Comments received on poems by MrB
Packing away the memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, those memories although hard to deal with will always be there.
October 21st, 2019 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write, those memories although hard to deal with will always be there.
October 21st, 2019 00:43
She’s kicked me out
Bragee said:
its cheaper to keep her....
that\'s what i always here, but nothing about how keep her when she\'s doing the kicking!
October 18th, 2019 14:39
Bragee said:
its cheaper to keep her....
that\'s what i always here, but nothing about how keep her when she\'s doing the kicking!
October 18th, 2019 14:39
Bringing up the past
Bragee said:
Can\'t save her if she don\'t want to be saved!
October 17th, 2019 15:30
Bragee said:
Can\'t save her if she don\'t want to be saved!
October 17th, 2019 15:30
I woke up
Goldfinch60 said:
Great positive write. You will go on in life and find your soulmate with whom you will go to eternity.
October 17th, 2019 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Great positive write. You will go on in life and find your soulmate with whom you will go to eternity.
October 17th, 2019 00:17
I woke up
Thoughts In Time said:
Great news yes you are stronger than that and worth more than feeling useless over someone who’s not worth it..her loss and better is still to come..nice positive turn around🌹
October 16th, 2019 15:11
Thoughts In Time said:
Great news yes you are stronger than that and worth more than feeling useless over someone who’s not worth it..her loss and better is still to come..nice positive turn around🌹
October 16th, 2019 15:11
I woke up
Jamie said:
Great journey into the positive, put a smile on my face to see you triumphant!
October 16th, 2019 12:10
Jamie said:
Great journey into the positive, put a smile on my face to see you triumphant!
October 16th, 2019 12:10
I really don’t want to wake up tomorrow
Thoughts In Time said:
Joy comes in the morning...through the dark comes the light..don’t give up ..all shall be well🌹
October 15th, 2019 11:07
Thoughts In Time said:
Joy comes in the morning...through the dark comes the light..don’t give up ..all shall be well🌹
October 15th, 2019 11:07
Everything seemed fine
dusk arising said:
Oh what it was to be young and learning about romantic love. Memories suffice nowdays LOL.
Have you considered conveying the same message in far, far fewer words. It will make your point/carry your your message much stronger and more punchy. (Long pieces can be seen to turn into a \'rant\'...) I hope u read this as the encouragement it\'s intended to be and not a put down.
October 13th, 2019 08:45
dusk arising said:
Oh what it was to be young and learning about romantic love. Memories suffice nowdays LOL.
Have you considered conveying the same message in far, far fewer words. It will make your point/carry your your message much stronger and more punchy. (Long pieces can be seen to turn into a \'rant\'...) I hope u read this as the encouragement it\'s intended to be and not a put down.
October 13th, 2019 08:45
I still love her
Goldfinch60 said:
That hurt is hard to deal with at first but it will heal and a new somebody will come into your life.
October 13th, 2019 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That hurt is hard to deal with at first but it will heal and a new somebody will come into your life.
October 13th, 2019 01:37
Miss making love
Thoughts In Time said:
Oh this did make me laugh...so expressive...sometimes things don’t quite work out and at times lust can be mistaken for love..it’s all a learning game ...🌹
October 11th, 2019 05:49
Thoughts In Time said:
Oh this did make me laugh...so expressive...sometimes things don’t quite work out and at times lust can be mistaken for love..it’s all a learning game ...🌹
October 11th, 2019 05:49
Mans Best Friend
orchidee said:
A sad but fine write. Can you get a replacement? It may not seem the same, I know. You\'ll still see him sometimes.
October 10th, 2019 10:59
orchidee said:
A sad but fine write. Can you get a replacement? It may not seem the same, I know. You\'ll still see him sometimes.
October 10th, 2019 10:59
Mans Best Friend
Poetic Dan said:
Dam that was such a heavy hearted read, I\'ve missed many of my four legged friends. But like each relationship, it makes us appreciate the next ;)
Very well expressed and my thoughts are with you!
Much peace and respect
October 10th, 2019 10:05
Poetic Dan said:
Dam that was such a heavy hearted read, I\'ve missed many of my four legged friends. But like each relationship, it makes us appreciate the next ;)
Very well expressed and my thoughts are with you!
Much peace and respect
October 10th, 2019 10:05
Mans Best Friend
Clara said:
What a lovely poem that a lot of dog lovers, animal lovers, will be able to relate to. They really are part of the family. Really wonderful work.
October 10th, 2019 07:54
Clara said:
What a lovely poem that a lot of dog lovers, animal lovers, will be able to relate to. They really are part of the family. Really wonderful work.
October 10th, 2019 07:54
My Purple haired Queen
Goldfinch60 said:
sounds like you love this lady, may that love forever be shown in your soul and the words you put on the page.
Welcome to MPS.
October 10th, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
sounds like you love this lady, may that love forever be shown in your soul and the words you put on the page.
Welcome to MPS.
October 10th, 2019 00:56
My Purple haired Queen
FredPeyer said:
When you\'re smitten, you\'re smitten. Sounds like you better hold on to this one! Fast paced writing. I know, you need to get back to her! :-)
October 9th, 2019 15:20
FredPeyer said:
When you\'re smitten, you\'re smitten. Sounds like you better hold on to this one! Fast paced writing. I know, you need to get back to her! :-)
October 9th, 2019 15:20
