Comments received on poems by Harry Atkinson
Annual Fabrics
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perhaps next year
The bed will be made\'
that\'s the dream: anchoring our nightmare
of anxiety driven, lethargy...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 10th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'Perhaps next year
The bed will be made\'
that\'s the dream: anchoring our nightmare
of anxiety driven, lethargy...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
June 10th, 2021 03:54
Annual Fabrics
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is the way life is, do not worry about it, as you get older you get wiser.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Time is the way life is, do not worry about it, as you get older you get wiser.
Andy
June 10th, 2021 00:12
You’re 19 Forever
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, this - simply
is why I choose to champion poetic write\'s
and shall continue, to do so..
no my world didn\'t explode
nor was I lulled into an out of body experience
blah, blah, blah
no: its simply the fact
that for those brief minutes
I was lost within the world
your words curated into existence
and, that\'s all that we need - sometimes
just an avenue, a conduit
to help us escape, even for a fleeting while
while we doggedly traverse
from one blink, to our next..
thank you, dear poet
June 7th, 2021 06:06
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, this - simply
is why I choose to champion poetic write\'s
and shall continue, to do so..
no my world didn\'t explode
nor was I lulled into an out of body experience
blah, blah, blah
no: its simply the fact
that for those brief minutes
I was lost within the world
your words curated into existence
and, that\'s all that we need - sometimes
just an avenue, a conduit
to help us escape, even for a fleeting while
while we doggedly traverse
from one blink, to our next..
thank you, dear poet
June 7th, 2021 06:06
You’re 19 Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
Nineteen was a very long time ago for me but in my head I am still thirty five - until I do something physical. LOL
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Nineteen was a very long time ago for me but in my head I am still thirty five - until I do something physical. LOL
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:36
Central City Scrutiny
L. B. Mek said:
damn, I so wish I had the IQ capacity
to break down and unfurl the meaning and message
you\'ve hidden, infuriatingly: too well...
a shame, I think I would have appreciated your write
if I had a little context to help me look
for the breadcrumbs of hope and defiance, you imbued
May 21st, 2021 03:03
L. B. Mek said:
damn, I so wish I had the IQ capacity
to break down and unfurl the meaning and message
you\'ve hidden, infuriatingly: too well...
a shame, I think I would have appreciated your write
if I had a little context to help me look
for the breadcrumbs of hope and defiance, you imbued
May 21st, 2021 03:03
The Boy That Lost His Hat
jarcher54 said:
Harry, I am still trying to figure out what I like about your poems. They are certainly original and interesting curiosities that seem both totally original and yet hauntingly familiar.
But one thing I know: your poems have the best titles. Charm of the Scoundrel was my favorite until this! Thanks for sharing these.
May 7th, 2021 22:17
jarcher54 said:
Harry, I am still trying to figure out what I like about your poems. They are certainly original and interesting curiosities that seem both totally original and yet hauntingly familiar.
But one thing I know: your poems have the best titles. Charm of the Scoundrel was my favorite until this! Thanks for sharing these.
May 7th, 2021 22:17
Vicious Cycle
Goldfinch60 said:
May the exit on that roundabout take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May the exit on that roundabout take you to a wonderful place.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:34
Vicious Cycle
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, wonderfully paced
thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, wonderfully paced
thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 06:37
In The End
L. B. Mek said:
\'Raise their hand once again
Disputing the real issue
Fall into the devotion
That may harm your every way
Every day
The sound of that name
Is enough to drain the pain
From any unfortunate dissipated lover
Here again, shifting the blame\'..
a write worded with precision of a survivor\'s need for expressive veracity,
articulating with impassioned accuracy our collective need for self-searching endeavours to uncover, our root cause of \'learnt behaviours\' cyclical nature, why
must we choose to settle for a love: to anyone who merely deigns to find us worthy of affection,
when we can be far more selective and minimise the inevitability of suffering yet another trampled heart
March 30th, 2021 05:16
L. B. Mek said:
\'Raise their hand once again
Disputing the real issue
Fall into the devotion
That may harm your every way
Every day
The sound of that name
Is enough to drain the pain
From any unfortunate dissipated lover
Here again, shifting the blame\'..
a write worded with precision of a survivor\'s need for expressive veracity,
articulating with impassioned accuracy our collective need for self-searching endeavours to uncover, our root cause of \'learnt behaviours\' cyclical nature, why
must we choose to settle for a love: to anyone who merely deigns to find us worthy of affection,
when we can be far more selective and minimise the inevitability of suffering yet another trampled heart
March 30th, 2021 05:16
All The Addicted
L. B. Mek said:
\'A staggering heartbreak
When your love
Goes to waste
Or should I say
When fate finds a place to stay\'
what Empathy you wield within such sincere words of Poetic eloquence dear Poet,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
\'A staggering heartbreak
When your love
Goes to waste
Or should I say
When fate finds a place to stay\'
what Empathy you wield within such sincere words of Poetic eloquence dear Poet,
Brilliant!
Happy New Year
January 8th, 2021 07:05
Battling Diversity
FredPeyer said:
Nicely said, Harry, art has no limitations indeed, and neither does your writing.
December 18th, 2020 21:59
FredPeyer said:
Nicely said, Harry, art has no limitations indeed, and neither does your writing.
December 18th, 2020 21:59
Battling Diversity
FineB said:
Hi Harry
A great write.
We live in a world of so many diverse choices too many in fact.
Potential for information overload pethaps at times!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 17:17
FineB said:
Hi Harry
A great write.
We live in a world of so many diverse choices too many in fact.
Potential for information overload pethaps at times!
Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
December 18th, 2020 17:17
Daylight Robbery
L. B. Mek said:
I admire the control in your write, let it all out, every last ounce - only way to make space for whatever awaits next: repeat, recycle - begin again, let this dance of life, never derail!
December 3rd, 2020 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
I admire the control in your write, let it all out, every last ounce - only way to make space for whatever awaits next: repeat, recycle - begin again, let this dance of life, never derail!
December 3rd, 2020 05:13
Silly Little Rascal
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful characterisation of a self-portrait whilst negotiation a challenging time in life, has that quirky depth of Dicaprio\'s Inception,
with creative imagery and flow, good write
November 30th, 2020 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful characterisation of a self-portrait whilst negotiation a challenging time in life, has that quirky depth of Dicaprio\'s Inception,
with creative imagery and flow, good write
November 30th, 2020 06:32
Whittled By 9PM
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly I cant quite grasp the context or meaning but I appreciate the read, good write
November 28th, 2020 06:52
L. B. Mek said:
admittedly I cant quite grasp the context or meaning but I appreciate the read, good write
November 28th, 2020 06:52
Lovey-Dovey
RDS said:
I loved that man, a teasing disorder then BANG it all comes together in that last verse. Good work Harry!
Hope it\'s the first of many you share here.
J
November 27th, 2020 20:28
RDS said:
I loved that man, a teasing disorder then BANG it all comes together in that last verse. Good work Harry!
Hope it\'s the first of many you share here.
J
November 27th, 2020 20:28
