Comments received on poems by SureshG
meditative - II
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message cannot be detached from the messenger, whose identity must always be taken into consideration.
Had to think a little about this and for me it was rather early in the morning – your timing wasn’t up to much, mate……
July 6th, 2021 19:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed – and therein lies the problem, doesn’t it Suresh. The message cannot be detached from the messenger, whose identity must always be taken into consideration.
Had to think a little about this and for me it was rather early in the morning – your timing wasn’t up to much, mate……
July 6th, 2021 19:23
meditative - II
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely Suresh -- its message states truth
with short-line skill I have always admired.
July 6th, 2021 17:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Your poetically wise observation outlines the power of words so finely Suresh -- its message states truth
with short-line skill I have always admired.
July 6th, 2021 17:36
meditative - II
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Until the message is \"I love you\" LOL
July 6th, 2021 14:55
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Until the message is \"I love you\" LOL
July 6th, 2021 14:55
Untitled - XLVI
Neville said:
I just added a like for no other reason than I can and I do ...
July 6th, 2021 12:55
Neville said:
I just added a like for no other reason than I can and I do ...
July 6th, 2021 12:55
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous with your comments, though much appreciated
June 30th, 2021 16:43
SureshG said:
….you mean for my own good. I totally agree. BTW, you are too generous with your comments, though much appreciated
June 30th, 2021 16:43
Untitled - XLVI
Neville said:
... very clever sir ; you are almost too clever when it comes to this ;)
June 30th, 2021 16:36
Neville said:
... very clever sir ; you are almost too clever when it comes to this ;)
June 30th, 2021 16:36
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I greatly appreciate your input.
June 29th, 2021 15:49
SureshG said:
As life goes on, after a comma, we have a means to change the direction. I greatly appreciate your input.
June 29th, 2021 15:49
Untitled - XLVI
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
.....every other breath of our life a comma, and life, our story, goes on.
Superb and brave post from you today. Deserving of a place among my favourites.
June 29th, 2021 12:58
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the much misused and abused comma.....
.....every other breath of our life a comma, and life, our story, goes on.
Superb and brave post from you today. Deserving of a place among my favourites.
June 29th, 2021 12:58
Untitled - XLVI
SureshG said:
It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the story alive.
Thanks for your in-depth comment
June 29th, 2021 10:31
SureshG said:
It is one of the two most potent punctuations, but the one that keeps the story alive.
Thanks for your in-depth comment
June 29th, 2021 10:31
Untitled - XLVI
L. B. Mek said:
and we fight on: regardless, knowing
our full-stop of inevitability
allows us no room, for self-pitying wastefulness...
poetically, stylistically a stimulating short-shorty, lol
really like your thought provoking
raw and minimalist, uniquely intuitive
delivery of surgically incisive poetry,
thank you dear poet!
June 29th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
and we fight on: regardless, knowing
our full-stop of inevitability
allows us no room, for self-pitying wastefulness...
poetically, stylistically a stimulating short-shorty, lol
really like your thought provoking
raw and minimalist, uniquely intuitive
delivery of surgically incisive poetry,
thank you dear poet!
June 29th, 2021 04:13
Untitled - XXXVII
L. B. Mek said:
how, brilliantly and insightfully astute dear poet..
or maybe even - we simply: acknowledge
\'that, because - there be a first
is not a factoid: guarantor
that, it may - also, be A last;
and thus - should be cherished, more so
at every - gifted, reoccurrence
than it be: dismissed
for its virtue, of reappearance...\'
and this be true
for anything, in life
deemed good - or other!
June 28th, 2021 08:02
L. B. Mek said:
how, brilliantly and insightfully astute dear poet..
or maybe even - we simply: acknowledge
\'that, because - there be a first
is not a factoid: guarantor
that, it may - also, be A last;
and thus - should be cherished, more so
at every - gifted, reoccurrence
than it be: dismissed
for its virtue, of reappearance...\'
and this be true
for anything, in life
deemed good - or other!
June 28th, 2021 08:02
Untitled - XXXVII
Neville said:
Splendid sir .. you are master of these little pearls of wisdom ...
more cerebral than both my hemispheres ........... :)
Neville
June 28th, 2021 03:57
Neville said:
Splendid sir .. you are master of these little pearls of wisdom ...
more cerebral than both my hemispheres ........... :)
Neville
June 28th, 2021 03:57
Untitled - XXXVII
Goldfinch60 said:
Each memory of the past may be the last of that time as we move on every moment creating new memories.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Each memory of the past may be the last of that time as we move on every moment creating new memories.
Andy
June 28th, 2021 00:47
karmic eventuality - II
Goldfinch60 said:
Our fate is in the hands of the god in which we may believe - or not.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Our fate is in the hands of the god in which we may believe - or not.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 01:38
karmic eventuality - II
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Suresh
Typo? seize = cease? If right , let me know and I\'ll delete. If wrong, give me a blast.....
June 27th, 2021 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Suresh
Typo? seize = cease? If right , let me know and I\'ll delete. If wrong, give me a blast.....
June 27th, 2021 01:19
Untitled - XLV
Goldfinch60 said:
Fate cannot be changed, what will be will be.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Fate cannot be changed, what will be will be.
Andy
June 27th, 2021 00:53
karmic eventuality - II
Saxon Crow said:
This reminds me if the works of Raymond E Feist and his depiction of the Gods. I do like your last verse. A good poem :)
June 27th, 2021 00:42
Saxon Crow said:
This reminds me if the works of Raymond E Feist and his depiction of the Gods. I do like your last verse. A good poem :)
June 27th, 2021 00:42
Untitled - XLV
Doggerel Dave said:
The way you present it, you apparently have not got much choice, Suresh. Better hone sensibility.
I will accept your concept of \'fate\' in order to enter your frame of reference, but don\'t necessarily accept it as real outside that.
Thanks for stretching me somewhat.
June 26th, 2021 19:52
Doggerel Dave said:
The way you present it, you apparently have not got much choice, Suresh. Better hone sensibility.
I will accept your concept of \'fate\' in order to enter your frame of reference, but don\'t necessarily accept it as real outside that.
Thanks for stretching me somewhat.
June 26th, 2021 19:52
Untitled - XLIV
Neville said:
I\'m back because I just wanted to check with my self just how cerebral your six words together really are ...
and guess what, yep .. they are .. and you can stay at the top of the class sir :)
June 25th, 2021 16:21
Neville said:
I\'m back because I just wanted to check with my self just how cerebral your six words together really are ...
and guess what, yep .. they are .. and you can stay at the top of the class sir :)
June 25th, 2021 16:21
Untitled - XLIV
L. B. Mek said:
this, I fear
is where, all our divisive ideological and political
word-mongering, will catastrophically: equate - to...
logic\'s synthetic veracity: worded accessibly relatable
a great shorty!
June 24th, 2021 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
this, I fear
is where, all our divisive ideological and political
word-mongering, will catastrophically: equate - to...
logic\'s synthetic veracity: worded accessibly relatable
a great shorty!
June 24th, 2021 04:28
Untitled - XLIV
Doggerel Dave said:
Inability to perceive it even..... Must stop otherwise I might never...You\'ve put it out there this time, Suresh.
June 23rd, 2021 20:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Inability to perceive it even..... Must stop otherwise I might never...You\'ve put it out there this time, Suresh.
June 23rd, 2021 20:29
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