Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
Two Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Each door in our lives can lead us to our destiny.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Each door in our lives can lead us to our destiny.
Andy
March 17th, 2021 01:26
Two Doors
aDarkerMind said:
six words, a most beautiful picture, and I\'m very impressed Jerry.
March 16th, 2021 11:04
aDarkerMind said:
six words, a most beautiful picture, and I\'m very impressed Jerry.
March 16th, 2021 11:04
Irish Renga on the second day of Purim
Neville said:
..... gotta larf tho dont\'cha .. made me chuckle too and truly ..
....... some splendid wordplay here sir.....
March 15th, 2021 01:54
Neville said:
..... gotta larf tho dont\'cha .. made me chuckle too and truly ..
....... some splendid wordplay here sir.....
March 15th, 2021 01:54
Perspective
Goldfinch60 said:
Just a glimpse at the moment but that new normality will be back very soon.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Just a glimpse at the moment but that new normality will be back very soon.
Andy
March 14th, 2021 01:51
Perspective
dusk arising said:
Lovely. Brings to mind all the repair jobs which need to be tackled now spring is in the air once more.
March 13th, 2021 13:59
dusk arising said:
Lovely. Brings to mind all the repair jobs which need to be tackled now spring is in the air once more.
March 13th, 2021 13:59
Perspective
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Jerry, for giving us this glimpse! And it is about time too!
March 13th, 2021 11:27
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Jerry, for giving us this glimpse! And it is about time too!
March 13th, 2021 11:27
Perspective
Neville said:
that is such a delightful way of looking at it ......... N
March 13th, 2021 10:02
Neville said:
that is such a delightful way of looking at it ......... N
March 13th, 2021 10:02
Father
Neville said:
how lovely is that .... the simple answer is very .. not only have you reminded me of my own father ..
you have also reminded me that it is possible to learn something new each day ......................
March 12th, 2021 10:06
Neville said:
how lovely is that .... the simple answer is very .. not only have you reminded me of my own father ..
you have also reminded me that it is possible to learn something new each day ......................
March 12th, 2021 10:06
Father
L. B. Mek said:
(wrote the below inspired by your write, once again
really liked your seamlessly woven metaphor and I just wanted to take your baton and see where it took me..
a great write Jerry)..
\'when society surrendered our inherited culture of listening and seeking wisdom, in exchange
for free speech\'s - sales pitch of miraged independence;
we succumbed to the fate of the easily befuddled, wanting
everything to replicate
that plug-n-play - ease of materialistic simplicity, demanding
one key and one solution, to open every door and answer, every question..
so today, a mere tabloid headline
is a homerun - devoid of truth
profiting from our reactionary
need, to blame other\'s
for our curated reality of ill-fate
when in actuality:
we\'re all standing on that same
playing field, its just
some have the resolve and perseverance
\'to build it, as they dream it\',
while others, simply surrender
and follow fickle trends,
not questioning the validity in a carefully choreographed performance
of a trained actress..
March 12th, 2021 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
(wrote the below inspired by your write, once again
really liked your seamlessly woven metaphor and I just wanted to take your baton and see where it took me..
a great write Jerry)..
\'when society surrendered our inherited culture of listening and seeking wisdom, in exchange
for free speech\'s - sales pitch of miraged independence;
we succumbed to the fate of the easily befuddled, wanting
everything to replicate
that plug-n-play - ease of materialistic simplicity, demanding
one key and one solution, to open every door and answer, every question..
so today, a mere tabloid headline
is a homerun - devoid of truth
profiting from our reactionary
need, to blame other\'s
for our curated reality of ill-fate
when in actuality:
we\'re all standing on that same
playing field, its just
some have the resolve and perseverance
\'to build it, as they dream it\',
while others, simply surrender
and follow fickle trends,
not questioning the validity in a carefully choreographed performance
of a trained actress..
March 12th, 2021 05:15
To a Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Jerry, may more verses be born each day.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Jerry, may more verses be born each day.
Andy
March 10th, 2021 01:29
To a Friend
Olivia. said:
Really like this! It’s great when a new verse is born! X
March 9th, 2021 13:13
Olivia. said:
Really like this! It’s great when a new verse is born! X
March 9th, 2021 13:13
To a Friend
dusk arising said:
Those yesterdays have a lot to answer for. Nice one Jerry.
March 9th, 2021 11:00
dusk arising said:
Those yesterdays have a lot to answer for. Nice one Jerry.
March 9th, 2021 11:00
Puppy Love
L. B. Mek said:
\'that moon, ever changing
mesmeric in various enticing guises, sometimes
leaves behind a uniquely unfavourable taste
in those waking realisations of consequence\'s, irreversible distress\'..
another contemplative write Jerry, thank you for your insightful words and your poetic gift of inspiration
March 9th, 2021 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'that moon, ever changing
mesmeric in various enticing guises, sometimes
leaves behind a uniquely unfavourable taste
in those waking realisations of consequence\'s, irreversible distress\'..
another contemplative write Jerry, thank you for your insightful words and your poetic gift of inspiration
March 9th, 2021 06:22
Puppy Love
Goldfinch60 said:
That young love will be forever in your memory Jerry.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
That young love will be forever in your memory Jerry.
Andy
March 9th, 2021 01:28
Puppy Love
dusk arising said:
I suspect the two of you were both real in that field when you were a young man Jerry.
Certain occasions stay with us and fall into our dreams and reminiscences. I don\'t think we choose them, rather - they choose us.
Your words today tell more than a poetic story. They tell of young love\'s ambition. Blown away somewhere upon the winds of yesterday.
March 8th, 2021 13:21
dusk arising said:
I suspect the two of you were both real in that field when you were a young man Jerry.
Certain occasions stay with us and fall into our dreams and reminiscences. I don\'t think we choose them, rather - they choose us.
Your words today tell more than a poetic story. They tell of young love\'s ambition. Blown away somewhere upon the winds of yesterday.
March 8th, 2021 13:21
Puppy Love
FredPeyer said:
Jerry, your little poem made me remember times long, long, ago. Enjoyed your writing, especially the line \'sweet young bloom of love\'. We have all been there!
March 8th, 2021 11:53
FredPeyer said:
Jerry, your little poem made me remember times long, long, ago. Enjoyed your writing, especially the line \'sweet young bloom of love\'. We have all been there!
March 8th, 2021 11:53
A Good Day
Neville said:
Good on ya mate .. it dont hurt a bit .. until the next day, but then its gone ..
Stay both safe and well .. and yeah, celebrate with a couple of crafty craft beers .. I\'ll drink to that ....
Neville
March 7th, 2021 02:09
Neville said:
Good on ya mate .. it dont hurt a bit .. until the next day, but then its gone ..
Stay both safe and well .. and yeah, celebrate with a couple of crafty craft beers .. I\'ll drink to that ....
Neville
March 7th, 2021 02:09
A Good Day
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
Challenged me... Somehow structured like sonnets..
Rhymes well anyway JR
March 6th, 2021 15:36
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
Challenged me... Somehow structured like sonnets..
Rhymes well anyway JR
March 6th, 2021 15:36
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