Famous Pianist !
2. If only I*d stayed in Spain I*d have been a MAMA by now !
3. If only I*d never gone to New Zealand : I would never have realised that there could be a Country even more Perfect than the UK or SPAIN !
4. If only I*d never met BRIAN I*d still be looking for MY TRUE LOVE !
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The fact of the matter is despite that quartette of *IF ONLYS* 1. I love my Job as a Physio 2. If Id stayed (with my Grandparents) & married in Spain I would never have met BRIAN ! 3. I dont regret a minute of the Year Ive spent in NZ (so far) and the Authorities have said they would welcome us as Imigrants should we care to apply ! 4. I did meet BRIAN and we have planned our Wedding for Easter 2020 : and we know we will live happily ever after ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 14th, 2019 12:59

Maybe if...
Fay Slimm. said:

Interesting appliance of the \"if\" word and the ultimate distance between actions. Good read Suresh

July 14th, 2019 07:31

Maybe if...
Goldfinch60 said:

If only? the most profound question of all. If only?

July 14th, 2019 01:11

Maybe if...
Neville said:

clever use of diminishing words and much liked by me......

July 14th, 2019 01:10

Action
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Without ACTION
There is no REACTION
Without REACTION
We are DEAD !

Thanks for sharing SURESH
You have made us think ~ yet again

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Your Friends ANGELA and BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 13th, 2019 17:11

Action
Michael Edwards said:

Super write - think I\'ll go and lie down.

July 13th, 2019 05:35

Action
orchidee said:

You carried out the action of writing this fine poem!

July 13th, 2019 01:56

Action
Neville said:

tis true, tis very true & well said.... N

July 13th, 2019 01:46

Action
Goldfinch60 said:

May those actions never stop.

July 13th, 2019 00:35

Action
Laura🌻 said:

Suresh,

As I was reading
“Every breath I take”,
Sting’s song immediately popped in my head! It will keep playing for a while!
Words are powerful!
Spot on with the last line!

~Laura~

July 13th, 2019 00:20

Servitude
Michael Edwards said:

Me also keepth mine options open.

July 12th, 2019 08:02

Servitude
Neville said:

I shall agree with ya.. just to be on the safe side & keep my options open..... N

July 12th, 2019 03:59

Trying Hard
Neville said:

a universal truth if ever there was.... perfectly poemed too.... Neville

July 12th, 2019 02:16

Servitude
orchidee said:

Well yes, but they are not the same - one is good and one is evil, I say.

July 12th, 2019 01:35

Servitude
Goldfinch60 said:


Very true.

July 12th, 2019 01:01



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