Comments received on poems by jvl narasimha rao
MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME
Cheeky Missy said:
Wild. I like it not. You've excellently drawn the adulterous scene. The title alone was a warning. But you did present it excellently....and adulterous as it is, I don't like it.
January 18th, 2011 14:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Wild. I like it not. You've excellently drawn the adulterous scene. The title alone was a warning. But you did present it excellently....and adulterous as it is, I don't like it.
January 18th, 2011 14:32
GOD'S MUSIC AND MAGIC
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you've touched on the truth of how very effective music is! How very capable of moving us one way or another. It is not God. Nor is He music. But that does almost aptly capture how very affecting music is. I am unfamiliar, of course, with your music; yet having read a translation of RN Tagore's Gitanjali, I will say, it is a VERY sweet piece of literature, which I think is in a sense equal with this discussion on music. Your image made me smile...who is it/they?
January 17th, 2011 00:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you've touched on the truth of how very effective music is! How very capable of moving us one way or another. It is not God. Nor is He music. But that does almost aptly capture how very affecting music is. I am unfamiliar, of course, with your music; yet having read a translation of RN Tagore's Gitanjali, I will say, it is a VERY sweet piece of literature, which I think is in a sense equal with this discussion on music. Your image made me smile...who is it/they?
January 17th, 2011 00:38
WHAT IS REAL HAPPINESS?
Cheeky Missy said:
The image expressed it delightfully, and provoked a smile. It is an interesting consideration....the last time I discussed it, I lost the argument(friendly)....you are expressing rather a common understanding of it....and I do not disagree. Essentially you seem to be urging us all to follow charity, which would seem verily a divine attribute, and useful in providing us and others with some happiness. Hmm. Fascinating. I enjoyed it...thanks for this provocative consideration.
January 15th, 2011 12:13
Cheeky Missy said:
The image expressed it delightfully, and provoked a smile. It is an interesting consideration....the last time I discussed it, I lost the argument(friendly)....you are expressing rather a common understanding of it....and I do not disagree. Essentially you seem to be urging us all to follow charity, which would seem verily a divine attribute, and useful in providing us and others with some happiness. Hmm. Fascinating. I enjoyed it...thanks for this provocative consideration.
January 15th, 2011 12:13
WHAT IS REAL BEAUTY?
gerrylegister said:
A thing of beauty .. God's eternal duty, really nice poem
January 14th, 2011 15:41
gerrylegister said:
A thing of beauty .. God's eternal duty, really nice poem
January 14th, 2011 15:41
WHAT IS REAL BEAUTY?
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!! Wow. That was quite the topic to tackle...and you managed it excellently! I do not think I can add to what you said....perfecto! Thanks! I quite like this poem of yours!!!!
January 14th, 2011 12:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent!!! Wow. That was quite the topic to tackle...and you managed it excellently! I do not think I can add to what you said....perfecto! Thanks! I quite like this poem of yours!!!!
January 14th, 2011 12:34
THE DEATH OF A POET
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Here Death is just a paradox.There is spiritual death to the poet.He lives for ever.Thanks a lot for your comments and rating
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 7th, 2011 20:20
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Here Death is just a paradox.There is spiritual death to the poet.He lives for ever.Thanks a lot for your comments and rating
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 7th, 2011 20:20
THE DEATH OF A POET
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I quite enjoyed this consideration, and yet I hope we do not die when we pen our cogitations....and the Lord Jesus Christ is incomparable, so I squirm at your comparing anything of ours to Him....it is a fascinating concept....for I'm loving reading centuries old sonnets, drinking afresh the thoughts of these past fellows and aspiring to even half reach to their mark, which seems to be what you are aiming at with that comparison to resurrection. Fascinating....I enjoyed this!
January 7th, 2011 11:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, I quite enjoyed this consideration, and yet I hope we do not die when we pen our cogitations....and the Lord Jesus Christ is incomparable, so I squirm at your comparing anything of ours to Him....it is a fascinating concept....for I'm loving reading centuries old sonnets, drinking afresh the thoughts of these past fellows and aspiring to even half reach to their mark, which seems to be what you are aiming at with that comparison to resurrection. Fascinating....I enjoyed this!
January 7th, 2011 11:34
THE SELFISH GOD OF FRAUD
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and liberal voting.I too hesitated to add the picture for its indecency but like you only it was fitting
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:08
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Thank you very much for your encouraging comments and liberal voting.I too hesitated to add the picture for its indecency but like you only it was fitting
yours lovingly,
JVL
January 6th, 2011 20:08
THE SELFISH GOD OF FRAUD
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is so fitting.....and I shrank from it....it is perfect though, and you stated it excellently....reminds me too of what the Bible says about Babylon, "Mother of harlots and abominations....which ruleth over the kings of the earth....." I hate the picture for it's indecency, and yet it is only all too fitting.
January 6th, 2011 12:26
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is so fitting.....and I shrank from it....it is perfect though, and you stated it excellently....reminds me too of what the Bible says about Babylon, "Mother of harlots and abominations....which ruleth over the kings of the earth....." I hate the picture for it's indecency, and yet it is only all too fitting.
January 6th, 2011 12:26
THE WHEELS OF CORRUPTIVE CHARIOT
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Corruption is crushing honesty and sincerity.
JVL
January 5th, 2011 20:44
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Corruption is crushing honesty and sincerity.
JVL
January 5th, 2011 20:44
THE WHEELS OF CORRUPTIVE CHARIOT
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. What is the chariot crushing the precious? It is intriguing....I do not really understand it.
January 5th, 2011 16:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Interesting. What is the chariot crushing the precious? It is intriguing....I do not really understand it.
January 5th, 2011 16:10
WHAT SHOULD A POET WRITE?
gerrylegister said:
I enjoyed your expression of a poet, nice thoughts.
January 4th, 2011 17:35
gerrylegister said:
I enjoyed your expression of a poet, nice thoughts.
January 4th, 2011 17:35
WHAT SHOULD A POET WRITE?
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this one! Excellent!!! Beautiful! I quite enjoyed all you expressed! Delightful! Thank you for such a sweet little piece on poetry.
January 4th, 2011 17:02
Cheeky Missy said:
I love this one! Excellent!!! Beautiful! I quite enjoyed all you expressed! Delightful! Thank you for such a sweet little piece on poetry.
January 4th, 2011 17:02
WHAT SHOULD A POET WRITE?
dbremner said:
Well written and very likeable poem.
January 4th, 2011 14:54
dbremner said:
Well written and very likeable poem.
January 4th, 2011 14:54
A HEAVENLY SIGHT
jvl narasimha rao said:
the poem is sung by an American singer.If you have FACE BOOK account, you can see it on my FACE BOOK.Thanks for your kind words
JVL
January 2nd, 2011 02:27
jvl narasimha rao said:
the poem is sung by an American singer.If you have FACE BOOK account, you can see it on my FACE BOOK.Thanks for your kind words
JVL
January 2nd, 2011 02:27
I AM NOT REALLY UNDERSTANDING
jvl narasimha rao said:
I am not against the festival but the way it is celebrated just like christmas.Thanks for your comments and rating
JVL
January 2nd, 2011 01:28
jvl narasimha rao said:
I am not against the festival but the way it is celebrated just like christmas.Thanks for your comments and rating
JVL
January 2nd, 2011 01:28
I AM NOT REALLY UNDERSTANDING
Cheeky Missy said:
And I think it is excellent! (Happily I was still up at midnight, and nobody called to wish me a happy one anyway.) You presented it so very well, why you are not understanding...what else can I say, but.....Excellent!!!!!
January 1st, 2011 15:56
Cheeky Missy said:
And I think it is excellent! (Happily I was still up at midnight, and nobody called to wish me a happy one anyway.) You presented it so very well, why you are not understanding...what else can I say, but.....Excellent!!!!!
January 1st, 2011 15:56
THE RHYME, MY GREATEST CRIME
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I quite enjoyed it! Since rhyme generally defines poetry for wee me, then I shall not charge you with criminality in using it, but rather congratulate you. And the essence of "poetry" aside, rhyming is jolly good fun, especially when paired with rythm......don't you agree? Thumbs up to all your rhyming!!!!
January 1st, 2011 15:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, I quite enjoyed it! Since rhyme generally defines poetry for wee me, then I shall not charge you with criminality in using it, but rather congratulate you. And the essence of "poetry" aside, rhyming is jolly good fun, especially when paired with rythm......don't you agree? Thumbs up to all your rhyming!!!!
January 1st, 2011 15:51
A POET IS THE SUN
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thank you very much for this interesting perspective on poets and poetry...I suppose if we take it to heart we will refrain from certain topics/tones in our writing and tend toward other more enlightening ones? Are you being facetious in the final stanza? Or who is the sun god?
January 1st, 2011 15:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thank you very much for this interesting perspective on poets and poetry...I suppose if we take it to heart we will refrain from certain topics/tones in our writing and tend toward other more enlightening ones? Are you being facetious in the final stanza? Or who is the sun god?
January 1st, 2011 15:44
A HEAVENLY SIGHT
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. The picture is so perfect. And your last line reminds me a bit of this....God commendeth His love toward us, in that, while we were yet sinners, Christ died for us. If we really did love one another the world would be a different place.
January 1st, 2011 15:29
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. The picture is so perfect. And your last line reminds me a bit of this....God commendeth His love toward us, in that, while we were yet sinners, Christ died for us. If we really did love one another the world would be a different place.
January 1st, 2011 15:29
THE THEORY OF ILLUSION
Cheeky Missy said:
I LOVED this! You made me laugh!!!! This was too good! The picture was so perfect, making me smile as I began reading, and the poem itself is amusing! Excellent!!
January 1st, 2011 15:23
Cheeky Missy said:
I LOVED this! You made me laugh!!!! This was too good! The picture was so perfect, making me smile as I began reading, and the poem itself is amusing! Excellent!!
January 1st, 2011 15:23
HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Thanks a lot for your liberal rating on new year's day.I consider it a bonus for the new year.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 30th, 2010 03:12
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Thanks a lot for your liberal rating on new year's day.I consider it a bonus for the new year.
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 30th, 2010 03:12
HAPPY NEW YEAR IN ADVANCE
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I enjoyed your perspective on the incoming year! The image you put with it is fitting; The second half of your second stanza reminds me of your Christmas poem....nicely put!
December 30th, 2010 00:09
Cheeky Missy said:
Excellent! I enjoyed your perspective on the incoming year! The image you put with it is fitting; The second half of your second stanza reminds me of your Christmas poem....nicely put!
December 30th, 2010 00:09
JESUS ,THE ETERNAL LIGHT
Cheeky Missy said:
Thanks, elder brother....I so wish you did know the Lord Jesus Christ...He is so much more than you can see...He is the Light of the world, and there is none other name under heaven, given among men, whereby we must be saved. (I am sorry, but I HATE the picture. There is NO image of the Lord.)
December 29th, 2010 21:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Thanks, elder brother....I so wish you did know the Lord Jesus Christ...He is so much more than you can see...He is the Light of the world, and there is none other name under heaven, given among men, whereby we must be saved. (I am sorry, but I HATE the picture. There is NO image of the Lord.)
December 29th, 2010 21:27
THE RHYME, MY GREATEST CRIME
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear dbreamner, Thanks a lot for your appreciation and rating
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 28th, 2010 06:48
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear dbreamner, Thanks a lot for your appreciation and rating
yours lovingly,
JVL
December 28th, 2010 06:48
How I want to spend Christmas
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Your wisdom astonishes me.I like your integrity and straitforwardness.I am not good at theology like you.I have very good native english speaking christian sisters like you who are my strength.Paradoxically I am Hindu but English and the English always fascinate me.I am never offended by your comments.Thanks a lot for reading all my poems and making comments and awarding points too.
yours JVL
December 23rd, 2010 23:47
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, Your wisdom astonishes me.I like your integrity and straitforwardness.I am not good at theology like you.I have very good native english speaking christian sisters like you who are my strength.Paradoxically I am Hindu but English and the English always fascinate me.I am never offended by your comments.Thanks a lot for reading all my poems and making comments and awarding points too.
yours JVL
December 23rd, 2010 23:47
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