Comments received on poems by moordykspot2
Harry\'sField
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read of countryside contact and Harry will always be there in his place when memory takes you back again dear poet-friend and your words describe the lessons such animals teach those who listen.......... so pleased I caught this read.
April 23rd, 2019 15:42
Fay Slimm. said:
A compelling read of countryside contact and Harry will always be there in his place when memory takes you back again dear poet-friend and your words describe the lessons such animals teach those who listen.......... so pleased I caught this read.
April 23rd, 2019 15:42
Secrets
moordykspot2 said:
Than you for your comments So glad life seems to be going well for you both Enjoy
April 17th, 2019 10:31
moordykspot2 said:
Than you for your comments So glad life seems to be going well for you both Enjoy
April 17th, 2019 10:31
Secrets
moordykspot2 said:
thank you for your response SURESH I appreciated your thoughts Thank you
April 17th, 2019 10:30
moordykspot2 said:
thank you for your response SURESH I appreciated your thoughts Thank you
April 17th, 2019 10:30
Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
That girl is waiting for you as you travel through the glory of Nature\'s realm.
April 17th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
That girl is waiting for you as you travel through the glory of Nature\'s realm.
April 17th, 2019 00:27
Secrets
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks MOORDY for an intriguing Poem with just a hint of Deja Vu ! Before I met ANGELA I was 32 and Single ~ BUT ~ I had a feeling a certain someone (I had been searching for for half my life ~ 16 years !) was on the HORIZON and then I met ANGELA (27) ! Now we are engaged to be married and the past is HISTORY ! Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 17:50
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks MOORDY for an intriguing Poem with just a hint of Deja Vu ! Before I met ANGELA I was 32 and Single ~ BUT ~ I had a feeling a certain someone (I had been searching for for half my life ~ 16 years !) was on the HORIZON and then I met ANGELA (27) ! Now we are engaged to be married and the past is HISTORY ! Thanks for caring !
Blessings & Peace
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
April 16th, 2019 17:50
Secrets
Suresh said:
So many of us, such secrets we hold
So important that the other be told
Learn we must, their true reaction
Even at the cost of mere rejection
Alas the truth will free you
Weather they will or not be with you
Before you journey to any place
Life\'s precious, to live in grace
April 16th, 2019 14:16
Suresh said:
So many of us, such secrets we hold
So important that the other be told
Learn we must, their true reaction
Even at the cost of mere rejection
Alas the truth will free you
Weather they will or not be with you
Before you journey to any place
Life\'s precious, to live in grace
April 16th, 2019 14:16
APRIL
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of well-penned tribute to beautiful April - thank you for such a charming read.
April 12th, 2019 10:01
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of well-penned tribute to beautiful April - thank you for such a charming read.
April 12th, 2019 10:01
APRIL
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Spring always be with you moordy, your words will help her to stay.
April 11th, 2019 15:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Spring always be with you moordy, your words will help her to stay.
April 11th, 2019 15:28
Eventide
Suresh said:
Your words are the color, that you used to draw a memorable portrait of nature.
April 8th, 2019 12:21
Suresh said:
Your words are the color, that you used to draw a memorable portrait of nature.
April 8th, 2019 12:21
Eventide
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well crafted words and the visualisation is great, I was with you watching Nature\'s glory throughout that day.
Welcome to MPS.
April 8th, 2019 00:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well crafted words and the visualisation is great, I was with you watching Nature\'s glory throughout that day.
Welcome to MPS.
April 8th, 2019 00:09
Eventide
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome FRIEND and thanks for your first Poem. A very elegant Structure ~ Three balanced free verse Octets (with a hint of rhyme !) and excellent use of language to visualise the title ~ EVENTIDE ! It is very readable and recitable as a good Poem should be !
Verse 1. Sets the scene with the setting Sun !
Verse 2. The wildlife of the countryside are highlighted busy as their day ends and we glimpse the beauty of natures imagery !
Verse 3. Brother Sun yields pride of place to Sister Moon as the gentle rain falls and our narator drifts into the night !
This is excellent ~ one of the best Poems (on this site) we have read today ~ more please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡
Please check our site ~ Thanks
April 7th, 2019 17:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome FRIEND and thanks for your first Poem. A very elegant Structure ~ Three balanced free verse Octets (with a hint of rhyme !) and excellent use of language to visualise the title ~ EVENTIDE ! It is very readable and recitable as a good Poem should be !
Verse 1. Sets the scene with the setting Sun !
Verse 2. The wildlife of the countryside are highlighted busy as their day ends and we glimpse the beauty of natures imagery !
Verse 3. Brother Sun yields pride of place to Sister Moon as the gentle rain falls and our narator drifts into the night !
This is excellent ~ one of the best Poems (on this site) we have read today ~ more please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours Brian & Angela 🧡🧡
Please check our site ~ Thanks
April 7th, 2019 17:57
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