Comments received on poems by baddaytobealive
Bad Day To Be Alive
dusk arising said:
Bad days are what you make them i guess.
August 8th, 2019 00:08
dusk arising said:
Bad days are what you make them i guess.
August 8th, 2019 00:08
Butterfly Strings
Christina8 said:
I sincerely agree with dusk arising. I\'m looking at your pain but I don\'t know what to say to make it better or I also don\'t want to say something to make it worse. You know? I would say it\'s all your generation, but people of all ages fall in love online. But I think the thing is to build up your self esteem and go OUT and meet someone new. It will happen. Just believe it will. I know you are not ready yet. But give it time.----Christina
August 6th, 2019 17:17
Christina8 said:
I sincerely agree with dusk arising. I\'m looking at your pain but I don\'t know what to say to make it better or I also don\'t want to say something to make it worse. You know? I would say it\'s all your generation, but people of all ages fall in love online. But I think the thing is to build up your self esteem and go OUT and meet someone new. It will happen. Just believe it will. I know you are not ready yet. But give it time.----Christina
August 6th, 2019 17:17
Butterfly Strings
dusk arising said:
Why do we fall so fast, so deeply online?
Because it\'s not like dating. There is no busy bar or cafe with distractions. No noisey night club music to shout at each other over.
It\'s one to one... from day one.. intimate... you open the petals of your flower.... your share fallibility... you are humbled by understanding... and suddenly WHAM fuck off..... but.... but.... it\'s all too true.
It happened to me, it happened to you.
There will be better days.
August 6th, 2019 05:53
dusk arising said:
Why do we fall so fast, so deeply online?
Because it\'s not like dating. There is no busy bar or cafe with distractions. No noisey night club music to shout at each other over.
It\'s one to one... from day one.. intimate... you open the petals of your flower.... your share fallibility... you are humbled by understanding... and suddenly WHAM fuck off..... but.... but.... it\'s all too true.
It happened to me, it happened to you.
There will be better days.
August 6th, 2019 05:53
Cause Of Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write and very well written.
It is obviously hard for you but as dusk arising says there are poets on here that can help you with their words.
In your life there must be something that lightens it somewhere, look to that light and your mind will become stronger.
August 4th, 2019 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write and very well written.
It is obviously hard for you but as dusk arising says there are poets on here that can help you with their words.
In your life there must be something that lightens it somewhere, look to that light and your mind will become stronger.
August 4th, 2019 00:42
Cause Of Life
dusk arising said:
You transfer feelings to words well which is going to make you a great poet.
Whilst you are going thru this pain try to read other poets on here and leave a few words.
I find others work inspiring. Like my last one about the scent of her. Inspired by a poem of the same day by Neville on here.
August 3rd, 2019 19:22
dusk arising said:
You transfer feelings to words well which is going to make you a great poet.
Whilst you are going thru this pain try to read other poets on here and leave a few words.
I find others work inspiring. Like my last one about the scent of her. Inspired by a poem of the same day by Neville on here.
August 3rd, 2019 19:22
Kiss/Kill Me
dusk arising said:
The power of love is immense and overwhelming. When it first enters a young life and then cruelly is snatched away the contrast between \'everything\' and suddenly \'nothing\' is stark and painful.
It happened to me several times leaving me devastated.
But i learned to have self worth and self respect because i realised i was not a worthless piece of junk. Indeed i began to like myself. Later romances ended and i was not devastated, i ended a good few of them myself.
Life\'s a funny old game.... but worth living every moment of it both good and bad.
I\'m going to keep reading you.
August 2nd, 2019 16:03
dusk arising said:
The power of love is immense and overwhelming. When it first enters a young life and then cruelly is snatched away the contrast between \'everything\' and suddenly \'nothing\' is stark and painful.
It happened to me several times leaving me devastated.
But i learned to have self worth and self respect because i realised i was not a worthless piece of junk. Indeed i began to like myself. Later romances ended and i was not devastated, i ended a good few of them myself.
Life\'s a funny old game.... but worth living every moment of it both good and bad.
I\'m going to keep reading you.
August 2nd, 2019 16:03
Fleeting
Christina8 said:
I wish I could add to what Santita said but these are just exactly that---temporary feelings. Things, life will get better. Will keep reading what you write. There are a lot of people who feel like you!!
August 1st, 2019 21:24
Christina8 said:
I wish I could add to what Santita said but these are just exactly that---temporary feelings. Things, life will get better. Will keep reading what you write. There are a lot of people who feel like you!!
August 1st, 2019 21:24
Silhouette
Christina8 said:
You did very well! Excellent first submission. I hope you keep writing! And welcome to MPS!!--Christina
July 31st, 2019 21:43
Christina8 said:
You did very well! Excellent first submission. I hope you keep writing! And welcome to MPS!!--Christina
July 31st, 2019 21:43
Silhouette
Silkseduction said:
Wow- this is an excellent first entry. Please keep sharing your talents!
July 31st, 2019 15:24
Silkseduction said:
Wow- this is an excellent first entry. Please keep sharing your talents!
July 31st, 2019 15:24
Silhouette
Neville said:
Much liked by me... and welcome to my poetic side...
Neville
July 31st, 2019 10:58
Neville said:
Much liked by me... and welcome to my poetic side...
Neville
July 31st, 2019 10:58
Silhouette
dusk arising said:
Harsh words at a time when they will do you good.... find something else to write about because 1) you write well 2) a more rewarding loves/loves are around the corner for you.
July 31st, 2019 08:32
dusk arising said:
Harsh words at a time when they will do you good.... find something else to write about because 1) you write well 2) a more rewarding loves/loves are around the corner for you.
July 31st, 2019 08:32
Silhouette
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FRIEND ~ welcome to MPS ~ it is an empathetic site and we can share your pain with you ! Poetry is very very cathartic. Despite the angst we both loved the elegance and heart in your Poem ! We are 31 (Angela) and 35 (Brian) engaged and we share this site ! Since we were teenagers we have experienced the agony & ecstasy of *Being in & out Love* its easier for MEN to say *Better to have loved & lost ~ than never to have loved at all* but much harder for Ladies ~ so we do understand. We are thinking of YOU and praying for you at this sad time ! I (BRIAN) am in the UK and ANGELA is on a Work Exchange in New Zealand so we are 11,500 miles apart til OCTOBER ! Our True Love makes the separation a bit easier. Please check our SITE ~ OK
Blessings & Peace
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 31st, 2019 08:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Hi FRIEND ~ welcome to MPS ~ it is an empathetic site and we can share your pain with you ! Poetry is very very cathartic. Despite the angst we both loved the elegance and heart in your Poem ! We are 31 (Angela) and 35 (Brian) engaged and we share this site ! Since we were teenagers we have experienced the agony & ecstasy of *Being in & out Love* its easier for MEN to say *Better to have loved & lost ~ than never to have loved at all* but much harder for Ladies ~ so we do understand. We are thinking of YOU and praying for you at this sad time ! I (BRIAN) am in the UK and ANGELA is on a Work Exchange in New Zealand so we are 11,500 miles apart til OCTOBER ! Our True Love makes the separation a bit easier. Please check our SITE ~ OK
Blessings & Peace
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙
July 31st, 2019 08:32
