Comments received on poems by lainacarson98
when they ask me why i cannot clean the home that you invaded
dusk arising said:
Very emotive writing. When a huge chunk of our life is taken away we cannot help but stumble into a bleak future....
. ..... where one day hope may rescue us.
Please see my poem wild horses about a similar loss.
September 16th, 2020 00:09
dusk arising said:
Very emotive writing. When a huge chunk of our life is taken away we cannot help but stumble into a bleak future....
. ..... where one day hope may rescue us.
Please see my poem wild horses about a similar loss.
September 16th, 2020 00:09
broken nature
lainacarson98 said:
thank you both for commenting, it means so much. sometimes it takes me weeks to write something like this. other times it just pops into my head and I have to write it down
March 18th, 2019 13:06
lainacarson98 said:
thank you both for commenting, it means so much. sometimes it takes me weeks to write something like this. other times it just pops into my head and I have to write it down
March 18th, 2019 13:06
broken nature
Nicholas Browning said:
Seeing how this pertains to both nature and humans is a bit cool.
The message in its entirety has eluded me, though. The song goes well with the poem.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:54
Nicholas Browning said:
Seeing how this pertains to both nature and humans is a bit cool.
The message in its entirety has eluded me, though. The song goes well with the poem.
Best regards.
March 18th, 2019 00:54
confusion
sylviasearcher said:
I like you use of imagery from nature, especially the weeping willow, made me feel forlorn.
February 22nd, 2019 02:54
sylviasearcher said:
I like you use of imagery from nature, especially the weeping willow, made me feel forlorn.
February 22nd, 2019 02:54
when i met you
psychofemale said:
loved this one :) relatable for your audience ....good stuff !!!
February 7th, 2019 20:37
psychofemale said:
loved this one :) relatable for your audience ....good stuff !!!
February 7th, 2019 20:37
trust me
dusk arising said:
I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight wives but would they listen... no.
And funerals are so expensive, i\'m broke.
February 4th, 2019 01:53
dusk arising said:
I know where you\'re coming from with this. I warned each of my eight wives but would they listen... no.
And funerals are so expensive, i\'m broke.
February 4th, 2019 01:53
miscarriage
heartbreak said:
Writing this with pain and emotion as your pen. A++
February 1st, 2019 01:37
heartbreak said:
Writing this with pain and emotion as your pen. A++
February 1st, 2019 01:37
ghost letter
lainacarson98 said:
thank you both for your feedback. it is greatly appreciated.
January 31st, 2019 02:20
lainacarson98 said:
thank you both for your feedback. it is greatly appreciated.
January 31st, 2019 02:20
ghost letter
dusk arising said:
I really feel this poem. Some things smoulder in you forever, i know this.
From his viewpoint it may be painful to contact you or he may be in a relationship where he wont for any number of reasons contact you.
I think he should though, to let you have some sort of closure.
Heartfelt.
January 30th, 2019 12:05
dusk arising said:
I really feel this poem. Some things smoulder in you forever, i know this.
From his viewpoint it may be painful to contact you or he may be in a relationship where he wont for any number of reasons contact you.
I think he should though, to let you have some sort of closure.
Heartfelt.
January 30th, 2019 12:05
to surf
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great descriptive I really enjoed this I\'ve never surf\'d or ever likely to but I felt it through your words thanks
January 28th, 2019 16:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Great descriptive I really enjoed this I\'ve never surf\'d or ever likely to but I felt it through your words thanks
January 28th, 2019 16:27
miscarriage
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the tragic happenings of miscarriage that affect so many today. Thanks for the reminder to show extra love to such ones dear poet-friend.
January 21st, 2019 17:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Good and well written advice to a poor self-blaming female after the tragic happenings of miscarriage that affect so many today. Thanks for the reminder to show extra love to such ones dear poet-friend.
January 21st, 2019 17:10
love is a plant
IsraaD said:
Not only is the poem beautiful but this song is great so thank you for both.
Hey, I know I don\'t know you but I really hope you\'re okay. Heart break SUCKS.
December 10th, 2018 20:13
IsraaD said:
Not only is the poem beautiful but this song is great so thank you for both.
Hey, I know I don\'t know you but I really hope you\'re okay. Heart break SUCKS.
December 10th, 2018 20:13
im sorry
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of your life.
In particular your minimalist choice in punctuation accentuates what a mixed up messy relationship these things are where one thing flows seamlessly into interfering with other parts of our lives.
Stepping outside a critique of your writing - you know you have to move your life on from this \'no win\' situation unless you are prepared to accept that you are only worth part-time attention from an imperfect lover.
December 8th, 2018 13:01
dusk arising said:
I really like the way you\'ve chosen to write about this painful part of your life.
In particular your minimalist choice in punctuation accentuates what a mixed up messy relationship these things are where one thing flows seamlessly into interfering with other parts of our lives.
Stepping outside a critique of your writing - you know you have to move your life on from this \'no win\' situation unless you are prepared to accept that you are only worth part-time attention from an imperfect lover.
December 8th, 2018 13:01
