Comments received on poems by Thelala
Darkest night
poetry in motion said:
Great imagery I\'ve seen that darkness as you have keep writing.
December 5th, 2022 06:02
poetry in motion said:
Great imagery I\'ve seen that darkness as you have keep writing.
December 5th, 2022 06:02
Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is always within us but occasionally it can be hidden for a short while but will soon resurface.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness is always within us but occasionally it can be hidden for a short while but will soon resurface.
Andy
April 14th, 2021 00:53
Darkest night
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness can be dispelled if you just look at the light and see the wonder around you.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That darkness can be dispelled if you just look at the light and see the wonder around you.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:50
Message to old me
jarcher54 said:
Sweet little pep talk. Like you found your own message in a bottle. Mind if I borrow this advice for myself?
April 10th, 2021 10:36
jarcher54 said:
Sweet little pep talk. Like you found your own message in a bottle. Mind if I borrow this advice for myself?
April 10th, 2021 10:36
Message to old me
L. B. Mek said:
a good read
wonderful in tone and empowering in its message
April 8th, 2021 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
a good read
wonderful in tone and empowering in its message
April 8th, 2021 04:09
Message to old me
Goldfinch60 said:
As we get older we gain experience and experience leads us to the wonder that can be found in life - it is there for all of us.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
As we get older we gain experience and experience leads us to the wonder that can be found in life - it is there for all of us.
Andy
April 8th, 2021 00:38
Message to old me
Liam Power said:
I love your poem. the first one I read on this site. I\'ve often thought about what it would be like to talk to my old self.
April 7th, 2021 15:32
Liam Power said:
I love your poem. the first one I read on this site. I\'ve often thought about what it would be like to talk to my old self.
April 7th, 2021 15:32
Special friend
L. B. Mek said:
an accessibly worded, honest and beautiful dedication
just a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 6th, 2021 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
an accessibly worded, honest and beautiful dedication
just a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 6th, 2021 04:56
In my house
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful use of structure and form to emphasise unity of a family, however diverse its members may be,
an accessibly fun read, thanks for sharing
April 6th, 2021 03:13
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful use of structure and form to emphasise unity of a family, however diverse its members may be,
an accessibly fun read, thanks for sharing
April 6th, 2021 03:13
Special friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a wonderful friend, that friendship will be with you forever.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words for a wonderful friend, that friendship will be with you forever.
Andy
April 6th, 2021 00:40
In my house
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love within your home last forever.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love within your home last forever.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 00:30
In my house
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not religious, but I once heard of this bloke, Noah by name....
Good fun read - enjoyed.
April 5th, 2021 00:04
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m not religious, but I once heard of this bloke, Noah by name....
Good fun read - enjoyed.
April 5th, 2021 00:04
In my house
Noah Malice said:
I love your style! It\'s refreshing to see on the site
April 4th, 2021 16:27
Noah Malice said:
I love your style! It\'s refreshing to see on the site
April 4th, 2021 16:27
In my house
Poetic Dan said:
I popped on just read the top one, thank you kindly for making it fun! Always a good reminder happiness is a place called home!
Have a spectacular day! Natures way
April 4th, 2021 16:14
Poetic Dan said:
I popped on just read the top one, thank you kindly for making it fun! Always a good reminder happiness is a place called home!
Have a spectacular day! Natures way
April 4th, 2021 16:14
Me and you
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Thelala, friends with differing abilities can create such wonderful friendships forever.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Thelala, friends with differing abilities can create such wonderful friendships forever.
Andy
April 4th, 2021 00:33
A mother\'s love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thelala and so true.
Andy
April 3rd, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful loving words Thelala and so true.
Andy
April 3rd, 2021 00:47
Have you ever
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we all have - admittedly, not simultaneously
but I promise you\'re not experiencing anything drastically different
than what the rest of humankind, has evolved
to survive and fight against: daily...
April 2nd, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we all have - admittedly, not simultaneously
but I promise you\'re not experiencing anything drastically different
than what the rest of humankind, has evolved
to survive and fight against: daily...
April 2nd, 2021 05:34
Have you ever
Doggerel Dave said:
Suggest professional intervention - you don\'t sound very happy.
April 1st, 2021 20:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Suggest professional intervention - you don\'t sound very happy.
April 1st, 2021 20:10
Anxiety
aDarkerMind said:
written from the heart, as is easy to see. am glad to meet someone who shares what I also live with. thank you for sharing, and good luck for all you wish for.
April 1st, 2021 06:14
aDarkerMind said:
written from the heart, as is easy to see. am glad to meet someone who shares what I also live with. thank you for sharing, and good luck for all you wish for.
April 1st, 2021 06:14
Anxiety
L. B. Mek said:
\'Anxiety tells me I can\'t live my life,
But anxiety is wrong,
Just relax,
Deep breath,
Think,
What\'s the worst that can really happen,
Now think,
I can knock on that door,\'..
such relatable words of self-assured transparency
championing that quirky, within individuality
an empowering read!
(thanks for inspiring my little reply)..
titled \'Dear Anxiety\' for context
\'I do me and you do you
if you would like to, feel free
come and greet
stay and play or simply, retreat
either way
I was me, before you
and I will survive
this journey of us: too!\'
April 1st, 2021 05:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'Anxiety tells me I can\'t live my life,
But anxiety is wrong,
Just relax,
Deep breath,
Think,
What\'s the worst that can really happen,
Now think,
I can knock on that door,\'..
such relatable words of self-assured transparency
championing that quirky, within individuality
an empowering read!
(thanks for inspiring my little reply)..
titled \'Dear Anxiety\' for context
\'I do me and you do you
if you would like to, feel free
come and greet
stay and play or simply, retreat
either way
I was me, before you
and I will survive
this journey of us: too!\'
April 1st, 2021 05:25
Anxiety
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. One of my philosophies of life is:
\"This is me, if you do not like what you see it is not my problem - it is yours!\"
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. One of my philosophies of life is:
\"This is me, if you do not like what you see it is not my problem - it is yours!\"
Andy
April 1st, 2021 00:31
Princesses tale
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing THELALA : Very salutary but it happens. We feel enslaved by our circumstances : Job etc : and then they change and we feel like a Princess : new Job - new Home - new Partner etc BUT are we really FREE : will we ever be really FREE ? Food for thought !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 2nd, 2019 10:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing THELALA : Very salutary but it happens. We feel enslaved by our circumstances : Job etc : and then they change and we feel like a Princess : new Job - new Home - new Partner etc BUT are we really FREE : will we ever be really FREE ? Food for thought !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
July 2nd, 2019 10:39
Once apon a memory
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI THELALA : ANGELA here welcome to MPS you will find it an empathetic site ! It opperates by Reading & Commenting on each others Poems : OK. Thanks for your first Poem : elegantly written and a subject of interest to all of Us MEMORY ! At our AGE (Im 31 & my Fiancee Brian is 35) our memories are at their Peak and a mixture of GOOD & BAD VIBES. We try to eliminate the NEGATIVE and accentuate the POSITIVE. Brian & I have many memories in common and our Individual Memories from our Childhood. Shared Memories are very PRECIOUS ! Im in NEW ZEALAND until October on a work exchange ! WE SKYPE every day and share our memories of the Day : we are 11,500 miles apart ! Memory is very important in my JOB as a Physiotherapist so I learn how to relieve PAIN & improve MOBILTY and what I learn with Patient A I can apply with Patient B if his situation is similar ! I also have to remember what I learned in College ! I am also a qualified TUTOR. memory is very important in every aspect of life. My PAPA is Spanish but i was raised in London. Some of my older Relations in Sevilla dont speak much English but when I get there I remember all my Spanish ! Thanks for an elegant poem which shares a very interesting Subject ! We all try to subjugate our BAD MEMORIES and ameliorate the GOOD ones ~ c\'est la Vie !
Blessings & Peace : Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 17:47
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI THELALA : ANGELA here welcome to MPS you will find it an empathetic site ! It opperates by Reading & Commenting on each others Poems : OK. Thanks for your first Poem : elegantly written and a subject of interest to all of Us MEMORY ! At our AGE (Im 31 & my Fiancee Brian is 35) our memories are at their Peak and a mixture of GOOD & BAD VIBES. We try to eliminate the NEGATIVE and accentuate the POSITIVE. Brian & I have many memories in common and our Individual Memories from our Childhood. Shared Memories are very PRECIOUS ! Im in NEW ZEALAND until October on a work exchange ! WE SKYPE every day and share our memories of the Day : we are 11,500 miles apart ! Memory is very important in my JOB as a Physiotherapist so I learn how to relieve PAIN & improve MOBILTY and what I learn with Patient A I can apply with Patient B if his situation is similar ! I also have to remember what I learned in College ! I am also a qualified TUTOR. memory is very important in every aspect of life. My PAPA is Spanish but i was raised in London. Some of my older Relations in Sevilla dont speak much English but when I get there I remember all my Spanish ! Thanks for an elegant poem which shares a very interesting Subject ! We all try to subjugate our BAD MEMORIES and ameliorate the GOOD ones ~ c\'est la Vie !
Blessings & Peace : Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 1st, 2019 17:47
