Comments received on poems by Nafis Light
The Book of Questions – Page 2
L. B. Mek said:
\'Anyway, I hope this post reminds myself
that I have to stop and change this pattern
and only me...no one else
that could actually make this happen.\'
sage words indeed,
January 21st, 2021 05:27
L. B. Mek said:
\'Anyway, I hope this post reminds myself
that I have to stop and change this pattern
and only me...no one else
that could actually make this happen.\'
sage words indeed,
January 21st, 2021 05:27
The Book of Questions – Page 1
L. B. Mek said:
such a self-impowering write and wonderful outlook on life, for us all to aspire towards...
liked your change in format for the \'One\' section, a switch that insures it reads more like a mantra, emphasising the determination needed to actualise these words, a good read
January 19th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
such a self-impowering write and wonderful outlook on life, for us all to aspire towards...
liked your change in format for the \'One\' section, a switch that insures it reads more like a mantra, emphasising the determination needed to actualise these words, a good read
January 19th, 2021 04:45
The Book of Questions – Page 1
Jerry Reynolds said:
Seek your truth. Good read,
January 18th, 2021 10:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Seek your truth. Good read,
January 18th, 2021 10:45
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2
dusk arising said:
Blimey Joker, I didn\'t know you read other peoples poetry on here.... you hardly ever leave a comment, we just 5 comments between july and nov according to your profile.
January 16th, 2021 17:29
dusk arising said:
Blimey Joker, I didn\'t know you read other peoples poetry on here.... you hardly ever leave a comment, we just 5 comments between july and nov according to your profile.
January 16th, 2021 17:29
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes you find your muse in the most unlikely places!
January 16th, 2021 13:35
FredPeyer said:
Sometimes you find your muse in the most unlikely places!
January 16th, 2021 13:35
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 1
FredPeyer said:
You\'re welcome, and THANK YOU!
January 16th, 2021 13:34
FredPeyer said:
You\'re welcome, and THANK YOU!
January 16th, 2021 13:34
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do as well
random thoughts inspired on walks
experiencing life through five senses
January 16th, 2021 11:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
I do as well
random thoughts inspired on walks
experiencing life through five senses
January 16th, 2021 11:12
Coming Back – Laughed...and Wanting More
Poetic Dan said:
Best cure is laughter and smiles, as life will give you the opposite like it or not... I guess we all have a job to encourage it more!
January 16th, 2021 08:37
Poetic Dan said:
Best cure is laughter and smiles, as life will give you the opposite like it or not... I guess we all have a job to encourage it more!
January 16th, 2021 08:37
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 1
Poetic Dan said:
2 for 2 and a massive thank you!
Keep making thoses ripples, we always make a difference seen or unseen...
Much peace and respect
And incase I didn\'t say it
Happy new year!
Thanks for being here
January 16th, 2021 08:34
Poetic Dan said:
2 for 2 and a massive thank you!
Keep making thoses ripples, we always make a difference seen or unseen...
Much peace and respect
And incase I didn\'t say it
Happy new year!
Thanks for being here
January 16th, 2021 08:34
Writing Back – To All of You...Page 2
Poetic Dan said:
I often do the same, well captured thoughts my friend!
I wonder if most do it only with paper to pen or in my case, thumb to screen....
Still it matters not, as I for one. Am exactly what you read. Hold nothing back, theses emotions are worth feeling!
January 16th, 2021 08:31
Poetic Dan said:
I often do the same, well captured thoughts my friend!
I wonder if most do it only with paper to pen or in my case, thumb to screen....
Still it matters not, as I for one. Am exactly what you read. Hold nothing back, theses emotions are worth feeling!
January 16th, 2021 08:31
Coming Back – Laughed...and Wanting More
Jerry Reynolds said:
Ah love and humor a great couple.
January 10th, 2021 09:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Ah love and humor a great couple.
January 10th, 2021 09:27
Coming Back – Discipline...Financial
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant Insight you\'ve shared and written so accessible, to insure it penetrates the most un-informed of mind\'s,
When we Learn what power we yield to those Capitalist mastermind\'s who strategise (generations in advance), to insure we (majority lowly) remain subjugated by those nuances within \'oppressive governance\' by simply ignoring our responsibility:
\'to live within our means...\'
and yes, I know \'they\'ve\' warped our access to life\'s necessities by pricing them so highly (hospital fees, or those crippling mortgages)
but still, the message in your words hold too much veracity to be ignored as mere \'ignorant\' of the harsh realties within that thing called \'biological lottery\', even if we are all born to such diverse levels of access to that dream of \'financial independence\', we must fight for what freedom we can obtain for ourselves and \'minimising debt\': is one monumental step in the right direction!
January 8th, 2021 07:00
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant Insight you\'ve shared and written so accessible, to insure it penetrates the most un-informed of mind\'s,
When we Learn what power we yield to those Capitalist mastermind\'s who strategise (generations in advance), to insure we (majority lowly) remain subjugated by those nuances within \'oppressive governance\' by simply ignoring our responsibility:
\'to live within our means...\'
and yes, I know \'they\'ve\' warped our access to life\'s necessities by pricing them so highly (hospital fees, or those crippling mortgages)
but still, the message in your words hold too much veracity to be ignored as mere \'ignorant\' of the harsh realties within that thing called \'biological lottery\', even if we are all born to such diverse levels of access to that dream of \'financial independence\', we must fight for what freedom we can obtain for ourselves and \'minimising debt\': is one monumental step in the right direction!
January 8th, 2021 07:00
Coming Back – Square One...To A Higher Goal
Poetic Dan said:
Fly my friend as I did while being taken on your soulful poetry ride!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
January 6th, 2021 13:58
Poetic Dan said:
Fly my friend as I did while being taken on your soulful poetry ride!
Much peace and respect
Keep up the write
January 6th, 2021 13:58
Coming Back – Truth To Live...
L. B. Mek said:
so, live on and choose to fight! those warms await to gorge on our flesh, an \'accident\' that could dent our heart\'s - to flatlined silence: in mere seconds, remains a possibility within each step we take,
so then - why submit willingly to that darkness that waits to consume and return us back to that nothingness we can\'t even remember,
fight and do so with what laughter you can squeeze, out of this pitiful thing - we call life...
what proof exists that we\'re \'entitled\' to better cards than we\'re dealt, by what measure? what of those born to suffer within each breath of their literal \'days\' of existence, their nose and mouth strapped to tubes as their reality of \'life\'?
\'fck it!\' just make the best of what tangible reality we have to grasp, the rest will come: whether we want it or not, there\'s no point in submitting to existence\'s fatalist emptiness any sooner than we need to...
thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply dear Poet, liked the raw introspective elements in your write,
Happy New Year
January 5th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
so, live on and choose to fight! those warms await to gorge on our flesh, an \'accident\' that could dent our heart\'s - to flatlined silence: in mere seconds, remains a possibility within each step we take,
so then - why submit willingly to that darkness that waits to consume and return us back to that nothingness we can\'t even remember,
fight and do so with what laughter you can squeeze, out of this pitiful thing - we call life...
what proof exists that we\'re \'entitled\' to better cards than we\'re dealt, by what measure? what of those born to suffer within each breath of their literal \'days\' of existence, their nose and mouth strapped to tubes as their reality of \'life\'?
\'fck it!\' just make the best of what tangible reality we have to grasp, the rest will come: whether we want it or not, there\'s no point in submitting to existence\'s fatalist emptiness any sooner than we need to...
thanks for inspiring my scribbled reply dear Poet, liked the raw introspective elements in your write,
Happy New Year
January 5th, 2021 04:34
Coming Back – Fighting To Be A Clown
Poetic Dan said:
Be who you wish to be on 1st January! Free what inner child...
I see why you got inspired to write and share!
Keep dreaming out there!
January 1st, 2021 08:34
Poetic Dan said:
Be who you wish to be on 1st January! Free what inner child...
I see why you got inspired to write and share!
Keep dreaming out there!
January 1st, 2021 08:34
Coming Back – Better Than Nothing On Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:
That better place is there for us all in our futures.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
That better place is there for us all in our futures.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:45
Coming Back – Better Than Nothing On Christmas
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Happy New Year
December 26th, 2020 10:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good read. Happy New Year
December 26th, 2020 10:46
Coming Back – Currently, The Seven Joker Guys...
RDS said:
Yes quirky! Great illusion/allusion...neat.
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
RDS said:
Yes quirky! Great illusion/allusion...neat.
J
December 23rd, 2020 17:08
Coming Back – Currently, The Seven Joker Guys...
Eugene S. said:
😁 great little quirky poem! Reminds me of my family.
December 22nd, 2020 18:18
Eugene S. said:
😁 great little quirky poem! Reminds me of my family.
December 22nd, 2020 18:18
Coming Back – Love For Me...
L. B. Mek said:
there is a calmness to your write, that adds to the melodic gaiety in its message, a wonderful read
Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
there is a calmness to your write, that adds to the melodic gaiety in its message, a wonderful read
Happy Holidays
December 18th, 2020 05:25
Coming Back – Love For Me...
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday
December 17th, 2020 17:35
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good Read. Have a Happy Holiday
December 17th, 2020 17:35
Coming Back – Love For Me...
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Good Thursday Joker ~ Thanks for CIRQUE DE SOLEIL ~ They always challenge my AGILITY !
Love the POEM ! WE all need to DREAM because Dreams make the Impossible ~ Possible
T his is also true of TRUE LOVE itis only when we find TRUE LOVE t hat WE become truly ALIVE ~ AMEN ! Please check our new poem *12 Presents of COVID Christmas*
Blessing & Peace to Y oú & You rs
Love Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 17th, 2020 11:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Good Thursday Joker ~ Thanks for CIRQUE DE SOLEIL ~ They always challenge my AGILITY !
Love the POEM ! WE all need to DREAM because Dreams make the Impossible ~ Possible
T his is also true of TRUE LOVE itis only when we find TRUE LOVE t hat WE become truly ALIVE ~ AMEN ! Please check our new poem *12 Presents of COVID Christmas*
Blessing & Peace to Y oú & You rs
Love Angela Brian Smokey ! ! !
December 17th, 2020 11:43
Coming Back – Dancing In A Triangle
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon JOKER ~ ANGELA here ! Thanks for a great demonstration of human Ability & Agility by the CIRCÚS of the SUN ! I am a Flamenco Dancer & I wish I had their FLEXIBILITY ~ AMEN & AMEN
Your POEM is very very ENIGMATIC !
V 1. All our lives are CYCLIC ! We work We play ~ We Live We Love Each Y ear is the same ~ so as This Year follows Last Year and will morph into next Year ? BUT ~ PERHAPS 2020 is like no other Year - Before or Since?
V 2. Well JOKER ~ Do YOU know the ANSWER
V 3. Some do break free from the CIRCLE & progress to do greater things ~ AMEN ! Can You break free from the CIRCLE ? ? ?
Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our SITE & our POEMS ~ Ta A & B !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 15th, 2020 10:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Afternoon JOKER ~ ANGELA here ! Thanks for a great demonstration of human Ability & Agility by the CIRCÚS of the SUN ! I am a Flamenco Dancer & I wish I had their FLEXIBILITY ~ AMEN & AMEN
Your POEM is very very ENIGMATIC !
V 1. All our lives are CYCLIC ! We work We play ~ We Live We Love Each Y ear is the same ~ so as This Year follows Last Year and will morph into next Year ? BUT ~ PERHAPS 2020 is like no other Year - Before or Since?
V 2. Well JOKER ~ Do YOU know the ANSWER
V 3. Some do break free from the CIRCLE & progress to do greater things ~ AMEN ! Can You break free from the CIRCLE ? ? ?
Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our SITE & our POEMS ~ Ta A & B !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 15th, 2020 10:39
Becoming...Human – The Last For 2020
L. B. Mek said:
first and foremost: write for yourself,
let your words be a conversation between you and the person you wish to be, speak of dreams as easily as your whims, cherish each line for all its worth - learn to like the voice your words give volume to,
we look forward to your next post and apologise: if our ignorance has made you feel unappreciated or unheard, forgive us we are but flawed human frailty - striving for betterment through this thing we love, called Poetry
November 23rd, 2020 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
first and foremost: write for yourself,
let your words be a conversation between you and the person you wish to be, speak of dreams as easily as your whims, cherish each line for all its worth - learn to like the voice your words give volume to,
we look forward to your next post and apologise: if our ignorance has made you feel unappreciated or unheard, forgive us we are but flawed human frailty - striving for betterment through this thing we love, called Poetry
November 23rd, 2020 05:10
Becoming...Human – When I Leave Here (Donna Troy)
MMadrid said:
👌👌👌 been reflecting on life lately and your poem was refreshing as it goes with what I\'ve been thinking about.
November 22nd, 2020 16:33
MMadrid said:
👌👌👌 been reflecting on life lately and your poem was refreshing as it goes with what I\'ve been thinking about.
November 22nd, 2020 16:33
Becoming...Human – Silk Dance
Goldfinch60 said:
The words fill the page like the dance with the silk.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
The words fill the page like the dance with the silk.
Andy
November 15th, 2020 01:27
Becoming...Human – Silk Dance
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening JOKER ~ Thnaks for VIDEO - Great Dance - Which your POEM describes perfectly ! I used to dance with SILK RIBBONS & FLAGS so so sensuous ! Love ORLANDO - Vibrant City in a Great State !
WE ar e praying every day for JOE & MALALA - As they seek to rectify the SOCIAL & ENVIRONMENTAL DAMAGE - inflicted on the USA by GRUMP in the last four YEARS ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love A ngela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 14th, 2020 16:53
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening JOKER ~ Thnaks for VIDEO - Great Dance - Which your POEM describes perfectly ! I used to dance with SILK RIBBONS & FLAGS so so sensuous ! Love ORLANDO - Vibrant City in a Great State !
WE ar e praying every day for JOE & MALALA - As they seek to rectify the SOCIAL & ENVIRONMENTAL DAMAGE - inflicted on the USA by GRUMP in the last four YEARS ~ AMEN
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love A ngela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 14th, 2020 16:53
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