Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds



Politics
Michael Edwards said:

Love this

Wing mirrors
reflect
a Nissan Bluebird.

January 16th, 2021 11:20

Politics
Goldfinch60 said:

Your mirror image
Reverses the view of you
That all others see

January 16th, 2021 01:41

Politics
Suresh said:

and yet the image never fades.



January 15th, 2021 16:29

Politics
dusk arising said:

Tailgate driver
enhances
kerbside

January 15th, 2021 10:27

Politics
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

January 15th, 2021 09:58

Kiss
L. B. Mek said:

ok please don\'t take offence or judge me too harshly, but do feel free to cringe: your words took me back to Summer romances and a song by Dan & Shay titled \'nothin like you\',
what a wonderful gift of reminisced romance, you\'ve gifted with these unassuming words

January 15th, 2021 05:10

Kiss
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful times Jerry.

Andy

January 15th, 2021 01:41

Kiss
Michael Edwards said:

To be a chef here\'s where you start:
wind and salt
a seasoned fart

January 14th, 2021 14:55

Kiss
Suresh said:

Yes, I can feel the wind and taste the salt. Well done

January 14th, 2021 13:24

Kiss
Fay Slimm. said:

A potent read Jerry - this clever three liner must rise from experience -methinks - - great stuff.

January 14th, 2021 10:57

Kiss
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

January 14th, 2021 09:44

Retired
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thanks guys.

January 14th, 2021 08:35

Empathy Taken
Doggerel Dave said:

On the other hand........ Let\'s try to take a more global view of \'advice\' please:
After all, It\'s everywhere; some seek it out - self help books, as an example are ubiquitous as bookshops and I need advice from a friend from time to time.
TRUST the key here. Advice accepted if trust exists. Trust is, or should be the lubricant in all human interaction.

Regards Dave

January 14th, 2021 07:04

Empathy Taken
L. B. Mek said:

good write and very true,
so easy to get lost in \'well meaning\' and step over that line to \'overbearing\', personally I simply try to apologise in advance for any conceived misunderstanding to my intent - I can anticipate: but sadly, that\'s often - not enough to avoid the consequences yielded by our fallible nature...

January 14th, 2021 06:40

Retired
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

January 14th, 2021 02:52

Retired
Michael Edwards said:

Love it - early morning smile for me

January 14th, 2021 02:39

Retired
Neville said:


once free, Sigh writes a meta thesis on the perceived effects of detainment, detachment & ego construct development ... Deep Sigh ...


January 13th, 2021 17:09

Empathy Taken
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

January 13th, 2021 03:06

Empathy Taken
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true Jerry.

Andy

January 13th, 2021 02:22

Empathy Taken
dusk arising said:

Plenty of kneejerk, thoughtless, valueless advice around isn\'t there.

Like the advice about the vaccination, there is some really silly advice knocking around on that one.

Oh I\'m so sorry to hear of your fear of the virus but don\'t take the vacconation LOL. You must be joking.... gimmie that jab!

January 12th, 2021 18:25

Seth
Suresh said:

He listens to amuse Himself, just as your words do us.

January 12th, 2021 14:57

Seth
orchidee said:

Good write Jerry.

January 10th, 2021 03:13

Seth
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thank you all. Stay safe and write.

January 9th, 2021 15:40

Seth
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoyed this - really drew me in.

January 9th, 2021 14:18

Haibun for Linda
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thank you all. This is my favorite form There is a large one - if you want to read it \"A Haibun Odyssey\" at
http://www.artandadvertising.com/public/HaibunOdyssey.pdf

January 9th, 2021 10:42

Lilies
Samer Amin said:

Maybe, it is because of their surrounding adverse circumstances, or their individual hereditary susceptibility.

Anyway, I think, if they get much attention, the ratio of their survival might increase.

By the way, there is a sense of nice harmony within the colors of your mosaic art work.

January 9th, 2021 07:43

Haibun for Linda
Goldfinch60 said:

Those moments are so special Jerry.

Andy

January 9th, 2021 01:27

Haibun for Linda
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

Haibun is a new one on me. Invented by haiku pioneer Matsuo Bashō, it combines verse (haiku) and prose. Here Jerry follows a prose text with a 5-7-5 syllable verse. I also learned \"prosimetric\" as a generic for texts alternating verse and prose. Aucassin et Nicolette comes to mind in the western traditions.

January 8th, 2021 12:43

Haibun for Linda
Michael Edwards said:

Really like this - I\'ve never written in this form and it makes me want to have a go.

January 8th, 2021 11:51

Haibun for Linda
Jerry Reynolds said:

Thanks Orchi.

January 8th, 2021 10:20



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