Comments received on poems by Paris
Welcome to my head at times
sandyyyyyyana said:
I am 15 and I almost commit when I was 13 cause of family issues but I am ok now but ur poems explains a\'lot ur amazing keep going ur a role model for us teens(:
September 29th, 2026 20:41
sandyyyyyyana said:
I am 15 and I almost commit when I was 13 cause of family issues but I am ok now but ur poems explains a\'lot ur amazing keep going ur a role model for us teens(:
September 29th, 2026 20:41
If I could go back
sandyyyyyyana said:
omg this is a master piece it made me almost cried this is the best I have read so far it so good keep going (:
September 29th, 2026 20:37
sandyyyyyyana said:
omg this is a master piece it made me almost cried this is the best I have read so far it so good keep going (:
September 29th, 2026 20:37
If I could go back
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of looking back and regret but you are still young. If I could go back I have further to go but I would start from day one. I have thought much about the changes I would have made and how things would be different, but looking at it now I would not change a thing for all brings experience and I would not trade those that I have had for any others be they pain and sadness or even deaths. Well written
September 29th, 2026 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of looking back and regret but you are still young. If I could go back I have further to go but I would start from day one. I have thought much about the changes I would have made and how things would be different, but looking at it now I would not change a thing for all brings experience and I would not trade those that I have had for any others be they pain and sadness or even deaths. Well written
September 29th, 2026 06:26
If I could go back
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentle write with much philosophical meaning, enjoyed
September 29th, 2026 05:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A gentle write with much philosophical meaning, enjoyed
September 29th, 2026 05:54
When you love him
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this write for to consider how another\'s love affects you, you must consider your own motives. Nicely written it delves deep into relationships and personal understanding of motives. Well done
September 25th, 2026 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
There is deeper meaning in this write for to consider how another\'s love affects you, you must consider your own motives. Nicely written it delves deep into relationships and personal understanding of motives. Well done
September 25th, 2026 05:01
Don’t die sad
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem and suck the marrow from the bone. Live life to the fullest as far as we know it is the only one we will ever have. A lovely write
September 11th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem and suck the marrow from the bone. Live life to the fullest as far as we know it is the only one we will ever have. A lovely write
September 11th, 2026 04:29
Food is my mood
Lorenz said:
a pilgrimage rooted in memory that pauses to question the abyss...
June 10th, 2026 12:19
Lorenz said:
a pilgrimage rooted in memory that pauses to question the abyss...
June 10th, 2026 12:19
Welcome to my head at times
MendedFences27 said:
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life is filled with both. Cling to the good times, erase the bad times. Paint yourself a place of happiness and live there.
Your poem seems a nightmare. One I would not want to endure. Perhaps attempting to write a reminiscence of happier times would erase this bit of darkness. Remain unconquerable you have endured the worst and survived. A bright future ahead. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 12:18
MendedFences27 said:
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life is filled with both. Cling to the good times, erase the bad times. Paint yourself a place of happiness and live there.
Your poem seems a nightmare. One I would not want to endure. Perhaps attempting to write a reminiscence of happier times would erase this bit of darkness. Remain unconquerable you have endured the worst and survived. A bright future ahead. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 12:18
Cats
orchidee said:
Outback\'s cat knows this, as I often say to him! lol. True, cats AND dogs, please!
April 3rd, 2019 13:13
orchidee said:
Outback\'s cat knows this, as I often say to him! lol. True, cats AND dogs, please!
April 3rd, 2019 13:13
Depression
FineB said:
Thank you Paris.
A wonderful and evocative poem on a very real aspect of life Depression.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:13
FineB said:
Thank you Paris.
A wonderful and evocative poem on a very real aspect of life Depression.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:13
To be lied to
dusk arising said:
I cannot stand liars. Once i realise a person is a liar then they lose not only my respect and trust but also my company, for i don\'t want their company any longer.
And the last time I had the displeasure of being lied to within a relationship, I issued marching orders and moved into separate bedrooms.
Alarm bells ring when the thought that i might be being lied to crosses my mind.
Powerful words from you today which remind me of past untruths.
March 31st, 2019 05:36
dusk arising said:
I cannot stand liars. Once i realise a person is a liar then they lose not only my respect and trust but also my company, for i don\'t want their company any longer.
And the last time I had the displeasure of being lied to within a relationship, I issued marching orders and moved into separate bedrooms.
Alarm bells ring when the thought that i might be being lied to crosses my mind.
Powerful words from you today which remind me of past untruths.
March 31st, 2019 05:36
To be lied to
Fay Slimm. said:
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships - and trust suffers too - A well rounded lament on a subject not often dealt with and -thank you for the needed reminder.
March 31st, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships - and trust suffers too - A well rounded lament on a subject not often dealt with and -thank you for the needed reminder.
March 31st, 2019 04:40
The feelings of love
Goldfinch60 said:
True love vanquishes all that has passed.
March 30th, 2019 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
True love vanquishes all that has passed.
March 30th, 2019 01:45
The feelings of love
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS PARIS : For sharing thoughts of Love.
V 1. Because I am in love with Brian I am only really content when we are together !
V 2. It is about the desire for possession : two hearts beating as one !
V 3. Some Ladies operate on different levels but a \'Woman in Love\' only wants one Man : hence one would prefer a \'Man in Love\' who only wants one Woman !
V 4. My experience complements this : I have always been faithful to my Man and with BRIAN I am truely in love and I have found PEACE & CONTENTMENT ~ AMEN ! We plan to be married in April 2020. Both our Families are very Happy : with our choices : which is excellent !
Blessings & Peace
Yours : ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 18:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS PARIS : For sharing thoughts of Love.
V 1. Because I am in love with Brian I am only really content when we are together !
V 2. It is about the desire for possession : two hearts beating as one !
V 3. Some Ladies operate on different levels but a \'Woman in Love\' only wants one Man : hence one would prefer a \'Man in Love\' who only wants one Woman !
V 4. My experience complements this : I have always been faithful to my Man and with BRIAN I am truely in love and I have found PEACE & CONTENTMENT ~ AMEN ! We plan to be married in April 2020. Both our Families are very Happy : with our choices : which is excellent !
Blessings & Peace
Yours : ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 18:35
When I am with him
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the risk is the one you must take and your life will become fulfilled.
Good write and welcome to MPS.
March 24th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the risk is the one you must take and your life will become fulfilled.
Good write and welcome to MPS.
March 24th, 2019 01:24
When I am with him
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, possibility can be quite scary.
March 23rd, 2019 18:35
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, possibility can be quite scary.
March 23rd, 2019 18:35
When I am with him
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME PARIS : ANGELA here ! Thanks you for your first Poem. It is very well penned : pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Verse 1 (Lines 1 - 10) Speaks of the Ecstasy and Agony of Love ! V 2 (Lines 11 - 23) Your trust is broken and your Love is undermined ! V 3 (Lines 24 -33) You reminisce on the feeling & harmony of Love ! V 4 (Lines 35 - 38) This is a paradox ! I love Him : But wish Id never met Him ! Maybe if I hadnt : All this would go away ! I do understand (Im 30) and I have Loved & Lost : so I can empathise. I share this site with my Fiancee Brian (35) and (so far) our Love is running smooth ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing & caring.
Blessings & Future Joy
Yours ANGELA : Please check our site : Thanks !
March 23rd, 2019 17:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME PARIS : ANGELA here ! Thanks you for your first Poem. It is very well penned : pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Verse 1 (Lines 1 - 10) Speaks of the Ecstasy and Agony of Love ! V 2 (Lines 11 - 23) Your trust is broken and your Love is undermined ! V 3 (Lines 24 -33) You reminisce on the feeling & harmony of Love ! V 4 (Lines 35 - 38) This is a paradox ! I love Him : But wish Id never met Him ! Maybe if I hadnt : All this would go away ! I do understand (Im 30) and I have Loved & Lost : so I can empathise. I share this site with my Fiancee Brian (35) and (so far) our Love is running smooth ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing & caring.
Blessings & Future Joy
Yours ANGELA : Please check our site : Thanks !
March 23rd, 2019 17:48
