laying here with you
L. B. Mek said:

Great flow, pacing and such relatable metaphors and imagery
(it tugs at the emotions we try and repress, just so we can survive life)
thanks for sharing, dear poet

October 24th, 2022 04:31

waking up in my childhood bed
L. B. Mek said:

\'Brick by a brick, wall to wall
the little girl I used to be, found it easy to crawl
from as young and as small
I guess the bigger you grow, the harder you fall

The part of me you took hostage
and the part of you i fell in love with
Will, it always be me in the wrong
in the sight of my own eyes

Will, i still hate myself
if I give up the secrets and lies
and the baby inside who cries\'
you have a wonderful talent, dear poet
thank you, for choosing to share it

June 11th, 2021 04:25

silent movies at late night drive-ins
dusk arising said:

Yes, you really show the romance of the mind\'s overtime when we are cast off from the intensity of sharing and being in the front seat speed ride of love.
Well composed (BIGGER FONT NEXT TIME PLEASE!).

January 14th, 2021 09:03

stuck with endless over\'s
dusk arising said:

I agree with Nemo but somehow this left me feeling like it ought to be two separate poems. From \"maybe you were only messing....\" I would divide this into two, and have done so mentally.
Just my way of perceiving it.

February 28th, 2020 10:09

The ideal picture of dating
Nemo said:

Wow a beautiful piece laura🌹
All of us are broken in some ways, but what really matters is how we get back up and collect all those pieces together.
Know that nothing is ever wasted, with each failure you are better prepared for the next one 💪

January 8th, 2020 21:28

You know we can\'t talk because we wont want to say goodbye
Nemo said:

A great write, could really feel your emotions throught this. 👍

December 30th, 2019 03:38