Comments received on poems by The Retired Bloke



Mood
Goldfinch60 said:

Welcome back. That mood can creep upon us all.

June 4th, 2019 15:19

The Flame
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words about a tragic event.

April 18th, 2019 00:23

Locked in Love
orchidee said:

A fine write RB. But the lock of my sweetheart and I was shattered ages ago. But how? Cos I sang to her. She chucked a boot at me and walked out. Thought it was two cats fighting, but it can\'t be helped. lol.

March 3rd, 2019 11:17

Locked in Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write. I too have the same thought about my wife and my life together, \"Locked together forever!\"

March 3rd, 2019 02:04

Locked in Love
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a delightful read. A poem filled with affection and gratitude - what a lovely reminder that hearts ;locked together over the years is something to celebrate every day. Thank you for sharing your love
and happiness here with us RB.

March 2nd, 2019 17:15

A Box With No Light
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write, I do hope the key to the door gets to him soon.

February 4th, 2019 01:40

A Box With No Light
Fay Slimm. said:

That would be the worst of nightmares to find oneself locked in some sort of box and many today say they feel locked away with similar fears - food for thought in this meaningful write.

February 3rd, 2019 10:36

A Box With No Light
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write RB.


February 3rd, 2019 08:56

Life’s Last Moments
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write TRB, I have no fear of life’s last moments asi know My Spirit will live on.

January 25th, 2019 16:24

Life’s Last Moments
vvnrose said:

Touching poem. Thanks for sharing.

January 25th, 2019 12:36

Life’s Last Moments
orchidee said:

A fine write RB.

January 25th, 2019 11:07

Life’s Last Moments
dusk arising said:

Epic writing today. Long may you wait for any final moments, that we may be rewarded with reading more of this quality from you.
Quite outstanding.

January 25th, 2019 10:48

Life’s Last Moments
Laura said:

The Retired Bloke,

An Extraordinary write!
I agree with Out
and Diamond...
POWERFUL and WONDERFUL!

~Laura~

January 25th, 2019 09:24

IVR Blues
orchidee said:

Doh! You could make a cup of tea, then come back, and still be waiting on the phone. We don\'t know if we\'re on foot or horse-back - or horse or foot-back!

January 24th, 2019 03:12

IVR Blues
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true I have had to wait for what seems years on some occasions and then got nowhere, what happened to people answering the \'phone.

January 24th, 2019 01:43

Will
Goldfinch60 said:

The answer is certainly yes, your free will will lead you to the light in your world.

January 19th, 2019 01:29

Will
Fay Slimm. said:

Good different usage of just one important word. Needed question asked as a finalé Thank you for this interesting read.

January 18th, 2019 10:50

The Mask
psychofemale said:

very true words you have here

January 14th, 2019 21:44

The Mask
Goldfinch60 said:

We all wear masks to some extent depending on what situation we find ourselves.

January 14th, 2019 14:46

The Mask
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I am forever working the dishevelled look!

Yet I wear a mask of a different kind.
The one I hide my fears behind.

Got this crazy talking in rhyme thing going on.

Thanks for sharing. The youth today are under a lot of pressure. I\'m glad social media was after my youth.



January 14th, 2019 08:23

The Mask
orchidee said:

A fine write RB. Yes, ugh, who wants to be like \'celebs\'?!

January 14th, 2019 08:19

My Life
Goldfinch60 said:

May your love be shown to all.

January 13th, 2019 15:16

My Life
orchidee said:

A fine write RB.

January 13th, 2019 07:09

The Fitting Room
psychofemale said:

LOL.

January 8th, 2019 16:58

The Fitting Room
Cooper said:

I was there this past weekend! Nice write!

January 8th, 2019 16:39

The Fitting Room
Edthepoet said:

Hahaha brilliant!

January 8th, 2019 15:36

The Fitting Room
Goldfinch60 said:

Yep, been there done that, it is a very precarious thing to do.

January 8th, 2019 15:33

The Fitting Room
orchidee said:

Good write RB.

January 8th, 2019 15:27

The Morning After
orchidee said:

*Shouts* CCOOEEEEE!!!!!That woke ya up?! lol. A fine write and party RB.

January 7th, 2019 02:55

The Morning After
Goldfinch60 said:

You obviously had a good time in that celebration. Running ten times around the football pitch would have cleared your head!

January 7th, 2019 01:22

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