Comments received on poems by AwHec8



Poem: Woman, You Are So Beautiful! To Me. Why can’t we ever Agree?
L. B. Mek said:

I can\'t help wondering
why you assign, you warped image to
\'all women\'
(although your words are relatable)
but, ask us
to get a reference on your, decency
by asking, the few
women
connected to your day to day, existence
..
I can\'t help thinking, there is a discrepancy here..
lol
\'not all Our
daughters, mothers, lovers, sisters
and industry leaders
that happen to be female:
are the same!\'
and thankfully
not all Us men, choose
to express
their \'understandable\' frustrations
like you..
lol
(or else we would all be in serious trouble
like
Women not wanting anything to do with us men
like
50% of women in their later 30\'s being childless
like
humanity\'s population collapse is already, upon us
like
our words and actions have, lasting
consequences)..
good to read your works again
hope all is well, dear poet

June 13th, 2022 07:19

Poem, Truth & Love
orchidee said:

Good write Don.
This is a \'heart procedure\' of sorts, from spirit and soul.
Good wishes for your treatments. Only a good \'heart\' could write something like this - your physical heart too, I hope.
Bit deep that - got headache now, with all that thinking! lol.

May 22nd, 2022 10:46

Poem, A Thought.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A thoughtprovoking poem great to encourage improvement and evolution of our imperfect character. We\'re born perfect but get bad influences growing up thus we need to adopt ways to improve again. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

And
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 06:06

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Rozina said:

Hahaha. An enjoyable funny poem. Thanks.

December 31st, 2021 21:55

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Paul Bell said:

Climbing the pole of success.
He said I would never make it, and goddammit, he was right.
I like dumb questions myself, especially to people in authority who never ever realise they\'re dumb.

December 31st, 2021 11:16

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Eugene S. said:

😅 truly enjoyed the anecdotes! Never heard the monkey and the pole.Awesome!!

December 31st, 2021 08:57

Poem/Song, Lately Life Sucks A--!
Accidental Poet said:

Very well penned my friend. Life has it\'s ups and downs, much like a roller coaster ride. But in the end, at least for myself I can say, it\'s a good life. 👍

November 20th, 2021 09:58

Poem/Song, Lately Life Sucks A--!
Goldfinch60 said:

That Paradise is there for us all and love will fill our hearts.

Andy

November 20th, 2021 01:54

Poem, The World has grown Cold? (or maybe another rant of mine!).
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes Don , a rant - but none the worse for that. Your heart, from my point of view, is very much in the right place
The only point I want to make (and boringly I\'ve made it before), is that there is enough material there for half a dozen shortish sharp poems on each separate part of your piece.........
I would appreciate them very much.

August 10th, 2021 18:42

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a lovely lyrical poem with fab song like refrains. A stellar soulful musing rendered in appealing words. Kudos.!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

July 22nd, 2021 11:37

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
Goldfinch60 said:

That cry may be inside you but you can also remember the love she left behind.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:34

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m not very musical, and can\'t normally keep a tune, Don - but this one came to me and I felt I could sing it - in my head at least....really really good.
I hope by now your Op is on and all went well. \'Looking forward to another post from you soon.

July 1st, 2021 17:56

Poem, I woke up this morning to get myself in Gear.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that strength be always with you Don.

Andy

June 2nd, 2021 00:55

Poem, I woke up this morning to get myself in Gear.
Doggerel Dave said:

I can fully empathise with your sleep problems, Don. I hope you get a few good nights in now.

June 1st, 2021 21:37

Poem, The ways of the World!
AwHec8 said:

Let me say this in all sincerity, I honestly believe we All carry a piece to this puzzle called Life & living it the best we can in Truth. I also believe that what we do with our piece of wisdom, our blessing is on all of us People as individuals & as a group. As always I put out what are my thoughts and hope anyone can use them as it fits their Lives, or Not. I also believe that if we live in a \"Free Country\" & we are a \"Brave People\" then there is room for me to be who I Am as well as You to be who You Are! That there is a way through for us all to have a bedrock of Rights/Opportunities. It will just take some hard choices to be made. I say if You fight for Your Rights, I will fight with You if allowed to do so. Don

May 28th, 2021 10:12

Poem, The ways of the World!
Doggerel Dave said:

Go for it Don, you are on a roll.
You have analyzed the ills of our times so succinctly no one could seriously challenge your argument.

May 28th, 2021 05:21

Poem, The ways of the World!
L. B. Mek said:

this is why, you\'re so awesome
when you eloquently express yourself
calm and collected...!
Brilliant!
\'Within society’s, ills
Only a few seek, a physician
to own-up to our own, bills.

One set of us seems to think in terms of victimization.
With No terms for actualization.
Never prone to introspection.
They pummel the rest of us with ways of direction.
Not once thinking of their own correction.\'

May 28th, 2021 03:53

Poem, The ways of the World!
Goldfinch60 said:

If only we could all see the truth in our society and then had somebody we could trust to create a good world from that truth.

Andy

May 28th, 2021 00:28

Poem, No Not a sex addiction!
Doggerel Dave said:

Short and to the point. You certainly know how to use words as weapons Don.

March 18th, 2021 06:11

Poem, No Not a sex addiction!
Amon said:

okay


March 18th, 2021 05:27

Poem, What does a Woman Want?
L. B. Mek said:

me personally? I am letting a victim of violent crime rest in peace
at least: for a week
and empathising with the loss her immediate family and friends are going through, with that \'archaic\' instinctively: humane, respect for life..
before, I use her memory as some good-fit martyr for reactionary activism..
but hey, if it inspires your nicely rhymed poem, that\'s just another way: for your to convey...
I mean look at how much money the tabloids who literally\' made Princes Diana a \'martyr\': are still profiting, with their monthly \'dedications\', inspired to write by her unfaltering fame,
oh how humane...

March 16th, 2021 04:13

Poem, Men need to Change.
AwHec8 said:

Oh and for those of you who don\'t know my way of thought. Here it is,
I am not a \"good person\" for as long as I can remember I have thought this way. Then upon seeing the Biblical Narrative say this,
Mark 10:17-22 17As Jesus started on his way, a man ran up to him and fell on his knees before him. \"Good teacher,\" he asked, \"what must I do to inherit eternal life?\" 18\"Why do you call me good?\" Jesus answered. \"No one is good-except God alone.
Right there Yeshua is saying, at that point in time, even He was not a \"good person\"

March 15th, 2021 08:19

Poem, Men need to Change.
L. B. Mek said:

agree completely!
but please, dear insightful poet
let us not label \'all men\' in one uniformed reactionary breath..
\'you see, its some of those same \'men\' that took part in the hunt to catch that \'animal\'..
just like its only one batch that\'s\' recalled when factory lines find faults..
let us not paint \'all men\' with that one tarnished brush,
you think I missed your point maybe? possibly, but
if you are not aware of the general disillusionment that\'s suffocating generations of young adult men, maybe you\'ll understand my reason for citing \'qualifier\'s in language\' however toxic and triggering the topic,
when you understand that more \'young adult male\'s\' successfully commit suicide, worldwide - far more!
so society\'s go-to blaming of \'all men\' is fast producing unsavoury results:
that no one wants to discuss
and what do you perceive will be the end result
when all the young and sensitive men, die-out from our society\'s gene pool, who will be left
to write empathetic poems like yours, then? maybe I\'m being dramatic, still
I\'m just saying let us look at \'trending\' issues with a landscape lens, and be tempered in forming our reactionary perspective\'s

March 15th, 2021 06:48

Poem, Men need to Change.
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Don, why cannot all men behave respectfully to women and all other people on this earth?

Andy

March 15th, 2021 01:37

Poem, Men need to Change.
Doggerel Dave said:

Topical - good issue based nugget; I could read it, understood it, liked it, Don.
Now for the rest of your \'rant\' in chewable bits... :-)

March 14th, 2021 19:27

Short Story, And Now a Word From Our Sponsor!
Doggerel Dave said:

Hi Don.I believe we may have had this conversation before - still one more time won\'t hurt:
There\'s so much material in your \'story\' that it becomes almost impossible to digest.
Could you not take one issue at a time and turn each into a short, carefully constructed but punchy poem. Spread them out over different writes - I\'d like to read them then...I could even digest them properly.


March 12th, 2021 17:11

Short Story, And Now a Word From Our Sponsor!
AwHec8 said:

I will be the first to comment on this with my own belief that until I am standing in front of God I don\'t know if I am going to be called out as a person who seeks Truth, Seeks to be on God\'s Side, by Yeshua Himself. So I just be me and wait patiently for the call to come on Home.

Oh and some of this Short Story is kind of tongue in cheek. Like the title \"And Now a Word From Our Sponsor.\" Don

March 12th, 2021 07:29

Song, Call me Home tonight, sweet Jesus.
orchidee said:

Good write Don.

March 2nd, 2021 02:50

Poem, Political Debate in the USA!
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well, structured write, Don.

February 26th, 2021 09:26

Poem, Do You live by the Truth?
Doggerel Dave said:

No going back to the political project then?

February 25th, 2021 19:30

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