Comments received on poems by Fractured Dreams



Anger
sylviasearcher said:

Another good write, I felt quite a torment in this as though the anger was both within and without.

March 25th, 2019 02:52

Fear
Nicholas Browning said:

The final stanza is killer.
Nice read.

March 23rd, 2019 18:39

Fear
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Welcome FRIEND : ANGELA here : Thanks for your first poem. It is elegantly penned but with a very sober subject : FEAR ! Your FEAR is well expressed in a series of alliterative statements commencing with the letter \"E\" which adds FLOW & POTENCY to the Subject : FEAR !

Entombed within my own fear
Embodiment of immorality : looms outside my door
Each vulgar breath it takes
Echoes of a past : stifle the air
Ever expanding abyss ....................
Enticing me in the darkness
Earth where my frail body lays spent
Embers burn from what was once : hopes raging fire
Endless void of lost dreams
Emaciated body
(Entering) the abyss !

There is much more to this poem than meets the eye ! Thanks for sharing !
Yours ANGELA ! Love the visual !
Please check our site : Thanks !


March 23rd, 2019 17:10

Fear
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, a great mix of dark and light. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and vibes. Look forward to more, not forgetting to welcome you to the tribe!

March 23rd, 2019 12:20

Fear
sylviasearcher said:

This is truly an amazing write, such pain, yearning and heartache.

I could feel the release of emotion as I read this powerful write

March 23rd, 2019 09:30