Comments received on poems by jvl narasimha rao
SHE AND I
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, beautiful, intriguing, lovely. I love the image you paired with it. I enjoyed this.
February 19th, 2011 23:05
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating, beautiful, intriguing, lovely. I love the image you paired with it. I enjoyed this.
February 19th, 2011 23:05
SHE IS NOT MY LOVER
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, come, come, my dear big brother....surely your darling wife is your lover! I quite enjoyed this piece.
February 19th, 2011 23:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, come, come, my dear big brother....surely your darling wife is your lover! I quite enjoyed this piece.
February 19th, 2011 23:02
What a poet is
Dolphine29 said:
I really like your poem!!!
It makes me wonder, what is a poet but what we see in our worlds reflected on our desires.
Sometimes we are brave enough to let others see inside and that makes the poet known but also brave.
Best
Dolphine
February 17th, 2011 11:29
Dolphine29 said:
I really like your poem!!!
It makes me wonder, what is a poet but what we see in our worlds reflected on our desires.
Sometimes we are brave enough to let others see inside and that makes the poet known but also brave.
Best
Dolphine
February 17th, 2011 11:29
I AM AN INCOMPARABLE QUEEN
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky,Your name is different on the FACE BOOK.She is ISWARYA ROY, the miss world and the famous BOLLYWOOD STAR.
yours JVL
February 16th, 2011 23:32
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky,Your name is different on the FACE BOOK.She is ISWARYA ROY, the miss world and the famous BOLLYWOOD STAR.
yours JVL
February 16th, 2011 23:32
I AM AN INCOMPARABLE QUEEN
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and rather erotic....she is very pretty and quite adorned. Who is this incomparable queen?
February 16th, 2011 19:55
Cheeky Missy said:
Very interesting and rather erotic....she is very pretty and quite adorned. Who is this incomparable queen?
February 16th, 2011 19:55
SHE AND I
Dolphine29 said:
What an adhesive feeling attached to the beautiful soul that is shared. Delightful poem as it embellish your desires and appreciation for somebody deeply loved.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 10:04
Dolphine29 said:
What an adhesive feeling attached to the beautiful soul that is shared. Delightful poem as it embellish your desires and appreciation for somebody deeply loved.
Best
Dolphine
February 16th, 2011 10:04
I AM A PURE VIRGIN
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, From the picture I can't say whether she is a virgin or not.Any how she is sure of losing her virginhood.I think, as you said, she fits well for the images.so I have selected it.Thanks for your comments and ratings
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA
February 15th, 2011 07:11
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, From the picture I can't say whether she is a virgin or not.Any how she is sure of losing her virginhood.I think, as you said, she fits well for the images.so I have selected it.Thanks for your comments and ratings
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA
February 15th, 2011 07:11
I AM A PURE VIRGIN
Cheeky Missy said:
Frankly, you remind me of your denunciation of Valentines' Day as an odious day for lust. Her look doesn't befit a virgin, and the poem following, beautiful in its metaphors, excellently suits the look in her eyes, and virginity seems as far from the scene as true love. Sarcastic?
February 14th, 2011 23:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Frankly, you remind me of your denunciation of Valentines' Day as an odious day for lust. Her look doesn't befit a virgin, and the poem following, beautiful in its metaphors, excellently suits the look in her eyes, and virginity seems as far from the scene as true love. Sarcastic?
February 14th, 2011 23:18
What a poet is
Cheeky Missy said:
A beautiful, lofty, idealistic depiction of the poet, which if 'twere true, would make poetry more worthwhile, and more desirable. Unfortunately, I beg to differ IF this is endeavoring to describe all modern poets...for so many of us, seem merely intent on spewing forth whatever we feel most impassioned about, resulting in not a few vile pieces, self-centred despairing pieces and a general reflection of the rotten condition of modern man....But then again, perhaps that makes your point that "the poet" writes a reflection of his fellows. I personally deplore the decay of all art, as visible in music, literature, painting/sculpting from the enlightened renaissance to the twentieth century to the present day....which seems to me to aptly depict the corruption and loss of almost all beauty and good apparently abounding everywhere, which if we would aspire to write good poetry, we must seriously struggle to overcome in our lines, putting forth a return to such loftiness while all around us screams hellishly of demise.
Thanks for this presentation of the ideal poet,...a call, as it were, to return to virtue if we would truly be poets.
February 13th, 2011 11:51
Cheeky Missy said:
A beautiful, lofty, idealistic depiction of the poet, which if 'twere true, would make poetry more worthwhile, and more desirable. Unfortunately, I beg to differ IF this is endeavoring to describe all modern poets...for so many of us, seem merely intent on spewing forth whatever we feel most impassioned about, resulting in not a few vile pieces, self-centred despairing pieces and a general reflection of the rotten condition of modern man....But then again, perhaps that makes your point that "the poet" writes a reflection of his fellows. I personally deplore the decay of all art, as visible in music, literature, painting/sculpting from the enlightened renaissance to the twentieth century to the present day....which seems to me to aptly depict the corruption and loss of almost all beauty and good apparently abounding everywhere, which if we would aspire to write good poetry, we must seriously struggle to overcome in our lines, putting forth a return to such loftiness while all around us screams hellishly of demise.
Thanks for this presentation of the ideal poet,...a call, as it were, to return to virtue if we would truly be poets.
February 13th, 2011 11:51
POLITICS IN DEMOCRACY
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, What do you think about democracy in your country?Is it the same? I think Americans are totally different.More advanced and less corruptivem a bit more flexible.
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 13th, 2011 03:34
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear Cheeky, What do you think about democracy in your country?Is it the same? I think Americans are totally different.More advanced and less corruptivem a bit more flexible.
yours lovingly,
JVL
February 13th, 2011 03:34
POLITICS IN DEMOCRACY
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful! This is a rather amusing tribute to an only too familiar political party. You expressed it frankly with a welcome touch of humor...I enjoyed, though in reality it is not amusing.
February 12th, 2011 16:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Delightful! This is a rather amusing tribute to an only too familiar political party. You expressed it frankly with a welcome touch of humor...I enjoyed, though in reality it is not amusing.
February 12th, 2011 16:21
THE QUEEN OF ALL SPEAKERS
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! Beautiful tribute to my mother tongue, which interestingly dominates, apparently. Your touch of rhyming and rythm was too enjoyable, as you led us through this delightful tribute to English, for now the queen. I liked the angles you presented it from and enjoyed this ode very much! As for spelling....ya, I've heard English is murderously contradictory....therefore all the more honor to you brave souls who master it as a second language.
February 12th, 2011 16:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! Beautiful tribute to my mother tongue, which interestingly dominates, apparently. Your touch of rhyming and rythm was too enjoyable, as you led us through this delightful tribute to English, for now the queen. I liked the angles you presented it from and enjoyed this ode very much! As for spelling....ya, I've heard English is murderously contradictory....therefore all the more honor to you brave souls who master it as a second language.
February 12th, 2011 16:15
POLITICS IN DEMOCRACY
BattleChrist said:
Your poetry comments well on the true face of the political system of our country with a pleasant hint of humor ,i especially liked the lines
" Before the election liquor flows like a river
Voters get money notes in a beautiful cover"
February 9th, 2011 12:32
BattleChrist said:
Your poetry comments well on the true face of the political system of our country with a pleasant hint of humor ,i especially liked the lines
" Before the election liquor flows like a river
Voters get money notes in a beautiful cover"
February 9th, 2011 12:32
A PLEA TO GOD
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you from sin, make you whole and prosper you, giving you something like charity....I like it very well!
February 5th, 2011 22:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. A very nice prayer....containing such wisdom, asking Him to keep you from sin, make you whole and prosper you, giving you something like charity....I like it very well!
February 5th, 2011 22:46
FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH
Leonard Dabydeen said:
A tribute to hallmark in the pouring rain. Many will come under the umbrella in the passage of time. Very well penned. Lovely picture.
February 4th, 2011 01:09
Leonard Dabydeen said:
A tribute to hallmark in the pouring rain. Many will come under the umbrella in the passage of time. Very well penned. Lovely picture.
February 4th, 2011 01:09
FRIENDS ARE MY STRENGTH
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic loves here...and we love you too!! Only I am not so fit to be composing so very well as this of all my darlings. This is delightful! Excellent!!! Beautiful tribute to some of your friends here, this site that connects us, and our hobby......I quite enjoyed it! And so glad we all met here. I quite like the image too....nicely fitting, though not of us.
February 3rd, 2011 14:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, my dear brother....but you are too sweet....naming off your poetic loves here...and we love you too!! Only I am not so fit to be composing so very well as this of all my darlings. This is delightful! Excellent!!! Beautiful tribute to some of your friends here, this site that connects us, and our hobby......I quite enjoyed it! And so glad we all met here. I quite like the image too....nicely fitting, though not of us.
February 3rd, 2011 14:47
FRIENDSHIP LIKE THE SUN
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating analogy. I agree, you are calling for true friends not the all too common pseudo variety....definitely. But then, true friendship seems a gift, and therefore a treasure to carefully nourish and cherish forever, just as you say, that plant growing forever in our hearts. I enjoyed this...very nice!
January 31st, 2011 22:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating analogy. I agree, you are calling for true friends not the all too common pseudo variety....definitely. But then, true friendship seems a gift, and therefore a treasure to carefully nourish and cherish forever, just as you say, that plant growing forever in our hearts. I enjoyed this...very nice!
January 31st, 2011 22:59
RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful picture, of pastoral life
January 31st, 2011 20:59
gerrylegister said:
Beautiful picture, of pastoral life
January 31st, 2011 20:59
RURAL FAIRIES' PLANTATION
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while reading the poem. It is pleasant poem in tribute to the blessing of fruitfulness, the enjoyment of it in progress, with a nice allusion to God's salvation. Beautiful. I enjoyed it and picturing the scene as you painted it with words in the imagination.
January 30th, 2011 23:51
Cheeky Missy said:
The picture is nicely fitting and so pleasant a scene to look at while reading the poem. It is pleasant poem in tribute to the blessing of fruitfulness, the enjoyment of it in progress, with a nice allusion to God's salvation. Beautiful. I enjoyed it and picturing the scene as you painted it with words in the imagination.
January 30th, 2011 23:51
MOTHER EARTH
georgina hudson said:
Thank you Mr Rao for your tremendous generosity. I couldn't believe my eyes when I read your dedication. It's a really moving gift. I do like the term Mother Earth. It's a great symbol of how much life takes place on our planet. You chose a very nice simile.
It's the very best gift you could have ever given me, my friend!
Pregnancy and later motherhood are the celebration of a miracle. Being happy and grateful are great ways to pamper myself and my child.
Many thanks again!!!
PS I'm still struggling to write blogs and even post comments. I feel so drowsy most of the time! I hope you understand your poem is beautiful. What I value the best is that you thought about us! Cheers!
January 29th, 2011 12:35
georgina hudson said:
Thank you Mr Rao for your tremendous generosity. I couldn't believe my eyes when I read your dedication. It's a really moving gift. I do like the term Mother Earth. It's a great symbol of how much life takes place on our planet. You chose a very nice simile.
It's the very best gift you could have ever given me, my friend!
Pregnancy and later motherhood are the celebration of a miracle. Being happy and grateful are great ways to pamper myself and my child.
Many thanks again!!!
PS I'm still struggling to write blogs and even post comments. I feel so drowsy most of the time! I hope you understand your poem is beautiful. What I value the best is that you thought about us! Cheers!
January 29th, 2011 12:35
OH! MY DEAR CHILD
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, the happy little nursing daughter is too adorably sweet! Perfect image for the initial stanza. It is a fascinating, rather intriguing piece....surely such is not truly the case...the offspring need not spurn or injure the parent to succeed...surely it is not so. And then I tread cautiously for the concluding stanza...who is the "He" referring to? If it is the Lord our maker, yes, we did only evil towards Him and yet His laying down His life and resurrecting is our salvation, though by our hands He was crucified. In that the poem makes more sense...it is all referring to that? and yet our evil against Him was is not justified nor the means we rise...it is all His goodness, mercy, righteousness...His glory....but I am only a girl, to be so boldly speaking....please forgive me if I have at all instructed.
January 29th, 2011 00:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw, the happy little nursing daughter is too adorably sweet! Perfect image for the initial stanza. It is a fascinating, rather intriguing piece....surely such is not truly the case...the offspring need not spurn or injure the parent to succeed...surely it is not so. And then I tread cautiously for the concluding stanza...who is the "He" referring to? If it is the Lord our maker, yes, we did only evil towards Him and yet His laying down His life and resurrecting is our salvation, though by our hands He was crucified. In that the poem makes more sense...it is all referring to that? and yet our evil against Him was is not justified nor the means we rise...it is all His goodness, mercy, righteousness...His glory....but I am only a girl, to be so boldly speaking....please forgive me if I have at all instructed.
January 29th, 2011 00:46
THE SEASONAL HARVEST
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the picture with it, which reading it, seems so perfectly fitting, excepting the lady in the lead left off to wear it on her head. Sweet and lovely/loving tribute to the blessing and labour of harvest! Is it harvest right now where you are? (I have a couple harvest poems, but they are set in October, so I've a long while if I wait 'til then to post.) I enjoyed this fantasy...does it signify something deeper since it is a fantasy?
January 27th, 2011 14:35
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the picture with it, which reading it, seems so perfectly fitting, excepting the lady in the lead left off to wear it on her head. Sweet and lovely/loving tribute to the blessing and labour of harvest! Is it harvest right now where you are? (I have a couple harvest poems, but they are set in October, so I've a long while if I wait 'til then to post.) I enjoyed this fantasy...does it signify something deeper since it is a fantasy?
January 27th, 2011 14:35
MOTHER EARTH
Belinda AMeharry said:
Thankyou so much for sharing this poem.
It is so graceful and true to me.
January 27th, 2011 08:37
Belinda AMeharry said:
Thankyou so much for sharing this poem.
It is so graceful and true to me.
January 27th, 2011 08:37
MOTHER EARTH
Cheeky Missy said:
Now, for all the times I've heard the odious term "mother earth"...you finally made it seem to make sense. Very fascinating delineation of sorts. Thank you. While I still abhor the devilish term and idea, now it makes a little sense.
January 27th, 2011 00:24
Cheeky Missy said:
Now, for all the times I've heard the odious term "mother earth"...you finally made it seem to make sense. Very fascinating delineation of sorts. Thank you. While I still abhor the devilish term and idea, now it makes a little sense.
January 27th, 2011 00:24
SHE IS A POETIC MUSE
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, my dear elder brother, and with the exulting blonde beginning the poem and colouring our initial impressions of the poem....who is "she"???? Let me try....the moon again?! I give up! But I loved your similes and metaphors....it was a fascinating puzzle which I can't figure out....unless my guess is correct?!
January 20th, 2011 14:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, my dear elder brother, and with the exulting blonde beginning the poem and colouring our initial impressions of the poem....who is "she"???? Let me try....the moon again?! I give up! But I loved your similes and metaphors....it was a fascinating puzzle which I can't figure out....unless my guess is correct?!
January 20th, 2011 14:59
YOU ARE THE GREATEST KING
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the image with it...and all the description...the image it painted in my imagination...but, la, WHO is it? And who is the horse? I quite enjoyed this!
January 19th, 2011 10:18
Cheeky Missy said:
I love the image with it...and all the description...the image it painted in my imagination...but, la, WHO is it? And who is the horse? I quite enjoyed this!
January 19th, 2011 10:18
MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear dbremner, Thanks a lot fr your comments and rating
yours JVL
January 18th, 2011 20:51
jvl narasimha rao said:
Dear dbremner, Thanks a lot fr your comments and rating
yours JVL
January 18th, 2011 20:51
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