Comments received on poems by Nemo



Fear of unknown
Poetic Dan said:

This is so true for my older age but as a kid once the music got loud and the bottle got drunk, my fear was not my imagination but a reality that sucked. As soon as I felt the time was right I did face that fear, although the demon\'s never left and followed me here....

Thanks for the inspiration ;)

January 19th, 2020 15:43

Fear of unknown
Fay Slimm. said:

How true that we often fear the unknown and put up a barrier to our dearest dreams ........ such truth in your advise to eliminate ego and get on with fighting remaining demons....... great read my friend.

January 19th, 2020 13:55

Fear of unknown
Nicholas Browning said:

Very true. We all share similarities, and yet unique differences. We run the same race, yet people are still concerned with tripping up their fellow man. A nice read.

January 19th, 2020 10:44

Fear of unknown
Gino said:

A great write Nemo,...for we course in comfort without risks, but we can\'t change the world if were like it...

January 19th, 2020 04:46

Fear of unknown
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

January 19th, 2020 03:46

My wonderland
Nicholas Browning said:

Ah, yes. THAT wonderland. I\'d be lying if I said I couldn\'t at one point relate. Minus all the harsh ones, though. Mainly when I think of things like this it\'s someone drowning in emotion with no way out. Thanks for the read, Nemo.

January 19th, 2020 02:40

A Girl
Memoirsofamadlife said:

Oh my! Really enjoyed this one. I was caught ftom the beggining. So many of us have experienced a love like this only to see it fade away! Great write!

January 17th, 2020 18:28

A Girl
FineB said:

Hello Nemo,

An excellent write.

Sad though.

Sometimes the ones we love so much can hurt us the most.

Keep writing
FineB

January 17th, 2020 07:13

Lust within
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful erotic write Nemo.

January 14th, 2020 01:01

Dead love
Nicholas Browning said:

Freedom in death! Preach it

January 13th, 2020 22:49

Lust within
Nicholas Browning said:

Not much into erotic poems, but yeah this one\'s sure straightforward and cryptic at the same time. An intriguing read sir Nemo.
Also, has anyone found you yet?
(I\'m sorry I couldn\'t resist.)

January 13th, 2020 22:27

Lust within
orchidee said:

Oohh swoon! lol. I was lying there with just me long johns on. It put her off. Strange that! heehee.

January 13th, 2020 11:50

Dead love
orchidee said:

Is it as drastic as that? You might just be having a bad-hair day! heehee.

January 13th, 2020 02:51

Can\'t be undone
Fay Slimm. said:

Words which will ring a bell to so many and written with honest confession of love\'s fragility - - a sad reminder in your comparison with sand that time never waits long for hurt\'s healing.

January 12th, 2020 14:07

Can\'t be undone
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a wonderful emotive write.

January 12th, 2020 02:12

Can\'t be undone
orchidee said:

Yes - and I was trying to collect spilt milk in a sieve. I didn\'t get far. Doh!

January 11th, 2020 12:41

Burned bridges
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive write, at the moment all I have is memories of my dear departed wife.

January 11th, 2020 01:37

Burned bridges
FineB said:

A good write a bit sad Nemo.

Once we have burned our bridges with people one has to really move on.

Keep writing FineB

January 10th, 2020 09:50

Burned bridges
Fay Slimm. said:

Letting go is given its foregoing hurts and pains in this impressive lament - a sensitive write Nemo.

January 10th, 2020 07:23

Burned bridges
dusk arising said:

You may let them go consciously but there will be subconscious memory which will surface unexpectedly.

Yes, there comes a time to stop mourning a loss.

January 10th, 2020 05:58

Burned bridges
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write Nemo.
I didn\'t get the hang of it - I burnt my bridges before I crossed them. I wondered why I never got across the river! lol.

January 10th, 2020 05:24

The evil Within
FineB said:

Hi Nemo,

I agree with you.

A very good write.

Sometimes the key to being spiritually enlightened is having a close personal loving relationship with the Almighty.

You are then influenced by this acting out of love towards mankind and the world. Some Christians in church dont always follow suit.

But it\'s important to be aware of the Spiritual enemy so that we know how to defend ourselves against him.

Keep writing FineB

January 7th, 2020 08:41

The evil Within
Goldfinch60 said:

I agree with d a, organised religion is a farce. I used to believe but the Christian idea of saving all is a myth. My wife believed and worshipped all her life but when she became ill with dementia where was the Christian god?

January 7th, 2020 01:50

The evil Within
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, I acknowledge yours as you have mine, in the wink of an eye.

What an ending, fantastic message!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

January 6th, 2020 15:05

The evil Within
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS NEMO ~ for sharing an interesting concept and misconception ! The BIBLE teaches that *GOD does not dwell in Temples made hands* but that GOD is everywhere OMNIPRESENT ~ see Psalm 139 ! So Jews & Christians believe that wherever we are & whatever we are doing GOD can observe us. Because of this we try to walk circumpectly and NOT secumb to the Temptations of The WORLD (we should flee the World) the FLESH (we should subjugate the Flesh) and the DEVIL (we should challenge the DEVIL with the Sword of the Spirit ~ which is the Word of GOD ~ The Bible !) YES it is Human Experience that we all have EVIL within us and are capable of EVIL behaviour. However if we are indwelt by the HOLY SPIRIT our EVIL TRAITS can be subjugated !
SATAN (The DEVIL) is very real and He is opposed to GOD. The BIBLE describes HIM as a Roaring Lion ~ going about seeking whom He may devour ! We don\'t mess with the Devil or Satanic Cults !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

January 6th, 2020 14:45

The evil Within
dusk arising said:

The sooner you can shrug of this religious manifestation of god then the sooner you will be in control of all your senses and desires.

Your piece today thoughtfully amplifies what is wrong with the way western religion is taught and practiced.

An enjoyable read.



January 6th, 2020 13:10

Not in control
FineB said:

Thank you Nemo.

A good write

Timeless and beautiful.

Keep writing FineB

January 6th, 2020 08:38

Not in control
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful loving write, may it last forever.

January 6th, 2020 02:19

Alone
Memoirsofamadlife said:

Once again, I fell into your writing with such emotion. It\'s a very good write and one close to my heart.

January 5th, 2020 17:59

Not in control
Memoirsofamadlife said:

AWESOME!! To say the least. I love the male perspective of longing. I felt it as if I were there. Bravo!

January 5th, 2020 17:51

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