Comments received on poems by Rose~
Memories
RDS said:
Thanks for the flowing reflection and moody sugestiveness you\'ve woven together here IroseI. Nice work
J
November 27th, 2020 20:48
RDS said:
Thanks for the flowing reflection and moody sugestiveness you\'ve woven together here IroseI. Nice work
J
November 27th, 2020 20:48
Memories
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can give us such wonderful memories.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Those times passed can give us such wonderful memories.
Andy
November 27th, 2020 01:41
Memories
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a nice poem. If you were in America, I would wish you a Happy Thanksgiving.
Keep writing.
Jesus saves
Persistsnce is key
November 26th, 2020 11:54
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a nice poem. If you were in America, I would wish you a Happy Thanksgiving.
Keep writing.
Jesus saves
Persistsnce is key
November 26th, 2020 11:54
GRANDMOTHER
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be forever with you Rose.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will be forever with you Rose.
Andy
November 16th, 2020 01:06
Forgotten
jarcher54 said:
While it is quite obvious the cheater is not literally forgotten, you have found the ultimate remedy (I don\'t want to say revenge, which implies he/she still matters way too much). \"Now YOU are the one who is forgotten, and I\'ve forgotten you so permanently I\'ve immortalized your nothingness in this poem.\" Remember Achilles cared more about fame than life, and the Persian tyrant Xerxes threatened to wipe out the very memory of Sparta as the ultimate conquest. Forgetting is exactly the right touche\'.
September 3rd, 2020 02:52
jarcher54 said:
While it is quite obvious the cheater is not literally forgotten, you have found the ultimate remedy (I don\'t want to say revenge, which implies he/she still matters way too much). \"Now YOU are the one who is forgotten, and I\'ve forgotten you so permanently I\'ve immortalized your nothingness in this poem.\" Remember Achilles cared more about fame than life, and the Persian tyrant Xerxes threatened to wipe out the very memory of Sparta as the ultimate conquest. Forgetting is exactly the right touche\'.
September 3rd, 2020 02:52
Forgotten
MelissaJA said:
I like how this poem is written almost like the whirlwind that is changing emotions. You fade from total despair to hope here.
August 29th, 2020 17:44
MelissaJA said:
I like how this poem is written almost like the whirlwind that is changing emotions. You fade from total despair to hope here.
August 29th, 2020 17:44
Dream
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing. Persistence is key
August 27th, 2020 13:16
ForeverJesus7 said:
I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep writing. Persistence is key
August 27th, 2020 13:16
Dream
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi Rose welcome to MPS you will find it is a very proactive site. It oprates by Reading & Commenting on each others Poetry ~ Please visit our site ~ Thanks !
Thanks for your first Poem it is elegantly penned on a interesting topic - DREAMS - something we can all relate to !
We all dream together but if our dreams differ ~ there can be NO Consumation ! ANGELA (my wife) & I both dreamed - but when we first met (4 years ago) I was the (type of) Person She had been dreaming about - and She was the (type of) Person I was dreaming about ~ AMEN ! Angela was 28 & I was 33 and we were both SINGLE and had never been married. We were married in MARCH this Year ! Now we both live & dream the SAME DREAM ! Thanks for Sharing !
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 14:54
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Hi Rose welcome to MPS you will find it is a very proactive site. It oprates by Reading & Commenting on each others Poetry ~ Please visit our site ~ Thanks !
Thanks for your first Poem it is elegantly penned on a interesting topic - DREAMS - something we can all relate to !
We all dream together but if our dreams differ ~ there can be NO Consumation ! ANGELA (my wife) & I both dreamed - but when we first met (4 years ago) I was the (type of) Person She had been dreaming about - and She was the (type of) Person I was dreaming about ~ AMEN ! Angela was 28 & I was 33 and we were both SINGLE and had never been married. We were married in MARCH this Year ! Now we both live & dream the SAME DREAM ! Thanks for Sharing !
Love - Joy - Peace to You & Yours
Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat 🧡💙🤎
August 25th, 2020 14:54
Dream
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreams can be so powerful and some of them can become reality.
Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Dreams can be so powerful and some of them can become reality.
Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2020 00:34
Dream
jarcher54 said:
While you refer to a dream that only you can see, you have come as close as possible to sharing it, at least the beauty and promise and feeling of it... while our dreams may be haunting in the sense that they linger in our imaginations, often in a good way, referring to the controlling outsiders\' ominous, unwelcome vision for you as a \"haunt\" is chilling. I hope you feel accepted here and free to express your dreams. No one here will haunt you, and maybe you\'ll feel a little like you belong.
August 24th, 2020 08:18
jarcher54 said:
While you refer to a dream that only you can see, you have come as close as possible to sharing it, at least the beauty and promise and feeling of it... while our dreams may be haunting in the sense that they linger in our imaginations, often in a good way, referring to the controlling outsiders\' ominous, unwelcome vision for you as a \"haunt\" is chilling. I hope you feel accepted here and free to express your dreams. No one here will haunt you, and maybe you\'ll feel a little like you belong.
August 24th, 2020 08:18
Dream
dusk arising said:
I love to read of dreams and often write of mine.
Dreams are unwritten poetry in my head.
I enjoyed reading yours today.
August 24th, 2020 06:51
dusk arising said:
I love to read of dreams and often write of mine.
Dreams are unwritten poetry in my head.
I enjoyed reading yours today.
August 24th, 2020 06:51
Dream
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do not listen to those, who
do not wish to dream with you.\'
and
\'So don’t stop: till you belong\'
indeed, wise words to live by
August 24th, 2020 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do not listen to those, who
do not wish to dream with you.\'
and
\'So don’t stop: till you belong\'
indeed, wise words to live by
August 24th, 2020 04:24
