Comments received on poems by SureshG
meditative - III
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, M.S..
Redneck version:
There is no obligation on my part
to live up to anyone’s expectations
of a dammed thing.
July 9th, 2021 07:52
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, M.S..
Redneck version:
There is no obligation on my part
to live up to anyone’s expectations
of a dammed thing.
July 9th, 2021 07:52
meditative - III
L. B. Mek said:
its funny
the accuracy of your words are realised
in just this comment section alone...
how we doggedly like to self-indulge
our delusional self-importance... lol
(a profound observation
a humbling read, and a gifted opportunity
for all to utilise your words and grow
even a little)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 9th, 2021 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
its funny
the accuracy of your words are realised
in just this comment section alone...
how we doggedly like to self-indulge
our delusional self-importance... lol
(a profound observation
a humbling read, and a gifted opportunity
for all to utilise your words and grow
even a little)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 9th, 2021 04:17
meditative - III
Doggerel Dave said:
Mmmm I’m not sure you worry too much, Suresh – you are going to put it out there anyway…
For some individuals, a series of defined principles is necessary for survival.
And….not everyone can or is capable of valid contribution – Babel will be the result.
However the choice is with the individual – surrender or be free, and settle at any point along that continuum.
July 9th, 2021 04:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Mmmm I’m not sure you worry too much, Suresh – you are going to put it out there anyway…
For some individuals, a series of defined principles is necessary for survival.
And….not everyone can or is capable of valid contribution – Babel will be the result.
However the choice is with the individual – surrender or be free, and settle at any point along that continuum.
July 9th, 2021 04:02
Untitled - XLVII
L. B. Mek said:
\'that quick-sand of inevitability
when we leap: before we\'ve conceived
the entirety of what may await
around each corner of our life\'s, fate...\'
another mind twister, dear Poet
had to re-read a few times, to excavate
its resonance with my thoughts
sorry if I warped your intended meaning,
thank you! for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'that quick-sand of inevitability
when we leap: before we\'ve conceived
the entirety of what may await
around each corner of our life\'s, fate...\'
another mind twister, dear Poet
had to re-read a few times, to excavate
its resonance with my thoughts
sorry if I warped your intended meaning,
thank you! for sharing
July 9th, 2021 03:46
Untitled - XLVII
Doggerel Dave said:
With you absolutely here, Suresh. That quagmire can be more like glue sometimes (in others of course....)
July 8th, 2021 19:10
Doggerel Dave said:
With you absolutely here, Suresh. That quagmire can be more like glue sometimes (in others of course....)
July 8th, 2021 19:10
Untitled - XLVII
Neville said:
there\'s nothing quite like getting stuck in, is there .. another little beauty sir ..
July 8th, 2021 14:43
Neville said:
there\'s nothing quite like getting stuck in, is there .. another little beauty sir ..
July 8th, 2021 14:43
meditative - II
orchidee said:
I\'ve often tended to the other way - the character of the messenger more important than the characters of the message.
July 7th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
I\'ve often tended to the other way - the character of the messenger more important than the characters of the message.
July 7th, 2021 01:58
meditative - II
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message cannot be detached from the messenger, whose identity must always be taken into consideration.
Had to think a little about this and for me it was rather early in the morning – your timing wasn’t up to much, mate……
July 6th, 2021 19:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message cannot be detached from the messenger, whose identity must always be taken into consideration.
Had to think a little about this and for me it was rather early in the morning – your timing wasn’t up to much, mate……
July 6th, 2021 19:23
meditative - II
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely Suresh -- its message states truth
with short-line skill I have always admired.
July 6th, 2021 17:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely Suresh -- its message states truth
with short-line skill I have always admired.
July 6th, 2021 17:36
meditative - II
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Until the message is \"I love you\" LOL
July 6th, 2021 14:55
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Until the message is \"I love you\" LOL
July 6th, 2021 14:55
Untitled - XLVI
Neville said:
I just added a like for no other reason than I can and I do ...
July 6th, 2021 12:55
Neville said:
I just added a like for no other reason than I can and I do ...
July 6th, 2021 12:55
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous with your comments, though much appreciated
June 30th, 2021 16:43
SureshG said:
….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous with your comments, though much appreciated
June 30th, 2021 16:43
Untitled - XLVI
Neville said:
... very clever sir ; you are almost too clever when it comes to this ;)
June 30th, 2021 16:36
Neville said:
... very clever sir ; you are almost too clever when it comes to this ;)
June 30th, 2021 16:36
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I greatly appreciate your input.
June 29th, 2021 15:49
SureshG said:
As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I greatly appreciate your input.
June 29th, 2021 15:49
Untitled - XLVI
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
.....every other breath of our life a comma, and life, our story, goes on.
Superb and brave post from you today. Deserving of a place among my favourites.
June 29th, 2021 12:58
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
.....every other breath of our life a comma, and life, our story, goes on.
Superb and brave post from you today. Deserving of a place among my favourites.
June 29th, 2021 12:58
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the story alive.
Thanks for your in-depth comment
June 29th, 2021 10:31
SureshG said:
It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the story alive.
Thanks for your in-depth comment
June 29th, 2021 10:31
Untitled - XLVI
L. B. Mek said:
and we fight on: regardless, knowing
our full-stop of inevitability
allows us no room, for self-pitying wastefulness...
poetically, stylistically a stimulating short-shorty, lol
really like your thought provoking
raw and minimalist, uniquely intuitive
delivery of surgically incisive poetry,
thank you dear poet!
June 29th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
and we fight on: regardless, knowing
our full-stop of inevitability
allows us no room, for self-pitying wastefulness...
poetically, stylistically a stimulating short-shorty, lol
really like your thought provoking
raw and minimalist, uniquely intuitive
delivery of surgically incisive poetry,
thank you dear poet!
June 29th, 2021 04:13
Untitled - XXXVII
L. B. Mek said:
how, brilliantly and insightfully astute dear poet..
or maybe even - we simply: acknowledge
\'that, because - there be a first
is not a factoid: guarantor
that, it may - also, be A last;
and thus - should be cherished, more so
at every - gifted, reoccurrence
than it be: dismissed
for its virtue, of reappearance...\'
and this be true
for anything, in life
deemed good - or other!
June 28th, 2021 08:02
L. B. Mek said:
how, brilliantly and insightfully astute dear poet..
or maybe even - we simply: acknowledge
\'that, because - there be a first
is not a factoid: guarantor
that, it may - also, be A last;
and thus - should be cherished, more so
at every - gifted, reoccurrence
than it be: dismissed
for its virtue, of reappearance...\'
and this be true
for anything, in life
deemed good - or other!
June 28th, 2021 08:02
Untitled - XXXVII
Neville said:
Splendid sir .. you are master of these little pearls of wisdom ...
more cerebral than both my hemispheres ........... :)
Neville
June 28th, 2021 03:57
Neville said:
Splendid sir .. you are master of these little pearls of wisdom ...
more cerebral than both my hemispheres ........... :)
Neville
June 28th, 2021 03:57
Untitled - XXXVII
Goldfinch60 said:
Each memory of the past may be the last of that time as we move on every moment creating new memories.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Each memory of the past may be the last of that time as we move on every moment creating new memories.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:47
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