Comments received on poems by Thoughts In Time



I Walked A While
orchidee said:

A fine write Kelly. Ahh, I remember that walk well - the two of us! heehee.

October 28th, 2019 02:31

Mine
Goldfinch60 said:

This is a very good write and I used to believe it but the circumstances that have taken my wife from me into her world of dementia has removed all thought and beliefs that god is there to help her or me.
See my poem \"Abandoning Christianity\" published on 7th August.
I still believe in My Spirit as being part of me and will carry me through to eternity but it is not the christian god in whom many believe.

October 28th, 2019 02:06

Mine
orchidee said:

\'Tis so, we don\'t know what to do at times. We could pretend we know, and look all super-spiritual, but that\'s no use to us or to anyone in the end.

October 27th, 2019 08:07

The Centre
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write, that centre of our being is always there for us and can always be relied upon even in the darkest hours.

October 27th, 2019 01:13

The Centre
Lamar Cole said:

Great Poem

October 26th, 2019 04:31

The Centre
orchidee said:

A fine write Kelly.

October 26th, 2019 02:33

I Am A Clock
Goldfinch60 said:

I have a grandmother clock that ticks and strikes the hour and half hour. It was bought the year I was born by my Grandfather, passed down to my mother and then to me. As far as I am aware it has only ever been on two walls first in my Grandfathers/parents house and now in our current house and it is still going after seventy one years. My life would be strange without it.
There is a poem that I wrote on the site, see my poem on May 16th 2019 entitled \'That Clock.\'

October 26th, 2019 00:13

I Am A Clock
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING KELLY - Love DALI and his *LIQUID CLOCKS* are awsome - seems like TIME has gone FLUID ! Love the POEM because in essence we are all clocks because we know instintively (through our inner clock) just what time of the Day it is - to the nearest hour. I essence it makes wearing a wrist watch superfluous ! Except perhaps for the MANTRA in my Poem on Etiquette which emphasises PUNTUALITY as a virtue ! English Church Services START (and sometimes finish) ON TIME. We like Evening Services in West Indian Churches roughly 6 to 9 pm ! People come and go - Pray - Give a Testimony - Sit in with the Band etc. Very casual & lively and not a slave to time ! Weddings are very time controlled but an Evening Buffet & Band is timeless ! Your Poem made us think !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡


October 25th, 2019 13:33

I Am A Clock
Thoughts In Time said:

You’re a bit tocky...🌹

October 25th, 2019 10:57

I Am A Clock
orchidee said:

A fine write T. What to do? I can stand the ticks, but hate those tocks! lol.

October 25th, 2019 10:45

I Am A Clock
Lamar Cole said:

Very nice poem about a clock.

October 25th, 2019 06:09

I Am A Clock
Neville said:

this is a lovely little whimsey but with possibly more serious and deeper meaning... not yet made my mind up .. but I hope there is still time..

October 25th, 2019 05:33

I Am A Clock
Thoughts In Time said:

Lol..made me smile..different strokes for diff folks..love ur added words🌹

October 25th, 2019 05:16

I Am A Clock
Poetic Dan said:

I honestly can\'t stand the noise at night, my grandparents always had them up stairs and I never slept well!

Short and sweet
Always appreciated!

October 25th, 2019 03:13

Your Face
Lamar Cole said:

Very heartfelt poem.

October 24th, 2019 04:17

Your Face
orchidee said:

I never knew you took that pic of me there, on one of my bad-hair days! heehee.

October 24th, 2019 01:26

The Day I Found You
Poetic Dan said:

Beautifully done!

October 23rd, 2019 07:01

The Day I Found You
Lamar Cole said:

This is a very nice and romantic poem.

October 23rd, 2019 01:43

The Day I Found You
orchidee said:

I never knew I had that effect on you! Heehee.

October 23rd, 2019 01:25

The Rose
Goldfinch60 said:

The beauty of a rose shows the love within and the reason it is given with love to our lovers in our lives.

October 23rd, 2019 00:22

The Rose
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow you have delved into the beauty of the rose and yet portrayed its charm mystery and your words are as poetic as petals as you write your poem in awesome rhyme scheme. Kudos.


Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too

October 22nd, 2019 13:29

The Rose
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI KELLY - ANGELA HERE - Thanks for another GEM - ROSES always stir my MUSE as well ! Im so pleased to be HOME and that the NZ Spring has suddenly morphed in ENGLISH Autumn overnight ! Beacause BRIAN is a Church Deacon and we are the Youth Leaders @ the Church we wont cohabit until we*re married ! Im staying with PAPA & MAMA and My Teddies & My Books ! Brian is at Work so Im catching up on MPS ! Love your Poem I think GOD made the ROSE as an infinite Mystery with hidden depths of Aroma & Beauty we can all enjoy but can never fully fathom. When someone dies at the Church we always plant a Rosebush (of their Loved Ones choice) in their Memory we now have about 12 going back 10 Years ! Three have chosen PEACE ! Thanks for sharing & caring ! My POEM today is *England in the Fall*

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian
🧡💙🧡💙🧡


October 22nd, 2019 09:46

The Rose
Lamar Cole said:

This is a very good poem about the rose.

October 22nd, 2019 04:08

The Rose
orchidee said:

I knows it\'s a good write Kelly!

October 22nd, 2019 02:50

D-Day
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ! WOW KELLY - A very powerful Picture & Poem ! When MEN play about with our affections - they have to be taken OUT ! If not literally then at least *Out of our Mind* so we can move on ! Thanks for sharing ! Looking forward to more of your excellent Odes ! Please check our site !

Blessings & Love & Joy & Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡

October 21st, 2019 10:56

D-Day
orchidee said:

A fine write Kelly.

October 21st, 2019 02:23

Human Clock
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks KELLY for another excellent Poem describing LIFE - in a modern databank S ociety ! Love the structure very SER-PENT-INE ! The subject is so so true of 21st C Man & Woman ! What you write is true of a modern computerised Society ! We are controlled by computers - cash machines - cell phones & clocks etc. We tend to live in Cyber Space but Gods Plan is to bring us back to reality - IN the WORLD but not OF the WORLD - AMEN ! Our lives can be FROZEN Spiritualy and DRY we are Thirsty for JESUS The Water of Life ! Thanks for sharing ! Love the VISUAL - WICKED !

Love Joy & Peace
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check our SITE ~ Thanks !

October 20th, 2019 16:52

Human Clock
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but it is only the body that goes, each of our Spirits will go on for eternity.

October 20th, 2019 10:24

Human Clock
Kirsty said:

I love this!!

October 20th, 2019 08:17

Human Clock
orchidee said:

A fine write T. I got a question - it can\'t be answered! Why---on earth did I start singing?! lol.

October 20th, 2019 07:40

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