Comments received on poems by Nafis Light
It Is You - 3
L. B. Mek said:
I like your use of form to reflect our journey of suffering, culminating in your last few lines of realised - acceptance..
intriguing in concept and emotive in meaning
March 9th, 2021 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
I like your use of form to reflect our journey of suffering, culminating in your last few lines of realised - acceptance..
intriguing in concept and emotive in meaning
March 9th, 2021 05:37
A Birthday of Acceptance – Joker Green
L. B. Mek said:
Happy Birthday (if a little late)
fellow Pisces (I assume),
I gift you a wish of fulfilment, to visit your life
alongside that self-mined wisdom of acceptance
March 8th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
Happy Birthday (if a little late)
fellow Pisces (I assume),
I gift you a wish of fulfilment, to visit your life
alongside that self-mined wisdom of acceptance
March 8th, 2021 05:11
A Birthday of Acceptance – Joker Green
FredPeyer said:
My birthday wish for you JG is to have a never ending supply of ideas for your poems!
March 7th, 2021 15:55
FredPeyer said:
My birthday wish for you JG is to have a never ending supply of ideas for your poems!
March 7th, 2021 15:55
Joker44’s Side – Dove...Unbroken
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
“ meant to dance and soar “ a love this line . Nice words
March 2nd, 2021 12:17
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
“ meant to dance and soar “ a love this line . Nice words
March 2nd, 2021 12:17
Ho’oponopono
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I do know of this prayer and have used it myself ... several times
March 2nd, 2021 12:16
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I do know of this prayer and have used it myself ... several times
March 2nd, 2021 12:16
It Is Just The Wind - 3
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed ! I like your wording and rhyme
March 2nd, 2021 12:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed ! I like your wording and rhyme
March 2nd, 2021 12:14
It Is Just The Wind - 1
L. B. Mek said:
dear sir, I feel you\'ve lived a very privileged life..
for I can guarantee you
from first hand experience
that some peoples \'wind\'s\': smell
like fiend\'s..
lol
(sorry I couldn\'t resist, I hope you don\'t take offense, just a little fun is all)
February 19th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
dear sir, I feel you\'ve lived a very privileged life..
for I can guarantee you
from first hand experience
that some peoples \'wind\'s\': smell
like fiend\'s..
lol
(sorry I couldn\'t resist, I hope you don\'t take offense, just a little fun is all)
February 19th, 2021 05:16
We Just Might...Fall
L. B. Mek said:
very direct, an insightful and engaging read of life\'s uncontrollable factors, with a reassuring message that however impactful these unexpected elements may be: they still, don\'t get to decide how we choose to face the obstacles in our lives..
pragmatic realism, is hard to confront head-on and put in practise, that\'s why most of us choose fantasy\'s escapes, but still - like you say, important part: is minimising our regrets, each step of the way
February 18th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
very direct, an insightful and engaging read of life\'s uncontrollable factors, with a reassuring message that however impactful these unexpected elements may be: they still, don\'t get to decide how we choose to face the obstacles in our lives..
pragmatic realism, is hard to confront head-on and put in practise, that\'s why most of us choose fantasy\'s escapes, but still - like you say, important part: is minimising our regrets, each step of the way
February 18th, 2021 04:34
To The Readers - 2
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i want to survive for poetry and other life\'s blessings. This is a super poem musing swell, inspiring good character and peaceful respectful attitude and vibes. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 16th, 2021 09:02
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah i want to survive for poetry and other life\'s blessings. This is a super poem musing swell, inspiring good character and peaceful respectful attitude and vibes. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 16th, 2021 09:02
To The Readers - 1
L. B. Mek said:
yes, that recognisable reflection on a blank canvas - is what moves artistry to realms of unfiltered creativeness,
even us mere scribblers dear poet
February 16th, 2021 06:45
L. B. Mek said:
yes, that recognisable reflection on a blank canvas - is what moves artistry to realms of unfiltered creativeness,
even us mere scribblers dear poet
February 16th, 2021 06:45
To The Readers - 1
dusk arising said:
All our sight and perception contains our past. We see through the opaque of the kindness, sadness, love and loss that brought us to today.
Well, that\'s what your piece said to me anyway.
February 15th, 2021 22:48
dusk arising said:
All our sight and perception contains our past. We see through the opaque of the kindness, sadness, love and loss that brought us to today.
Well, that\'s what your piece said to me anyway.
February 15th, 2021 22:48
To Myself I AM TRUE - 7
L. B. Mek said:
\'I...I can’t...allow myself to be in a state of ‘Dark Bliss’.
It is like I purposely put myself in that situation again
to test and push myself to fight and break free
because even if it is in front of a mirror,
That State of Negativity is not something that I actually want to see.\'
behold, the fruits of true introspection, when we inevitably realise that common factor in all things we\'ve experienced: ourselves...
this is a really interesting series you\'ve ben writing, I laud your transparency and unwillingness to \'poetically\' sugar-coat your delivery, I journey with you and thank you for all the wisdom you\'ve chosen to share willingly, dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'I...I can’t...allow myself to be in a state of ‘Dark Bliss’.
It is like I purposely put myself in that situation again
to test and push myself to fight and break free
because even if it is in front of a mirror,
That State of Negativity is not something that I actually want to see.\'
behold, the fruits of true introspection, when we inevitably realise that common factor in all things we\'ve experienced: ourselves...
this is a really interesting series you\'ve ben writing, I laud your transparency and unwillingness to \'poetically\' sugar-coat your delivery, I journey with you and thank you for all the wisdom you\'ve chosen to share willingly, dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 05:21
To Myself I AM TRUE - 6
AlitaOpal said:
This reigns true to me, as the only thing guaranteed in this life is change.. we must exhaust all our desires before we can move forward.. Id like to believe that our lives are like a movie and we are all partakers of a leading roll.. 🎈
February 9th, 2021 20:15
AlitaOpal said:
This reigns true to me, as the only thing guaranteed in this life is change.. we must exhaust all our desires before we can move forward.. Id like to believe that our lives are like a movie and we are all partakers of a leading roll.. 🎈
February 9th, 2021 20:15
To Myself I AM TRUE - 6
L. B. Mek said:
as long as it\'s not the Truman Show,
you\'ll still get a chance to script
each ending
to Life\'s plot twists
and that, is the best
any of us can hope for
in the end, my friend...
a wonderful read,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear Poet
February 9th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
as long as it\'s not the Truman Show,
you\'ll still get a chance to script
each ending
to Life\'s plot twists
and that, is the best
any of us can hope for
in the end, my friend...
a wonderful read,
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear Poet
February 9th, 2021 05:16
To Myself I AM TRUE - 3
AlitaOpal said:
What a wonderful master piece, combining humour and nature you get the clown spider.. Great write 🎈
February 4th, 2021 15:38
AlitaOpal said:
What a wonderful master piece, combining humour and nature you get the clown spider.. Great write 🎈
February 4th, 2021 15:38
To Myself I AM TRUE - 1
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely when I get stuck out in a muddle, think like a clown and it will pop any bubble...
Love it my friend
Keep up the write
February 4th, 2021 01:36
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely when I get stuck out in a muddle, think like a clown and it will pop any bubble...
Love it my friend
Keep up the write
February 4th, 2021 01:36
To Myself I AM TRUE - 1
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, has me playing guessing games to its meaning and those characters depicted as clowns and circuses: something makes me think you\'re not being literal...
February 2nd, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read, has me playing guessing games to its meaning and those characters depicted as clowns and circuses: something makes me think you\'re not being literal...
February 2nd, 2021 04:42
Signs - Five
FredPeyer said:
Well written Joker. Like that \'flies away from danger...\'
January 28th, 2021 11:39
FredPeyer said:
Well written Joker. Like that \'flies away from danger...\'
January 28th, 2021 11:39
Signs - Five
L. B. Mek said:
\'that flies away from danger
to a place that is free from fear.\'
if you\'ve found an avenue or outlet that can provide such a place - within existence, then what a superpower you\'ve been gifted dear Poet
January 28th, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
\'that flies away from danger
to a place that is free from fear.\'
if you\'ve found an avenue or outlet that can provide such a place - within existence, then what a superpower you\'ve been gifted dear Poet
January 28th, 2021 05:47
Signs - Two
L. B. Mek said:
you hide such insightful words of wisdom within your brilliant write\'s dear Poet, forgive me - I just had to highlight them below:
\'I don’t blame them
because blaming doesn’t fix anything
but only releases anger
which creates a huge wave of terror.\'
\'but when it involves people,
it becomes a unique situation
because like a real therapy
both parties need to give their consent
The Will To Change
The Will To Improve
The Will To Be Better
The Will...To Stay Together.\'
\'because people of the same interest
will come together
one way or the other
and that makes Life A Lot Easier
but perhaps...I just need to wait a little longer.\'
January 26th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
you hide such insightful words of wisdom within your brilliant write\'s dear Poet, forgive me - I just had to highlight them below:
\'I don’t blame them
because blaming doesn’t fix anything
but only releases anger
which creates a huge wave of terror.\'
\'but when it involves people,
it becomes a unique situation
because like a real therapy
both parties need to give their consent
The Will To Change
The Will To Improve
The Will To Be Better
The Will...To Stay Together.\'
\'because people of the same interest
will come together
one way or the other
and that makes Life A Lot Easier
but perhaps...I just need to wait a little longer.\'
January 26th, 2021 04:51
The Book of Questions – Page 3
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good question. I made my bed at least one thing was done well.
January 21st, 2021 09:11
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good question. I made my bed at least one thing was done well.
January 21st, 2021 09:11
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