Comments received on poems by starrbaby91
Living Inside
Goldfinch60 said:
Your fate is not sealed, you are a unique person as we all are and in my life I have a philosophy which I have always lived by -
\"This is me if you do not like what you see it is your problem, not mine.\"
That light is there for you, go and look for the lightest part.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Your fate is not sealed, you are a unique person as we all are and in my life I have a philosophy which I have always lived by -
\"This is me if you do not like what you see it is your problem, not mine.\"
That light is there for you, go and look for the lightest part.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:25
Living Inside
myself and me said:
No, this is absolutely not your ultimate fate. You describe the state of being anxiety in such an accurate and profound way. Well done.
May 8th, 2021 19:51
myself and me said:
No, this is absolutely not your ultimate fate. You describe the state of being anxiety in such an accurate and profound way. Well done.
May 8th, 2021 19:51
Living Inside
dusk arising said:
\"I live inside my own head most days\". Maybe the other days are the ones which you should be concerned about.
May 8th, 2021 14:30
dusk arising said:
\"I live inside my own head most days\". Maybe the other days are the ones which you should be concerned about.
May 8th, 2021 14:30
Living Inside
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t be so hard on yourself. Don\'t let your anxieties have control over you. You wrote this very expressive poem with your own thoughts, so you can push your anxieties out of the way and show them you\'re the boss. Great write starrbaby ; ) AP
May 8th, 2021 11:54
Accidental Poet said:
Don\'t be so hard on yourself. Don\'t let your anxieties have control over you. You wrote this very expressive poem with your own thoughts, so you can push your anxieties out of the way and show them you\'re the boss. Great write starrbaby ; ) AP
May 8th, 2021 11:54
My Apology
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful write of raw emotive transparency you\'ve sculpted out of all that pain (imagined or real),
may your words reach those you yearn to connect with once again and may you find some solace in the bravery you\'ve demonstrated by penning and sharing your introspection\'s fruits,
thank you!
January 11th, 2021 07:31
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful write of raw emotive transparency you\'ve sculpted out of all that pain (imagined or real),
may your words reach those you yearn to connect with once again and may you find some solace in the bravery you\'ve demonstrated by penning and sharing your introspection\'s fruits,
thank you!
January 11th, 2021 07:31
My Apology
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, I am sure that one day you will be talking again.
Andy
January 11th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, I am sure that one day you will be talking again.
Andy
January 11th, 2021 01:28
My Apology
Poetry_Lover said:
Amazing! It\'s a hard thing, owning up to what we have put others through. We often think its best to forget. However we need that closure to fully move on. Beautiful piece.
January 11th, 2021 01:06
Poetry_Lover said:
Amazing! It\'s a hard thing, owning up to what we have put others through. We often think its best to forget. However we need that closure to fully move on. Beautiful piece.
January 11th, 2021 01:06
my love
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING STARR ! Thanks for a very well penned Poem - replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We all need a Special Friend ! Someone who always brings Light - Laughter & a Smile into our day-by-day existance ! Such people are Earth Angels who lift us up - when we are down and restore our self-esteem & self-respect ! Someone we can FLY with ! Someone who makes us see clearly. Such a Friend has a Heart of Gold and No Barriers ! Their light restores our MIND - AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💚🧡
December 8th, 2019 18:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING STARR ! Thanks for a very well penned Poem - replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We all need a Special Friend ! Someone who always brings Light - Laughter & a Smile into our day-by-day existance ! Such people are Earth Angels who lift us up - when we are down and restore our self-esteem & self-respect ! Someone we can FLY with ! Someone who makes us see clearly. Such a Friend has a Heart of Gold and No Barriers ! Their light restores our MIND - AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡💚🧡
December 8th, 2019 18:15
feels like I\'m drowning
Clara said:
You\'ve expressed this tragedy beautifully. The connection between time and the ocean... The magesity and ferociousness of both and the futile human fight against both... This is a great little poem. Well done.
October 3rd, 2019 13:34
Clara said:
You\'ve expressed this tragedy beautifully. The connection between time and the ocean... The magesity and ferociousness of both and the futile human fight against both... This is a great little poem. Well done.
October 3rd, 2019 13:34
