Comments received on poems by The Retired Bloke



Counting Sheep
orchidee said:

A fine write. How many sheep were there? How many you expecting to count tonight?! lol.

August 28th, 2018 01:44

Deadline
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, we all still seem to have deadlines in our lives.

Surely though in our retirement that deadline can be extended so that we can have another slice of cake.


August 27th, 2018 01:15

Cake
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great poem!
I am with you on the love for cake!

🍰😊

August 26th, 2018 10:20

Cake
Goldfinch60 said:

You missed one, one of my favourites is lemon drizzle cake.
Good mouthwatering write while I sit here with my muesli.

August 26th, 2018 00:51

The prefab
Michael Edwards said:

So nostalgic - I also remember them - there were several not far from my home which, although it did suffer some damage, came through the war in one piece. It is no wonder that many older folk voted Brexit. Enjoyed this great write.

August 25th, 2018 04:10

The prefab
Goldfinch60 said:

They were amazing buildings two of my Uncles had one each and I too cane remember having some great times with them in there home, and they were homes not just temporary buildings, they lasted for many years.
Great memories.

August 25th, 2018 01:26

At the next left...
Claudelle DeLuna said:

πŸ˜‚
Super Cool!
I thought it was just me not getting along with another woman..πŸ˜‰
We have a love/ hate relationship!!!

August 24th, 2018 08:45

At the next left...
Goldfinch60 said:

I feel so powerful when the sat nav says go left and I go right.

August 24th, 2018 01:21

My Story
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great poem!
P.S.
I agree with the idea of journaling!
😊

August 23rd, 2018 07:42

My Story
Goldfinch60 said:

My wife suffers from dementia, I can fully understand the meaning of your words.

August 23rd, 2018 01:07

Lost Sparkle
Goldfinch60 said:

That day may be bad but be assured that the light is always there for you, just turn back towards it.

August 22nd, 2018 07:51

Lost Sparkle
sylviasearcher said:

πŸ–€

August 22nd, 2018 03:38

Time to Diet
dusk arising said:

Good fun. I wish you every success with your weight loss/fighting the flab.
I can strongly recommend a ketogenic diet (google it). You can stuff yourself with correct foods and so long as you dont eat any of the \'no-no\'s\' you will not feel hungry at all..... i lost 7 stone.

August 22nd, 2018 03:01

Time to Diet
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, I too will be dieting, mine starts tomorrow!

Can I assume that piece of chocolate cake is now going spare?

August 22nd, 2018 00:15

Time to Diet
Mene said:

Amazing, very clever

August 21st, 2018 11:43

Time to Diet
misskay said:

Brilliant lol

August 21st, 2018 09:20

Pub Act
Goldfinch60 said:

So true, many babpnds and singers are not very good but occasionally you get to see one that makes it all worth while.

August 20th, 2018 07:54

Pub Act
Unsub said:

Retired bloke,

reminds me of many a night watching local bands in the pub. Most were awful but every now & again you get something special.

Effortless poem crafted to read easily; very much enjoyed for the content as well as my own memories.

Unsub.

August 20th, 2018 06:41

Mothers’ Ruin
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true, good gin is a beautiful drink. Ask Michael Edwards about gin, he is an expert on it.

August 19th, 2018 06:29

When Life Slows Down
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and so true especially the last stanza.

August 19th, 2018 00:33

When Life Slows Down
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great write!
P.S.
Happy retirement!
I agree with every word on the poem!
Blessings,
:)

August 18th, 2018 09:46

Disaster at Genoa
Goldfinch60 said:

So right about recrimination, that should not happen yet.

August 18th, 2018 00:16

Waiting For God
Goldfinch60 said:

Being retired for several years now for me it is good to be able to just sit and read or listen to music as my retirement is more intense than when I was working.

August 16th, 2018 01:56

Cleaning
Unsub said:

Retired man,

I have OCD so this poem works for me perfectly. I\'d say more but have noticed a picture frame in my room 1.4mm off to the left.....

Unsub.

August 15th, 2018 09:48

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