Comments received on poems by hpoetry



james
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, I hope that you will be able to move on into a palce of peace and love.

June 6th, 2019 00:09

bliss (description)
OUTBACK said:

HUMANITY ! HA : EXTINCTION* - IS -SIMPLY* a PART of LIFE * ! NO* - NEED to WORRY* - ABOUT the SUSTAINABILITY* of ANYTHING* at ALL* : BECAUSE : SUSTAINABILITY* - JUST as AN - IMMORTALITY* of ONE\'S* ( KNOWN )* of EXPERIENCIALY* - TEMPORARY* - EXISTENT* SELF* is BUT - MYTHOLOGY* ! . . .

May 13th, 2019 18:33

scorpio
tepo said:

Well you have definitely fallen
So time to stand up
This is up to ANYBODY\'S standards
My suggestion us show her now
Beautiful
Keep writing

April 12th, 2019 17:49

scorpio
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI HANNAH : ANGELA HERE : Brian is on Field Course this week on Coastal Erosion on the SE Coast where houses are falling into the sea ! Beacsue of this I am in charcge of the SITE. Thanks for adding US as Friends.
LOVE is very inclusive and knows no bounds of Colour - Class - Culture - Creed or Gender. As a Woman I can empathise with your very elegant Poem about Seasons (Please check mine today !).
I love the elegance and flow of your poem and you really have found (in Scorpio) \"A Lady for All Seasons & Reasons !
The Power of the Sea in Winter
The Warmh of the Sun in Spring
The Cool of the Zepher in Summer
The Kaliedescope of the Trees in Autumn
SHE is intertwined with YOU 24/7 ! One look in her eyes and you melt ! We dont always fall in LOVE this DEEP : BUT when we do we surely know it is REAL !
Thanks for sharing an excellent LOVE POEM straight from your HEART !
Love - Peace & Joy to YOU
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡

April 11th, 2019 17:31

providence of a dying planet
LittleGift said:

Fantastic piece, I feel we are draining this planet and are on a mission of self destruction. We have lost our path as a spieces and got lost in material worth and man made wealth. I loved reading this, it echoes my own heart towards this beautiful planet. Saved this poem, because I will come back and read this fabulous piece again

March 8th, 2019 02:25

providence of a dying planet
OUTBACK said:

( OH ) ! & ( KNOWING ) = IS* = MOMENTARY* - TOO !

March 7th, 2019 21:36

providence of a dying planet
OUTBACK said:

THIS DAY* : HERE* & NOW* - IS ALL* - THAT* \" IS \" ! ENJOY IT !

March 7th, 2019 21:35

providence of a dying planet
OUTBACK said:

\" THE OBVIOUS \" IS \" SCIENCE \" -DESIRES = PERMANENCY* : NO* - CHANGE* = { IMMORTALITY }* ! EITHER* BY WAY* of DIVINE* - SALVATION* or HUMANITY\'S* ATEMPT AT \" TRANSHUMANISM* ! ANYWAY ONE PERCEIVES IT* = CHANGE* HAS the \" FIRST & LAST WORD ! THE ALPHA & OMEGA !

March 7th, 2019 19:11

providence of a dying planet
OUTBACK said:

NOTHING* is PERMANENT* ! SUSTAINABILITY* = EXISTENT* = AWHILE* = WITHIN* the NATURE* of \" TIME \" ! ( LIFE* / DEATH )* = ( CHANGE )* ! WITHIN THE DYNAMICS* of CHANGE* = NOTHING* is PERMANENT* !

March 7th, 2019 19:04

providence of a dying planet
OUTBACK said:

LIFE* / NATURE* : SIMPLY EXPLORES INFINITE* - POSSIBILITIES* -- of WHICH YOU ARE DESCRIBING* - ONE of EM* - VERY ACCURATELY* : HERE : REALIZES* the EXPERIENTIAL* DREAMING* - REALITY* of IT* : ENDS IT* & MOVES* - ON ! THE EXPLORATIONAL EXPRESSIONS of THAT* : WHICH IS = ( LIFE )* are MOMENTARY* = IMPERMANENT* ! THE [ PRESENCE ]* of \" LIFE \" GOES ON ! AS SUCH* : ALL PROBLEMS* - SOLVED* ! . . .

March 7th, 2019 18:59

providence of a dying planet
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks HANNAH ~ I am an Environmental Chemist and I echo every word in your elegant but frightening POEM. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee and we plan to marry at Easter 2020. She is currently in Nuclear free New Zealand (til OCTOBER 2019) Im in UK. She is a Biologist & a Physiotherapist and we both feel the same as YOU ~ Planet Earth is DYING. We worry about having Kids (they would still be alive in 2100) because of negative future projections. It can only get worse ! in 2100 population will be 15 billion (we cant feed half that number) 75% of population will live in Cities (11.5 billion) Sea level will rise ~ deserts will increase ~ forests will dissapear ~ coasts will dissapear ~ CO2 will rise to 1000ppm (from 400ppm) Average Global Temperature will rise from 16C to 20C and all the icecaps will melt ! Sea life will die due to micro plastic ! With PEOPLE like TRUMP etc in CHARGE NOTHING can stop the ROT. Stop the WORLD ~ I want to get OFF ! I\'ll be 90 in 2073 but the planet may be dead by 2050 at the present rate ~ watch this space ! Poeple call me a PROPHET of DOOM ~ but my Scientific Friends tell me Im just stating the obvious.
Thanks for raising the issue it is MEGA ~
YOURS ~ BRIAN & ANGELA !

March 7th, 2019 17:51

zephyr
SerenWise said:

Really nicely written, great cadence and rhythm

February 28th, 2019 16:54

take off
GON said:

Been reading your submissions. Good stuff, and fitting to start with this one. Keep posting!

January 31st, 2019 18:30

silk
Neville said:

a seemingly well crafted bit o erotic poetry.. perfectly poemed in my humble opinion..... Neville

January 31st, 2019 17:24

this daydream world
psychofemale said:

dark but yet beautiful

many emotions you captured in this one :)

January 30th, 2019 17:07

my raft
MendedFences27 said:

As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor building (friendship, a connection) is finally finished to the best of your ability, and you decide to chance more (Love?, romance?) thus you dare to launch into the river (Life) . It\'s a rocky and rapid-filled , dangerous river. You paddle and course downstream until you crash. Is this the end of the romance? No, the one of your interest has rescued you. The raft is gone because you have fallen in Love. Quite a ride. - You have writing ability, particularly in story telling. Your poetry is the the use of metaphor, but perhaps could be stronger. You keep to the thrust of the poem (one idea) which is good, because poetry does not wander into other things. Overall - Keep on writing. You have talent. - Phil A.

January 29th, 2019 16:25