Comments received on poems by Poeticpayne
Sight for the blind
Miss_Dreamer said:
This poem makes me feel seen. Thank you.
November 18th, 2023 12:34
Miss_Dreamer said:
This poem makes me feel seen. Thank you.
November 18th, 2023 12:34
Lost Happy Returns
dusk arising said:
But those words came from your heart and the deed is done. More important than the words themselves is the emotion which created them. You know where that resides, you know how real it is and how strong it is.
That emotion will mature with time and you will find one day it has become a foundation of the strength with which you survive in this life of ups and downs.
May 7th, 2020 18:00
dusk arising said:
But those words came from your heart and the deed is done. More important than the words themselves is the emotion which created them. You know where that resides, you know how real it is and how strong it is.
That emotion will mature with time and you will find one day it has become a foundation of the strength with which you survive in this life of ups and downs.
May 7th, 2020 18:00
Nothing
Bragee said:
Channeling the true feeling of loss as best as possible using words.
Good write!
September 6th, 2019 08:53
Bragee said:
Channeling the true feeling of loss as best as possible using words.
Good write!
September 6th, 2019 08:53
Sympathy Hyenas
psychofemale said:
They don\'t want a truthful answer
They want me to say \'I\'m okay\'
Repeatedly I lie FOR them
So that THEY are not in dismay
My grief feels unfairly hijacked
When I feel sorrow so deep
I avoid this stupid question
Like body and mind avoid sleep
ohh how i love that part, very good writing my friend
February 4th, 2019 21:34
psychofemale said:
They don\'t want a truthful answer
They want me to say \'I\'m okay\'
Repeatedly I lie FOR them
So that THEY are not in dismay
My grief feels unfairly hijacked
When I feel sorrow so deep
I avoid this stupid question
Like body and mind avoid sleep
ohh how i love that part, very good writing my friend
February 4th, 2019 21:34
It\'s okay to laugh at funerals.
Neville said:
You have just made a very important statement here.. we each respond in our own unique way to subjective loss and there should be no rules when it comes to grieving.... Neville
January 20th, 2019 18:28
Neville said:
You have just made a very important statement here.. we each respond in our own unique way to subjective loss and there should be no rules when it comes to grieving.... Neville
January 20th, 2019 18:28
Nest Egg
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks PP ~ for caring & sharing ! ANGELA (30) & I (35) are saving up for a HOUSE in East Essex in 2020 (at least £350k = $500k !) We are both in excellent Health have good secure Jobs and are fiercly in LOVE ! We need to save about £100k for a mortgage ! However we are both committed Christians and donate 10% (Tithing) of our joint Net incomes to the Church & Charity (that does not include our Mortgage Fund). We believe this is Biblical ~ we are coerced to do it ! Over 70% of the Worlds Population are worse off than and Millions are Homeless (we both rent flats at the moment because we are not cohbiting ! Angela is in NEW ZEALAND on work exchange !) BUT ~ WE are both savng for the FUTURE ~ AMEN. Please check our site. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA.
December 26th, 2018 11:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks PP ~ for caring & sharing ! ANGELA (30) & I (35) are saving up for a HOUSE in East Essex in 2020 (at least £350k = $500k !) We are both in excellent Health have good secure Jobs and are fiercly in LOVE ! We need to save about £100k for a mortgage ! However we are both committed Christians and donate 10% (Tithing) of our joint Net incomes to the Church & Charity (that does not include our Mortgage Fund). We believe this is Biblical ~ we are coerced to do it ! Over 70% of the Worlds Population are worse off than and Millions are Homeless (we both rent flats at the moment because we are not cohbiting ! Angela is in NEW ZEALAND on work exchange !) BUT ~ WE are both savng for the FUTURE ~ AMEN. Please check our site. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA.
December 26th, 2018 11:42
No Father Christmas
Debsspot said:
So sad. It hurts so much because we have had the gift of their love in our lives. We keep our loved ones in our lives when we remember them. Lovely words of tribute that touch the heart.
December 25th, 2018 20:35
Debsspot said:
So sad. It hurts so much because we have had the gift of their love in our lives. We keep our loved ones in our lives when we remember them. Lovely words of tribute that touch the heart.
December 25th, 2018 20:35
No Father Christmas
Neville said:
I miss mine too...
easy to relate to words & sentiments that will no doubt resonate with many this time of year... a sad tho goodly read indeed...
December 25th, 2018 13:00
Neville said:
I miss mine too...
easy to relate to words & sentiments that will no doubt resonate with many this time of year... a sad tho goodly read indeed...
December 25th, 2018 13:00
Oblivion
Simon Bromley said:
Blew my mind! Grief takes over reality and becomes our world. Everything else is insignificant.
December 23rd, 2018 13:02
Simon Bromley said:
Blew my mind! Grief takes over reality and becomes our world. Everything else is insignificant.
December 23rd, 2018 13:02
Oblivion
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice work...they DONT KNOW SHIT ..THATS LIFE...but he\'s most likely NOT GONE...ENERGY NEVER DIES, IT ONLY CHANGES FORM...great job..take carexxxooo
December 23rd, 2018 01:52
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice work...they DONT KNOW SHIT ..THATS LIFE...but he\'s most likely NOT GONE...ENERGY NEVER DIES, IT ONLY CHANGES FORM...great job..take carexxxooo
December 23rd, 2018 01:52
It\'s okay to laugh at funerals.
Debsspot said:
A wonderful light hearted way to pay respects to a loved one. If laughter was part of your lives it should live on. Great first post.
December 10th, 2018 06:45
Debsspot said:
A wonderful light hearted way to pay respects to a loved one. If laughter was part of your lives it should live on. Great first post.
December 10th, 2018 06:45
It\'s okay to laugh at funerals.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HELLO PP ~ Welcome to MPS it is a very supportive & interactive site ! I agree with your Title ! We call them A CELEBRATION of the LIFE of XXXXXXXX. These are best held AFTER the Burial or Cremation ~ OK We don\'t wear ALL BLACK either a bright tie / shirt / blouse etc ! Showing slides of the deceased is a good idea and always cause a smile. Friends & Family should be encouraged to relate humorous incidents etc ! This could work for a TEENAGERS Funeral as well as 50+ The funeral of a CHILD needs careful handling but should not be mournful ! I am a CHRISTIAN and all the Funerals / Thanksgiving Services we run at our Church have an Element of Hope & Assurance of Heaven when we shall all meet again. \"We sorrow not as those that have no hope !\" Also we have positive Hymns & Readings ! All the funerals I have attended and participated in this year have had an element of JOY. Thanks for sharing ~ A Challenging Title ~ Yours BRIAN
December 9th, 2018 20:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HELLO PP ~ Welcome to MPS it is a very supportive & interactive site ! I agree with your Title ! We call them A CELEBRATION of the LIFE of XXXXXXXX. These are best held AFTER the Burial or Cremation ~ OK We don\'t wear ALL BLACK either a bright tie / shirt / blouse etc ! Showing slides of the deceased is a good idea and always cause a smile. Friends & Family should be encouraged to relate humorous incidents etc ! This could work for a TEENAGERS Funeral as well as 50+ The funeral of a CHILD needs careful handling but should not be mournful ! I am a CHRISTIAN and all the Funerals / Thanksgiving Services we run at our Church have an Element of Hope & Assurance of Heaven when we shall all meet again. \"We sorrow not as those that have no hope !\" Also we have positive Hymns & Readings ! All the funerals I have attended and participated in this year have had an element of JOY. Thanks for sharing ~ A Challenging Title ~ Yours BRIAN
December 9th, 2018 20:02
