Comments received on poems by AwHec8



Wisdom for the Day.
orchidee said:

Good write Aw.

May 29th, 2023 14:48

My prayer for the Day.
2781 said:

He can be found in the lyrics, sending messages to those with ears to hear.

April 26th, 2023 08:49

WTF!
AwHec8 said:

I was thinking more in the line of those who believe in Truth & Love. Not necessarily those who believe in religious dogmatic traditions.
But you are right Doggerel Dave and I could have simply put the word ‘Peoples’ instead of the word ‘Believers.’
Thank You for your comments and especially for sharing your words of wisdom. Don

April 17th, 2023 08:48

WTF!
Doggerel Dave said:

Not musical, but is that the Blues?
A right good little song anyway - if only you wouldn\'t exclude non-believers and allow them an escape too, Don.

April 17th, 2023 08:17

State of Affairs (maybe)
orchidee said:

Now I thought there was something dodgy about him. How can we trust someone with a barnet (hair-do) like that?! lol.

April 6th, 2023 07:40

State of Affairs (maybe)
2781 said:

Absolutely.

April 6th, 2023 03:14

Poem, Living Life
Eileen Clark said:

Hello, this is very moving and it sounds like your living your life well and doing your best. The first half of my life was not good and of course, I was young. The second half and still living it is better. I enjoyed reading your writing, thank you.

February 26th, 2023 15:10

Poem, Women of the Book!
AwHec8 said:

🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Thank You for your comments and yes I do believe us men need to be more disciplined & diligent (living & learning, Loving & being Loved) in our actions and approach to this thing called Life. What I believe and what I taught my children and grandchildren was it counts when we do the lovingly right thing for the right reasons out in the open, But it really counts when we do the same things in the dark. Sincerely Don

January 7th, 2023 11:54

Poem, Women of the Book!
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Yeahh man the women in scriptures were so holy and great and mod women are just not like them though even men are not as great as Prophets today too. Kudos for a great interesting poem.


Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Wish u a happy new yr.

December 29th, 2022 13:47

Poem, Living Life
Doggerel Dave said:

You are in a contemplative mood, Don.
Good to hear from you - been a while.

September 18th, 2022 01:05

Poem: Woman, You Are So Beautiful! To Me. Why can’t we ever Agree?
L. B. Mek said:

I can\'t help wondering
why you assign, you warped image to
\'all women\'
(although your words are relatable)
but, ask us
to get a reference on your, decency
by asking, the few
women
connected to your day to day, existence
..
I can\'t help thinking, there is a discrepancy here..
lol
\'not all Our
daughters, mothers, lovers, sisters
and industry leaders
that happen to be female:
are the same!\'
and thankfully
not all Us men, choose
to express
their \'understandable\' frustrations
like you..
lol
(or else we would all be in serious trouble
like
Women not wanting anything to do with us men
like
50% of women in their later 30\'s being childless
like
humanity\'s population collapse is already, upon us
like
our words and actions have, lasting
consequences)..
good to read your works again
hope all is well, dear poet

June 13th, 2022 07:19

Poem, Truth & Love
orchidee said:

Good write Don.
This is a \'heart procedure\' of sorts, from spirit and soul.
Good wishes for your treatments. Only a good \'heart\' could write something like this - your physical heart too, I hope.
Bit deep that - got headache now, with all that thinking! lol.

May 22nd, 2022 10:46

Poem, A Thought.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A thoughtprovoking poem great to encourage improvement and evolution of our imperfect character. We\'re born perfect but get bad influences growing up thus we need to adopt ways to improve again. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

And
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 06:06

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Rozina said:

Hahaha. An enjoyable funny poem. Thanks.

December 31st, 2021 21:55

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Paul Bell said:

Climbing the pole of success.
He said I would never make it, and goddammit, he was right.
I like dumb questions myself, especially to people in authority who never ever realise they\'re dumb.

December 31st, 2021 11:16

New Year\'s Quandary\'s?
Eugene S. said:

😅 truly enjoyed the anecdotes! Never heard the monkey and the pole.Awesome!!

December 31st, 2021 08:57

Poem/Song, Lately Life Sucks A--!
Accidental Poet said:

Very well penned my friend. Life has it\'s ups and downs, much like a roller coaster ride. But in the end, at least for myself I can say, it\'s a good life. 👍

November 20th, 2021 09:58

Poem/Song, Lately Life Sucks A--!
Goldfinch60 said:

That Paradise is there for us all and love will fill our hearts.

Andy

November 20th, 2021 01:54

Poem, The World has grown Cold? (or maybe another rant of mine!).
Doggerel Dave said:

Yes Don , a rant - but none the worse for that. Your heart, from my point of view, is very much in the right place
The only point I want to make (and boringly I\'ve made it before), is that there is enough material there for half a dozen shortish sharp poems on each separate part of your piece.........
I would appreciate them very much.

August 10th, 2021 18:42

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a lovely lyrical poem with fab song like refrains. A stellar soulful musing rendered in appealing words. Kudos.!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

July 22nd, 2021 11:37

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
Goldfinch60 said:

That cry may be inside you but you can also remember the love she left behind.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:34

Song, Heartache, Heartbreak.
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'m not very musical, and can\'t normally keep a tune, Don - but this one came to me and I felt I could sing it - in my head at least....really really good.
I hope by now your Op is on and all went well. \'Looking forward to another post from you soon.

July 1st, 2021 17:56

Poem, I woke up this morning to get myself in Gear.
Goldfinch60 said:

May that strength be always with you Don.

Andy

June 2nd, 2021 00:55

Poem, I woke up this morning to get myself in Gear.
Doggerel Dave said:

I can fully empathise with your sleep problems, Don. I hope you get a few good nights in now.

June 1st, 2021 21:37

Poem, The ways of the World!
AwHec8 said:

Let me say this in all sincerity, I honestly believe we All carry a piece to this puzzle called Life & living it the best we can in Truth. I also believe that what we do with our piece of wisdom, our blessing is on all of us People as individuals & as a group. As always I put out what are my thoughts and hope anyone can use them as it fits their Lives, or Not. I also believe that if we live in a \"Free Country\" & we are a \"Brave People\" then there is room for me to be who I Am as well as You to be who You Are! That there is a way through for us all to have a bedrock of Rights/Opportunities. It will just take some hard choices to be made. I say if You fight for Your Rights, I will fight with You if allowed to do so. Don

May 28th, 2021 10:12

Poem, The ways of the World!
Doggerel Dave said:

Go for it Don, you are on a roll.
You have analyzed the ills of our times so succinctly no one could seriously challenge your argument.

May 28th, 2021 05:21

Poem, The ways of the World!
L. B. Mek said:

this is why, you\'re so awesome
when you eloquently express yourself
calm and collected...!
Brilliant!
\'Within society’s, ills
Only a few seek, a physician
to own-up to our own, bills.

One set of us seems to think in terms of victimization.
With No terms for actualization.
Never prone to introspection.
They pummel the rest of us with ways of direction.
Not once thinking of their own correction.\'

May 28th, 2021 03:53

Poem, The ways of the World!
Goldfinch60 said:

If only we could all see the truth in our society and then had somebody we could trust to create a good world from that truth.

Andy

May 28th, 2021 00:28

Poem, No Not a sex addiction!
Doggerel Dave said:

Short and to the point. You certainly know how to use words as weapons Don.

March 18th, 2021 06:11

Poem, No Not a sex addiction!
Amon said:

okay


March 18th, 2021 05:27

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