Comments received on poems by SureshG
Untitled - LV
dusk arising said:
Reminds me of a girl i knew.... she stripped away the fiction.... a padded bra
December 31st, 2021 10:33
dusk arising said:
Reminds me of a girl i knew.... she stripped away the fiction.... a padded bra
December 31st, 2021 10:33
Untitled - LIII
spilleronsheet said:
If so
Then I question if it’s love ?
Isn’t love selfless to be
Nice one dear poet
December 30th, 2021 11:45
spilleronsheet said:
If so
Then I question if it’s love ?
Isn’t love selfless to be
Nice one dear poet
December 30th, 2021 11:45
Untitled - LIV
spilleronsheet said:
To the tree I was short
But to bushes I stand tall
Today’s worries is a pile
I am unable to solve
But maybe in tomorrows happiness
Today’s worries shall dissolve
A beautiful write dear poet
Intriguing and thought provoking
December 30th, 2021 11:44
spilleronsheet said:
To the tree I was short
But to bushes I stand tall
Today’s worries is a pile
I am unable to solve
But maybe in tomorrows happiness
Today’s worries shall dissolve
A beautiful write dear poet
Intriguing and thought provoking
December 30th, 2021 11:44
Untitled - LIV
Neville said:
simply perfect ... of course ..
and knowing too there is always
something larger and much greater than you
kind of puts everything into perspective, within the garden of life ..................................... Neville
December 30th, 2021 10:48
Neville said:
simply perfect ... of course ..
and knowing too there is always
something larger and much greater than you
kind of puts everything into perspective, within the garden of life ..................................... Neville
December 30th, 2021 10:48
Untitled - LIII
Neville said:
story of my life in seventeen words or three lines well placed ... N
December 18th, 2021 03:23
Neville said:
story of my life in seventeen words or three lines well placed ... N
December 18th, 2021 03:23
The Blue Planet
spilleronsheet said:
Very essential
It’s time we sincerely apologise and admit to our mistakes
Maybe it’s not too late
Else one her fury ranges there won’t be time to say sorry again
So well you worded the concerns of Mother Nature embracing us
Well crafted dear poet
December 16th, 2021 13:51
spilleronsheet said:
Very essential
It’s time we sincerely apologise and admit to our mistakes
Maybe it’s not too late
Else one her fury ranges there won’t be time to say sorry again
So well you worded the concerns of Mother Nature embracing us
Well crafted dear poet
December 16th, 2021 13:51
The Blue Planet
SureshG said:
I pray we don’t wander into outer space till we have learnt to stop destroying where we stand, otherwise we will carry the same destruction every where.
I drive a hybrid, maximize recycling and do my best to get others to follow, my fellow being.
December 16th, 2021 13:08
SureshG said:
I pray we don’t wander into outer space till we have learnt to stop destroying where we stand, otherwise we will carry the same destruction every where.
I drive a hybrid, maximize recycling and do my best to get others to follow, my fellow being.
December 16th, 2021 13:08
The Blue Planet
dusk arising said:
This reads like you were viewing from outer space..... oh you bad person...all that pollution you put into the atmosphere launching that massive rocket to get you there.... LOL... just kidding.
What are YOU doing to reduce your carbon footprint. I\'m doin my bit, even bought a new car to reduce pollution.
December 16th, 2021 12:56
dusk arising said:
This reads like you were viewing from outer space..... oh you bad person...all that pollution you put into the atmosphere launching that massive rocket to get you there.... LOL... just kidding.
What are YOU doing to reduce your carbon footprint. I\'m doin my bit, even bought a new car to reduce pollution.
December 16th, 2021 12:56
Untitled - LII
L. B. Mek said:
so morosely true
that\'s the part of Sci Fi
that\'s not so fun
to depict as escapist fantasy,
the part where
European\'s, found it so easy
to conquer North America
because the diseases they brought with them
wiped out the indigenous population, by half
before a single bullet was fired...
(deeply insightful
a poignant shorty,
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:51
L. B. Mek said:
so morosely true
that\'s the part of Sci Fi
that\'s not so fun
to depict as escapist fantasy,
the part where
European\'s, found it so easy
to conquer North America
because the diseases they brought with them
wiped out the indigenous population, by half
before a single bullet was fired...
(deeply insightful
a poignant shorty,
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:51
Skewed
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wise words, wise questions. Very thought provoking. Thank you fellow writer.
December 12th, 2021 13:08
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Wise words, wise questions. Very thought provoking. Thank you fellow writer.
December 12th, 2021 13:08
Skewed
Lorna said:
Oooo Suresh you have hit it on the head and this shines light on the awful state of the world today. The lies out there are so scary.....
December 12th, 2021 05:47
Lorna said:
Oooo Suresh you have hit it on the head and this shines light on the awful state of the world today. The lies out there are so scary.....
December 12th, 2021 05:47
Skewed
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Suresh, we each need to walk our own path to lead to the absolute truth in our own lives.
Andy
December 12th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Suresh, we each need to walk our own path to lead to the absolute truth in our own lives.
Andy
December 12th, 2021 01:30
Skewed
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy questions so very well constructed.
\'Wish I knew the answer, Suresh.
And further, even if I got it right, what about everyone else?
December 11th, 2021 20:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Heavy questions so very well constructed.
\'Wish I knew the answer, Suresh.
And further, even if I got it right, what about everyone else?
December 11th, 2021 20:33
Time
Neville said:
How a single page can hold so much truth is beyond me .. lovely wording & format ........................................... N
December 6th, 2021 17:03
Neville said:
How a single page can hold so much truth is beyond me .. lovely wording & format ........................................... N
December 6th, 2021 17:03
Emotions
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Spirit be forever within you Suresh as mine is within me.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May your Spirit be forever within you Suresh as mine is within me.
Andy
December 6th, 2021 01:57
Emotions
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession of pure reliance which reads like a prayer my friend -- I love that opening line as it sets the tone for the rest of this lovely poem.
December 5th, 2021 16:30
Fay Slimm. said:
A confession of pure reliance which reads like a prayer my friend -- I love that opening line as it sets the tone for the rest of this lovely poem.
December 5th, 2021 16:30
Emotions
Neville said:
emotionally charged, just as it should be ................................ Brava dear poet ................................................N
December 5th, 2021 12:07
Neville said:
emotionally charged, just as it should be ................................ Brava dear poet ................................................N
December 5th, 2021 12:07
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
Goldfinch60 said:
Those smiles of contentment are in many who have reached a good age and enjoyed all their liofe.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those smiles of contentment are in many who have reached a good age and enjoyed all their liofe.
Andy
December 4th, 2021 02:33
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
SureshG said:
Thanks for visiting
December 3rd, 2021 22:09
SureshG said:
Thanks for visiting
December 3rd, 2021 22:09
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
Doggerel Dave said:
A vivid painterly piece, Suresh.
I would vote for the last stanza anytime - plus the preceding lines which gave it context.
Thanks for the write.
December 3rd, 2021 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
A vivid painterly piece, Suresh.
I would vote for the last stanza anytime - plus the preceding lines which gave it context.
Thanks for the write.
December 3rd, 2021 18:18
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, S.G.
I resemble those remarks at 83.
December 3rd, 2021 16:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, S.G.
I resemble those remarks at 83.
December 3rd, 2021 16:20
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
dusk arising said:
A contented persons smile proves harmony.
December 3rd, 2021 13:05
dusk arising said:
A contented persons smile proves harmony.
December 3rd, 2021 13:05
meshed within the creases, a smile of contentment
Neville said:
How bloomin wonderful is that eh\' .. mega muchly & then some ............. N
December 3rd, 2021 12:51
Neville said:
How bloomin wonderful is that eh\' .. mega muchly & then some ............. N
December 3rd, 2021 12:51
Untitled - L
L. B. Mek said:
really well written and unfurled
a great write! thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
really well written and unfurled
a great write! thanks for sharing
December 3rd, 2021 05:07
Untitled - L
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.G.
The beast we love is elusive.
December 2nd, 2021 16:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.G.
The beast we love is elusive.
December 2nd, 2021 16:49
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