Comments received on poems by Jenny Wren
Searching
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all we need to do is look inside ourselves to find the real me.
October 24th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all we need to do is look inside ourselves to find the real me.
October 24th, 2019 00:28
Searching
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Jenny. We all search for that special place only to realize it was within us all the time.
October 23rd, 2019 18:45
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Jenny. We all search for that special place only to realize it was within us all the time.
October 23rd, 2019 18:45
The Merlin
Goldfinch60 said:
The help we get from each other is so wonderfully shown in your words Jenny.
August 30th, 2019 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
The help we get from each other is so wonderfully shown in your words Jenny.
August 30th, 2019 00:53
The Earthworm and Caterpillar
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Jenny - - I like this clever piece of adventurous fable - -- - sad at the end but such a good read.
June 13th, 2019 07:54
Fay Slimm. said:
Hi Jenny - - I like this clever piece of adventurous fable - -- - sad at the end but such a good read.
June 13th, 2019 07:54
The Earthworm and Caterpillar
dusk arising said:
Hmmm surprisingly sad ending. I thought i was reading a joyful piece ideal for kiddies... and indeed it starts and flows wonderfully so.... i\'m a bit concerned that the ending would take the pleasant smile away from kiddies.
Maybe i\'m wrong... just my first impression.
Quite apart from that, lovely creative writing which carries the story with its learning message for youngsters.
June 13th, 2019 07:11
dusk arising said:
Hmmm surprisingly sad ending. I thought i was reading a joyful piece ideal for kiddies... and indeed it starts and flows wonderfully so.... i\'m a bit concerned that the ending would take the pleasant smile away from kiddies.
Maybe i\'m wrong... just my first impression.
Quite apart from that, lovely creative writing which carries the story with its learning message for youngsters.
June 13th, 2019 07:11
Lily of the Valley
Goldfinch60 said:
We have a great deal of Lily of the Valley in our front garden and they were there before we lived in the house, we have been there for nearly twenty years and the Lily great us year after year.
May 26th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
We have a great deal of Lily of the Valley in our front garden and they were there before we lived in the house, we have been there for nearly twenty years and the Lily great us year after year.
May 26th, 2019 00:34
Lily of the Valley
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, an ode to a lovely flower
May 25th, 2019 23:21
SerenWise said:
Beautifully written, an ode to a lovely flower
May 25th, 2019 23:21
Lady Aconitum Monkshood
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write Take me out of this place to peace contentment A little bit of Lust and of course a dream. Thank you
May 8th, 2019 11:33
moordykspot2 said:
Super Write Take me out of this place to peace contentment A little bit of Lust and of course a dream. Thank you
May 8th, 2019 11:33
The Witch and the Crow
dusk arising said:
What a story teller you are. There is a crow lurking within many a tortured soul i fear.
May 7th, 2019 16:57
dusk arising said:
What a story teller you are. There is a crow lurking within many a tortured soul i fear.
May 7th, 2019 16:57
The Witch and the Crow
moordykspot2 said:
A really splendid Read The Crow is a much maligned Bird following this journey was superb. A sad ending but so much so is eveident in life. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:42
moordykspot2 said:
A really splendid Read The Crow is a much maligned Bird following this journey was superb. A sad ending but so much so is eveident in life. Thank you
May 7th, 2019 09:42
The crow
moordykspot2 said:
An emotional Poem for me my friend I watch nature avidly and I marvel at the tolerance shown by animal but nature is cruel too. Your poem take me through the sadness. You have phrased the circumstances so elequently. Every credit to you thankyou for sharing
May 3rd, 2019 05:30
moordykspot2 said:
An emotional Poem for me my friend I watch nature avidly and I marvel at the tolerance shown by animal but nature is cruel too. Your poem take me through the sadness. You have phrased the circumstances so elequently. Every credit to you thankyou for sharing
May 3rd, 2019 05:30
Waiting
Jenny Wren said:
Thanks for all the comments.
I can only really write when I’m down, so unfortunately, most of my poems are a bit maudlin.
It’s ok though, I find writing them cathartic and healing. 🙂
April 2nd, 2019 02:57
Jenny Wren said:
Thanks for all the comments.
I can only really write when I’m down, so unfortunately, most of my poems are a bit maudlin.
It’s ok though, I find writing them cathartic and healing. 🙂
April 2nd, 2019 02:57
Waiting
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome JENNY ~ Thanks for your first Poem. LOVE is very powerful ~ Im 35 now and I too have experienced a longing love for someone I had loved & lost ! I heard them calling in a variety of ways and longed to be loved AGAIN as I was before ! I am now in a stable relationship with Angela ~ with whom I share this site. We plan to be married in ESSEX April 2020 ! She is in New Zealand until November on a Work Exchange ! Since I met Angela I no longer hear voices from the PAST ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace for the FUTURE
Yours BRIAN !
Please visit our SITE ~ Thanks B & A !
April 1st, 2019 11:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome JENNY ~ Thanks for your first Poem. LOVE is very powerful ~ Im 35 now and I too have experienced a longing love for someone I had loved & lost ! I heard them calling in a variety of ways and longed to be loved AGAIN as I was before ! I am now in a stable relationship with Angela ~ with whom I share this site. We plan to be married in ESSEX April 2020 ! She is in New Zealand until November on a Work Exchange ! Since I met Angela I no longer hear voices from the PAST ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace for the FUTURE
Yours BRIAN !
Please visit our SITE ~ Thanks B & A !
April 1st, 2019 11:10
Waiting
Nafis Light said:
It has both meaning and longing,
It is something I could relate myself with
but I\'m not going to
because I lost the point in waiting.
April 1st, 2019 08:56
Nafis Light said:
It has both meaning and longing,
It is something I could relate myself with
but I\'m not going to
because I lost the point in waiting.
April 1st, 2019 08:56
Waiting
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignancy flows through these lines Jennny -- so telling the message left in this admirable write.
April 1st, 2019 06:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A poignancy flows through these lines Jennny -- so telling the message left in this admirable write.
April 1st, 2019 06:30
Waiting
orchidee said:
A fine write jenny. Cooeee, I\'m here, wait no longer! lol.
April 1st, 2019 04:07
orchidee said:
A fine write jenny. Cooeee, I\'m here, wait no longer! lol.
April 1st, 2019 04:07
