Comments received on poems by Paris Margaret
Welcome to my head at times
MendedFences27 said:
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life is filled with both. Cling to the good times, erase the bad times. Paint yourself a place of happiness and live there.
Your poem seems a nightmare. One I would not want to endure. Perhaps attempting to write a reminiscence of happier times would erase this bit of darkness. Remain unconquerable you have endured the worst and survived. A bright future ahead. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 12:18
MendedFences27 said:
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life is filled with both. Cling to the good times, erase the bad times. Paint yourself a place of happiness and live there.
Your poem seems a nightmare. One I would not want to endure. Perhaps attempting to write a reminiscence of happier times would erase this bit of darkness. Remain unconquerable you have endured the worst and survived. A bright future ahead. - Phil A.
June 10th, 2020 12:18
Cats
orchidee said:
Outback\'s cat knows this, as I often say to him! lol. True, cats AND dogs, please!
April 3rd, 2019 13:13
orchidee said:
Outback\'s cat knows this, as I often say to him! lol. True, cats AND dogs, please!
April 3rd, 2019 13:13
Depression
FineB said:
Thank you Paris.
A wonderful and evocative poem on a very real aspect of life Depression.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:13
FineB said:
Thank you Paris.
A wonderful and evocative poem on a very real aspect of life Depression.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:13
To be lied to
dusk arising said:
I cannot stand liars. Once i realise a person is a liar then they lose not only my respect and trust but also my company, for i don\'t want their company any longer.
And the last time I had the displeasure of being lied to within a relationship, I issued marching orders and moved into separate bedrooms.
Alarm bells ring when the thought that i might be being lied to crosses my mind.
Powerful words from you today which remind me of past untruths.
March 31st, 2019 05:36
dusk arising said:
I cannot stand liars. Once i realise a person is a liar then they lose not only my respect and trust but also my company, for i don\'t want their company any longer.
And the last time I had the displeasure of being lied to within a relationship, I issued marching orders and moved into separate bedrooms.
Alarm bells ring when the thought that i might be being lied to crosses my mind.
Powerful words from you today which remind me of past untruths.
March 31st, 2019 05:36
To be lied to
Fay Slimm. said:
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships - and trust suffers too - A well rounded lament on a subject not often dealt with and -thank you for the needed reminder.
March 31st, 2019 04:40
Fay Slimm. said:
How true that constant lies break down the strongest of relationships - and trust suffers too - A well rounded lament on a subject not often dealt with and -thank you for the needed reminder.
March 31st, 2019 04:40
The feelings of love
Goldfinch60 said:
True love vanquishes all that has passed.
March 30th, 2019 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
True love vanquishes all that has passed.
March 30th, 2019 01:45
The feelings of love
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS PARIS : For sharing thoughts of Love.
V 1. Because I am in love with Brian I am only really content when we are together !
V 2. It is about the desire for possession : two hearts beating as one !
V 3. Some Ladies operate on different levels but a \'Woman in Love\' only wants one Man : hence one would prefer a \'Man in Love\' who only wants one Woman !
V 4. My experience complements this : I have always been faithful to my Man and with BRIAN I am truely in love and I have found PEACE & CONTENTMENT ~ AMEN ! We plan to be married in April 2020. Both our Families are very Happy : with our choices : which is excellent !
Blessings & Peace
Yours : ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 18:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS PARIS : For sharing thoughts of Love.
V 1. Because I am in love with Brian I am only really content when we are together !
V 2. It is about the desire for possession : two hearts beating as one !
V 3. Some Ladies operate on different levels but a \'Woman in Love\' only wants one Man : hence one would prefer a \'Man in Love\' who only wants one Woman !
V 4. My experience complements this : I have always been faithful to my Man and with BRIAN I am truely in love and I have found PEACE & CONTENTMENT ~ AMEN ! We plan to be married in April 2020. Both our Families are very Happy : with our choices : which is excellent !
Blessings & Peace
Yours : ANGELA 🧡🧡
March 29th, 2019 18:35
When I am with him
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the risk is the one you must take and your life will become fulfilled.
Good write and welcome to MPS.
March 24th, 2019 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes the risk is the one you must take and your life will become fulfilled.
Good write and welcome to MPS.
March 24th, 2019 01:24
When I am with him
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, possibility can be quite scary.
March 23rd, 2019 18:35
Nicholas Browning said:
Yeah, possibility can be quite scary.
March 23rd, 2019 18:35
When I am with him
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME PARIS : ANGELA here ! Thanks you for your first Poem. It is very well penned : pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Verse 1 (Lines 1 - 10) Speaks of the Ecstasy and Agony of Love ! V 2 (Lines 11 - 23) Your trust is broken and your Love is undermined ! V 3 (Lines 24 -33) You reminisce on the feeling & harmony of Love ! V 4 (Lines 35 - 38) This is a paradox ! I love Him : But wish Id never met Him ! Maybe if I hadnt : All this would go away ! I do understand (Im 30) and I have Loved & Lost : so I can empathise. I share this site with my Fiancee Brian (35) and (so far) our Love is running smooth ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing & caring.
Blessings & Future Joy
Yours ANGELA : Please check our site : Thanks !
March 23rd, 2019 17:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME PARIS : ANGELA here ! Thanks you for your first Poem. It is very well penned : pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm. Verse 1 (Lines 1 - 10) Speaks of the Ecstasy and Agony of Love ! V 2 (Lines 11 - 23) Your trust is broken and your Love is undermined ! V 3 (Lines 24 -33) You reminisce on the feeling & harmony of Love ! V 4 (Lines 35 - 38) This is a paradox ! I love Him : But wish Id never met Him ! Maybe if I hadnt : All this would go away ! I do understand (Im 30) and I have Loved & Lost : so I can empathise. I share this site with my Fiancee Brian (35) and (so far) our Love is running smooth ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing & caring.
Blessings & Future Joy
Yours ANGELA : Please check our site : Thanks !
March 23rd, 2019 17:48
