Comments received on poems by Thoughts In Time
‘Never never land’
Thoughts In Time said:
Oh how kind of the two of you..yes fairies and never evers..or just maybe sometimes somewhere..but it’s all actually here all along..I’m enjoying being here..Thankyou for your kindness..blessings🌹
October 10th, 2019 16:44
Thoughts In Time said:
Oh how kind of the two of you..yes fairies and never evers..or just maybe sometimes somewhere..but it’s all actually here all along..I’m enjoying being here..Thankyou for your kindness..blessings🌹
October 10th, 2019 16:44
‘Never never land’
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
H FRIEND ~ Brian here ~ welcome to MPS ~ thanks for your FIRST POEM ! It is very elegant in structure ~ it looks good ! It is replete with both Rhyme & Rhythm ~ excellent to both read & recite !
We all have Never Never Lands ~ sometimes real locations where our BODIES can escape to a Wood or a Lake or especially to a Cave with stalactites (down ) & stalagmites (up) & bats ~ SPOOKY ! Also our NNL can be imaginary ~ ephemeral somewhere where we can escape in our MINDS ! I agree with you ~ time is suspended in these *mind NNLs* no PAST - no FUTURE - just PRESENT ! In essence in the UK we have the whole of Fairyland - Pantomime (love it) - Fantasy etc to explore ! Angela (my Fiancee) is half Spanish and Andalucia (the region her family come from) is replete with Real & Fantasy Never Never Lands. Thanks for sharing ~ You will find MPS is an empathetic site. It works by reading and commenting on each others poems. Thanks for reading & commenting on OURS !
Love ~ Peace ~ Joy !
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Love your VISUAL very Fairy Land !
October 10th, 2019 15:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
H FRIEND ~ Brian here ~ welcome to MPS ~ thanks for your FIRST POEM ! It is very elegant in structure ~ it looks good ! It is replete with both Rhyme & Rhythm ~ excellent to both read & recite !
We all have Never Never Lands ~ sometimes real locations where our BODIES can escape to a Wood or a Lake or especially to a Cave with stalactites (down ) & stalagmites (up) & bats ~ SPOOKY ! Also our NNL can be imaginary ~ ephemeral somewhere where we can escape in our MINDS ! I agree with you ~ time is suspended in these *mind NNLs* no PAST - no FUTURE - just PRESENT ! In essence in the UK we have the whole of Fairyland - Pantomime (love it) - Fantasy etc to explore ! Angela (my Fiancee) is half Spanish and Andalucia (the region her family come from) is replete with Real & Fantasy Never Never Lands. Thanks for sharing ~ You will find MPS is an empathetic site. It works by reading and commenting on each others poems. Thanks for reading & commenting on OURS !
Love ~ Peace ~ Joy !
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Love your VISUAL very Fairy Land !
October 10th, 2019 15:35
‘Choices Verse Voices’
Thoughts In Time said:
Thankyou for your kind words and stopping by to read ...🌹
October 10th, 2019 05:40
Thoughts In Time said:
Thankyou for your kind words and stopping by to read ...🌹
October 10th, 2019 05:40
‘Choices Verse Voices’
Clara said:
This is a rather impressive poem. Well expressed and a wonderful rhyming structure. Much enjoyed.
October 10th, 2019 04:31
Clara said:
This is a rather impressive poem. Well expressed and a wonderful rhyming structure. Much enjoyed.
October 10th, 2019 04:31
‘Choices Verse Voices’
Thoughts In Time said:
We live we learn we fall we burn but then we rise again...🌹
October 10th, 2019 01:19
Thoughts In Time said:
We live we learn we fall we burn but then we rise again...🌹
October 10th, 2019 01:19
‘Choices Verse Voices’
Goldfinch60 said:
Those choices are always there and I like to think that the choices that I have made in my long life have brought me to this place of peacefulness that I now enjoy.
October 10th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Those choices are always there and I like to think that the choices that I have made in my long life have brought me to this place of peacefulness that I now enjoy.
October 10th, 2019 01:09
‘Never never land’
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the lines
!But in never never land
There’s only now
Right here
That’s how
No past
No future
Only
The present\"
Are so very true. Each moment is so important in our lives.
October 10th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write, the lines
!But in never never land
There’s only now
Right here
That’s how
No past
No future
Only
The present\"
Are so very true. Each moment is so important in our lives.
October 10th, 2019 00:18
‘Never never land’
FredPeyer said:
Kelly, what I got from your excellent poem is the feeling that your never never land is an apt description of the inside of a poet\'s mind. Great writing!
October 9th, 2019 11:51
FredPeyer said:
Kelly, what I got from your excellent poem is the feeling that your never never land is an apt description of the inside of a poet\'s mind. Great writing!
October 9th, 2019 11:51
‘Never never land’
orchidee said:
I looked for it but I nevre never found it! heehee.
October 9th, 2019 10:57
orchidee said:
I looked for it but I nevre never found it! heehee.
October 9th, 2019 10:57
‘Never never land’
Poetic Dan said:
Wow such bliss... I once did a rhyme just like this the boy in never land knowing I was Peter Pan and no one can bring me down! I\'ve left a door open for all to see but my hands are busy building others things!
Inspirational stuff, keep the writing and soul glowing up!
Much peace and respect
October 9th, 2019 09:01
Poetic Dan said:
Wow such bliss... I once did a rhyme just like this the boy in never land knowing I was Peter Pan and no one can bring me down! I\'ve left a door open for all to see but my hands are busy building others things!
Inspirational stuff, keep the writing and soul glowing up!
Much peace and respect
October 9th, 2019 09:01
‘Never never land’
Michael Edwards said:
Greate write - look forward to more of your work.
October 9th, 2019 08:03
Michael Edwards said:
Greate write - look forward to more of your work.
October 9th, 2019 08:03
‘Never never land’
sylviasearcher said:
This hit a spot in my consciousness few poems manage to...
I think you might sense something I sense too.
Thanks for this timely share
October 9th, 2019 03:04
sylviasearcher said:
This hit a spot in my consciousness few poems manage to...
I think you might sense something I sense too.
Thanks for this timely share
October 9th, 2019 03:04
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