Comments received on poems by SureshG



karmic eventuality - II
Goldfinch60 said:

Our fate is in the hands of the god in which we may believe - or not.

Andy

June 27th, 2021 01:38

karmic eventuality - II
Doggerel Dave said:

Hi Suresh
Typo? seize = cease? If right , let me know and I\'ll delete. If wrong, give me a blast.....

June 27th, 2021 01:19

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Goldfinch60 said:

Fate cannot be changed, what will be will be.

Andy

June 27th, 2021 00:53

karmic eventuality - II
Saxon Crow said:

This reminds me if the works of Raymond E Feist and his depiction of the Gods. I do like your last verse. A good poem :)

June 27th, 2021 00:42

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Doggerel Dave said:

The way you present it, you apparently have not got much choice, Suresh. Better hone sensibility.
I will accept your concept of \'fate\' in order to enter your frame of reference, but don\'t necessarily accept it as real outside that.
Thanks for stretching me somewhat.

June 26th, 2021 19:52

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Neville said:



I\'m back because I just wanted to check with my self just how cerebral your six words together really are ...
and guess what, yep .. they are .. and you can stay at the top of the class sir :)

June 25th, 2021 16:21

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L. B. Mek said:

this, I fear
is where, all our divisive ideological and political
word-mongering, will catastrophically: equate - to...
logic\'s synthetic veracity: worded accessibly relatable
a great shorty!

June 24th, 2021 04:28

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orchidee said:

Good write M.

June 24th, 2021 02:03

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very true suresh.

Andy

June 24th, 2021 00:51

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Goldfinch60 said:

Very true suresh.

Andy

June 24th, 2021 00:51

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Doggerel Dave said:

Inability to perceive it even..... Must stop otherwise I might never...You\'ve put it out there this time, Suresh.

June 23rd, 2021 20:29

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Neville said:


go straight to the very top of the class sir .... :)

June 23rd, 2021 16:30

Untitled - XLIII
L. B. Mek said:

let calmness envelope, immediate
to soothe and stimulate
your path to all those opportunities: that await...!


June 15th, 2021 04:43

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orchidee said:

Good write M.

June 15th, 2021 02:18

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Goldfinch60 said:

May that repose always be there for us all Suresh.

Andy

June 15th, 2021 00:49

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Doggerel Dave said:

I need some more of your meditative advice, Suresh - I can see where it leads and need to keep going ......or should that be stay still?

June 14th, 2021 20:17

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dusk arising said:

That\'s a good approximation of what\'s required to write my poetry.

June 14th, 2021 16:42

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Neville said:


Ah\' yes .. ken zen inchinyo the unity of body, mind and spirit ........ oft spoken about .. but less often understood ...

June 14th, 2021 14:22

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Saxon Crow said:

Ohhhmmmmmm.
Meditation is the only path.

June 14th, 2021 14:14

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Fay Slimm. said:

You introduce here the regular need to make peace with body, mind and soul - a worthy way to contemplate and thanks for sharing it Suresh.

June 14th, 2021 13:41

What and Why
Neville said:



welcome to my world .... I ask the same question over and over ...

June 14th, 2021 12:51

Dorian Gray
L. B. Mek said:

great story
and your dedication
does its nuanced message: fine justice..
Oscar Wilde\'s commentary of human nature
at its most daringly, blunt: best
in my humble opinion
(in context to its time)

June 14th, 2021 05:59

Dorian Gray
Goldfinch60 said:

That new person can be with us every day suresh.

Andy

June 14th, 2021 00:42

Dorian Gray
Neville said:


a change is as good as a rest in my opinion ...
... 50 shades of Dorian Gray is more than the average scribe can deal with in one sitting ......

... clever stuff Suresh :)#



June 13th, 2021 15:26

Dorian Gray
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - clever last line in this look at the changes a portrait displays over time - . Dorian Gray is alive within some fortunate faces you will no doubt agree Suresh - a compelling read.

June 13th, 2021 14:34

Dorian Gray
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, M.S.

June 13th, 2021 14:22

Dorian Gray
Saxon Crow said:

A change always does you good!

Nice philosophical poem

June 13th, 2021 13:57

What and Why
dusk arising said:

A great time in a child\'s life..... a time of learning.... an opportunity for the adult to take a little one on a journey of questing adventures with answers which compel the little mind to think as they hunger for more.

June 12th, 2021 07:59

What and Why
Doggerel Dave said:

I really like this - just about gives a perfect picture of the start of it all.
And for the record, I\'m still asking.......

June 12th, 2021 01:53

What and Why
orchidee said:

A fine write M.

June 12th, 2021 01:46

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