Comments received on poems by italianwoman
This is my Fight
Goldfinch60 said:
You have overcome it so many times now and each time you get stronger, may that strength increase within you and your life becomes full of joy.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 04:45
Goldfinch60 said:
You have overcome it so many times now and each time you get stronger, may that strength increase within you and your life becomes full of joy.
Andy
September 3rd, 2020 04:45
This is my Fight
L. B. Mek said:
\'The pain inside is real but there is a cure.
I will find it! Of its healing my soul I’m sure.\'
A rapturous inking of undeniable will, glowing with fervent ambition. Your voice can empower so many others and by so doing, heal all that anguish you have buried within.
Please continue to write and perfect you art, you have a wonderful gift.
September 3rd, 2020 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'The pain inside is real but there is a cure.
I will find it! Of its healing my soul I’m sure.\'
A rapturous inking of undeniable will, glowing with fervent ambition. Your voice can empower so many others and by so doing, heal all that anguish you have buried within.
Please continue to write and perfect you art, you have a wonderful gift.
September 3rd, 2020 02:39
This is my Fight
jarcher54 said:
You certainly no longer live as a mime. You express yourself exquisitely. It\'s clear that you are intensely living these lines, but at the same time you are crafting them cleverly and deftly. So I am a little confused, which is a good thing in poetry sometimes. I thank you especially for these lines:
I can’t even leave a note;
No clue what I woulda wrote.
For me, art is not really art without courage. I find a lot of bravery in this piece.
September 3rd, 2020 02:26
jarcher54 said:
You certainly no longer live as a mime. You express yourself exquisitely. It\'s clear that you are intensely living these lines, but at the same time you are crafting them cleverly and deftly. So I am a little confused, which is a good thing in poetry sometimes. I thank you especially for these lines:
I can’t even leave a note;
No clue what I woulda wrote.
For me, art is not really art without courage. I find a lot of bravery in this piece.
September 3rd, 2020 02:26
The Place of Peace
jarcher54 said:
The peace of death is a fantasy. Humans are not good at cost-benefit analysis when their emotions and feeling come into play. I am honored that you chose to share these thoughts. I have now read only 4 of your poems, posted over most of a year. They are painful, beautiful, and fierce. I look forward to many more.
August 15th, 2020 23:39
jarcher54 said:
The peace of death is a fantasy. Humans are not good at cost-benefit analysis when their emotions and feeling come into play. I am honored that you chose to share these thoughts. I have now read only 4 of your poems, posted over most of a year. They are painful, beautiful, and fierce. I look forward to many more.
August 15th, 2020 23:39
The Place of Peace
ron parrish aka wordman said:
but life can be fun and rewarding
August 15th, 2020 20:43
ron parrish aka wordman said:
but life can be fun and rewarding
August 15th, 2020 20:43
The Place of Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace may well come to you in death but it is there in life as well, stay strong and move forward and one day that peace will be within you Celeste.
August 15th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace may well come to you in death but it is there in life as well, stay strong and move forward and one day that peace will be within you Celeste.
August 15th, 2020 00:26
Roller Coaster
Neville said:
You are indeed a good communicator .. your words here are crying out to be heard...
and I feel sure there will eventually be those who read them and who benefit from some of your insights
... Neville
August 14th, 2020 16:58
Neville said:
You are indeed a good communicator .. your words here are crying out to be heard...
and I feel sure there will eventually be those who read them and who benefit from some of your insights
... Neville
August 14th, 2020 16:58
The Place of Peace
Neville said:
We all have an idea of what we would like death to be like .. at the time of it I mean and also, ongoingly, after it has occurred ...
The vision you so poetically and otherwise eloquently shared with us here today is, I am sure not an uncommon one......
Thank you for posting and I sincerely wish you well my friend ..
Neville
August 14th, 2020 16:51
Neville said:
We all have an idea of what we would like death to be like .. at the time of it I mean and also, ongoingly, after it has occurred ...
The vision you so poetically and otherwise eloquently shared with us here today is, I am sure not an uncommon one......
Thank you for posting and I sincerely wish you well my friend ..
Neville
August 14th, 2020 16:51
The Place of Peace
FineB said:
A great 👍 write Italianwoman if a little sad and poignant.
May God bless you and keep you strong.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:41
FineB said:
A great 👍 write Italianwoman if a little sad and poignant.
May God bless you and keep you strong.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
August 14th, 2020 13:41
Removing the Mask
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love your self, you are amazing, amazing to write such powerful words.
May that love for yourself make you ever stronger and the light of your life be seen by all.
October 27th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes love your self, you are amazing, amazing to write such powerful words.
May that love for yourself make you ever stronger and the light of your life be seen by all.
October 27th, 2019 01:27
Roller Coaster
Thoughts In Time said:
You need to breathe each breathe of hope happiness and know that your life is worth every inch of you..you are special loved and ever so unique and I sure loved by many ..no one has the right to make you feel any less and healing is a much easier game than blood and pain..never lose hope all shall be well🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:36
Thoughts In Time said:
You need to breathe each breathe of hope happiness and know that your life is worth every inch of you..you are special loved and ever so unique and I sure loved by many ..no one has the right to make you feel any less and healing is a much easier game than blood and pain..never lose hope all shall be well🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:36
When Hope is all I Have
Thoughts In Time said:
Sometimes people choose wrong actions to get a reaction not believing that others really do care..needing to believe they are special and loved all is possible when you believe 🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:33
Thoughts In Time said:
Sometimes people choose wrong actions to get a reaction not believing that others really do care..needing to believe they are special and loved all is possible when you believe 🌹
October 12th, 2019 14:33
