Comments received on poems by AwHec8
Song, It’s a 12 o’clock World
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words, for yes the world does seem to be singing off key now eh for many. I liked how you rhymed chains with pains, summed up life in expressing your great muse and feelings. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:03
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fabulous lyrical poem and I was admiring the creative refrain words, for yes the world does seem to be singing off key now eh for many. I liked how you rhymed chains with pains, summed up life in expressing your great muse and feelings. Kudos!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem here. Thanks.
November 9th, 2020 10:03
Poem, What I do not know.
dusk arising said:
Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of riddles suited to an old age when un educated man was gullible enough to regard a written word as true. God did not write those words of scripture, it was a man.
Do you think god created you for you to look for answers he held outside your understanding or did
he create you to do what men do?
Did god give a man a penis so that he can claim to be holy by being celibate or did he intent it for procreation?
Which one of those is natural and gods intent?
October 24th, 2020 18:10
dusk arising said:
Looking for a meaning in an old book is wasting time. It\'s full of riddles suited to an old age when un educated man was gullible enough to regard a written word as true. God did not write those words of scripture, it was a man.
Do you think god created you for you to look for answers he held outside your understanding or did
he create you to do what men do?
Did god give a man a penis so that he can claim to be holy by being celibate or did he intent it for procreation?
Which one of those is natural and gods intent?
October 24th, 2020 18:10
Poem, My Senator!
Goldfinch60 said:
The UK is like that at the moment, this weirdo with the crap hair is destroying our country.
Andy
September 23rd, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The UK is like that at the moment, this weirdo with the crap hair is destroying our country.
Andy
September 23rd, 2020 00:26
Poem, Money, Power, Privilege!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words AH, it has taken this pandemic to show that there are so many good people out there to help others and not requiring any reward.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words AH, it has taken this pandemic to show that there are so many good people out there to help others and not requiring any reward.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 00:13
Poem, LOVE?
Goldfinch60 said:
Don, true love takes over your life in a way that you will never forget and will always be with you. One day it will come to you.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Don, true love takes over your life in a way that you will never forget and will always be with you. One day it will come to you.
Andy
September 13th, 2020 00:49
Poem, LOVE?
dusk arising said:
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you everything.
September 12th, 2020 10:39
dusk arising said:
Methinks there is much about love to learn for you. Love will teach you everything.
September 12th, 2020 10:39
Poem, VP Pence Hypocrite much?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical powerhouses and religious extremists. You expressed yourself awesomely, and the last stanza was one of my faves. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:34
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a strong hardhitting slam type lament against the sociopolitical powerhouses and religious extremists. You expressed yourself awesomely, and the last stanza was one of my faves. Kudos!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:34
Poem, Day by Day
L. B. Mek said:
liked the author comment, so quirky and true, made me laugh,
really appreciated the positivity in the poem, refreshing and with a nice rhythmic flow as well
September 10th, 2020 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
liked the author comment, so quirky and true, made me laugh,
really appreciated the positivity in the poem, refreshing and with a nice rhythmic flow as well
September 10th, 2020 02:38
Poem, Day by Day
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, at my age now each day I get up I am grateful and know that all will be well.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words, at my age now each day I get up I am grateful and know that all will be well.
Andy
September 10th, 2020 01:36
Poem, Day by Day
dusk arising said:
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output and you know it.
I much prefer your words when you do not include christian religion stuff. You\'ll take that comment in your own way but i hope you see it as a positive thing.
September 9th, 2020 12:29
dusk arising said:
Good words of wisdom there. You have a lot to give in your poetic output and you know it.
I much prefer your words when you do not include christian religion stuff. You\'ll take that comment in your own way but i hope you see it as a positive thing.
September 9th, 2020 12:29
Poem, Day by Day
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Was the poo metaphorical, symbolic, or illusional? Or the real thing? Watch your step! lol.
September 9th, 2020 09:42
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Was the poo metaphorical, symbolic, or illusional? Or the real thing? Watch your step! lol.
September 9th, 2020 09:42
Poem, Day by Day
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DON - The two important things are to *Walk in the Spirit* & *To think positively in ALL circumstances* ~ AMEN ! Please check *Farmers & Poets* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
September 9th, 2020 09:28
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi DON - The two important things are to *Walk in the Spirit* & *To think positively in ALL circumstances* ~ AMEN ! Please check *Farmers & Poets* Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love A & B & Smokey ! ! !
September 9th, 2020 09:28
Poem, Day by Day
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff for many reasons, thanks for the giggle.
September 9th, 2020 08:36
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant stuff for many reasons, thanks for the giggle.
September 9th, 2020 08:36
Poem, US Citizenship or Not!
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy what Money can do...
that is why Socrates died as a willing martyr: disclaiming the reliability in a democracy, where anyone can take the reigns... anyone, anyone: anyone!
though usually, it turns out to never be the right one - for the much downtrodden majority in our so-called: civilised society
August 31st, 2020 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy what Money can do...
that is why Socrates died as a willing martyr: disclaiming the reliability in a democracy, where anyone can take the reigns... anyone, anyone: anyone!
though usually, it turns out to never be the right one - for the much downtrodden majority in our so-called: civilised society
August 31st, 2020 03:55
Poem, US Citizenship or Not!
dusk arising said:
Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow his every dictate as sheep.
Those christians among you shall know the purpose of sheep in the true chistain way.... to follow blindly no matter what a load of bollocks christianity dishes out to you.
August 30th, 2020 21:35
dusk arising said:
Trump is the new deity of USA. Ye shall give him due ignorance and follow his every dictate as sheep.
Those christians among you shall know the purpose of sheep in the true chistain way.... to follow blindly no matter what a load of bollocks christianity dishes out to you.
August 30th, 2020 21:35
Poem, America WTF!?
dusk arising said:
All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human frailty rules each one of us. We are not all if the intelligencia. We are humanity in all it\'s guises, as god created in his image.
A major fault could be identified in the second ammendment but there are those would rightfully argue both ways.
It is good that true americans should write your words today. Yet control will lie in the outcome, not the reasoning. Long suffering blemishes on eastern civilisation may be meeting their melting point in these years.
Today we see the true test of western democracy in USA.
August 27th, 2020 18:42
dusk arising said:
All in all, humanity is not ready for true democracy because the human frailty rules each one of us. We are not all if the intelligencia. We are humanity in all it\'s guises, as god created in his image.
A major fault could be identified in the second ammendment but there are those would rightfully argue both ways.
It is good that true americans should write your words today. Yet control will lie in the outcome, not the reasoning. Long suffering blemishes on eastern civilisation may be meeting their melting point in these years.
Today we see the true test of western democracy in USA.
August 27th, 2020 18:42
Poem, America WTF!?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Dear Brother in Christ ~ I weep for GODS Own Country !
As far as GUNS are concerned The fault is NOT in your STARS but in yourselves that you are underlings with your STUPID *Wild West Gun Laws* ! 330 million US Citizens & 330 million Guns ~ One for every US Man Woman & Child ! In 2019 38,000 US Citizens were killed by GUN Thats more than one for every 10,000 of the population. In the UK (because GUNS are illegal) it was 100 X less. Thats a big difference considering our two Societies are very similar ! Jesus carrying a GUN is Blasphemy ! There are US Christians who own a GUN whose argument is *The only answer to a BAD MAN with a GUN is a GOOD MAN with a GUN* What America needs is A PRESIDENT who would have the BOTTLE to make GUNS ILLEGAL and that sure wont be *TRIGGER HAPPY TRUMP* WE hope & pray he wont get a SECOND TERM !
Thanks for sharing a very interesting diatribe !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & 🧡💙🤎
August 27th, 2020 11:02
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Dear Brother in Christ ~ I weep for GODS Own Country !
As far as GUNS are concerned The fault is NOT in your STARS but in yourselves that you are underlings with your STUPID *Wild West Gun Laws* ! 330 million US Citizens & 330 million Guns ~ One for every US Man Woman & Child ! In 2019 38,000 US Citizens were killed by GUN Thats more than one for every 10,000 of the population. In the UK (because GUNS are illegal) it was 100 X less. Thats a big difference considering our two Societies are very similar ! Jesus carrying a GUN is Blasphemy ! There are US Christians who own a GUN whose argument is *The only answer to a BAD MAN with a GUN is a GOOD MAN with a GUN* What America needs is A PRESIDENT who would have the BOTTLE to make GUNS ILLEGAL and that sure wont be *TRIGGER HAPPY TRUMP* WE hope & pray he wont get a SECOND TERM !
Thanks for sharing a very interesting diatribe !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela & 🧡💙🤎
August 27th, 2020 11:02
Poem, Fool or Wise in the USA?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ COALITIONS (2 or more Political Parties working together) can work but in my experience ~ it results in Bland Politics & compromise policies. It is useful in the time of WAR. Angela tend to vote for PERSON rather than the PARTY although politically weare more LEFT than RIGHT ! What we are praying for (& voting for) is more Committed Christians in Politics - Producing more Trust & Justice.
The only really Committed Christian elected as President of the USA in recent Years was Jimmy Carter ! He only got one Term and was considered inefective ! He replaced Ford (An accidental President) - who replaced Nixon ! Jimmy was replced by Ronnie Regan & Nancy. To some extent (especially concerning Trump !) American gets the President it Deserves ! Billy Graham was the Best President ~ You never had !
Angela & I are Students of 20th C American and we are praying that Jo Biden will be elected in November. Mike Pence (VP) is an Evangelical Christian its a pity he isn*t running
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛
August 24th, 2020 14:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ COALITIONS (2 or more Political Parties working together) can work but in my experience ~ it results in Bland Politics & compromise policies. It is useful in the time of WAR. Angela tend to vote for PERSON rather than the PARTY although politically weare more LEFT than RIGHT ! What we are praying for (& voting for) is more Committed Christians in Politics - Producing more Trust & Justice.
The only really Committed Christian elected as President of the USA in recent Years was Jimmy Carter ! He only got one Term and was considered inefective ! He replaced Ford (An accidental President) - who replaced Nixon ! Jimmy was replced by Ronnie Regan & Nancy. To some extent (especially concerning Trump !) American gets the President it Deserves ! Billy Graham was the Best President ~ You never had !
Angela & I are Students of 20th C American and we are praying that Jo Biden will be elected in November. Mike Pence (VP) is an Evangelical Christian its a pity he isn*t running
Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛
August 24th, 2020 14:38
Poem, Fool or Wise in the USA?
dusk arising said:
Sadly we are ruled by human nature Don. Those of us near the bottom of the greasy pole agree 100% but those in power are seduced by the bait of whats available to them if they bend the rules that teeny weeny bit. And so the ball of temptation starts to roll.
So long as we are human we shall be fickle.......
Just remember that we are created fickle in gods image.... it\'s a part of our struggle.
August 24th, 2020 09:47
dusk arising said:
Sadly we are ruled by human nature Don. Those of us near the bottom of the greasy pole agree 100% but those in power are seduced by the bait of whats available to them if they bend the rules that teeny weeny bit. And so the ball of temptation starts to roll.
So long as we are human we shall be fickle.......
Just remember that we are created fickle in gods image.... it\'s a part of our struggle.
August 24th, 2020 09:47
Poem, Questions?
dusk arising said:
We already DO have a relationship with our creator.... or have you missed that basic reality?
August 23rd, 2020 13:25
dusk arising said:
We already DO have a relationship with our creator.... or have you missed that basic reality?
August 23rd, 2020 13:25
Poem, Time for a Christ Change
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening DON ~ Thanks for reminding all the Christians on MPS of the need for a REGULAR CHRIST CHANGE ~ Just like an engine needs a OIL CHANGE ! This enbles us to Witness day by day (V2) Jesus not only changes our day but our whole lives. To become a Christian we need to be Born Again (V4) This give us *Peace with God* and *Access into Gods Grace* (V5) AMEN ! We all need an infilling of Gods HOLY SPIRIT each New Day. Some CHRISTIANS wil be alive when Christ Returns & we will be changed FOREVER & FOREVER with the LORD (V8 ! Thanks for sharing & caring ! Please check our SITE & our FUSION ~ Click on deveLoping to add a Poem to the FUSION ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to All in Christs Name
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 6th, 2020 16:42
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening DON ~ Thanks for reminding all the Christians on MPS of the need for a REGULAR CHRIST CHANGE ~ Just like an engine needs a OIL CHANGE ! This enbles us to Witness day by day (V2) Jesus not only changes our day but our whole lives. To become a Christian we need to be Born Again (V4) This give us *Peace with God* and *Access into Gods Grace* (V5) AMEN ! We all need an infilling of Gods HOLY SPIRIT each New Day. Some CHRISTIANS wil be alive when Christ Returns & we will be changed FOREVER & FOREVER with the LORD (V8 ! Thanks for sharing & caring ! Please check our SITE & our FUSION ~ Click on deveLoping to add a Poem to the FUSION ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Joy & Peace to All in Christs Name
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat 💛💛💛
August 6th, 2020 16:42
Poem, Time for a Christ Change
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Friendly people... ahh, yes, some false teachers can be friendly too, to lead us astray. There are genuine friendly, true teachers as well though.
August 6th, 2020 10:15
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
Friendly people... ahh, yes, some false teachers can be friendly too, to lead us astray. There are genuine friendly, true teachers as well though.
August 6th, 2020 10:15
Poem, Time for a Christ Change
dusk arising said:
Great, another one in your tooth fairy series.
August 6th, 2020 08:58
dusk arising said:
Great, another one in your tooth fairy series.
August 6th, 2020 08:58
Poem, Yes He Rides
AwHec8 said:
Thank You Andy. Amen and Amen to your lovely words. Don
August 5th, 2020 04:41
AwHec8 said:
Thank You Andy. Amen and Amen to your lovely words. Don
August 5th, 2020 04:41
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