Comments received on poems by Suresh



Shelf-life
orchidee said:

Thanks Suresh. I went mouldy years ago, but was still \'for sale\' - my singing, that is! lol.

July 4th, 2019 01:14

Shelf-life
Michael Edwards said:

And mines getting closer - thankfully I don\'tr sit on a shelf.

July 4th, 2019 00:29

Shelf-life
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true except My Spirit which is for eternity.

July 4th, 2019 00:17

RIDERLESS horses
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Your poem is haunting Suresh. God gives each of us freedom to choose. He wanted not robots programmed to love him out of fixed obedience, but real lovers- mankind that chooses to love him. In that space we are free to choose non-love, evil, war, infidelity, etc...

July 3rd, 2019 14:30

RIDERLESS horses
orchidee said:

Yes, sins etched in genes I think, while believing we all descended from Adam and Eve. But the \'cure\' is in and through Christ and His salvation to us.

July 3rd, 2019 02:14

RIDERLESS horses
Suresh said:

The freedom that democracy once enjoyed was forever destroyed on 9/11
The democracy by which freedom was once guaranteed has been forever destroyed by the election of Trump. We have now become a tabloid world, where truth is no longer a virtue, and thus this reality check


July 3rd, 2019 01:35

RIDERLESS horses
Michael Edwards said:

A ghostly read but what a great poem - love it.

July 3rd, 2019 01:24

RIDERLESS horses
Neville said:

These words have a distinct chill.. and have clearly been chosen to age them... A fine poem that should carry a health warning.. Very much enjoyed Suresh.... Neville

July 3rd, 2019 01:00

A Temple is desecrated
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks SERESH ~ for sharing an important TRUTH about the 21st C ! Nothing is sacred anymore and as well as the things you mention SACRED SITES ~ such a Churches & Mosques & Temples are increasingly violated WORLDWIDE ! Your reference to the human Bosy is interesting ! The BIBLE (The Word of GOD for Christians) states *Are you not aware that YOUR BODY is the TEMPLE of the HOLY GHOST* The inference being that if we abuse our Bodies & Minds with Drugs ~ excess Alcohol ~ Pornography ~ Extramaritial Sex etc etc we are offending the HOLY GHOST who indwells Christians ! We can all desicrate our Bodies ~ our Minds ~ our Brains ~ Planet earth and ultimately the Creator HIMSELF !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

July 2nd, 2019 09:23

A Temple is desecrated
Neville said:

this is not only quite different.. it is a poetic education in its own write... I practice daily in a temple that I take with me wherever I go.... and true...... Neville

July 2nd, 2019 04:17

A Temple is desecrated
Fay Slimm. said:

All points you outline here are valid and truly need to be highlighted - thanks for this poetic reminder Suresh.

July 2nd, 2019 03:19

A Temple is desecrated
dusk arising said:

Desecration abounds, when man creates a religion to gain power to take from the land....
..... does the real creator need a temple......
.... is not that temple a desecration in itself.......

July 2nd, 2019 01:22

A Temple is desecrated
Michael Edwards said:

So so different and a super work - as a race why do we continually disgrace ourselves?

July 2nd, 2019 00:38

Untitled - XIII
Neville said:

You have the market well and truly cornered with these little nuggets of wisdom Suresh.....

Neville

July 1st, 2019 11:32

Untitled - XIII
Suresh said:

Yes, IF is the qualifier.
Yes, love and hate are inseparable, otherwise there shall be no balance.
Emotions are uncontrollable,
Thnx for your comments

July 1st, 2019 10:09

Untitled - XIII
orchidee said:

A fine write Suresh. Yes, does love ever leave us exposed to hate?

July 1st, 2019 01:29

Untitled - XIII
Michael Edwards said:

But the word \'IF\' is the qualifier. Does love ever leave us exposed to hate? So much in so few words = a great write.

July 1st, 2019 00:30

Bemused
Michael Edwards said:

What a super shortie - great work Suresh.

June 30th, 2019 15:37

Bemused
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

The UNIVERSE declares the GLORY of GOD ~ The Solar System ~ Planet Earth & its Fabulous Moon shows the awesomeness of His HANDIWORK! I look through a TELESCOPE and I see GOD ~ also when I look through a MICROSCOPE ~ God is there also ~ I look around on Planet Earth and everywhere there is Beauty ~ Purpose ~ Order ~ Design ~ evidence of a CREATOR GOD ~ AMEN

Thanks for making us think Suresh
Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

June 30th, 2019 14:14

Bemused
Suresh said:

\"Namaste!\"

June 30th, 2019 13:28

Bemused
Suresh said:

Too kind

June 30th, 2019 13:18

Bemused
Neville said:


Brilliant.. ....
..................................... Neville

June 30th, 2019 13:12

Hill
Suresh said:

Thnx A&B
For weeks I have been composing a poem, but could never get the right tone. Eventually ended up splitting it in two and first published the SERENITY, and then suddenly the second all came together as HILL.
Thnx for your encouraging words

June 28th, 2019 11:26

Hill
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing SURESH all HILLS however small hold a fascination for CHILDREN and some like EVEREST are sacred ~ and can claim many lives ~ if desecrated ! Love the form of your Poem ~ Four balanced quatrains and a single Rhyme ! aaaa aaaa aaaa ! This gives the Poem great flow & rhythm ! The repetion of the Title Word *HILL* six times amplifies the TITLE ! GREAT POEM !

Blessings & Peace & Love
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN XOXOX

June 28th, 2019 11:05

Hill
Neville said:

this is a very special poem and has a very special personal meaning...

spooky or what & certainly enjoyed.... N.

June 28th, 2019 04:19

Hill
Fay Slimm. said:

You capture the feel of escaping to woodland where wild is the attraction - there was such a thing once that I too remember as a runaway hideout - - - thanks for the wonderful rhyme-scheme too.

June 28th, 2019 04:19

Hill
orchidee said:

There\'s no doubt I will
Be liking this fine poem still
Even when there\'s the thrill -
Of me singing it (maybe) -
Though that sound you\'ll want to kill!
(heehee)

June 28th, 2019 02:26

Time Beaten Path
Goldfinch60 said:

May those wonderful memories be always with you.

June 28th, 2019 00:51

Time Beaten Path
Neville said:

what a wonderful picture you create for us here with words... a naturescape if ever there was....... tis good to lose oneself in such gentle imagery ........ Neville

June 27th, 2019 11:55

Time Beaten Path
orchidee said:

Good write Suresh.

June 27th, 2019 11:43



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