Comments received on poems by BrokenWordsPoet
The Last Pickle in the Jar
baj-a said:
lol! left me with a smile! yep! we were all young once and this poem took me back to some of the simpler things of 'those good old days :-)'
March 24th, 2013 07:00
baj-a said:
lol! left me with a smile! yep! we were all young once and this poem took me back to some of the simpler things of 'those good old days :-)'
March 24th, 2013 07:00
The Last Pickle in the Jar
diamonddagger said:
Very nostalgic and sweet (or should I say dill) poem. I enjoyed it very much.
March 24th, 2013 00:15
diamonddagger said:
Very nostalgic and sweet (or should I say dill) poem. I enjoyed it very much.
March 24th, 2013 00:15
The Last Pickle in the Jar
sokibgb said:
I did the same thing as a child and can relate toyour poem as well.
Thanks for sharing, soki
March 23rd, 2013 10:31
sokibgb said:
I did the same thing as a child and can relate toyour poem as well.
Thanks for sharing, soki
March 23rd, 2013 10:31
Writing on Walls
diamonddagger said:
Awesome poem!!!! I enjoy rating people if I can give them a 9 or a 10 but I hate hurting someones feelings with a low rating so. If I see a lot of spelling errors and i's and u's I just comment without rating.
March 16th, 2013 12:21
diamonddagger said:
Awesome poem!!!! I enjoy rating people if I can give them a 9 or a 10 but I hate hurting someones feelings with a low rating so. If I see a lot of spelling errors and i's and u's I just comment without rating.
March 16th, 2013 12:21
To Be Me
baj-a said:
your poem tells so much of human feelings and the confusion of being who we are and what we think others want us to be. that time of discovering we just want to be ourselves and to learn that everyone won't love us as we are but there are many who will and do and those are the ones we want in our lives. a truly inspiring poem.
March 16th, 2013 08:22
baj-a said:
your poem tells so much of human feelings and the confusion of being who we are and what we think others want us to be. that time of discovering we just want to be ourselves and to learn that everyone won't love us as we are but there are many who will and do and those are the ones we want in our lives. a truly inspiring poem.
March 16th, 2013 08:22
To Be Me
diamonddagger said:
Wonderful poem. I especially love the last line. It is the way of people. It's great to see a child grow up to be themselves instead of what their peers want from them. Have a happy day. Diamond
March 15th, 2013 18:24
diamonddagger said:
Wonderful poem. I especially love the last line. It is the way of people. It's great to see a child grow up to be themselves instead of what their peers want from them. Have a happy day. Diamond
March 15th, 2013 18:24
To Be Me
sokibgb said:
Beautiful poem. Truthful and sincere. Everyone is born with the human right to choose their destinies and be themselves. Just like we did and our parents did. Our children and all the generations to come have the same right Let's teach them good values and give them our trust to make the right choices, for them, which is exactly what my parents did for me and God bless them for it. soki
March 15th, 2013 13:57
sokibgb said:
Beautiful poem. Truthful and sincere. Everyone is born with the human right to choose their destinies and be themselves. Just like we did and our parents did. Our children and all the generations to come have the same right Let's teach them good values and give them our trust to make the right choices, for them, which is exactly what my parents did for me and God bless them for it. soki
March 15th, 2013 13:57
Writing on Walls
baj-a said:
wow! talk about the power of words! so much emotion in this poem that it leaves this readers mind as swirled as the writing on the wall.
March 15th, 2013 07:59
baj-a said:
wow! talk about the power of words! so much emotion in this poem that it leaves this readers mind as swirled as the writing on the wall.
March 15th, 2013 07:59
Untitled
diamonddagger said:
good job relating how it is for the poet. I totally understand!!! I sit with a piece of paper for a half an hour sometimes and can't think of a word. Then suddenly it'll hit me and it comes pouring out. Have a happy day. Diamond
March 11th, 2013 20:02
diamonddagger said:
good job relating how it is for the poet. I totally understand!!! I sit with a piece of paper for a half an hour sometimes and can't think of a word. Then suddenly it'll hit me and it comes pouring out. Have a happy day. Diamond
March 11th, 2013 20:02
Untitled
sokibgb said:
I know just how you feel.Sometimes I sit down and my words are all over the place, in English and sometimes they are still there, in Spanish but there they are if I can just sit there, soki
March 10th, 2013 16:33
sokibgb said:
I know just how you feel.Sometimes I sit down and my words are all over the place, in English and sometimes they are still there, in Spanish but there they are if I can just sit there, soki
March 10th, 2013 16:33
Books, Truths, Lies
baj-a said:
someone once said we all have a book inside us waiting to be written. some of us write that book in prose, others in poetry, but we all keep rewriting our lives as we go along. strong intense poem!
March 10th, 2013 07:29
baj-a said:
someone once said we all have a book inside us waiting to be written. some of us write that book in prose, others in poetry, but we all keep rewriting our lives as we go along. strong intense poem!
March 10th, 2013 07:29
Books, Truths, Lies
sokibgb said:
Intense, real and beautiful. I'm glad you decided to be an entire book. I decided I would name my own book a long time ago and although sometimes it changes from suspense and drama to comedy mingle with tragedy my book of Life is never boring It also helps to understand all the other books. Great poem, soki
March 9th, 2013 18:24
sokibgb said:
Intense, real and beautiful. I'm glad you decided to be an entire book. I decided I would name my own book a long time ago and although sometimes it changes from suspense and drama to comedy mingle with tragedy my book of Life is never boring It also helps to understand all the other books. Great poem, soki
March 9th, 2013 18:24
The Tear
duneman said:
such a deeply sensitive and powerful poem. I have to agree with baj-a and add my own wow!
March 9th, 2013 08:22
duneman said:
such a deeply sensitive and powerful poem. I have to agree with baj-a and add my own wow!
March 9th, 2013 08:22
The Tear
baj-a said:
wow! this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves the reader breathless.
March 8th, 2013 08:54
baj-a said:
wow! this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves the reader breathless.
March 8th, 2013 08:54
A Fishing Story
sokibgb said:
Meaningful and insightful. Full of melancholy but beautiful, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:39
sokibgb said:
Meaningful and insightful. Full of melancholy but beautiful, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:39
A Fishing Story
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie this is one of my older poems that I have done some editing to. I have found that some of my older works need a little tweaking. Thanks for your comment. BWP... James...
March 8th, 2013 08:18
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Bonnie this is one of my older poems that I have done some editing to. I have found that some of my older works need a little tweaking. Thanks for your comment. BWP... James...
March 8th, 2013 08:18
A Fishing Story
baj-a said:
wow! this poem certainly evokes a lot of emotion from the reader. so lovely and melancholy. a gentle read. thanks for sharing this one.
March 7th, 2013 15:19
baj-a said:
wow! this poem certainly evokes a lot of emotion from the reader. so lovely and melancholy. a gentle read. thanks for sharing this one.
March 7th, 2013 15:19
Nothing To Fear
baj-a said:
what a lovely poem or should I say what lovely poems! what a great job writing two poems in one and the images are so vivid and wonderful! I wish there was a higher rating than a 10 for a poem like this one!
March 6th, 2013 08:44
baj-a said:
what a lovely poem or should I say what lovely poems! what a great job writing two poems in one and the images are so vivid and wonderful! I wish there was a higher rating than a 10 for a poem like this one!
March 6th, 2013 08:44
