Comments received on poems by Jerry Reynolds
T-Town
jarcher54 said:
I was thinking a little Poe inspiration, but also a little Dickensian. Very intense and just the right rhythm to be a little like a chant or a street song. It also reminds me of a Pogues ballad, earthy and raw, pretty but ominous. One question... for me, T-town is Tulsa, OK, with all it\'s nasty history and ambiguous Southern modernity. What T-town are you referring to?
February 20th, 2021 12:13
jarcher54 said:
I was thinking a little Poe inspiration, but also a little Dickensian. Very intense and just the right rhythm to be a little like a chant or a street song. It also reminds me of a Pogues ballad, earthy and raw, pretty but ominous. One question... for me, T-town is Tulsa, OK, with all it\'s nasty history and ambiguous Southern modernity. What T-town are you referring to?
February 20th, 2021 12:13
T-Town
dusk arising said:
Spooky! This reminded my of the author Dean Koontz and his horror stories. Definitely there is a sinister undertone woven in your lines and I felt it with a shudder.
February 20th, 2021 11:16
dusk arising said:
Spooky! This reminded my of the author Dean Koontz and his horror stories. Definitely there is a sinister undertone woven in your lines and I felt it with a shudder.
February 20th, 2021 11:16
Snow and ice
FredPeyer said:
these three shorties say it all! I got cold just reading them. Fortunately, today was in the high 70\'s (F) and partly sunny.
February 18th, 2021 20:26
FredPeyer said:
these three shorties say it all! I got cold just reading them. Fortunately, today was in the high 70\'s (F) and partly sunny.
February 18th, 2021 20:26
Snow and ice
dusk arising said:
You had a sprinkling of snow then Jerry? LOL
February 18th, 2021 13:16
dusk arising said:
You had a sprinkling of snow then Jerry? LOL
February 18th, 2021 13:16
They Won\'t Bite
L. B. Mek said:
SAMPSON
\'No, sir.
I do not bite my thumb
at you, sir
but I bite my thumb...
sir.\'
lol, who needs Shakespeare when we\'ve got Jerry\'s smooth criminals!
(sorry for the \'cringe worthy\' over exaggeration, just having fun, in my own silly way, no harm intended)
February 18th, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
SAMPSON
\'No, sir.
I do not bite my thumb
at you, sir
but I bite my thumb...
sir.\'
lol, who needs Shakespeare when we\'ve got Jerry\'s smooth criminals!
(sorry for the \'cringe worthy\' over exaggeration, just having fun, in my own silly way, no harm intended)
February 18th, 2021 05:02
They Won\'t Bite
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the odd bum joke to keep things merry, Jerry.
Good laugh. Today starts out on a lighter note....
February 17th, 2021 19:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing like the odd bum joke to keep things merry, Jerry.
Good laugh. Today starts out on a lighter note....
February 17th, 2021 19:37
They Won\'t Bite
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a story about bottoms i heard recently.....
\"Doctor my bottom is everso sore\"
\"Really Mr Jones, exactly whereabouts?\"
\"Around the entrance where it@s all red and sore doctor\"
\"I think you\'ll find it will cure itself quite quickly Mr Jones when you stop referring to it as an entrance\"
February 17th, 2021 12:44
dusk arising said:
Reminded me of a story about bottoms i heard recently.....
\"Doctor my bottom is everso sore\"
\"Really Mr Jones, exactly whereabouts?\"
\"Around the entrance where it@s all red and sore doctor\"
\"I think you\'ll find it will cure itself quite quickly Mr Jones when you stop referring to it as an entrance\"
February 17th, 2021 12:44
They Won\'t Bite
SureshG said:
It cracked me up for sure,
I hope the flies don\'t mistake it for a butt crack.
February 17th, 2021 10:07
SureshG said:
It cracked me up for sure,
I hope the flies don\'t mistake it for a butt crack.
February 17th, 2021 10:07
Seduction
Doggerel Dave said:
Should be framed and given pride of place in the MPS hall of fame....or should that be infamy?
Definitely got the tucker bit right....
February 16th, 2021 18:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Should be framed and given pride of place in the MPS hall of fame....or should that be infamy?
Definitely got the tucker bit right....
February 16th, 2021 18:35
Seduction
dusk arising said:
Utter filth of course. More please.
Bloomin good fun.
February 16th, 2021 16:13
dusk arising said:
Utter filth of course. More please.
Bloomin good fun.
February 16th, 2021 16:13
Seduction
Neville said:
this is so bloomin good .. made me chuckle too ............
February 16th, 2021 10:42
Neville said:
this is so bloomin good .. made me chuckle too ............
February 16th, 2021 10:42
Seduction
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - well not quite three of the clock for me dear Jerry but love the commotion caused by us poets as seductive morning breaks again.
February 16th, 2021 10:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - well not quite three of the clock for me dear Jerry but love the commotion caused by us poets as seductive morning breaks again.
February 16th, 2021 10:13
Seduction
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in poetry. Well, I know now! lol. Good write Jerry. Yes, I count syllables to get to sleep, not sheep!
February 16th, 2021 09:55
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in poetry. Well, I know now! lol. Good write Jerry. Yes, I count syllables to get to sleep, not sheep!
February 16th, 2021 09:55
Spring Memory
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oooh saucy and sensational, i thought only indian men found women soaked in rain as seductive.
This poem shows that such attractions are cross cultural. Kudos for a fab memories poem.!
February 16th, 2021 07:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Oooh saucy and sensational, i thought only indian men found women soaked in rain as seductive.
This poem shows that such attractions are cross cultural. Kudos for a fab memories poem.!
February 16th, 2021 07:22
Spring Memory
L. B. Mek said:
as delicious for us readers, as it must have tasted in those first tethers to a wonderful first line - you unfurled, so masterfully..
truly, a delightful dish you\'ve served us Jerry, thank you!
February 16th, 2021 05:42
L. B. Mek said:
as delicious for us readers, as it must have tasted in those first tethers to a wonderful first line - you unfurled, so masterfully..
truly, a delightful dish you\'ve served us Jerry, thank you!
February 16th, 2021 05:42
Spring Memory
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory gets caught in your mind like so many do.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That memory gets caught in your mind like so many do.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 01:32
Spring Memory
FredPeyer said:
Well said, Jerry. Sometimes just a glance stays forever in our mind.
February 15th, 2021 20:12
FredPeyer said:
Well said, Jerry. Sometimes just a glance stays forever in our mind.
February 15th, 2021 20:12
Spring Memory
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks a lot Jerry for sharing a passing experience of a spring memory and for the smile the read left behind of the trapped burs which serve as reminders. An inventive write my friend.
February 15th, 2021 17:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks a lot Jerry for sharing a passing experience of a spring memory and for the smile the read left behind of the trapped burs which serve as reminders. An inventive write my friend.
February 15th, 2021 17:01
Spring Memory
dusk arising said:
LOL @ your socks. Essential garments which ease the discomfort of ones passage through life.
Once again your short and sweet posts bring delight.
February 15th, 2021 10:36
dusk arising said:
LOL @ your socks. Essential garments which ease the discomfort of ones passage through life.
Once again your short and sweet posts bring delight.
February 15th, 2021 10:36
Valentine for Linda
heatherbee said:
Short and sweet well very sweet those candy.
February 15th, 2021 07:58
heatherbee said:
Short and sweet well very sweet those candy.
February 15th, 2021 07:58
Valentine for Linda
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope she shared the chocolates with you as love is shared.
Andy
February 15th, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
I hope she shared the chocolates with you as love is shared.
Andy
February 15th, 2021 01:30
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