Comments received on poems by hpoetry
I Want Her (To Be Mine)
Kiera said:
Do I want to be her, or be with her. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, I think the saying goes? this really embodies that. I really like how you paced the poem as well,
April 13th, 2023 22:18
Kiera said:
Do I want to be her, or be with her. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, I think the saying goes? this really embodies that. I really like how you paced the poem as well,
April 13th, 2023 22:18
Longing for an Answer
Kiera said:
\'This one, This time\' man I felt that. I can feel the visceral longing and emotion. Its really beautiful.
April 13th, 2023 22:14
Kiera said:
\'This one, This time\' man I felt that. I can feel the visceral longing and emotion. Its really beautiful.
April 13th, 2023 22:14
Sunlight
ruthtitus54 said:
love the feel of the words very good imagery keep writing!!!
November 30th, 2022 18:44
ruthtitus54 said:
love the feel of the words very good imagery keep writing!!!
November 30th, 2022 18:44
Smile
Clara said:
There\'s almost an acceptance of sadness in this piece. You can feel the emotion but almost as if you\'re beginning to numb it... Great work.
December 21st, 2020 15:26
Clara said:
There\'s almost an acceptance of sadness in this piece. You can feel the emotion but almost as if you\'re beginning to numb it... Great work.
December 21st, 2020 15:26
Smile
FredPeyer said:
eli, thank goodness you were not too weak to write about it. Well done!!!
December 21st, 2020 12:35
FredPeyer said:
eli, thank goodness you were not too weak to write about it. Well done!!!
December 21st, 2020 12:35
Pebbles
RDS said:
This is really well crafted, one of my favourites so far. With hints of wry humour, glimpses of intimacy and fading senses it is like an homage to nature.
[quote] and know that it is safe and clean and okay...
Yes there\'s something almost Pagan about venerating stones
J
November 23rd, 2020 19:42
RDS said:
This is really well crafted, one of my favourites so far. With hints of wry humour, glimpses of intimacy and fading senses it is like an homage to nature.
[quote] and know that it is safe and clean and okay...
Yes there\'s something almost Pagan about venerating stones
J
November 23rd, 2020 19:42
Pebbles
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Morning Hannah thank You for a very beautiful Poem. Because you live @ Brighton you will have access to thousands of awesome *sea washed pebbles* ! Its the same on the S E Essex & Suffolk Coast. Everyone is different and when washed & dry they do send out vibes when you *handle* them. It is only when we turn to NATURE (away from the problems of Society & COVID 19) that our hearts are lifted and we can sing *What a Wonderful World*. Brian & I take the Youngsters from the Church beachcombing and I ask them to choose *ONE PEBBLE* wash it & dry it and carry it with them. That way they too learn *That it is the simple & natural things in life that give us most Joy* ~ AMEN ! Please check our SITE ~ Thanks A B & C !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 23rd, 2020 01:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Good Morning Hannah thank You for a very beautiful Poem. Because you live @ Brighton you will have access to thousands of awesome *sea washed pebbles* ! Its the same on the S E Essex & Suffolk Coast. Everyone is different and when washed & dry they do send out vibes when you *handle* them. It is only when we turn to NATURE (away from the problems of Society & COVID 19) that our hearts are lifted and we can sing *What a Wonderful World*. Brian & I take the Youngsters from the Church beachcombing and I ask them to choose *ONE PEBBLE* wash it & dry it and carry it with them. That way they too learn *That it is the simple & natural things in life that give us most Joy* ~ AMEN ! Please check our SITE ~ Thanks A B & C !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
November 23rd, 2020 01:02
I Want Her (To Be Mine)
Goldfinch60 said:
The love you have for her is within your words and soon it will become established within you both.
Andy
October 5th, 2020 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
The love you have for her is within your words and soon it will become established within you both.
Andy
October 5th, 2020 00:05
I Want Her (To Be Mine)
Neville said:
this is really quite something .. it is clear to your reader that you know what you want .... I struggle to see how you might be denied .........
... Neville
October 4th, 2020 15:36
Neville said:
this is really quite something .. it is clear to your reader that you know what you want .... I struggle to see how you might be denied .........
... Neville
October 4th, 2020 15:36
James
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I hope that you will be able to move on into a palce of peace and love.
June 6th, 2019 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, I hope that you will be able to move on into a palce of peace and love.
June 6th, 2019 00:09
Scorpio
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI HANNAH : ANGELA HERE : Brian is on Field Course this week on Coastal Erosion on the SE Coast where houses are falling into the sea ! Beacsue of this I am in charcge of the SITE. Thanks for adding US as Friends.
LOVE is very inclusive and knows no bounds of Colour - Class - Culture - Creed or Gender. As a Woman I can empathise with your very elegant Poem about Seasons (Please check mine today !).
I love the elegance and flow of your poem and you really have found (in Scorpio) \"A Lady for All Seasons & Reasons !
The Power of the Sea in Winter
The Warmh of the Sun in Spring
The Cool of the Zepher in Summer
The Kaliedescope of the Trees in Autumn
SHE is intertwined with YOU 24/7 ! One look in her eyes and you melt ! We dont always fall in LOVE this DEEP : BUT when we do we surely know it is REAL !
Thanks for sharing an excellent LOVE POEM straight from your HEART !
Love - Peace & Joy to YOU
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 17:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI HANNAH : ANGELA HERE : Brian is on Field Course this week on Coastal Erosion on the SE Coast where houses are falling into the sea ! Beacsue of this I am in charcge of the SITE. Thanks for adding US as Friends.
LOVE is very inclusive and knows no bounds of Colour - Class - Culture - Creed or Gender. As a Woman I can empathise with your very elegant Poem about Seasons (Please check mine today !).
I love the elegance and flow of your poem and you really have found (in Scorpio) \"A Lady for All Seasons & Reasons !
The Power of the Sea in Winter
The Warmh of the Sun in Spring
The Cool of the Zepher in Summer
The Kaliedescope of the Trees in Autumn
SHE is intertwined with YOU 24/7 ! One look in her eyes and you melt ! We dont always fall in LOVE this DEEP : BUT when we do we surely know it is REAL !
Thanks for sharing an excellent LOVE POEM straight from your HEART !
Love - Peace & Joy to YOU
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
April 11th, 2019 17:31
Providence of a Dying Planet
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks HANNAH ~ I am an Environmental Chemist and I echo every word in your elegant but frightening POEM. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee and we plan to marry at Easter 2020. She is currently in Nuclear free New Zealand (til OCTOBER 2019) Im in UK. She is a Biologist & a Physiotherapist and we both feel the same as YOU ~ Planet Earth is DYING. We worry about having Kids (they would still be alive in 2100) because of negative future projections. It can only get worse ! in 2100 population will be 15 billion (we cant feed half that number) 75% of population will live in Cities (11.5 billion) Sea level will rise ~ deserts will increase ~ forests will dissapear ~ coasts will dissapear ~ CO2 will rise to 1000ppm (from 400ppm) Average Global Temperature will rise from 16C to 20C and all the icecaps will melt ! Sea life will die due to micro plastic ! With PEOPLE like TRUMP etc in CHARGE NOTHING can stop the ROT. Stop the WORLD ~ I want to get OFF ! I\'ll be 90 in 2073 but the planet may be dead by 2050 at the present rate ~ watch this space ! Poeple call me a PROPHET of DOOM ~ but my Scientific Friends tell me Im just stating the obvious.
Thanks for raising the issue it is MEGA ~
YOURS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA !
March 7th, 2019 17:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks HANNAH ~ I am an Environmental Chemist and I echo every word in your elegant but frightening POEM. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee and we plan to marry at Easter 2020. She is currently in Nuclear free New Zealand (til OCTOBER 2019) Im in UK. She is a Biologist & a Physiotherapist and we both feel the same as YOU ~ Planet Earth is DYING. We worry about having Kids (they would still be alive in 2100) because of negative future projections. It can only get worse ! in 2100 population will be 15 billion (we cant feed half that number) 75% of population will live in Cities (11.5 billion) Sea level will rise ~ deserts will increase ~ forests will dissapear ~ coasts will dissapear ~ CO2 will rise to 1000ppm (from 400ppm) Average Global Temperature will rise from 16C to 20C and all the icecaps will melt ! Sea life will die due to micro plastic ! With PEOPLE like TRUMP etc in CHARGE NOTHING can stop the ROT. Stop the WORLD ~ I want to get OFF ! I\'ll be 90 in 2073 but the planet may be dead by 2050 at the present rate ~ watch this space ! Poeple call me a PROPHET of DOOM ~ but my Scientific Friends tell me Im just stating the obvious.
Thanks for raising the issue it is MEGA ~
YOURS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA !
March 7th, 2019 17:51
Take Off
Noah Malice said:
Been reading your submissions. Good stuff, and fitting to start with this one. Keep posting!
January 31st, 2019 18:30
Noah Malice said:
Been reading your submissions. Good stuff, and fitting to start with this one. Keep posting!
January 31st, 2019 18:30
Silk
Neville said:
a seemingly well crafted bit o erotic poetry.. perfectly poemed in my humble opinion..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 17:24
Neville said:
a seemingly well crafted bit o erotic poetry.. perfectly poemed in my humble opinion..... Neville
January 31st, 2019 17:24
This Daydream World
psychofemale said:
dark but yet beautiful
many emotions you captured in this one :)
January 30th, 2019 17:07
psychofemale said:
dark but yet beautiful
many emotions you captured in this one :)
January 30th, 2019 17:07
My Raft
MendedFences27 said:
As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor building (friendship, a connection) is finally finished to the best of your ability, and you decide to chance more (Love?, romance?) thus you dare to launch into the river (Life) . It\'s a rocky and rapid-filled , dangerous river. You paddle and course downstream until you crash. Is this the end of the romance? No, the one of your interest has rescued you. The raft is gone because you have fallen in Love. Quite a ride. - You have writing ability, particularly in story telling. Your poetry is the the use of metaphor, but perhaps could be stronger. You keep to the thrust of the poem (one idea) which is good, because poetry does not wander into other things. Overall - Keep on writing. You have talent. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 16:25
MendedFences27 said:
As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor building (friendship, a connection) is finally finished to the best of your ability, and you decide to chance more (Love?, romance?) thus you dare to launch into the river (Life) . It\'s a rocky and rapid-filled , dangerous river. You paddle and course downstream until you crash. Is this the end of the romance? No, the one of your interest has rescued you. The raft is gone because you have fallen in Love. Quite a ride. - You have writing ability, particularly in story telling. Your poetry is the the use of metaphor, but perhaps could be stronger. You keep to the thrust of the poem (one idea) which is good, because poetry does not wander into other things. Overall - Keep on writing. You have talent. - Phil A.
January 29th, 2019 16:25
