Comments received on poems by AwHec8
Reality in the USA!
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned, is the word that comes to mind, lol
still, you\'ve included some pertinent truth\'s that needs to be shared, but like Jerry and Dave recommend, you could untangle two or three highly impactful write\'s from this - eventually, when that maddening frustration eases..
but I\'ll just say I understand your need to rant very well and when done once in a while, its a healthy way of dealing with life\'s stressful elements..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 25th, 2021 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned, is the word that comes to mind, lol
still, you\'ve included some pertinent truth\'s that needs to be shared, but like Jerry and Dave recommend, you could untangle two or three highly impactful write\'s from this - eventually, when that maddening frustration eases..
but I\'ll just say I understand your need to rant very well and when done once in a while, its a healthy way of dealing with life\'s stressful elements..
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 25th, 2021 05:17
Reality in the USA!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote with Jerry here, Don. a series of half a dozen small poetic gems spread over a period would be very punchy and valuable.
February 24th, 2021 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d vote with Jerry here, Don. a series of half a dozen small poetic gems spread over a period would be very punchy and valuable.
February 24th, 2021 17:28
Reality in the USA!
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material for some good poetry here. A.H.
February 24th, 2021 08:49
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of material for some good poetry here. A.H.
February 24th, 2021 08:49
Poem, The Night We Met
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Don, sometimes we long for the past but must move forward to the future.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 15:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Don, sometimes we long for the past but must move forward to the future.
Andy
February 20th, 2021 15:59
Poem, The Night We Met
jarcher54 said:
Take me forward to the innocent past... a very bittersweet way of saying it!
February 20th, 2021 12:42
jarcher54 said:
Take me forward to the innocent past... a very bittersweet way of saying it!
February 20th, 2021 12:42
Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World?
L. B. Mek said:
\'Speak Truth in Love,
By Seeking Love in Truth.
Care about, Care for those,
Who God truly Loves, ALL!
Period.\'
now this on t-shirt is worth displaying with pride,
indeed all, means All: just three letters, like the deity they claim to fear..
I feel your passion, though I will just say - that most modern day news outlets (in all forms) are propaganda vehicles,
utilised for delivering polarising political ideologies and so all their truth\'s are delivered tailor-made by political vindictively shallow mind\'s..
its all a game, so that we lowly laymen - majority, can never know what to interpret as veracity\'s words and they
get to keep us on our back foot, hesitant - to take action: for in every direction we see pitfalls looming large..
until, that is we simply \'Choose\' to stop listening: to all the BS, emanating from every political platform and we just look outside to the reality on our doorstep and start to see veracity with our own eyes, then and only then can we truly begin to try and change that bleak horizon in our vision..
(sorry if you find my words offensive or disrespectful in any way, just sharing my 2 cents worth, please ignore it if you want,
but I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
February 19th, 2021 05:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Speak Truth in Love,
By Seeking Love in Truth.
Care about, Care for those,
Who God truly Loves, ALL!
Period.\'
now this on t-shirt is worth displaying with pride,
indeed all, means All: just three letters, like the deity they claim to fear..
I feel your passion, though I will just say - that most modern day news outlets (in all forms) are propaganda vehicles,
utilised for delivering polarising political ideologies and so all their truth\'s are delivered tailor-made by political vindictively shallow mind\'s..
its all a game, so that we lowly laymen - majority, can never know what to interpret as veracity\'s words and they
get to keep us on our back foot, hesitant - to take action: for in every direction we see pitfalls looming large..
until, that is we simply \'Choose\' to stop listening: to all the BS, emanating from every political platform and we just look outside to the reality on our doorstep and start to see veracity with our own eyes, then and only then can we truly begin to try and change that bleak horizon in our vision..
(sorry if you find my words offensive or disrespectful in any way, just sharing my 2 cents worth, please ignore it if you want,
but I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply dear poet)
February 19th, 2021 05:34
Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World?
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth is that things that so many of us do not hear on the news, there is a truth out there but it is so hard to find, just believe in yourself.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Truth is that things that so many of us do not hear on the news, there is a truth out there but it is so hard to find, just believe in yourself.
Andy
February 19th, 2021 02:09
Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World?
Doggerel Dave said:
Change the channel seems like a good move, Don.
Have to get your news from somewhere....
\"every 1 of us carries a piece of the puzzle to this thing called Life.\"
Thumbs up there, mate - but mostly only a piece. A multiplicity of views required here...
February 18th, 2021 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Change the channel seems like a good move, Don.
Have to get your news from somewhere....
\"every 1 of us carries a piece of the puzzle to this thing called Life.\"
Thumbs up there, mate - but mostly only a piece. A multiplicity of views required here...
February 18th, 2021 17:14
Poem, Reality in America. Maybe the World?
heatherbee said:
My partner says the same of bbc news here his words full of shit but hey I chose right now not to watch the news we are in a lockdown here life is depressing enough without shit news. So may be a world wide thing
February 18th, 2021 16:53
heatherbee said:
My partner says the same of bbc news here his words full of shit but hey I chose right now not to watch the news we are in a lockdown here life is depressing enough without shit news. So may be a world wide thing
February 18th, 2021 16:53
Poem, Yeshua is Coming!
orchidee said:
Yep! Good write Don. Erm, a different style to mine. Some of mine is a bit \'ye olden times!\' heehee.
February 17th, 2021 14:26
orchidee said:
Yep! Good write Don. Erm, a different style to mine. Some of mine is a bit \'ye olden times!\' heehee.
February 17th, 2021 14:26
Poem, Who are You Really?
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
You are so right, tough times or even happy times can reveal ans unveil the true inner self and core, thats what i understood from this great superb poem. You express in a very fab thought-provoking way wow. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
You are so right, tough times or even happy times can reveal ans unveil the true inner self and core, thats what i understood from this great superb poem. You express in a very fab thought-provoking way wow. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 12:13
Poem, Who are You Really?
L. B. Mek said:
empowering sentiments of courage, worded wonderfully...
thanks for sharing dear Poet (liked your interpretation of Einstein\'s quote on insanity, btw)
February 8th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
empowering sentiments of courage, worded wonderfully...
thanks for sharing dear Poet (liked your interpretation of Einstein\'s quote on insanity, btw)
February 8th, 2021 06:02
Poem, Who are You Really?
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing circumstances but the real me can be seen by those who care.
Andy
February 8th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
We all wear masks in differing circumstances but the real me can be seen by those who care.
Andy
February 8th, 2021 01:30
Poem, Who are You Really?
Doggerel Dave said:
Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close and value those you know and love.
February 7th, 2021 18:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Some well posed questions there, Don. I think you are right - stay close and value those you know and love.
February 7th, 2021 18:24
Poem, Ode to the Pain
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked your comments - very pertinent.
February 5th, 2021 17:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Liked your comments - very pertinent.
February 5th, 2021 17:00
Song, Holding out for Yeshua The Christ.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good edit Don.
January 29th, 2021 16:21
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good edit Don.
January 29th, 2021 16:21
Poem, I got 1 hand in this world & 1 hand in Yeshua\'s oh yeah!
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good song Don.
January 27th, 2021 17:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good song Don.
January 27th, 2021 17:55
Poem, I got 1 hand in this world & 1 hand in Yeshua\'s oh yeah!
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
January 27th, 2021 14:32
orchidee said:
Good write Don.
January 27th, 2021 14:32
Poem, May it Be!
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all find ways to cope with the troubles in our lives Don, true words you have written.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all find ways to cope with the troubles in our lives Don, true words you have written.
Andy
January 12th, 2021 02:13
Song, A Psalm of Mine inspired by David’s Psalms,
Amon said:
I hope this your praise has reached straight to the throne of God and angels will sing with you, Good write
December 17th, 2020 06:22
Amon said:
I hope this your praise has reached straight to the throne of God and angels will sing with you, Good write
December 17th, 2020 06:22
Song, A Psalm of Mine inspired by David’s Psalms,
orchidee said:
Good write anyway Don.
December 16th, 2020 07:28
orchidee said:
Good write anyway Don.
December 16th, 2020 07:28
Poem, Where is the Love?
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Mate - thought you were going to reform.
Seems little point in plugging God and Jesus here if those with similar belief are guilty of all the sins you elaborate in your comments.
Indeed not where is love? - but where (in your frame of reference) is God? Has to be a name, a slogan without power if that lot carry on as you say.
So decide what you want to do, where you want to direct your anger, who you want to change.
Maybe it\'s facebook as dusk suggests, or join a political movement (note I didn\'t mention \'party\') because you are on a hiding to nothing at MPS.
Kind regards, Dave
December 15th, 2020 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
Come on Mate - thought you were going to reform.
Seems little point in plugging God and Jesus here if those with similar belief are guilty of all the sins you elaborate in your comments.
Indeed not where is love? - but where (in your frame of reference) is God? Has to be a name, a slogan without power if that lot carry on as you say.
So decide what you want to do, where you want to direct your anger, who you want to change.
Maybe it\'s facebook as dusk suggests, or join a political movement (note I didn\'t mention \'party\') because you are on a hiding to nothing at MPS.
Kind regards, Dave
December 15th, 2020 01:19
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