Comments received on poems by AwHec8
An Apology
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you mate. But steady on - don\'t drown in misery....
Take care of yourself, Dave
November 10th, 2020 19:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you mate. But steady on - don\'t drown in misery....
Take care of yourself, Dave
November 10th, 2020 19:19
Poem, Original Sin?
Doggerel Dave said:
So we have two areas of divergent thinking here:
-You believe in the existence of an all loving etc God. I don\'t. I\'ll never get my head around that: how in infinite time and infinite space (think about it!) there could be some super being that loves you and looks after your affairs, and, presumably all other sentient beings in an infinite universe.
= You believe everyone has the right to be who they are. Do you think that the poor, the disenfranchised, the subjects of all manner of social injustice have the ?right? to be like that?
Regards Dave
November 10th, 2020 17:53
Doggerel Dave said:
So we have two areas of divergent thinking here:
-You believe in the existence of an all loving etc God. I don\'t. I\'ll never get my head around that: how in infinite time and infinite space (think about it!) there could be some super being that loves you and looks after your affairs, and, presumably all other sentient beings in an infinite universe.
= You believe everyone has the right to be who they are. Do you think that the poor, the disenfranchised, the subjects of all manner of social injustice have the ?right? to be like that?
Regards Dave
November 10th, 2020 17:53
Poem, Original Sin?
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Don - you know, I almost managed to read most of your last entry. If you could just fine it down some more we could almost have a dialogue - or I might manage to grasp what you are on about. I don\'t believe it would change either of our positions, but we might at least be more understanding of each other.
Kind regards Dave
November 10th, 2020 07:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Don - you know, I almost managed to read most of your last entry. If you could just fine it down some more we could almost have a dialogue - or I might manage to grasp what you are on about. I don\'t believe it would change either of our positions, but we might at least be more understanding of each other.
Kind regards Dave
November 10th, 2020 07:08
Poem, Original Sin?
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Don - \'sorry I intervened. You just carry on. But you won\'t include me. Assuming you, apart from your beliefs, are comparatively harmless (you don\'t carry too many guns, do you?) I will navigate quietly around you and you won\'t score a view from me.
Kindest of regards, Dave
November 10th, 2020 04:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Don - \'sorry I intervened. You just carry on. But you won\'t include me. Assuming you, apart from your beliefs, are comparatively harmless (you don\'t carry too many guns, do you?) I will navigate quietly around you and you won\'t score a view from me.
Kindest of regards, Dave
November 10th, 2020 04:26
Poem, Original Sin?
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh please - you should realise that \"God made man in his own image\" is really an inversion of the truth, which was that man made god in his own image.
And the rest, as they say, is history.
November 9th, 2020 20:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh please - you should realise that \"God made man in his own image\" is really an inversion of the truth, which was that man made god in his own image.
And the rest, as they say, is history.
November 9th, 2020 20:35
Poem, Original Sin?
orchidee said:
I\'m not disagreeing with any of this. I say - there has to be some sort of \'original sin\', to give a reason for the need of salvation.
Whoops - even St Paul blames it on Eve, if it is \'blame\', saying \'Eve being in transgression (sin) was the first to be deceived\'!
Would Adam have resisted the temptation if the serpent had gone to him first?!
November 9th, 2020 15:13
orchidee said:
I\'m not disagreeing with any of this. I say - there has to be some sort of \'original sin\', to give a reason for the need of salvation.
Whoops - even St Paul blames it on Eve, if it is \'blame\', saying \'Eve being in transgression (sin) was the first to be deceived\'!
Would Adam have resisted the temptation if the serpent had gone to him first?!
November 9th, 2020 15:13
Poem, Original Sin?
AwHec8 said:
Hey there dusk arising, Rather than our regular diatribe of who is what. How about you answer 1 question, kinda offbeat but within the realm of this Poem?
Why did the serpent go for the woman instead of the man? Of course within the Biblical Story as you so eloquently put it. Don
November 9th, 2020 13:57
AwHec8 said:
Hey there dusk arising, Rather than our regular diatribe of who is what. How about you answer 1 question, kinda offbeat but within the realm of this Poem?
Why did the serpent go for the woman instead of the man? Of course within the Biblical Story as you so eloquently put it. Don
November 9th, 2020 13:57
Poem, Original Sin?
dusk arising said:
Blimey, u don\'t half rely on some dodgy background stories. Adam and eve story... who wrote it... how long after their death... was any kind of writing available. All questions which make the adam and eve story as ridiculous as the book of genesis. All was an idea created by men many many many years after the story was supposed to have taken place. Utter crap believed by the gullible and the brainwashed who are afraid to think freely. Probably because they have been encouraged to live in fear of god rather than celebrating the truth of god.
November 9th, 2020 13:07
dusk arising said:
Blimey, u don\'t half rely on some dodgy background stories. Adam and eve story... who wrote it... how long after their death... was any kind of writing available. All questions which make the adam and eve story as ridiculous as the book of genesis. All was an idea created by men many many many years after the story was supposed to have taken place. Utter crap believed by the gullible and the brainwashed who are afraid to think freely. Probably because they have been encouraged to live in fear of god rather than celebrating the truth of god.
November 9th, 2020 13:07
Song, It’s a 12 o’clock World
AwHec8 said:
Thank You for such a Great Commentary. Don
November 9th, 2020 11:07
AwHec8 said:
Thank You for such a Great Commentary. Don
November 9th, 2020 11:07
Song, It’s a 12 o’clock World
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words, for yes the world does seem to be singing off key now eh for many. I liked how you rhymed chains with pains, summed up life in expressing your great muse and feelings. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words, for yes the world does seem to be singing off key now eh for many. I liked how you rhymed chains with pains, summed up life in expressing your great muse and feelings. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:03
Poem, What I do not know.
dusk arising said:
Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of riddles suited to an old age when un educated man was gullible enough to regard a written word as true. God did not write those words of scripture, it was a man.
Do you think god created you for you to look for answers he held outside your understanding or did
he create you to do what men do?
Did god give a man a penis so that he can claim to be holy by being celibate or did he intent it for procreation?
Which one of those is natural and gods intent?
October 24th, 2020 18:10
dusk arising said:
Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of riddles suited to an old age when un educated man was gullible enough to regard a written word as true. God did not write those words of scripture, it was a man.
Do you think god created you for you to look for answers he held outside your understanding or did
he create you to do what men do?
Did god give a man a penis so that he can claim to be holy by being celibate or did he intent it for procreation?
Which one of those is natural and gods intent?
October 24th, 2020 18:10
Poem, My Senator!
Goldfinch60 said:
The UK is like that at the moment, this weirdo with the crap hair is destroying our country.
Andy
September 23rd, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The UK is like that at the moment, this weirdo with the crap hair is destroying our country.
Andy
September 23rd, 2020 00:26
Poem, Money, Power, Privilege!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words AH, it has taken this pandemic to show that there are so many good people out there to help others and not requiring any reward.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words AH, it has taken this pandemic to show that there are so many good people out there to help others and not requiring any reward.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 00:13
Poem, LOVE?
Goldfinch60 said:
Don, true love takes over your life in a way that you will never forget and will always be with you. One day it will come to you.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Don, true love takes over your life in a way that you will never forget and will always be with you. One day it will come to you.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:49
Poem, LOVE?
dusk arising said:
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you everything.
September 12th, 2020 10:39
dusk arising said:
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you everything.
September 12th, 2020 10:39
Poem, VP Pence Hypocrite much?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical powerhouses and religious extremists. You expressed yourself awesomely, and the last stanza was one of my faves. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical powerhouses and religious extremists. You expressed yourself awesomely, and the last stanza was one of my faves. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:34
Poem, Day by Day
L. B. Mek said:
liked the author comment, so quirky and true, made me laugh,
really appreciated the positivity in the poem, refreshing and with a nice rhythmic flow as well
September 10th, 2020 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
liked the author comment, so quirky and true, made me laugh,
really appreciated the positivity in the poem, refreshing and with a nice rhythmic flow as well
September 10th, 2020 02:38
Poem, Day by Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, at my age now each day I get up I am grateful and know that all will be well.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, at my age now each day I get up I am grateful and know that all will be well.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:36
Poem, Day by Day
dusk arising said:
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output and you know it.
I much prefer your words when you do not include christian religion stuff. You\'ll take that comment in your own way but i hope you see it as a positive thing.
September 9th, 2020 12:29
dusk arising said:
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output and you know it.
I much prefer your words when you do not include christian religion stuff. You\'ll take that comment in your own way but i hope you see it as a positive thing.
September 9th, 2020 12:29
Poem, Day by Day
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Was the poo metaphorical, symbolic, or illusional? Or the real thing? Watch your step! lol.
September 9th, 2020 09:42
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Was the poo metaphorical, symbolic, or illusional? Or the real thing? Watch your step! lol.
September 9th, 2020 09:42
Poem, Day by Day
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DON - The two important things are to *Walk in the Spirit* & *To think positively in ALL circumstances* ~ AMEN ! Please check *Farmers & Poets* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
September 9th, 2020 09:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DON - The two important things are to *Walk in the Spirit* & *To think positively in ALL circumstances* ~ AMEN ! Please check *Farmers & Poets* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
September 9th, 2020 09:28
Poem, Day by Day
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff for many reasons, thanks for the giggle.
September 9th, 2020 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff for many reasons, thanks for the giggle.
September 9th, 2020 08:36
Poem, US Citizenship or Not!
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy what Money can do...
that is why Socrates died as a willing martyr: disclaiming the reliability in a democracy, where anyone can take the reigns... anyone, anyone: anyone!
though usually, it turns out to never be the right one - for the much downtrodden majority in our so-called: civilised society
August 31st, 2020 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy what Money can do...
that is why Socrates died as a willing martyr: disclaiming the reliability in a democracy, where anyone can take the reigns... anyone, anyone: anyone!
though usually, it turns out to never be the right one - for the much downtrodden majority in our so-called: civilised society
August 31st, 2020 03:55
Poem, US Citizenship or Not!
dusk arising said:
Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow his every dictate as sheep.
Those christians among you shall know the purpose of sheep in the true chistain way.... to follow blindly no matter what a load of bollocks christianity dishes out to you.
August 30th, 2020 21:35
dusk arising said:
Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow his every dictate as sheep.
Those christians among you shall know the purpose of sheep in the true chistain way.... to follow blindly no matter what a load of bollocks christianity dishes out to you.
August 30th, 2020 21:35
Poem, America WTF!?
dusk arising said:
All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human frailty rules each one of us. We are not all if the intelligencia. We are humanity in all it\'s guises, as god created in his image.
A major fault could be identified in the second ammendment but there are those would rightfully argue both ways.
It is good that true americans should write your words today. Yet control will lie in the outcome, not the reasoning. Long suffering blemishes on eastern civilisation may be meeting their melting point in these years.
Today we see the true test of western democracy in USA.
August 27th, 2020 18:42
dusk arising said:
All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human frailty rules each one of us. We are not all if the intelligencia. We are humanity in all it\'s guises, as god created in his image.
A major fault could be identified in the second ammendment but there are those would rightfully argue both ways.
It is good that true americans should write your words today. Yet control will lie in the outcome, not the reasoning. Long suffering blemishes on eastern civilisation may be meeting their melting point in these years.
Today we see the true test of western democracy in USA.
August 27th, 2020 18:42
Poem, America WTF!?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Dear Brother in Christ ~ I weep for GODS Own Country !
As far as GUNS are concerned The fault is NOT in your STARS but in yourselves that you are underlings with your STUPID *Wild West Gun Laws* ! 330 million US Citizens & 330 million Guns ~ One for every US Man Woman & Child ! In 2019 38,000 US Citizens were killed by GUN Thats more than one for every 10,000 of the population. In the UK (because GUNS are illegal) it was 100 X less. Thats a big difference considering our two Societies are very similar ! Jesus carrying a GUN is Blasphemy ! There are US Christians who own a GUN whose argument is *The only answer to a BAD MAN with a GUN is a GOOD MAN with a GUN* What America needs is A PRESIDENT who would have the BOTTLE to make GUNS ILLEGAL and that sure wont be *TRIGGER HAPPY TRUMP* WE hope & pray he wont get a SECOND TERM !
Thanks for sharing a very interesting diatribe !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & 🧡💙🤎
August 27th, 2020 11:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Dear Brother in Christ ~ I weep for GODS Own Country !
As far as GUNS are concerned The fault is NOT in your STARS but in yourselves that you are underlings with your STUPID *Wild West Gun Laws* ! 330 million US Citizens & 330 million Guns ~ One for every US Man Woman & Child ! In 2019 38,000 US Citizens were killed by GUN Thats more than one for every 10,000 of the population. In the UK (because GUNS are illegal) it was 100 X less. Thats a big difference considering our two Societies are very similar ! Jesus carrying a GUN is Blasphemy ! There are US Christians who own a GUN whose argument is *The only answer to a BAD MAN with a GUN is a GOOD MAN with a GUN* What America needs is A PRESIDENT who would have the BOTTLE to make GUNS ILLEGAL and that sure wont be *TRIGGER HAPPY TRUMP* WE hope & pray he wont get a SECOND TERM !
Thanks for sharing a very interesting diatribe !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & 🧡💙🤎
August 27th, 2020 11:02
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