Comments received on poems by lainacarson98



when they ask me why i cannot clean the home that you invaded
dusk arising said:

Very emotive writing. When a huge chunk of our life is taken away we cannot help but stumble into a bleak future....
. ..... where one day hope may rescue us.

Please see my poem wild horses about a similar loss.

September 16th, 2020 00:09

broken nature
lainacarson98 said:

thank you both for commenting, it means so much. sometimes it takes me weeks to write something like this. other times it just pops into my head and I have to write it down


March 18th, 2019 13:06

broken nature
Nicholas Browning said:

Seeing how this pertains to both nature and humans is a bit cool.
The message in its entirety has eluded me, though. The song goes well with the poem.
Best regards.

March 18th, 2019 00:54

confusion
lainacarson98 said:

thank you. im really in touch with nature.


February 22nd, 2019 13:30

confusion
sylviasearcher said:

I like you use of imagery from nature, especially the weeping willow, made me feel forlorn.

February 22nd, 2019 02:54

when i met you
lainacarson98 said:

thank you both!

February 7th, 2019 21:31

when i met you
psychofemale said:

loved this one :) relatable for your audience ....good stuff !!!

February 7th, 2019 20:37

when i met you
siranswerer said:

been there. feel it

February 7th, 2019 09:20

red
lainacarson98 said:

thank you.


February 6th, 2019 20:40

red
psychofemale said:

powerful words.

February 6th, 2019 20:04

trust me
lainacarson98 said:

exactly

February 4th, 2019 02:44

trust me
dusk arising said:

I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight wives but would they listen... no.
And funerals are so expensive, i\'m broke.

February 4th, 2019 01:53

miscarriage
heartbreak said:

Writing this with pain and emotion as your pen. A++

February 1st, 2019 01:37

ghost letter
lainacarson98 said:

thank you both for your feedback. it is greatly appreciated.

January 31st, 2019 02:20

ghost letter
psychofemale said:

written very well :)

January 30th, 2019 19:54

ghost letter
dusk arising said:

I really feel this poem. Some things smoulder in you forever, i know this.
From his viewpoint it may be painful to contact you or he may be in a relationship where he wont for any number of reasons contact you.
I think he should though, to let you have some sort of closure.

Heartfelt.

January 30th, 2019 12:05

to surf
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Great descriptive I really enjoed this I\'ve never surf\'d or ever likely to but I felt it through your words thanks

January 28th, 2019 16:27

miscarriage
Fay Slimm. said:

Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the tragic happenings of miscarriage that affect so many today. Thanks for the reminder to show extra love to such ones dear poet-friend.

January 21st, 2019 17:10

love is a plant
IsraaD said:

Not only is the poem beautiful but this song is great so thank you for both.

Hey, I know I don\'t know you but I really hope you\'re okay. Heart break SUCKS.

December 10th, 2018 20:13

im sorry
dusk arising said:

I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of your life.
In particular your minimalist choice in punctuation accentuates what a mixed up messy relationship these things are where one thing flows seamlessly into interfering with other parts of our lives.
Stepping outside a critique of your writing - you know you have to move your life on from this \'no win\' situation unless you are prepared to accept that you are only worth part-time attention from an imperfect lover.

December 8th, 2018 13:01