Comments received on poems by Fractured Dreams



Forsaken
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... Many times my dreams felt like this, strangest thing is it can bring one\'s you could never imagine.

This reminds of a song called \"you can\'t rush your healing\" by Trevor Hall, inside all our darkness is a gift for each to find. Good luck on your journey, remember many have left music for us to find out own.

Thank you for sharing
Keep up the write!

February 11th, 2020 12:36

Forsaken
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, even at the end of her dreams she will see the light and rise like a Phoenix from the ashes.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 01:28

Forsaken
dusk arising said:

As you portray, sometimes it\'s easier to live in the night. Where one\'s darkness is not out of place.

February 10th, 2020 10:31

Forsaken
Mil57Man said:

Such a lovely but sad poem. I can reflect on this poem. Life has taught me to never give up, always hold on, for it always seems the darkest, just before the dawn.

February 10th, 2020 09:47

Forsaken
sylviasearcher said:

Beautiful... I felt this one in my dark bones

February 10th, 2020 04:50

A Place To Hate
Poetic Dan said:

Sadly superbly done and if we look closer we can see its all wounds of self projections, some never ever see there own triggers.

Keep up the write
Much peace and respect

February 7th, 2020 18:42

A Place To Hate
Dove said:

Sound advice! People should think before they speak, or write hurtful words!

February 7th, 2020 15:39

A Place To Hate
dusk arising said:

Is hiis an ode to Mr Donald Trump?

February 7th, 2020 13:14

Misinterpretations
Poetic Dan said:

What a beautiful mind and soul you are, with words of abundance to carry me a far...... Spectacular, thank you... Again ;)



January 23rd, 2020 10:18

Anger
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, not sure what you just done to me but never have I felt the words trapped inside be pulled from me. As my tears are still falling I\'m going to try and read it one more time. Maybe I\'ll see why I can struggle to shine!

Glad I missed this on the post as its having the effect it needs to!

Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

January 23rd, 2020 10:10

Misinterpretations
sylviasearcher said:

I know this feeling

January 23rd, 2020 02:53

Misinterpretations
Nemo said:

Well written 🌹

January 22nd, 2020 15:06

Anger
sylviasearcher said:

Another good write, I felt quite a torment in this as though the anger was both within and without.

March 25th, 2019 02:52

Fear
Nicholas Browning said:

The final stanza is killer.
Nice read.

March 23rd, 2019 18:39

Fear
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Welcome FRIEND : ANGELA here : Thanks for your first poem. It is elegantly penned but with a very sober subject : FEAR ! Your FEAR is well expressed in a series of alliterative statements commencing with the letter \"E\" which adds FLOW & POTENCY to the Subject : FEAR !

Entombed within my own fear
Embodiment of immorality : looms outside my door
Each vulgar breath it takes
Echoes of a past : stifle the air
Ever expanding abyss ....................
Enticing me in the darkness
Earth where my frail body lays spent
Embers burn from what was once : hopes raging fire
Endless void of lost dreams
Emaciated body
(Entering) the abyss !

There is much more to this poem than meets the eye ! Thanks for sharing !
Yours ANGELA ! Love the visual !
Please check our site : Thanks !


March 23rd, 2019 17:10

Fear
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, a great mix of dark and light. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and vibes. Look forward to more, not forgetting to welcome you to the tribe!

March 23rd, 2019 12:20

Fear
sylviasearcher said:

This is truly an amazing write, such pain, yearning and heartache.

I could feel the release of emotion as I read this powerful write

March 23rd, 2019 09:30