Comments received on poems by jvl narasimha rao
How I want to spend Christmas
Cheeky Missy said:
It is interesting since you began the piece with such an image that your poem follows as if contradicting it. Ya, and what do you think of Swami Vivekananda's teachings? I think he was instrumental in bringing Hinduism to the "West" and into modern "Christianity," perverting the gospel. I thought of this seeing you here honor a "Jesus" without realizing that God's salvation, while supposedly promoting such virtues, does not really yet is so inescapably necessary, since we are all condemned to perish for our sins, and without His sacrifice and saving us, these virtues are naught. I liked this piece and hope my comment is not offensive, dear elder brother. (Besides so far as I can see, the Word of God condemns Christmas as a heathen UNgodly Unacceptable holiday anyway....in fact, having thus said, I confess it is abominable to me to even connect the Lord Jesus Christ of the Bible at all with the holiday of Christmas and your initial stanza condemning celebrating it with debauchery is actually the fitting way to celebrate it...it is not at all anything other than a devilish holiday, that I know of.)
December 22nd, 2010 08:55
Cheeky Missy said:
It is interesting since you began the piece with such an image that your poem follows as if contradicting it. Ya, and what do you think of Swami Vivekananda's teachings? I think he was instrumental in bringing Hinduism to the "West" and into modern "Christianity," perverting the gospel. I thought of this seeing you here honor a "Jesus" without realizing that God's salvation, while supposedly promoting such virtues, does not really yet is so inescapably necessary, since we are all condemned to perish for our sins, and without His sacrifice and saving us, these virtues are naught. I liked this piece and hope my comment is not offensive, dear elder brother. (Besides so far as I can see, the Word of God condemns Christmas as a heathen UNgodly Unacceptable holiday anyway....in fact, having thus said, I confess it is abominable to me to even connect the Lord Jesus Christ of the Bible at all with the holiday of Christmas and your initial stanza condemning celebrating it with debauchery is actually the fitting way to celebrate it...it is not at all anything other than a devilish holiday, that I know of.)
December 22nd, 2010 08:55
THE HISTORIC CROSS
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, my dear Hindu elder brother, it is a very nice piece. But it misses the fact that since indeed He IS God Almighty He did not want nor have a pious soul, at least according to what I understand from His Bible. He says "...My counsel shall stand and I will do all My pleasure....I have spoken, I will also do it....I have purposed, I will also bring it to pass..." that is, if I am not being too bold to contradict you.
December 21st, 2010 23:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, my dear Hindu elder brother, it is a very nice piece. But it misses the fact that since indeed He IS God Almighty He did not want nor have a pious soul, at least according to what I understand from His Bible. He says "...My counsel shall stand and I will do all My pleasure....I have spoken, I will also do it....I have purposed, I will also bring it to pass..." that is, if I am not being too bold to contradict you.
December 21st, 2010 23:13
MY DEAR BASTARD
jvl narasimha rao said:
Myy dear sister CHEEKY is very clever.Let us wait for other responses.I want to tease you for a while
yours NAUGHTY BROTHER JVL
December 21st, 2010 11:41
jvl narasimha rao said:
Myy dear sister CHEEKY is very clever.Let us wait for other responses.I want to tease you for a while
yours NAUGHTY BROTHER JVL
December 21st, 2010 11:41
MY DEAR BASTARD
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Miss Dolphine 29, Thanks a lot for your comments but you thought in a different way.But my Idea is diiferent.Let others think and comment.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 08:38
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Miss Dolphine 29, Thanks a lot for your comments but you thought in a different way.But my Idea is diiferent.Let others think and comment.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 21st, 2010 08:38
MY DEAR BASTARD
Dolphine29 said:
Hi, I believe that you are refering to the "progress" on nations and technology that just seems to trap and plague everyone to have it but at the same time is lowering our humanity as technology lacks of time and emotions, people shouldn't either; so is eating us up.
It's good puzzle and it's intriguing, also this is just my opinion I may be wrong about this, but that idea came into my mind.
I don't like the picture, but well is a funny perspective on the Movie Austin Powers.
I hope that you have a good week
Best
December 20th, 2010 22:16
Dolphine29 said:
Hi, I believe that you are refering to the "progress" on nations and technology that just seems to trap and plague everyone to have it but at the same time is lowering our humanity as technology lacks of time and emotions, people shouldn't either; so is eating us up.
It's good puzzle and it's intriguing, also this is just my opinion I may be wrong about this, but that idea came into my mind.
I don't like the picture, but well is a funny perspective on the Movie Austin Powers.
I hope that you have a good week
Best
December 20th, 2010 22:16
MY DEAR BASTARD
jvl narasimha rao said:
A non-native english speaking bother is teasing a native english speaking sister.Can't you guess?I keep you guessing for a while Let us wait for other responses
yours JVL
December 20th, 2010 10:03
jvl narasimha rao said:
A non-native english speaking bother is teasing a native english speaking sister.Can't you guess?I keep you guessing for a while Let us wait for other responses
yours JVL
December 20th, 2010 10:03
MY DEAR BASTARD
Cheeky Missy said:
You got me.....delightful riddle! I cannot quite guess what you are referring to. Very interesting.
December 20th, 2010 08:29
Cheeky Missy said:
You got me.....delightful riddle! I cannot quite guess what you are referring to. Very interesting.
December 20th, 2010 08:29
CHILD IS GREATER THAN MAN
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky, I value your comments but you seem to disagree with me in certain aspects.well,my views are not final.I appreciate your frankness and sensitivity.You are still a child and I am your elder brother.I think you are teasing me as a little sister
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 19th, 2010 22:43
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky, I value your comments but you seem to disagree with me in certain aspects.well,my views are not final.I appreciate your frankness and sensitivity.You are still a child and I am your elder brother.I think you are teasing me as a little sister
yours loving brother,
JVL
December 19th, 2010 22:43
CHILD IS GREATER THAN MAN
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, the cruelty of "reality" destroyed the ignorant sweetness of youth? Say, rather that it is a tempting thought, but not that the heart has been impossibly hardened,....please? I mean, in a very real sense, while the child might seem greater than the man for his ignorance and initial sweetness, it is horrifying to me anymore to see how cruel and hardened even little children are, and la, how rebellious we are even as tots. It seems then, only an illusion that the child was greater than the man he became. We were ignorant but no less evil, weren't we? I enjoyed the picture.
December 19th, 2010 15:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, the cruelty of "reality" destroyed the ignorant sweetness of youth? Say, rather that it is a tempting thought, but not that the heart has been impossibly hardened,....please? I mean, in a very real sense, while the child might seem greater than the man for his ignorance and initial sweetness, it is horrifying to me anymore to see how cruel and hardened even little children are, and la, how rebellious we are even as tots. It seems then, only an illusion that the child was greater than the man he became. We were ignorant but no less evil, weren't we? I enjoyed the picture.
December 19th, 2010 15:44
THE CUCKOO AND THE SPRING
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very interesting....I enjoyed it. Sorry that he would not have his doting sweetheart, thankful she did not live unappreciated......Rereading it, was her king the spring itself? If so, did she live in a perpetual winter thereafter? You've written a fascinating mystery to consider....for it all seems to allude to something deeper.
December 18th, 2010 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very interesting....I enjoyed it. Sorry that he would not have his doting sweetheart, thankful she did not live unappreciated......Rereading it, was her king the spring itself? If so, did she live in a perpetual winter thereafter? You've written a fascinating mystery to consider....for it all seems to allude to something deeper.
December 18th, 2010 12:15
THE CROW AND THE CUCKOO
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky , Thanks a lot for your comments and ratings.In india we use camphor for performing puja.It may have different uses.You are right
yours sincerely,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
December 18th, 2010 07:22
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky , Thanks a lot for your comments and ratings.In india we use camphor for performing puja.It may have different uses.You are right
yours sincerely,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
December 18th, 2010 07:22
THE CROW AND THE CUCKOO
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! Make me tremble in my boots. I loved your comparisons.....since I know your last stanza is correct, I doubt not the first too. Though the interesting thing is, don't they use camphor against mosquitoes? I like this poem very well!!
December 17th, 2010 12:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Excellent! Make me tremble in my boots. I loved your comparisons.....since I know your last stanza is correct, I doubt not the first too. Though the interesting thing is, don't they use camphor against mosquitoes? I like this poem very well!!
December 17th, 2010 12:21
THE GREAT INDIAN SOUL
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky, Thank you very much for your interest in my poems
yours sincerely,
JVL
December 16th, 2010 09:42
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky, Thank you very much for your interest in my poems
yours sincerely,
JVL
December 16th, 2010 09:42
MASTER AND THE POST MASTER
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Miss Cheeky, Thanks for your comments and integrity.You agree to disagree with me but liked it.
yours sincerelym
JVL
December 16th, 2010 04:43
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Miss Cheeky, Thanks for your comments and integrity.You agree to disagree with me but liked it.
yours sincerelym
JVL
December 16th, 2010 04:43
Vijayadurga, the divineforce
SANTOSH said:
"Shiva (goodness) is your
inseparable half"
AND
"Even the staunchest atheist
Can not deny the women’s collective fist"
These line impressed a lot. And the way you have described Goddess Durga is fantabulous.
December 16th, 2010 02:07
SANTOSH said:
"Shiva (goodness) is your
inseparable half"
AND
"Even the staunchest atheist
Can not deny the women’s collective fist"
These line impressed a lot. And the way you have described Goddess Durga is fantabulous.
December 16th, 2010 02:07
MASTER AND THE POST MASTER
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may be so bold, I disagree...at least with the god you expressed. The only true God of the Bible, Jehovah, "teaches sinners in the Way..." and is by no means a disinterested instructor...when we hear His urgent call so often, as in Proverbs 1, and etc. Your poem is an interesting perspective to consider. I enjoyed it.
December 16th, 2010 00:13
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may be so bold, I disagree...at least with the god you expressed. The only true God of the Bible, Jehovah, "teaches sinners in the Way..." and is by no means a disinterested instructor...when we hear His urgent call so often, as in Proverbs 1, and etc. Your poem is an interesting perspective to consider. I enjoyed it.
December 16th, 2010 00:13
THE GREAT INDIAN SOUL
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I love this one. Remain strong, yet tender, unconquerable, resilient, and....sweet?
December 13th, 2010 21:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Sweet. I love this one. Remain strong, yet tender, unconquerable, resilient, and....sweet?
December 13th, 2010 21:17
WHAT IS THIS LIFE EVEN ON CHRISTMAS?
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky Missy, Jealousy is like a double edged knife which hurts the person who holds it
yours sincerely,
JVL
December 13th, 2010 03:32
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Ms Cheeky Missy, Jealousy is like a double edged knife which hurts the person who holds it
yours sincerely,
JVL
December 13th, 2010 03:32
WHAT IS THIS LIFE EVEN ON CHRISTMAS?
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very interesting.....Christmas is fundamentally unBiblical and therefore a heathen holiday. The Lord Jesus Christ is the only begotten son of God. ...To what are you referring when you talk of jealousy and a double-edged knife?
December 11th, 2010 21:29
Cheeky Missy said:
It is very interesting.....Christmas is fundamentally unBiblical and therefore a heathen holiday. The Lord Jesus Christ is the only begotten son of God. ...To what are you referring when you talk of jealousy and a double-edged knife?
December 11th, 2010 21:29
THE SUN AND THE MOON
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky Missy, thanks a lot for your wonderful comment
yours JVL
November 28th, 2010 08:27
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky Missy, thanks a lot for your wonderful comment
yours JVL
November 28th, 2010 08:27
THE SUN AND THE MOON
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating.....I don't quite understand it. Very interesting.
November 27th, 2010 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
It is fascinating.....I don't quite understand it. Very interesting.
November 27th, 2010 12:15
WHO OWNS THE LAND?
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may be so bold as to say so.....the only true God of the Bible says that the earth is the Lord's and the fulness thereof, the world and they that dwell therein.....Ps 50:12 "If I were hungry, I would not tell thee: for the world is mine, and the fulness thereof."
I'm glad both live peaceably together despite worshipping different gods.
November 11th, 2010 22:53
Cheeky Missy said:
If I may be so bold as to say so.....the only true God of the Bible says that the earth is the Lord's and the fulness thereof, the world and they that dwell therein.....Ps 50:12 "If I were hungry, I would not tell thee: for the world is mine, and the fulness thereof."
I'm glad both live peaceably together despite worshipping different gods.
November 11th, 2010 22:53
RHYME, THE CRIME
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw I LOVE this one! I am such a fan of rhyme and rythm too. This was amusing and delightful! But come, come, writing for the fun of rhyming...I have yet to post some of my fun little "Rhymes to Pass the Time" and when I do, will I be thus by you a criminal? Hahaha, Oh dear, I do so hope not!
November 11th, 2010 11:31
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw I LOVE this one! I am such a fan of rhyme and rythm too. This was amusing and delightful! But come, come, writing for the fun of rhyming...I have yet to post some of my fun little "Rhymes to Pass the Time" and when I do, will I be thus by you a criminal? Hahaha, Oh dear, I do so hope not!
November 11th, 2010 11:31
OUR LIFE ON EARTH
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Jabber, Thanks for your comments.
October 6th, 2010 23:29
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Jabber, Thanks for your comments.
October 6th, 2010 23:29
The international teachers' day
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Jabberm, Thanks for your comments but Adam and Eve were in a different situation.The teacher and the student were in a totally dissimilar circumstances. we can not excuse the teacher if the crime is proved
October 6th, 2010 23:23
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Jabberm, Thanks for your comments but Adam and Eve were in a different situation.The teacher and the student were in a totally dissimilar circumstances. we can not excuse the teacher if the crime is proved
October 6th, 2010 23:23
The international teachers' day
jabberm said:
the old story retold again and again.the poet made it clear that
a teacher shouldnt ,by all means, commit such a vice,as the poet says.
But didnt our father [adam} do it .why damn the teacher.ethics ha.
October 6th, 2010 13:33
jabberm said:
the old story retold again and again.the poet made it clear that
a teacher shouldnt ,by all means, commit such a vice,as the poet says.
But didnt our father [adam} do it .why damn the teacher.ethics ha.
October 6th, 2010 13:33
OUR LIFE ON EARTH
jabberm said:
great call for all to look around and find an answer to human problems. very nice call and humane. poignant emotion nicely write.
thanks for sharing
October 6th, 2010 13:20
jabberm said:
great call for all to look around and find an answer to human problems. very nice call and humane. poignant emotion nicely write.
thanks for sharing
October 6th, 2010 13:20
THE TWO ANGELS FROM THE WEST
jvl narasimha rao said:
I WAS ABLE TO CONTACT THEM THROUGH FACE BOOK.ElizabetH is working for an english journal and Lucy is working for a Budhistic organisation
September 29th, 2010 11:00
jvl narasimha rao said:
I WAS ABLE TO CONTACT THEM THROUGH FACE BOOK.ElizabetH is working for an english journal and Lucy is working for a Budhistic organisation
September 29th, 2010 11:00
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